读后续写-遇险历险救援类-勇气不是没有恐惧，而是选择行动-57岁Brain从鲨鱼口中勇救12岁男童 讲义-2026届高三英语二轮复习专项

标黑加粗斜体（环境描写或好词好句）可积累文本，绿色衔接点！！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单下划线（状从）；非谓语形式都会标注；其他重点，红色字体为重要单词B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释)! () 广东省衡水金卷2025-2026学年高三上学期9月月考英语试题 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was a sunny morning in Eastern Australia. The sky was blue, and the sea looked calm and clear(环境描写). A group of tourists, including a 12-year-old Japanese boy named Hiro(过去分词做后置定语) and 57-year old Brian Reeves, got on a boat for a trip. Hiro was very excited - this was his first time to visit Australia's coast, and he brought a small waterproof camera to take photos of colorful fish under the water. After sightseeing for two hours, the captain stopped the boat. “The water is safe here you can swim for a while!" he said. Many tourists jumped in, and Hiro quickly followed. He swam a little too far from the boat, focusing on his camera(现在分词短语做伴随动作). He dived down gently, trying to take a photo of a small orange fish(现在分词短语做伴随动作). He was so busy that he didn't notice the time passing. Only a few minutes later, the captain suddenly shouted loudly. “Shark! Get back to the boat now!’ He pointed to a dark shape moving fast in the water(现在分词短语做后置定语) -it was a Great White Shark, about seven meters long. The swimmers heard the shout and swam back quickly. But Hiro was still under the water, taking photos(现在分词短语做伴随动作), and he didn't hear anything. When Hiro came up for air, he froze. The shark's dark fin cut through the water just meters away, circling him slowly(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Its huge mouth opened wide, showing rows of sharp teeth(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Hiro's eyes grew big - he could even see the shark's rough skin shining in the sun. It inched closer, and the water around him felt colder(人物心理描写). Hiro threw away the camera in panic and started screaming. His hands shook so hard that he could barely move his arms. He tried to kick towards the boat, but his legs felt heavy(状态描写). Tears mixed with seawater on his face. On the boat, his parents, who now wished they had jumped in with Hiro, cried and banged the side, but no one could reach him in time. Hiro thought he would never see his family again. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Just then, Brian stepped in without hesitation. Paragraph 2: Hiro's parents walked over to Brian with grateful tears in their eyes. 广东省衡水金卷2025-2026学年高三上学期9月月考英语试题 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was a sunny morning in Eastern Australia. The sky was blue, and the sea looked calm and clear. A group of tourists, including a 12-year-old Japanese boy named Hiro and 57-year.old Brian Reeves, got on a boat for a trip. Hiro was very excited - this was his first time to visit Australia's coast, and he brought a small waterproof camera to take photos of colorful fish under the water. After sightseeing for two hours, the captain stopped the boat. “The water is safe here you can swim for a while!" he said. Many tourists jumped in, and Hiro quickly followed. He swam a little too far from the boat, focusing on his camera. He dived down gently, trying to take a photo of a small orange fish. He was so busy that he didn't notice the time passing. Only a few minutes later, the captain suddenly shouted loudly. “Shark! Get back to the boat now!’ He pointed to a dark shape moving fast in the water -it was a Great White Shark.about seven meters long. The swimmers heard the shout and swam back quickly. But Hiro was still under the water, taking photos, and he didn't hear anything. When Hiro came up for air, he froze. The shark's dark fin (鱼鳍)cut through the water just meters away, circling him slowly. Its huge mouth opened wide, showing rows of sharp teeth.Hiro's eyes grew big - he could even see the shark's rough skin shining in the sun. It inched closer, and the water around him felt colder. Hiro threw away the camera in panic and started screaming, His hands shook so hard that he could barely move his arms. He tried to kick towards the boat, but his legs felt heavy. Tears mixed with seawater on his face. On the boat, his parents, who now wished they had jumped in with Hiro, cried and banged(击打)the side, but no one could reach him in time. Hiro thought he would never see his family again. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Just then, Brian stepped in without hesitation. Paragraph 2: Hiro's parents walked over to Brian with grateful tears in their eyes. 1. 读后续写类型分析及构思布局 文章类型：属于遇险历险救援/鲨鱼类读后续写，聚焦突发事件中的英雄行为与情感转折。 构思框架：承接危机：延续鲨鱼逼近的紧张氛围，突出Hiro的绝望与Brian的果断。 救援行动：描写Brian的救援策略（如利用工具、干扰鲨鱼），强调动作与心理描写。 情感升华：通过父母感激与Hiro的反思，体现人性光辉与成长主题。 续写布局： 段落1：Brian救援过程（动作细节+鲨鱼反应）+ 返回船只的艰难。 段落2：救援后的人物互动（感激、后怕）+ 主题深化（勇气、家庭珍贵）。 关键衔接事项： 承接要素 原文线索 续写关联 情绪延续 Hiro的恐慌、父母击打船身 延续绝望感，过渡到希望 动作连贯 Brian未提前下水 解释其救援动机（如观察者身份） 道具运用 丢弃的相机、船只环境 利用相机反光/船只工具驱赶鲨鱼 巧妙设计要点： 加入环境对比：鲨鱼逼近时海浪翻涌，救援后海面恢复平静。 心理层次：Hiro从绝望到信任，Brian从冷静到疲惫。 主题隐喻：相机记录“死亡”到“重生”，象征勇气战胜恐惧。 2. 故事山模式与原文分析 故事山模式： 开端：游客乘船观光 → 发展：Hiro潜水遇险 → 高潮：鲨鱼围攻，Brian救援 → 回落：脱险登船 → 结局：感激与反思。 伏笔与冲突： 伏笔：Hiro“游得太远”“未注意时间”→ 孤立无援；Brian年龄（57岁）→ 经验丰富。 冲突点：人性勇气 vs 自然威胁；个人恐惧 vs 集体救援。 隐含线索：相机（象征执着与放弃）、鲨鱼皮肤反光（暗示危险逼近）。 解决方案：Brian利用经验（如声东击西）引开鲨鱼，船员辅助营救。 3. 多角度原文分析表格 分析角度 内容 原文反应句 人物刻画 Hiro：天真专注；Brian：沉稳未动 “Hiro was so busy... didn’t notice...” “Brian Reeves... got on a boat” 情感层次 兴奋→恐惧→绝望 “very excited” → “froze” → “Tears mixed with seawater” 关键情节点 鲨鱼出现、Hiro孤立 “Shark! Get back to the boat now!” “Hiro was still under the water” 语言特色 短句强化紧张感，比喻突出视觉冲击 “dark fin cut through the water” “rough skin shining in the sun” 关键词分析 “froze”“shaking”“cried” 凸显无助 “His hands shook so hard...” “parents... cried and banged...” 心理描写 通过动作反射内心恐惧 “Hiro thought he would never see his family again” 动作描写 潜水、丢弃相机、踢水挣扎 “dived down gently” “threw away the camera” “kick towards the boat” 环境描写 海面平静反衬危机突现 “sea looked calm and clear” “water felt colder” 隐含主题 勇气与互助战胜危机 父母悔恨未下水，铺垫救援必要性 情感转折 从观光愉悦骤转生存危机 “The sky was blue” → “dark shape moving fast” 空间转换 船体→远处海域→鲨鱼包围圈 “swam a little too far” “circling him slowly” 时间过渡 两小时观光→几分钟内危机爆发 “After sightseeing for two hours” “Only a few minutes later” 3. 动作环境心理描写及高级词汇 动作描写 Without a second thought, he plunged into the water. （他毫不犹豫地纵身跳入水中。） With powerful strokes, he cut through the waves towards the boy. （他以有力的划水动作，破开波浪向男孩游去。） He thrust the pole forward, creating a barrier between the shark and the child. （他将杆子猛地向前刺出，在鲨鱼和孩子之间制造了一道屏障。） The shark thrashed its tail, churning the water into a frothing white. （鲨鱼猛烈地摆动尾巴，把海水搅得泡沫翻腾。） Brian grabbed Hiro's arm and pulled him close. （布莱恩抓住宏的胳膊，把他拉近自己。） With their last ounce of strength, they hauled themselves onto the boat. （他们用尽最后一丝力气，爬上了船。） The shark veered away, disappearing into the deep blue. （鲨鱼转向离开了，消失在深蓝色的海水中。） His hands fumbled for a hold on the boat's ladder. （他的双手在船梯上摸索着寻找支撑点。） She reached out and pulled her son into a tight embrace. （她伸出手，将儿子紧紧地搂在怀里。） He slumped onto the deck, chest heaving with exhaustion. （他瘫倒在甲板上，胸口因精疲力尽而起伏着。） 心理描写 A primal fear gripped his heart, freezing him in place. （一种原始的恐惧攫住了他的心，让他僵在原地。） Hope flickered within him like a fragile flame. （希望像一缕微弱的火焰在他心中闪烁。） His mind raced, searching for a way out of the nightmare. （他的大脑飞速运转，寻找着脱离这场噩梦的方法。） A profound sense of gratitude washed over him, bringing tears to his eyes. （一种深深的感激之情涌上他的心头，令他热泪盈眶。） The world seemed to slow down as he faced the immense creature. （当他面对这个庞然大物时，世界仿佛慢了下来。） All regrets and fears melted away in that single moment of connection. （在那一刻的联结中，所有的悔恨和恐惧都消散了。） He was paralyzed by the sheer magnitude of the danger. （他被这巨大的危险吓得动弹不得。） A calm resolve settled over him despite the chaos. （尽管一片混乱，一种平静的决心在他心中沉淀下来。） The memory of his family's faces flashed before his eyes. （家人面容的记忆在他眼前闪现。） The aftermath of the terror left him trembling and speechless. （恐惧的余波让他浑身颤抖，说不出话来。） 环境描写 The once-calm sea was now a chaos of splashing and waves. （曾经平静的海面现在是一片溅泼和波浪的混乱景象。） The sun glinted mercilessly off the turbulent water. （阳光无情地照耀在波涛汹涌的水面上。） A chilling silence fell over the boat as everyone watched in horror. （当所有人都惊恐地看着时，一种令人不寒而栗的寂静笼罩了船只。） The air was thick with tension and the salty smell of the sea. （空气中弥漫着紧张的情绪和咸咸的海水味。） The boat rocked violently from the struggle in the water. （船因水中的挣扎而剧烈摇晃。） The shark's dark shadow loomed beneath the surface. （鲨鱼的黑色阴影在水下若隐若现。） The cheers of relief from the onlookers echoed across the water. （旁观者们如释重负的欢呼声在水面上回荡。） The gentle lapping of waves against the hull now sounded like a welcome melody. （波浪轻轻拍打船体的声音现在听起来像是一首欢迎的旋律。） The vast, unforgiving ocean stretched out in all directions. （广阔无情的海洋向四面八方延伸。） The cool deck felt like a safe haven under his bare feet. （冰凉的甲板在他光着的脚下感觉像一个安全的避风港。） 常见单词高级替换词（分类场景） 1. 害怕/恐惧 (Scared/Afraid) Terrified: terrified Petrified: 吓呆的，惊呆的 Horror-stricken: 惊恐万状的 Panic-stricken: 惊慌失措的 2. 快速移动 (Move Quickly) Plunge: 跳入，冲入 Lunge: 猛冲，扑 Veer: 转向，改变方向 Thrash: 猛烈摆动，翻腾 3. 抓住 (Grab) Seize: 抓住，夺取 Snatch: 抢夺，迅速抓住 Clutch: 紧握，抓住 Grip: 紧握，抓牢 4. 疲惫 (Tired) Exhausted: 精疲力尽的 Fatigued: 疲劳的 Drained: 耗尽的，疲惫的 Weary: 疲倦的，厌烦的 5. 感谢 (Thankful) Grateful: 感激的 Appreciative: 欣赏的，感激的 Indebted: 感激的，欠人情的 Beholden: 蒙恩的，欠人情的 4. 固定搭配、词法解析与语料积累 固定搭配与词法解析 Without hesitation: 毫不犹豫地。 (stepped in without hesitation) In panic: 惊慌地。 (threw away the camera in panic) Come up for air: 浮上水面换气。 (When Hiro came up for air) Mix with: 与...混合。 (Tears mixed with seawater) Step in: 介入，插手。 (Brian stepped in) Churn into: 搅动成...。 (churning the water into a frothing white) Veer away: 转向离开。 (The shark veered away) Wash over: (感情)涌上心头。 (gratitude washed over him) Glint off: 闪烁，反光。 (The sun glinted off the water) Loom beneath: 在...下隐隐呈现。 (loomed beneath the surface) 可积累语料：生词短语 1. 生词：Hesitation (n.) 词意: 犹豫，踌躇 词性: 名词 近义词: reluctance, indecision, doubt 反义词: decisiveness, resolution, certainty 例句: Brian acted without hesitation to save the boy. After a moment's hesitation, she agreed to help. 2. 生词：Panic (n./v.) 词意: 恐慌，惊慌 词性: 名词/动词 近义词: alarm, terror, hysteria, fright 反义词: calm, composure, serenity 例句: A wave of panic swept through the swimmers. Don't panic; we still have time to think of a solution. 3. 生词：Veer(v.) 词意: 转向，改变方向 词性: 动词 近义词: swerve, turn, shift, diverge 反义词: continue, straighten, maintain course 例句: The car veered off the road and into a ditch. The conversation veered towards politics. 4. 短语：Cut through 词意: 穿过，穿透；克服 词性: 动词短语 近义词: penetrate, slice through, cleave 反义词: be blocked by, circle around 例句: The shark's fin cut through the water smoothly. Her sharp voice cut through the noise of the crowd. 5. 生词：Resolve (n.) 词意: 决心，决意 词性: 名词 近义词: determination, resolution, steadfastness 反义词: indecision, hesitation, irresolution 例句: With renewed resolve, he continued his training. She faced the challenge with fierce resolve. 6. 短语：Wash over 词意: (感情、感觉) 涌上心头，席卷 词性: 动词短语 近义词: overwhelm, sweep over, flood 反义词: recede from, ebb away from 例句: A sense of calm washed over her after the storm passed. Memories of his childhood washed over him as he looked at the old photos. 5. Possible Versions(4) Versions 1 Paragraph 1: Just then, Brian stepped in without hesitation. Without a second thought, he dived into the chilly water, the waves crashing against his shoulders(独立主格). His arms cut through the sea with firm strokes, and his eyes stayed locked on Hiro, who was still trembling helplessly. “Hold on!” Brian shouted, his voice half-drowned by the roar of the ocean(独立主格刻画状态). As the shark turned its massive head toward him, Brian splashed violently, hoping to distract it(现在分词短语描写心理). For a second, Hiro’s heart nearly stopped, fearing(现在分词短语做伴随动作) Brian might become its next target. Summoning all his remaining strength(现在分词短语做伴随动作), Hiro reached out desperately. Feeling the boy’s fragile hand in his grip(现在分词短语做伴随动作), Brian pulled hard, kicking furiously toward the boat(现在分词短语做伴随动作). The shadow of the shark loomed closer, but Brian’s determined face gave Hiro the courage he had almost lost. At last, with one final kick, they reached the boat’s side and clutching the rope the captain and other tourist threw out. All of them pulled them onto the boat, fortunate ly, leaving Brain and Hiro(现在分词做结果状语)gasping for breath(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Paragraph 2: Hiro’s parents walked over to Brian with grateful tears in their eyes. Words seemed too pale to describe their emotions, yet they bowed deeply, their hands trembling(独立主格). Hiro threw himself into his mother’s arms, sobbing(现在分词短语做伴随动作)uncontrollably, before turning back to Brian. “Thank you,” he whispered, his voice broken but sincere(独立主格刻画人物). Still breathing heavily(现在分词短语做伴随动作)Brian patted Hiro gently on the shoulder, his eyes filled with quiet warmth(独立主格 ). “Remember,” he said softly, “courage isn’t the absence of fear, but the choice to act despite it.” Those words sank deeply into Hiro’s heart, brighter than the sun above the restless sea(adj做补语). The captain cheered, the tourists clapped, and even the distant horizon seemed calmer. Hiro knew this day would never be forgotten, not because of the shark’s sharp teeth, but because of the courage that had saved him and the love that had bound them together. Version 2 Paragraph 1: Just then, Brian stepped in without hesitation. Throwing off his jacket,(现在分词短语做伴随动作) he leapt into the water, his body cutting through the surface like an arrow(独立主格刻画救援动作).Hiro’s eyes widened in shock, torn between relief and fear for Brian’s safety(过去分词短语做后置定语). The shark, sensing new movement(现在分词短语做伴随动作), changed its direction and headed straight toward Brian. For a terrifying moment, time seemed frozen—the predator and the man facing each other in the endless blue(独立主格). Brian waved his arms, splashing and shouting(现在分词短语做伴随动作), drawing the shark away from Hiro(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Brian gestured urgently for Hiro to swim backward while maintaining eye contact with the creature. With Hiro nearing him(with复合结构), he seized Hiro by the wrist and dragged him forcefully toward the boat. Hiro’s legs felt numb, but Brian’s grip was unshakable. Just as the shark’s fin sliced past them again, strong hands reached down from the boat and pulled them both to safety, leaving the sea boiling behind them.(现在分词做结果状语) Paragraph 2: Hiro’s parents walked over to Brian with grateful tears in their eyes. Their voices trembled as they tried to thank him, but their emotions choked the words. Hiro clung to his father’s arm, unable to stop shaking(adj做主语补语). Brian, still dripping wet(现在分词短语做后置定语), managed a tired but reassuring smile. “It’s over,” he said, panting heavily(现在分词短语做伴随动作), “you’re safe now.” The mother wiped away tears, whispering(现在分词短语做伴随动作) that Hiro had been given a second life. Hiro looked at the broken strap of his camera still floating nearby and realized how close he had been to losing everything. Gratitude surged through him(无灵主语句), replacing the earlier terror(现在分词短语做伴随动作). From then on, he silently promised himself never to ignore warnings, never to let excitement blind his judgment, and always to remember the courage of the man who had risked his life for him. Version 3 Paragraph 1: Just then, Brian stepped in without hesitation. Kicking off his shoes(现在分词短语做伴随动作), he plunged into the water with a loud splash. Hiro’s scream froze in his throat as he saw the older man swimming with powerful strokes. The shark’s fin cut a sharp line across the surface, circling closer and closer(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Brian shouted, waving his arms in a desperate attempt to catch its attention(现在分词短语做伴随动作). The water churned violently, and Hiro’s heart pounded like a drum. “Swim to me, Hiro!” Brian cried. Summoning the last bit of his strength(现在分词短语做伴随动作), Hiro flung himself forward, coughing and gasping(现在分词短语做伴随动作). The shark lunged, but Brian pushed Hiro forward, shielding him with his own body(现在分词短语做伴随动作). The tourists leaned over the rail, yelling encouragement(现在分词短语做伴随动作), their faces pale(独立主格刻画人物). Finally, with a final thrust, Brian shoved Hiro toward the boat, where eager hands lifted him up. Exhausted(adj做主语补语), Brian clung up finally before the shark biting. Paragraph 2: Hiro’s parents walked over to Brian with grateful tears in their eyes. Hiro, still wrapped in a towel(过去分词做后置定语), ran back to hug Brian, his voice breaking,(独立主格) “You saved my life.” The father gripped Brian’s wet hands tightly, unable to let go(adj做主语补语), while the mother’s tears streamed down her cheeks. Brian shook his head gently, saying(现在分词做伴随动作), “Any one of us would have done the same.” Hiro’s cheeks still burned with the memory of the shark’s teeth, yet his heart glowed with admiration. The terrifying morning had turned into a lesson about the power of courage and kindness. As the boat sailed back under the golden sunlight, Hiro silently promised himself to live with the same bravery and selflessness that had saved him. 1. 情绪描写亮点词汇 terrified → horrified / frozen with fear relieved → comforted / reassured grateful → thankful / indebted / appreciative trembling hands → quivering fingers / shaking with emotion sobbing uncontrollably → bursting into tears / weeping bitterly 2. 动作描写亮点短语 dive into the water → plunge into / leap into / hurl oneself into swim with firm strokes → cut through the water / push forward powerfully grab firmly → clutch tightly / seize / grip with force splash violently → thrash the water / strike the surface / stir the waves drag sb. to safety → haul / pull / tug toward rescue 3. 常用升级短语 & 同义替换 without hesitation → instantly / immediately / at once be filled with fear → be overwhelmed by terror / paralyzed with fear risk one’s life → put one’s life at stake / throw oneself into danger burst into tears → break down crying / tears streamed down one’s cheeks remember forever → engrave in one’s memory / never fade from one’s mind 4. 积累例句 He plunged into the icy river without a second thought, determined to save the drowning child. Gratitude flooded her heart, so overwhelming that words could no longer express it. The boy clutched his father’s hand tightly, refusing to let go after the frightening experience. Courage is not the absence of fear, but the will to act in spite of it. 官方：One possible version : Just then, Brian stepped in without hesitation. He tore off his shirt and shoes, and jumped into the sea. He splashed the water hard with his hands and shouted as loud as he could. The shark turned its head-it forgot about Hiro and swam towards Brian. Hiro's legs stopped shaking.He swam fast to the boat, where his parents pulled him up tight. The tourists acted fast too. They held out a rope to Brian. Just as the shark got closer, Brian grabbed the rope and was pulled onto the boat. Hiro's parents walked over to Brian with grateful tears in their eyes. “ Thank you! You saved our son's life!” they said, bowing deeply(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Brian smiled and told them he was happy to see Hiro safe and sound. The tourists clapped loudly- they all called Brian a hero. Someone gave him a towel to dry off, and another handed him a cup of water.Brian drank it slowly, feeling the warmth spread through his body(现在分词短语做伴随动作). He was tired, but satisfied with himself because he acted on his belief that helping others “an make the world a safer,wanner place.”(同位从) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $