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标黑加粗斜体（环境描写或好词好句）可积累文本，绿色衔接点！！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单下划线（状从）；非谓语形式都会标注；其他重点，红色字体为重要单词B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释)! () 名校教研联盟·陕西省西安市新城区2026届高三9月考试 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 We do our best to teach our kids everything they need to handle what life throws at them, but sometimes they are simply born with the right instincts(本篇是本能和教育的叠加产物). This was proven by four-year-old Kyndal Bradley during a crisis at daycare(文章整体概括). After Kyndal Bradley had breakfast, her mom, Taylor Moore, sent her to the kindergarten as usual. She felt as happy as usual(情绪). On arriving at the kindergarten, she greeted her classmates and teachers as warmly as before(情绪描写). She placed her schoolbag in the fixed shelf and played together with her classmates cheerfully. As a matter of fact, Kyndal did enjoy (再一次刻画人物情绪)her time at the kindergarten. The morning started with language lesson, during which she learned how to spell and pronounce English words. She focused her attention on the lesson and she did master what she was taught. Then it came to the second class, which is about reading and sharing stories. Teacher Ms. Henderson was reading a book when she suddenly stopped. She made a strange noise. Her body became straight and still and then fell backwards onto the floor. Her arms and legs started shaking violently(人物状态描写，生病？), knocking over those nearby blocks(现在分词短语做伴随动作). The room was in chaos. Several children screamed and cried. Others froze and held their toys tight, at a loss(介词短语做补语)what to do. Some just stared silently at their teacher’s frightening movements(描写老师的状态). With no adult present, the once happy classroom was now full of confusion and fear(环境描写). Kyndal, sitting near the front(现在分词短语做伴随动作), jumped back, covering her mouth(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Fear flashed on her face(无灵主语句), but it quickly turned to a sudden determination. While other kids were in a panic, Kyndal didn’t freeze or cry. She soon took action. Remembering(现在分词短语做伴随动作)that help was in the main office down the hall, she rose to her feet. She ran around tables and toys to the heavy classroom door. Using all her strength(现在分词短语做伴随动作), she pushed hard until it opened enough for her to slip out. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Kyndal burst into the office, out of breath but focused. Paragraph 2: Her mom Moore knew nothing about her bravery until pickup time. 名校教研联盟·陕西省西安市新城区2026届高三9月考试 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 We do our best to teach our kids everything they need to handle what life throws at them, but sometimes they are simply born with the right instincts (本能). This was proven by four-year-old Kyndal Bradley during a crisis at daycare. After Kyndal Bradley had breakfast, her mom, Taylor Moore, sent her to the kindergarten as usual. She felt as happy as usual. On arriving at the kindergarten, she greeted her classmates and teachers as warmly as before. She placed her schoolbag in the fixed shelf and played together with her classmates cheerfully. As a matter of fact, Kyndal did enjoy her time at the kindergarten. The morning started with language lesson, during which she learned how to spell and pronounce English words. She focused her attention on the lesson and she did master what she was taught. Then it came to the second class, which is about reading and sharing stories. Teacher Ms. Henderson was reading a book when she suddenly stopped. She made a strange noise. Her body became straight and still and then fell backwards onto the floor. Her arms and legs started shaking violently, knocking over those nearby blocks. The room was in chaos. Several children screamed and cried. Others froze and held their toys tight, at a loss what to do. Some just stared silently at their teacher’s frightening movements. With no adult present, the once happy classroom was now full of confusion and fear. Kyndal, sitting near the front, jumped back, covering her mouth. Fear flashed on her face, but it quickly turned to a sudden determination. While other kids were in a panic, Kyndal didn’t freeze or cry. She soon took action. Remembering that help was in the main office down the hall, she rose to her feet. She ran around tables and toys to the heavy classroom door. Using all her strength, she pushed hard until it opened enough for her to slip out. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Kyndal burst into the office, out of breath but focused. Paragraph 2: Her mom Moore knew nothing about her bravery until pickup time. 第一部分：读后续写分析与构思 1. 文章类型分析 该读后续写属于 “遇险救险-救人于危难类”故事，聚焦于儿童在突发事件（老师癫痫发作）中的本能反应与勇敢行为。这类续写要求突出人物的临场决策、行动过程以及情感升华，并强调“本能”与“教育”的主题呼应。 2. 续写构思与布局 步骤 具体内容 情节框架 第一段：Kyndal 冲进办公室求助 → 第二段：成人介入救援 + 母亲得知真相后的情感升华 核心任务 1. 完成求助过程（动作+语言） 2. 展现成人反应与救援 3. 通过母亲视角点明主题（本能与成长） 段落分工 - 段落1：动作描写（奔跑、求助）、语言描写（清晰说明事件） - 段落2：时间过渡（救援完成→接娃时间）、情感对比（母亲由担忧到骄傲） 主题升华 通过母亲与老师的对话，点明“孩子天生具备应对危机的本能”这一隐含主题 3. 续写注意事项 类别 注意事项 承接原文 需延续 Kyndal 的“determination”（决心）和“focus”（专注） 保持其他孩子的恐慌氛围作为对比 呼应开头“born with the right instincts”的主题 关键衔接点 办公室场景需与原文“main office down the hall”衔接 母亲接娃时需与早餐送别场景形成闭环 语言风格 使用简洁生动的短句刻画紧张感（如“burst into”“out of breath”），适当加入心理描写 伏笔与冲突解决 伏笔：老师突发疾病、无人监管的教室 解决：Kyndal 成功求助，成人及时介入 第二部分：原文分析与续写线索提取 1. 故事山模式分析 阶段 原文内容 开端 Kyndal 如常上学，课堂欢乐氛围 发展 老师突然发病，教室陷入混乱 高潮 Kyndal 克服恐惧，果断跑出教室求助 回落/解决 （续写任务） 成人介入救援，母亲得知真相 结局 （续写任务） 主题升华：本能胜过刻意教育 2. 原文关键元素分析表 分析角度 内容 原文反应句 人物刻画 Kyndal 从恐惧到果断的转变 “Fear flashed on her face, but it quickly turned to a sudden determination.” 情感层次 孩子们从欢乐→恐惧→混乱 “The room was in chaos. Several children screamed and cried.” 关键情节点 老师发病是故事转折点 “Ms. Henderson was reading a book when she suddenly stopped... fell backwards.” 语言特色 短句与动作动词结合，营造紧张感 “She ran around tables and toys... pushed hard until it opened.” 心理描写 Kyndal 的瞬间心理变化 “covering her mouth... but it quickly turned to determination.” 动作描写 突出 Kyndal 的敏捷与果断 “jumped back”“rose to her feet”“ran”“pushed hard” 环境描写 教室从有序到混乱的对比 “the once happy classroom was now full of confusion and fear.” 隐含主题 儿童的本能可能超越成人教导 “sometimes they are simply born with the right instincts.” 情感转折 Kyndal 从害怕到决心行动的瞬间 “Fear flashed... but it quickly turned to...” 空间转换 教室→走廊→办公室（续写需延续） “help was in the main office down the hall” 时间过渡 从上午课堂到接娃时间（续写需体现） “Her mom Moore knew nothing about her bravery until pickup time.” 3. 伏笔、冲突与解决方案 要素 内容 伏笔 1. 开头强调“born with the right instincts” 2. 老师发病前课堂的正常氛围 冲突点 1. 老师突发疾病，无人监管 2. 孩子们恐慌，唯 Kyndal 冷静行动 隐含线索 Kyndal 的“determination”暗示她与生俱来的应对能力 解决方案 Kyndal 求助成人，后续应描写救援过程与主题呼应 3. 动作环境心理描写与高级词汇替换 动作描写 With a burst of adrenaline, she darted out of the classroom. （随着肾上腺素迸发，她冲出了教室。） She flung the door open and sprinted down the deserted hallway. （她猛地推开门，在空无一人的走廊里飞奔。） Gasping for air, she skidded to a halt in front of the office counter. （她上气不接下气，在办公室前台前猛地停住脚步。） Tugging frantically at the secretary's sleeve, she managed to stammer out the emergency. （她疯狂地拽着秘书的袖子，结结巴巴地说出了紧急情况。） The adults swiftly administered first aid to the convulsing teacher. （大人们迅速对抽搐的老师进行了急救。） She clung to her mother's leg, the aftermath of the fear finally setting in. （她紧紧抱住妈妈的腿，恐惧的余波终于袭来。） Ms. Henderson gradually regained consciousness, looking disoriented. （亨德森老师逐渐恢复了意识，看起来有些迷茫。） The principal knelt down to Kyndal's eye level, speaking in a soothing tone. （校长蹲下来，与凯恩达尔视线齐平，用安抚的语气说话。） A wave of relief washed over the classroom as help arrived. （随着救援到来，一股宽慰的情绪席卷了整个教室。） Her mother enveloped her in a tight, tearful embrace. （她的母亲眼含泪水，紧紧地拥抱了她。） 心理描写 A paralyzing fear gripped her heart for a second, but it was quickly overridden by a surge of determination. （一阵令人瘫痪的恐惧攫住了她的心，但很快就被一股决心的浪潮覆盖了。） Her mind raced, recalling the location of the main office. （她思绪飞转，回想起了主任办公室的位置。） Blocking out the panicked cries around her, she focused solely on her mission. （屏蔽掉周围恐慌的哭喊声，她只专注于自己的使命。） A sense of urgency propelled her forward, her small body fueled by resolve. （一种紧迫感推动着她前进，她小小的身体充满了决心。） A flicker of doubt crossed her mind: could she make it in time? （一丝怀疑掠过她的脑海：她能及时赶到吗？） Witnessing the adults take charge, a profound sense of safety enveloped her. （看到大人们接管了局面，一种深刻的安全感包围了她。） She felt a quiet pride blossom in her chest as the principal praised her. （当校长表扬她时，她感到一种无声的自豪在胸中绽放。） The initial shock gave way to exhaustion as the adrenaline faded. （随着肾上腺素消退，最初的震惊被疲惫所取代。） Her mother's proud gaze filled her with a warmth that melted all the remaining fear. （母亲骄傲的目光让她充满温暖，融化了所有残留的恐惧。） It was a mix of relief, pride, and the innocent joy of having helped. （那是一种宽慰、自豪和帮助他人后的天真喜悦的混合体。） 环境描写 An eerie silence had fallen over the once-chaotic classroom, punctuated only by soft whimpers. （一种怪异的寂静笼罩了曾经混乱的教室，只有轻微的抽泣声偶尔打破它。） The fluorescent lights in the hallway seemed to hum with urgency. （走廊里的荧光灯似乎也带着紧迫感在嗡嗡作响。） Sunlight streamed innocently through the windows, contrasting sharply with the drama inside. （阳光无辜地透过窗户照射进来，与室内的戏剧性场面形成鲜明对比。） The distant wail of an ambulance siren grew steadily louder, a promise of help. （救护车警笛的遥远哀号声逐渐变大，那是援助的承诺。） The classroom was a tableau of distress: scattered toys, overturned chairs, and tear-streaked faces. （教室是一片痛苦的景象：散落的玩具、翻倒的椅子和泪流满面的脸庞。） The familiar kindergarten now felt like an alien and frightening place. （这个熟悉的幼儿园现在感觉像一个陌生而可怕的地方。） The soft murmur of the principal's voice provided a calming backdrop to the scene. （校长轻柔的低语为现场提供了一个平静的背景音。） The crisp air of the outside world felt refreshing as they finally left the building. （当他们最终离开大楼时，外面世界的清新空气令人神清气爽。） The clock on the wall ticked loudly, each second stretching into an eternity. （墙上的时钟滴答作响，每一秒都延长成了永恒。） The warm, familiar scent of her mother's perfume was the most comforting thing she had ever smelled. （母亲身上温暖而熟悉的香水味是她闻过的最令人安慰的气息。） 常见单词的高级替换词 (5组) 场景： 说 常见词: say, shout 高级替换: stammer (结结巴巴地说，表现恐惧/紧张), gasp (喘着气说，表现震惊/急切), exclaim (惊呼), urge (催促，敦促) 总结: 根据情绪选择具体的“说”法，使描写更精确。 场景： 走/跑 常见词: run, walk 高级替换: dart (猛冲，突进), sprint (短距离冲刺), hurry (匆忙赶路), slip out (溜出，悄悄离开) 总结: 用不同的动词描绘移动的速度和方式，增强画面感。 场景： 害怕 常见词: afraid, scared 高级替换: panic-stricken (惊慌失措的), terrified (吓坏了的), frozen with fear (吓得僵住的) 总结: 使用更强烈的形容词或短语来刻画不同程度的恐惧。 场景： 快 常见词: quick, fast 高级替换: swift (迅速的，常指动作流畅), prompt (及时的，迅速的), without hesitation (毫不犹豫地) 总结: 用副词短语或更正式的形容词替代简单词汇。 场景： 混乱 常见词: messy, in a mess 高级替换: chaos (混乱，无序), turmoil (骚动，混乱), pandemonium (大混乱，喧嚣) 总结: 使用名词来概括混乱的状态，比形容词更有力度。 4. 搭配、词法解析与语料积累 地道搭配与词法解析 (Collocations and Parsing) burst into + [地点]: 突然闯入。Burst 强调动作的突然性和爆发力。比 run into 更生动。 例句: Kyndal burst into the office. out of breath: 上气不接下气。固定搭配，非常地道。 例句: She was out of breath but focused. a surge of + [抽象名词]: 一阵/一股（情感或感觉）。Surge 原意是“浪潮”，用作比喻。 例句: She felt a surge of determination. administer first aid: 实施急救。Administer 是 give 的正式/专业替换词。 例句: The secretary knew how to administer first aid. regain consciousness: 恢复意识。医学或正式用语，比 wake up 更准确。 例句: Ms. Henderson slowly regained consciousness. the aftermath of...: ...的后果/余波。指重大事件过后的一段时期和其影响。 例句: In the aftermath of the incident, the school reviewed its safety procedures. envelop someone in a hug/embrace: 紧紧拥抱某人。Envelop 意为“包裹”，形象地描绘了拥抱的紧密和安全感。 例句: Her mom enveloped her in a warm embrace. 可积累的语料 (生词短语) instinct /ˈɪnstɪŋkt/ (n.) 本能，直觉 近义词: intuition, impulse, gut feeling 反义词: learned behavior, reasoning 例句1: Humans have a natural instinct for survival. 例句2: She trusted her instincts and made the right choice. chaos /ˈkeɪɒs/ (n.) 混乱，无秩序状态 近义词: disorder, confusion, pandemonium, turmoil 反义词: order, peace, calm, tranquility 例句1: The room was in complete chaos after the party. 例句2: The news threw his life into chaos. determination /dɪˌtɜːmɪˈneɪʃən/ (n.) 决心，果断 近义词: resolution, resolve, perseverance, willpower 反义词: indecision, hesitation, uncertainty 例句1: Her determination to succeed was admirable. 例句2: With great determination, he finished the marathon. convulse /kənˈvʌls/ (v.) 使剧烈震动；抽搐（常用被动语态 be convulsing） 近义词: jerk, shake violently, have spasms 反义词: be still, be calm 例句1: The patient was convulsing on the floor. 例句2: The country was convulsed by civil war. slip out /slɪp aʊt/ (phrasal v.) 溜出，悄悄离开 近义词: sneak out, escape quietly 反义词: enter noisily, burst in 例句1: He slipped out of the meeting early. 例句2: The secret slipped out accidentally during the conversation. disoriented /dɪsˈɔːrientɪd/ (adj.) 迷失方向的；迷茫的 近义词: confused, bewildered, lost, disorientated 反义词: oriented, clear-headed, aware 例句1: After the concussion, he felt dizzy and disoriented. 例句2: She looked around, disoriented by the unfamiliar surroundings. 5. Possible Versions(4) Versions 1 Paragraph 1: Kyndal burst into the office, out of breath but focused. Her wide eyes fixed on the adults inside, and between gasps she managed to say that Ms. Henderson had collapsed in the classroom. At first the staff froze, surprised(过去分词做adj补语)that such urgent news should come from a four-year-old, but the fear in her trembling voice made them instantly alert. Without hesitation, one teacher rushed toward the classroom while another grabbed the phone to call for medical help. Following behind, Kyndal’s small feet pounded the hallway, her heart racing faster than her legs(独立主格刻画人物). As they reentered the classroom, the sight of Ms. Henderson lying on the floor(现在分词短语做后置定语) confirmed her desperate words. While the adults attended to the teacher, Kyndal moved to comfort her crying classmates, whispering softly(现在分词短语做伴随动作) as she gently patted their shoulders. By the time the paramedics arrived, the chaos had been replaced by a tense but organized calm. Paragraph 2: Her mom Moore knew nothing about her bravery until pickup time.When Ms. Henderson’s condition had been stabilized and order returned to the kindergarten, the story of Kyndal’s quick thinking spread among the staff. Moore, arriving at the gate(现在分词短语做伴随动作)with the same casual smile as every afternoon, was stopped by the principal, who told her what had happened. For a moment she was speechless, then she bent down, tears brimming in her eyes(独立主格刻画人物), and hugged Kyndal tightly. “You were so brave, sweetheart,” she whispered, her voice breaking(独立主格刻画人物). Kyndal, still too young to understand the full weight of her actions(adj做主语补语), only smiled shyly and said she had simply wanted to help. The mother, however, realized that in that terrifying moment her daughter had grown in courage, proving(现在分词做结果状语) that sometimes children carry a wisdom beyond their years. 加分语法点 独立主格: her bag slipping slightly from her shoulder 非谓语作状语: Following behind, Kyndal’s small feet pounded the hallway 强调句: It was her trembling voice that made them instantly alert. 词汇搭配/替换 collapse = fall down suddenly / faint trembling voice = shaky tone / quivering words hug tightly = clutch / squeeze in her arms 情绪描写亮点词 wide eyes fixed on… tears brimming in her eyes voice breaking 动作描写亮点词 rushed toward / grabbed / pounded the hallway / whispered softly / patted shoulders 积累语料替换 burst into → dash into / rush into comfort sb. → soothe / calm / reassure be speechless → struck dumb / lost for words 例句： She dashed into the room, her breath coming in short gasps. His words soothed the frightened child. I was struck dumb when I heard the shocking news. The nurse tried to reassure the patient with a gentle smile. Version 2 Paragraph 1: Kyndal burst into the office, out of breath but focused. Her tiny fists pressed against her chest as she struggled to speak. “Ms. Henderson… she… she fell!” she stammered. The staff immediately recognized the urgency in her uneven words. Chairs scraped against the floor(环境描写) as several teachers sprang up. One guided Kyndal to breathe steadily, while others rushed to the classroom. Though fear still knotted her stomach, Kyndal refused to sit down. Instead, she insisted on running back with them, determined not to leave her classmates behind(adj短语做补语). Back in the room, the children’s cries quieted the moment they saw adults arrive. Ms. Henderson, pale and trembling(adj做补语), was carefully lifted into recovery position. Watching this(现在分词短语做伴随动作), Kyndal’s clenched hands loosened, and she exhaled a long sigh of relief, her earlier determination now mingling with exhaustion(独立刻画人物). Paragraph 2: Her mom Moore knew nothing about her bravery until pickup time. When Moore walked into the kindergarten, she expected only the usual chatter about letters and games. Instead, the principal gently recounted the day’s crisis, pointing to Kyndal as the little heroine(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Moore’s heart skipped a beat, and she pulled her daughter close, her eyes glistening with pride(独立主格刻画人物). “Didn’t you feel scared?” she asked softly. Kyndal nodded, then whispered, “But I knew someone had to help.” At that instant Moore understood that courage was not the absence of fear but the choice to act despite it. She held Kyndal’s hand all the way home, silently thanking(现在分词短语做伴随动作)life for giving her not only a daughter to protect but also a child from whom she could learn. 倒装: Never had Moore imagined her daughter would act so bravely. 虚拟语气: If Kyndal had frozen like the others, things might have ended worse. 非谓语: Watching this, Kyndal’s clenched hands loosened. 词汇搭配/替换 clenched hands = tightened fists exhale a long sigh = breathe out deeply glistening eyes = tear-filled / shining eyes 情绪亮点词 knotted her stomach heart skipped a beat pride glistening in her eyes 动作亮点词 sprang up / guided / rushed / lifted / pulled her close 积累语料替换 spring up → leap to one’s feet / jump up quickly hold sb.’s hand → clasp / grip the choice to act despite fear → acting in the face of fear 例句： He leapt to his feet the moment the alarm rang. She clasped her child’s hand tightly in the crowd. True courage is acting in the face of fear. My heart skipped a beat when I saw the exam results. Version 3 Paragraph 1: Kyndal burst into the office, out of breath but focused. The sound of the door banging startled the staff, who turned to see the tiny figure trembling yet determined. Struggling for breath(现在分词短语做伴随动作), she cried, “Please help! Ms. Henderson is on the floor!” The urgency in her words swept away any doubt(无灵主语句). One adult immediately grabbed the emergency kit, while another dashed after Kyndal toward the classroom. Fear still pricked her mind(情绪描写), but she remembered her mom’s advice to stay calm when problems came. As the adults began first aid, the children slowly stopped crying, their eyes following every move(独立主格). Standing by the doorway(现在分词短语做伴随动作), Kyndal clasped her small hands together, whispering prayers under her breath(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Relief washed over her when Ms. Henderson finally showed faint signs of recovery. Paragraph 2: Her mom Moore knew nothing about her bravery until pickup time. When Moore arrived, she noticed the unusual hush across the yard. Soon the principal explained the morning’s emergency and praised Kyndal’s decisive action. Moore’s lips parted in astonishment(无灵主语句), for she had imagined her daughter still too young for such responsibility. Kneeling down(现在分词短语做伴随动作), she cupped Kyndal’s cheeks and said with trembling warmth, “I’m so proud of you.” Kyndal lowered her head, cheeks flushing pink(独立主格刻画人物), and murmured that she had only done what she thought her mom would do. For Moore, the words were more touching than the act itself, reminding(现在分词短语做伴随动作) her that lessons of love and responsibility had already taken root. Hand in hand, they left the kindergarten, the sun casting a golden glow over their connected shadows(独立主格寓情于景). 非谓语: Relief washing over her… 定语从句: the words were more touching than the act itself, reminding her that lessons … had already taken root. 倒装: Only then did Moore realize how much her daughter had grown. 词汇搭配/替换 clasp hands = fold hands / grip hands together whisper prayers = murmur wishes cheeks flushing pink = blushing 情绪亮点词 trembling yet determined lips parted in astonishment trembling warmth 动作亮点词 dashed / clasped / cupped her cheeks / lowered her head 积累语料替换 flush with pride → glow with pride / beam with satisfaction take root → be deeply planted / firmly established astonishment → amazement / shock 例句： The child glowed with pride after finishing the race. The value of honesty had long taken root in her heart. He looked at her in sheer amazement. Her cheeks flushed as she received the compliment. 【官方答案】One possible version: Kyndal burst into the office, out of breath but focused. She urgently pulled the daycare director’s sleeve. “Help! Help!” Kyndal shouted clearly. “Teacher fell! She’s shaking on the floor! Hurry, please!” She pointed straight back to her classroom. All the teachers in the office soon realized what had happened. They quickly ran out of the office and arrived at Kyndal’s childcare room. Soon, paramedics arrived quickly and took Ms. Henderson to the hospital for important care. Kyndal’s fast action and clear words did save her teacher’s life. Her mom Moore knew nothing about her bravery until pickup time. Before Moore could ask questions, the childcare director told her directly. “There was a serious incident today with Ms. Henderson but Kyndal stayed calm, ran for help, and told us exactly what happened. She saved her teacher’s life,” she said gratefully. Moore was shocked at this news. Though Moore had taught her daughter some basics like her phone number and address, she had never thought to teach what to do in an emergency. In relief, Moore said that Kyndal had a born caring spirit. Moore is very proud of how Kyndal stayed calm during the scary event. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $