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2025年中考英语写作真题解读（安徽卷） 【真题链接】 （2025·安徽·中考真题）假定你是李华。校英文报“STORY”专栏正在征集稿件，请你根据下面表格中的信息，以第一人称，用英语写一个故事投稿。 When Last Friday morning Where School sports ground Who I, my classmate What Take part in, help, feel proud 注意： 1.短文须包含表格中的关键词，请增加细节以使故事完整； 2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数80~100。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【文本解读】 1. 核心任务：以第一人称 “李华” 身份，向校英文报 “STORY” 专栏投稿一篇叙事文，围绕 “上周五上午在学校操场，与同学参与活动并提供帮助，最终感到自豪” 的核心逻辑展开。 2. 关键约束：必须包含表格中 “When（Last Friday morning）、Where（School sports ground）、Who（I, my classmate）、What（Take part in, help, feel proud）” 所有关键词；词数 80~100；不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；需补充细节使故事完整。 3. 文体要求：记叙文，需具备 “起因 — 经过 — 结果” 的叙事结构，语言生动自然，符合校园场景氛围。 【命题特色】 1. 贴近校园生活：选材聚焦学生熟悉的体育活动场景，无陌生话题障碍，便于调动真实体验进行写作。 2. 聚焦核心能力：重点考查叙事逻辑的连贯性、细节补充能力及第一人称视角的语言表达准确性。 3. 限定与开放结合：关键词明确限定核心要素，同时允许学生自由选择具体活动（如跑步、跳远、接力赛等），兼顾规范性与灵活性。 【写作框架】 段落 核心内容 常用表达 开头（起因） 交代时间、地点、参与的活动及背景 Last Friday morning, my classmate Tom and I took part in the school track-and-field meet on the sports ground. He signed up for the 800-meter race but was a little nervous. 中间（经过） 详细描述同学遇到的困难、“我” 的帮助过程 During the race, he suddenly felt a cramp in his leg and slowed down. I ran beside him, encouraging him and supporting his arm to keep going. We didn’t stop until we crossed the finish line. 结尾（结果） 表达 “自豪” 的感受及原因 Though we didn’t win a prize, I felt extremely proud. Helping a friend in need and sticking to the end together made the event meaningful. 【满分范文】 【答案】例文 A memorable story Life is full of unforgettable moments, whether they’re about success, challenges or kindness. One story that happened last Friday left a deep impression on me. It was a bright morning on the school sports ground, filled with cheers. During the 100-meter race, a classmate suddenly fell. As I was responsible for first aid coordination, I quickly rushed to get help and brought water. Other classmates comforted him while we waited for the staff to arrive. Fortunately, he was fine after receiving treatment. However, I missed my own event in the process. At first, I felt a little disappointed, but that emotion soon turned into pride. I realized that giving up a small personal honor to help someone in need was truly meaningful. Sometimes, the greatest victories aren’t won on the track, but felt in the heart. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。   [写作步骤]   第一步，开头引出本文主题；   第二步，讲述故事发生的地点，时间和经过； 第三步，从这个故事中得到的哲理感悟。   [亮点词汇]   ①be full of充满   ②leave a deep impression on sb给某人留下深刻印象   ③wait for等待 [高分句型]   ①As I was responsible for first aid coordination, I quickly rushed to get help and brought water.（as引导原因状语从句）   ②I realized that giving up a small personal honor to help someone in need was truly meaningful.（that引导宾语从句） 【范文赏析】 范文 1：帮助同学完成跑步比赛 Last Friday morning, my classmate Jack and I took part in the school sports meet on the sports ground. Jack was in the 1000-meter race, but he fell down accidentally halfway and hurt his knee. Seeing he tried to stand up but failed, I rushed over at once. I helped him clean the dust on his clothes and supported his arm. With my encouragement, he insisted on finishing the race. When we crossed the finish line together, all classmates cheered for us. I felt so proud because I didn’t leave my friend alone. It taught me the importance of helping others. 范文 2：协助同学完成跳远挑战 Last Friday morning, our school held a sports meeting on the sports ground. My classmate Lily wanted to take part in the long jump but was worried about her skills. Knowing this, I decided to help her. I showed her how to swing her arms and jump forward with all strength. During the competition, when she felt nervous, I cheered loudly for her. Finally, she got the third prize. Looking at her happy smile, I felt proud of both her and myself. Taking part in the activity and helping a friend achieve her goal was really a wonderful experience. 范文 3：接力赛中帮助同学挽回失误 Last Friday morning, the most exciting event on the school sports ground was the 4×100-meter relay race. I was the third runner, and my classmate Mike was the second. When passing the baton, Mike dropped it carelessly. He was so anxious that he couldn’t find it quickly. I stopped, helped him look for the baton, and passed it to me smoothly. Then I ran as fast as I could to catch up with other classes. Though we only got the fourth place, everyone praised our teamwork. I felt proud because I helped my class through the difficulty. True friendship lies in mutual help. 5 / 5 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $