摘要:
该初中英语单元复习教案围绕“时代榜样”主题,系统整合核心词汇(如devoted, perseverance)、基础语法(感叹句、祈使句)及实用句型(介绍榜样、描述品质等),通过亮点词块梳理、高分句子解析及范文与拓展练习的衔接,构建“词汇-语法-表达”的知识网络,强化知识点间的逻辑关联。
其特色在于分层设计与素养融合,如通过“名人榜样(袁隆平)-时代楷模(张桂梅)-身边榜样(社区志愿者)”的梯度练习,结合仿写、句型应用等活动,培养学生的语言表达能力和文化意识,同时通过“核心句型+语法实践”提升思维品质。这一设计既帮助学生巩固单元知识,也为教师提供精准的分层教学资源,提升复习效率。
内容正文:
Unit 7 Role models of our time 写作学案
【写作导引】
本单元以“Role models of our time”为核心话题,围绕“榜样的品质、榜样的贡献、向榜样学习”展开,核心聚焦“用英语介绍时代榜样、描述榜样的精神品质、阐述榜样的影响与意义”,运用感叹句、祈使句等基础语法,搭配单元核心词汇与逻辑句型,提升七年级学生的说明类写作感染力和思想表达深度。常见写作角度包括:① 介绍古今中外的时代榜样(科学家、教育家、普通人等);② 描述榜样的典型事迹与精神品质;③ 分享榜样对自己的启发与影响;④ 仿写课本“致敬榜样”风格的短文。所有内容严格贴合课本话题、词汇与语法要求,适配七年级学生认知水平,可直接用于课堂同步训练。
【单元话题】
“致敬我的时代榜样”。请根据课本“Writing”板块范例,介绍一位你心中的时代榜样(可以是名人、普通人或身边的人),包括其身份、主要事迹、精神品质及对你的影响,词数80-100左右,题目为“My Role Model”。
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【范文】
My Role Model
My role model is Yuan Longping, a great Chinese scientist known as the “Father of Hybrid Rice”. He devoted his whole life to solving the problem of food shortage.
Dr Yuan was born in 1930. He spent decades researching hybrid rice, facing countless difficulties but never giving up. Thanks to his groundbreaking work, hybrid rice yields greatly increased, helping feed millions of people at home and abroad. He lived a simple life, caring little about fame or money. He often said, “I hope everyone in the world has enough food to eat.” His perseverance and selflessness deeply moved me.
Dr Yuan taught me that dedication and kindness can change the world. I will learn from his spirit, study hard, and try my best to help others. He is truly a role model of our time.
【译文】
我的榜样
我的榜样是袁隆平,一位被誉为“杂交水稻之父”的伟大中国科学家。他毕生致力于解决粮食短缺问题。
袁先生出生于1930年,花了数十年时间研究杂交水稻,历经无数困难却从未放弃。得益于他开创性的研究,杂交水稻产量大幅提高,帮助养活了国内外数百万人口。他生活简朴,不太在意名利,常说:“我希望世界上每个人都能吃饱饭。”他的坚韧不拔和无私奉献深深打动了我。
袁先生教会我,奉献与善良能改变世界。我会学习他的精神,努力学习,尽力帮助他人。他无疑是我们这个时代的榜样。
亮点词块
1.devoted his whole life to 毕生致力于
2.food shortage 粮食短缺
3.groundbreaking work 开创性工作
4.yield 产量
5.perseverance and selflessness 坚韧不拔与无私奉献
6.role model of our time 时代榜样
7.care little about 不太在意
高分句子
1.He devoted his whole life to solving the problem of food shortage.(用核心短语凸显榜样贡献,贴合单元主题,简洁有力)
2.Thanks to his groundbreaking work, hybrid rice yields greatly increased, helping feed millions of people at home and abroad.(用thanks to表原因,衔接自然,体现榜样的深远影响)
3.Dr Yuan taught me that dedication and kindness can change the world.(用宾语从句总结榜样的启发,升华主题,符合七年级写作要求)
【拓展1】
班级要举办“榜样故事会”,请你写一段文字介绍“时代楷模”张桂梅老师,包括她的事迹、品质及对你的影响,词数不少于70。
A Role Model in Education
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【拓展1范文】
A Role Model in Education
My role model is Zhang Guimei, a devoted teacher and “Role Model of the Times”. She has dedicated her life to helping girls in mountainous areas get an education.
Ms Zhang was born in Heilongjiang. She moved to Yunnan and spent six years building a girls’ high school with her own efforts. She walked to every household to persuade parents to send their daughters to school. Despite poor health, she never stopped working. Thanks to her, thousands of girls from poor families have entered universities and changed their lives. She is kind, tough and selfless, putting students’ future above her own.
Ms Zhang’s story teaches me the power of perseverance and love. I will cherish my study opportunities and learn from her to help those in need. She is a true hero in education.
【拓展1译文】
教育界的榜样
我的榜样是张桂梅,一位敬业的教师,也是“时代楷模”。她毕生致力于帮助山区女孩接受教育。
张老师出生于黑龙江,她搬到云南后,用六年时间凭借自己的努力建起了一所女子高中。她走遍每一户人家,劝说家长送女儿上学。尽管身体不好,她却从未停止工作。多亏了她,成千上万来自贫困家庭的女孩进入了大学,改变了自己的人生。她善良、坚韧、无私,把学生的未来看得比自己还重要。
张老师的故事让我明白了坚持与爱的力量。我会珍惜自己的学习机会,向她学习,帮助有需要的人。她是教育界真正的英雄。
【拓展2】
请根据以下提示,仿写“身边的榜样”短文,运用本单元核心语法,词数80左右,开头已给出。
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核心内容
榜样(社区志愿者王阿姨)、身份(退休工人)、事迹(照顾独居老人、组织社区清洁、帮助邻居)、品质(热心、耐心、乐于助人)、影响(教会我关爱他人)
语言要求
运用感叹句、祈使句,贴合单元语法重点
My Neighbour, My Role Model
My role model is Aunt Wang, a retired worker in my community. She is ordinary but extraordinary in many ways.
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【拓展2范文】
My Neighbour, My Role Model
My role model is Aunt Wang, a retired worker in my community. She is ordinary but extraordinary in many ways.
Aunt Wang is warm-hearted and patient. Every weekend, she visits独居 elderly people in the community, helping them buy groceries and clean their houses. She also organizes volunteers to clean the community park. When my parents are busy, she often looks after me and helps me with my homework. How kind she is! She always says, “Helping others makes me happy.”
Aunt Wang teaches me that small acts of kindness can make a big difference. Let’s follow her example and be helpful to those around us. She is the most inspiring person I know.
【拓展2译文】
我的邻居,我的榜样
我的榜样是王阿姨,我们社区的一位退休工人。她平凡却在很多方面不平凡。
王阿姨热心又有耐心。每个周末,她都会去看望社区里的独居老人,帮他们买杂货、打扫房子。她还组织志愿者清理社区公园。我父母忙的时候,她经常照顾我,帮我辅导作业。她多么善良啊!她总说:“帮助别人让我快乐。”
王阿姨教会我,小小的善举能带来大大的改变。让我们以她为榜样,乐于助人。她是我认识的最鼓舞人心的人。
本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累
一、核心主题词汇
1.榜样与品质相关(单元重点)
· 榜样身份:scientist 科学家;teacher 教师;volunteer 志愿者;doctor 医生;worker 工人;role model 榜样;Role Model of the Times 时代楷模
· 精神品质:devoted 奉献的;selfless 无私的;perseverant 坚韧的;kind 善良的;patient 有耐心的;warm-hearted 热心的;brave 勇敢的;tough 坚韧不拔的;hard-working 勤奋的
· 事迹与贡献:devote one’s life to 毕生致力于;make great contributions to 为……做出巨大贡献;solve problems 解决问题;help others 帮助他人;overcome difficulties 克服困难;groundbreaking research 开创性研究
· 语法相关:感叹句(What + (a/an) + 形容词 + 名词 + (主谓)!/ How + 形容词/副词 + (主谓)!);祈使句(动词原形开头/Don’t + 动词原形)
1. 语法相关(单元重点)
· 感叹句用法:
· What引导(修饰名词):What a selfless person he is!(他是多么无私的人啊!);What great contributions she has made!(她做出了多么大的贡献啊!)
· How引导(修饰形容词/副词):How brave the smokejumper is!(这位空降消防员多么勇敢啊!);How hard she works!(她工作多么努力啊!)
· 祈使句用法:
· 肯定式(表建议/号召):Learn from our role models!(向我们的榜样学习!);Be kind to others!(善待他人!)
· 否定式(表禁止):Don’t give up easily!(不要轻易放弃!);Don’t forget their spirit!(不要忘记他们的精神!)
1. 表达类(单元基础)
· 逻辑连接:and 和;but 但是;because 因为;thanks to 多亏;despite 尽管;however 然而;so 所以
· 常用短语:be known as 被誉为;spend...doing... 花费……做……;face difficulties 面对困难;never give up 永不放弃;change one’s life 改变人生;put...above... 把……看得比……重要;small acts of kindness 小小的善举;make a big difference 带来很大影响
二、实用句型积累
1.介绍榜样基本信息(贴合单元核心)
· My role model is..., who is a... 我的榜样是……,他/她是一位……,例:My role model is Qian Xuesen, who is a great aerospace scientist.(我的榜样是钱学森,他是一位伟大的航天科学家。)
· He/She is known as “...” for his/her... 他/她因……被誉为“……”,例:She is known as “Mother of Girls’ Education” for her devotion to helping poor girls.(她因致力于帮助贫困女孩而被誉为“女子教育之母”。)
1. 描述榜样事迹与品质(贴合单元主题)
· He/She devoted his/her whole life to... 他/她毕生致力于……,例:He devoted his whole life to scientific research.(他毕生致力于科学研究。)
· Despite..., he/she never... 尽管……,他/她从未……,例:Despite poor health, she never stopped helping others.(尽管身体不好,她从未停止帮助他人。)
· What a/an... person he/she is! / How... he/she is! 他/她是多么……的人啊!,例:What a selfless person she is!(她是多么无私的人啊!)
1. 阐述榜样的影响与启发(贴合单元内涵)
· He/She teaches me that... 他/她教会我……,例:He teaches me that perseverance can lead to success.(他教会我坚持就能成功。)
· We should learn from his/her... 我们应该学习他/她的……,例:We should learn from his dedication and kindness.(我们应该学习他的奉献精神和善良品质。)
· His/Her story inspires me to... 他/她的故事激励我……,例:Her story inspires me to help those in need.(她的故事激励我去帮助有需要的人。)
三、课堂实用句型
· 提问句型:Who is your role model?;What has he/she done?;What qualities do you admire most about him/her?;How has he/she influenced you?;Why is he/she a role model of our time?
· 回答句型:My role model is Zhang Guimei.;She built a girls’ high school for poor students.;I admire her perseverance and selflessness most.;She inspires me to study hard and help others.;Because she has made great contributions to education.
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