Unit 2 Great minds 作文学案 -2025-2026学年沪教牛津版（2012）英语九年级上册

Unit 2 Great minds 作文学案 【写作导引】 本单元以“Great minds”为话题，属于“名人与智慧”主题范畴，核心聚焦“用英语介绍伟人事迹、讲述名人故事、表达对智慧的理解”，运用名词后不定式、不定式作主语、be动词后不定式等核心语法，提升叙事类与观点类写作的逻辑性和表达丰富度。常见写作角度包括：① 介绍一位你敬佩的伟人（科学家、思想家等）；② 讲述一个关于伟人的趣味故事；③ 结合伟人经历谈对“智慧”的感悟；④ 仿写“困境中彰显智慧”的短篇故事。所有内容严格贴合课本话题与语言点，适配九年级学生认知水平，可直接用于课堂同步训练。 【单元话题】 “介绍一位你敬佩的伟人”。请根据课本“Reading”板块爱因斯坦的故事范例，介绍一位你敬佩的伟人，包括其生平、主要成就、性格特点及你从他身上获得的启发，词数100-120左右，题目为“A Great Mind I Admire”。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 A Great Mind I Admire The great mind I admire most is Albert Einstein, one of the greatest scientists in history. His contributions to physics and his unique personality have left a deep impression on me. Einstein was born in 1879 in Germany. He had a strong passion for science from an early age. Though he faced difficulties in his early studies, he never gave up his pursuit of knowledge. His most famous achievement is the theory of relativity, which revolutionized the way we understand the universe. He also had a great sense of humour, as shown in the story of him and his driver Hans. What impresses me most is his attitude towards learning—he once said, “Imagination is more important than knowledge.” Einstein’s life teaches me that curiosity and perseverance are the keys to success. His ability to think differently and challenge traditional ideas inspires me to keep exploring in my studies. He is truly a great mind worth admiring forever. 【译文】 我敬佩的一位伟人 我最敬佩的伟人是阿尔伯特·爱因斯坦，历史上最伟大的科学家之一。他对物理学的贡献以及独特的人格魅力给我留下了深刻的印象。 爱因斯坦于1879年出生在德国。他从小就对科学有着浓厚的热情。尽管早年学习中遇到了困难，但他从未放弃对知识的追求。他最著名的成就是相对论，这一理论彻底改变了我们对宇宙的理解。他还极具幽默感，从他和司机汉斯的故事中就可见一斑。最让我印象深刻的是他的学习态度——他曾说过：“想象力比知识更重要。” 爱因斯坦的人生让我明白，好奇心和毅力是成功的关键。他与众不同的思维方式和挑战传统观念的勇气，激励着我在学习中不断探索。他确实是一位值得永远敬佩的伟人。 亮点词块 1.contributions to 对……的贡献 2.passion for science 对科学的热情 3.pursuit of knowledge 对知识的追求 4.revolutionize the way we understand 彻底改变我们理解……的方式 5.sense of humour 幽默感 6.attitude towards learning 学习态度 7.challenge traditional ideas 挑战传统观念 8.keep exploring 不断探索 高分句子 1.His most famous achievement is the theory of relativity, which revolutionized the way we understand the universe.（运用定语从句，丰富句式，贴合单元语境） 2.Though he faced difficulties in his early studies, he never gave up his pursuit of knowledge.（用让步状语从句，突出伟人品质，增强逻辑） 3.Einstein’s life teaches me that curiosity and perseverance are the keys to success.（升华主题，表达感悟，提升作文深度） 【拓展1】 你的班级要举办“伟人故事分享会”，请你写一篇短文，讲述一个关于孔子的趣味故事，突出其智慧与品德，词数不少于80。 A Funny Story About Confucius ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【拓展1范文】 A Funny Story About Confucius Confucius, a great Chinese philosopher and teacher, is not only known for his wise sayings but also for his humorous and kind nature. One story about him shows his wisdom in dealing with difficult situations. One day, Confucius and his students were traveling. They were hungry and tired when they arrived at a small village. A villager, who didn’t recognize Confucius, asked him rudely, “What can a old man like you do?” Confucius smiled and replied, “I can tell the difference between right and wrong, and teach young people to be kind. Isn’t that more valuable?” The villager felt ashamed and invited them to his home for dinner. Confucius’ reply not only avoided conflict but also taught the villager a lesson. This story tells me that true wisdom lies in kindness and humility. His words and actions still guide us today. 【拓展1译文】 关于孔子的趣味故事 孔子，中国伟大的哲学家和教育家，不仅以其睿智的言论闻名，还因其幽默善良的本性备受尊崇。有一个关于他的故事，展现了他处理困境的智慧。 一天，孔子和他的弟子们出行。到达一个小村庄时，他们又饿又累。一个不认识孔子的村民粗鲁地问他：“像你这样的老头能做什么？”孔子微笑着回答：“我能分辨是非，教导年轻人向善。这难道不是更有价值吗？”村民感到羞愧，邀请他们到家中用餐。 孔子的回答不仅避免了冲突，还给村民上了一课。这个故事告诉我，真正的智慧在于善良与谦逊。他的言行至今仍在指引着我们。 【拓展2】 请根据以下提示，仿写一篇“伟人的趣味故事”，主角为牛顿，运用不定式相关语法，词数100左右，开头已给出。 提示 信息 核心内容 牛顿（科学家）、故事（因思考万有引力而误把手表当鸡蛋煮）、细节（专注思考、妻子提醒、恍然大悟）、感悟 语言要求 运用名词后不定式、不定式作主语，贴合单元语法重点 Isaac Newton was a great British scientist with a passion for exploration. His dedication to science often led to funny situations, and here’s one of them. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【拓展2范文】 Isaac Newton was a great British scientist with a passion for exploration. His dedication to science often led to funny situations, and here’s one of them. One morning, Newton was thinking about the law of gravity. He had a task to boil an egg for breakfast, so he put a pot of water on the fire. However, he got so absorbed in his thoughts that he took his watch out of his pocket and put it into the pot instead of the egg. His wife came into the kitchen later and found the watch boiling in the water. “What are you doing?” she asked in surprise. Newton suddenly realized his mistake and laughed. “I guess my mind is too busy with the universe to remember an egg!” he said. This story shows Newton’s strong desire to discover the truth. It teaches us that devotion to one’s dream is the path to greatness. 【拓展2译文】 艾萨克·牛顿是一位热爱探索的英国伟大科学家。他对科学的专注常常引发有趣的状况，下面就是其中一件。 一天早上，牛顿正在思考万有引力定律。他有煮鸡蛋当早餐的任务，于是把一壶水放在了火上。然而，他太过投入于思考，竟从口袋里掏出手表，放进了锅里，而不是鸡蛋。 他的妻子后来走进厨房，发现手表正在水里煮着。“你在做什么？”她惊讶地问。牛顿突然意识到自己的错误，笑了起来。“我想我的心思都忙着研究宇宙，以至于忘了鸡蛋！”他说。 这个故事展现了牛顿探索真理的强烈渴望，它告诉我们，对梦想的执着是通往伟大的道路。 本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累 一、核心主题词汇 1.伟人与智慧相关（单元重点） · 伟人称谓：scientist 科学家；philosopher 哲学家；teacher 教育家；inventor 发明家；writer 作家；great mind 伟人；genius 天才 · 成就与品质：achievement 成就；contribution 贡献；passion 热情；perseverance 毅力；curiosity 好奇心；humility 谦逊；dedication 专注；sense of humour 幽默感；pursuit of knowledge 对知识的追求 · 语法相关：名词后不定式（a task to boil an egg）；不定式作主语（To discover the truth is his goal）；be动词后不定式（His dream is to explore the universe） · 动作与场景：revolutionize 彻底改变；challenge traditional ideas 挑战传统观念；devote to 致力于；absorbed in 专注于；avoid conflict 避免冲突；guide us 指引我们 1. 语法相关（单元重点） · 名词后不定式： · 用于名词后作定语，说明名词的用途或内容，例：He had a desire to learn more.（他有更多学习的渴望。）/ She received an invitation to give a lecture.（她收到了做讲座的邀请。） · 不定式作主语： · 常用it作形式主语，真正主语后置，例：It’s important to keep curious.（保持好奇心很重要。）/ It’s a pleasure to read about great minds.（阅读伟人的故事是一种乐趣。） · be动词后不定式： · 用于be动词后作表语，说明主语的身份、目的或梦想，例：His goal is to find the truth.（他的目标是寻找真理。）/ My dream is to be like Einstein.（我的梦想是成为像爱因斯坦一样的人。） 1. 表达类（单元基础） · 逻辑连接：though 尽管；however 然而；not only...but also... 不仅……而且……；as shown in 正如……所示；what impresses me most is 最让我印象深刻的是 · 感悟表达：leave a deep impression on 给……留下深刻印象；the key to success 成功的关键；lie in 在于；guide us today 至今指引我们；path to greatness 通往伟大的道路 二、实用句型积累 1.介绍伟人（贴合单元核心） · The great mind I admire most is..., one of the greatest...in history. 我最敬佩的伟人是……，历史上最伟大的……之一，例：The great mind I admire most is Confucius, one of the greatest philosophers in history. · He/She was born in...and had a passion for... 他/她出生于……，对……有着浓厚的热情，例：He was born in 1879 and had a passion for science. · His/Her most famous achievement is..., which... 他/她最著名的成就是……，这……，例：His most famous achievement is the theory of relativity, which changed our understanding of the universe. · What impresses me most is his/her... 最让我印象深刻的是他/她的……，例：What impresses me most is his humility. 1. 讲述名人故事（贴合单元主题） · One day/Once,...was doing...when... 一天/有一次，……正在做……这时……，例：One day, Newton was thinking when he made a funny mistake. · Though/Although..., he/she... 尽管……，他/她还是……，例：Though he faced difficulties, he never gave up. · This story tells us that... 这个故事告诉我们……，例：This story tells us that devotion is important for success. · His/Her words and actions still... 他/她的言行至今仍……，例：His words and actions still inspire us today. 1. 表达感悟（贴合单元内涵） · ...teaches me that... ……让我明白……，例：Einstein’s life teaches me that curiosity leads to discovery. · True wisdom lies in... 真正的智慧在于……，例：True wisdom lies in kindness and perseverance. · ...is a great mind worth admiring forever. ……是一位值得永远敬佩的伟人，例：He is a great mind worth admiring forever. 三、课堂实用句型 · 提问句型：Who is the great mind you admire most?；What is his/her main achievement?；What can we learn from him/her?；Have you heard any funny stories about him/her?；Why do you admire him/her? · 回答句型：The great mind I admire most is Newton.；His main achievement is discovering the law of gravity.；We can learn to be dedicated to our dreams.；Yes, I heard a story about him boiling his watch.；I admire him because he was curious and persistent. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $