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Unit 2 Making history 作文学案
【写作导引】
本单元以“Making history”为话题,属于“历史与传承”主题范畴中“历史事件与人物”主题群,核心聚焦“用英语讲述历史事件、介绍历史人物、分享历史学习感悟”,运用一般过去时、不定代词及历史相关核心词汇,提升叙事类与说明类写作的逻辑性和准确性。常见写作角度包括:① 讲述一次印象深刻的历史事件(如长征、古代文明等);② 介绍一位影响深远的历史人物;③ 分享历史学习的收获与感悟;④ 描述一次历史遗迹参观经历。所有内容严格贴合课本话题与语言点,不超纲,可直接用于课堂同步训练。
【单元话题】
“一次难忘的历史事件分享”。请用英语写一篇短文,讲述你印象最深刻的一次历史事件(如长征、古罗马的兴衰、良渚文化等),包括事件的时间、核心经过及你的感悟,词数80-100左右,题目为“An Unforgettable Historical Event”。
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【范文】
An Unforgettable Historical Event
The Long March is an unforgettable historical event that shaped modern China, just like the story in the textbook.
It began in 1934 and ended in 1936. The Central Red Army travelled 12,500 km through snowy mountains and great grasslands. They were short of food and warm clothing, and many soldiers lost their lives while crossing the marsh. However, they never gave up and helped each other with sticks.
This event teaches me the great spirit of the Long March—persistence and courage. It shows that nothing is impossible with strong will. We should cherish the happy life today and learn from those brave soldiers.
【译文】
一次难忘的历史事件
长征是一个塑造了现代中国的难忘历史事件,就像课本中的故事一样。
它始于1934年,终于1936年。中央红军穿越雪山和广袤的草地,行程达12500公里。他们缺乏食物和保暖衣物,许多战士在穿越沼泽时牺牲了。然而,他们从未放弃,用木棍互相帮助。
这次事件让我领悟到伟大的长征精神——坚持与勇气。它表明,只要意志坚定,没有什么是不可能的。我们应该珍惜今天的幸福生活,向那些勇敢的战士们学习。
亮点词块
1.historical event 历史事件
2.the Long March 长征
3.Central Red Army 中央红军
4.snowy mountains and great grasslands 雪山和广袤的草地
5.be short of 缺乏
6.cross the marsh 穿越沼泽
7.strong will 坚定的意志
高分句子
1.The Long March is an unforgettable historical event that shaped modern China.(用定语从句点明事件意义,贴合单元主题)
2.They were short of food and warm clothing, and many soldiers lost their lives while crossing the marsh.(用一般过去时描述事件经过,贴合单元语法重点)
3.It shows that nothing is impossible with strong will.(升华主题,体现历史事件的启示,贴合单元内涵)
【拓展1】
你的外国笔友Peter对中国历史很感兴趣,请你写一封邮件,向他介绍一位你敬佩的中国历史人物,词数不少于60。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad you’re interested in Chinese history! I want to share a story of a great historical figure I admire.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展1范文】
Dear Peter,
I’m glad you’re interested in Chinese history! I want to share a story of a great historical figure I admire—Confucius.
He was born in 551 BCE in China. He was a great thinker and teacher. He travelled around many states to spread his ideas about kindness and respect. His teachings influenced Chinese society greatly for thousands of years. Even today, everybody still learns from his wise words.
Confucius’ ideas are not only important in China but also popular around the world. If you come to China, I’ll take you to visit his hometown.
Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展1译文】
亲爱的彼得:
很高兴你对中国历史感兴趣!我想和你分享一位我敬佩的伟大历史人物——孔子的故事。
他于公元前551年出生在中国,是一位伟大的思想家和教育家。他周游列国,传播关于仁爱与尊重的思想。数千年来,他的学说极大地影响了中国社会。直到今天,每个人仍然从他的至理名言中学习。
孔子的思想不仅在中国很重要,在世界范围内也很受欢迎。如果你来中国,我会带你去参观他的故乡。
你的,
李华
【拓展2】
请根据以下提示,写一篇短文,介绍一位西方历史人物(如查尔斯·达尔文、纳尔逊·曼德拉等),词数70左右,开头已给出。
提示
信息
核心内容
介绍人物的身份、主要事迹、重要贡献及影响
语言要求
运用一般过去时、不定代词,贴合单元语法重点
Charles Darwin is one of the most famous scientists in history. His ideas changed people’s understanding of life greatly.
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【拓展2范文】
Charles Darwin is one of the most famous scientists in history. His ideas changed people’s understanding of life greatly.
He was born in England in 1809. In 1831, he started a scientific voyage around the world. During the journey, he studied different living things and noticed something interesting—some animals were similar. He worked hard for years and wrote the book On the Origin of Species.
His findings showed that living things change over time. Everybody now recognizes his great contribution to science. He teaches us to keep exploring the world.
【拓展2译文】
查尔斯·达尔文是历史上最著名的科学家之一。他的思想极大地改变了人们对生命的认知。
他于1809年出生在英国。1831年,他开启了一场环球科学航行。旅途中,他研究了各种生物,发现了一件有趣的事——有些动物彼此相似。他努力研究多年,撰写了《物种起源》一书。
他的研究表明生物会随着时间变化。现在每个人都认可他对科学的巨大贡献。他教会我们要不断探索世界。
本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累
一、核心主题词汇
1.历史事件与人物相关(单元重点)
· 历史事件:historical event 历史事件;the Long March 长征;scientific voyage 科学航行;cultural heritage 文化遗产;ancient civilization 古代文明;the rise and fall 兴衰
· 语法相关:一般过去时(描述过去发生的动作/状态);不定代词(someone/somebody, everyone/everybody, something, anywhere等)
· 人物与贡献:thinker 思想家;scientist 科学家;educator 教育家;spread ideas 传播思想;make contributions 作出贡献;influence society 影响社会
· 动作与场景:be born in 出生于;start a journey 开启旅程;study carefully 仔细研究;cross the marsh 穿越沼泽;lose one’s life 牺牲;cherish life 珍惜生活
1. 语法相关(单元重点)
· 一般过去时用法:
· 肯定式:He travelled around the world. / They built a great empire.
· 否定式:They didn’t give up. / He wasn’t afraid of difficulties.
· 疑问式:Did they finish the journey? / Was he a great leader?
· 不定代词用法:
· 指代人:Everyone admired his courage. / Someone told me the story.
· 指代物:Something important happened in 1934. / There is nothing impossible with will.
· 指代地点:He went somewhere interesting to study history.
1. 表达类(单元基础)
· 逻辑连接:and 并且;but 但是;however 然而;during 在……期间;while 当……时;even today 直到今天
· 感悟表达:unforgettable 难忘的;great spirit 伟大精神;wise ideas 至理名言;make a difference 产生影响;keep exploring 不断探索
二、实用句型积累
1.讲述历史事件(贴合单元核心)
· ... is an unforgettable historical event that... ……是一个难忘的历史事件,它……,例:The founding of the United Nations is an unforgettable historical event that promoted world peace.
· It began in... and ended in... 它始于……并终于……,例:The ancient Olympic Games began in 776 BCE and ended in 394 CE.
· This event teaches me that... 这次事件让我明白……,例:This event teaches me that persistence leads to success.
1. 介绍历史人物(贴合单元主题)
· ... was a great... who... ……是一位伟大的……,他……,例:Nelson Mandela was a great leader who fought for equal rights.
· During his life, he... 在他的一生中,他……,例:During his life, he travelled a lot and shared his wisdom with people.
· His... influenced... greatly. 他的……极大地影响了……,例:His teachings influenced Chinese culture greatly.
1. 分享历史学习感悟(贴合单元内涵)
· From this historical event/person, I learned that... 从这个历史事件/人物身上,我学到……,例:From the Long March, I learned that teamwork is very important.
· Everybody should learn from... 每个人都应该向……学习,例:Everybody should learn from those brave soldiers.
· History tells us that... 历史告诉我们……,例:History tells us that peace is priceless.
三、课堂实用句型
· 提问句型:What historical event did you write about?;When did the Long March begin and end?;Who is the historical figure you admire most?;What did Charles Darwin do during his voyage?;Have you ever visited any historical sites?
· 回答句型:I wrote about the Long March.;It began in 1934 and ended in 1936.;I admire Confucius most.;He studied different living things and noticed their similarities.;Yes, I visited the Mogao Caves last year.
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