Unit 2 Never Give Up 作文学案- 2025-2026学年教科版五四制英语八年级下册

Unit 2 Never Give Up 作文学案 【写作导引】 本单元以“Never Give Up”为话题，属于“挑战与成长”主题范畴中“坚守梦想”主题群，核心聚焦“用英语讲述战胜困境的故事、分享坚持的力量、论述永不言弃的精神”，运用动词的现在分词与过去分词及挑战成长相关核心词汇，提升叙事类与议论类写作的逻辑性和感染力。常见写作角度包括：① 讲述一次面对困难（如疾病、挫折、能力短板）坚持不懈的经历；② 给面临失败的朋友写鼓励信；③ 论述“坚持是成功的关键”；④ 仿写埃里克攀登珠峰的故事传递执着精神。所有内容严格贴合课本话题与语言点，突出“励志性”和“实用性”，可直接用于课堂同步训练。 【单元话题】 “一次坚持不懈的经历”。请用英语写一篇短文，讲述一次你面对困难不放弃、最终成功的经历，包括面临的困境、坚持的过程、最终的结果及感悟，词数80-100左右，题目为“A Persistent Experience”。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 A Persistent Experience Last year, I wanted to learn to play the guitar, but I had short fingers and struggled a lot—just like the guitarist in the textbook with only two left fingers. At first, I couldn’t press the strings properly. My fingers hurt, and I almost gave up. But my teacher showed me a video of Eric Weihenmeyer, the blind climber who never gave up. Inspired, I practiced for an hour every day after school. I used a soft pick to reduce pain and focused on slow, accurate movements. Gradually, the once-challenging chords became familiar. After six months, I performed at the school talent show and received loud applause. This experience teaches me that nothing is impossible with persistence. Difficulties are just temporary obstacles. As long as we keep trying, we will finally achieve our dreams. 【译文】 一次坚持不懈的经历 去年，我想学弹吉他，但我手指短，遇到了很多困难——就像课本里那位只有两根左手手指的吉他手一样。 一开始，我无法正确按弦，手指很疼，几乎想要放弃。但老师给我看了盲人登山家埃里克·魏亨麦尔的视频，他是一位永不放弃的人。受到鼓舞后，我每天放学后练习一小时，用软拨片减轻疼痛，专注于缓慢而准确的动作。渐渐地，曾经极具挑战性的和弦变得熟悉起来。六个月后，我在学校才艺表演中登台演出，赢得了热烈的掌声。 这次经历让我明白，只要坚持不懈，没有什么是不可能的。困难只是暂时的障碍，只要我们不断尝试，终将实现梦想。 亮点词块 1.struggle a lot 遇到很多困难 2.press the strings 按弦 3.give up 放弃 4.temporary obstacles 暂时的障碍 5.talent show 才艺表演 6.receive loud applause 赢得热烈掌声 7.achieve one’s dreams 实现梦想 高分句子 1.But my teacher showed me a video of Eric Weihenmeyer, the blind climber who never gave up.（用who引导定语从句，贴合单元主题人物） 2.Inspired, I practiced for an hour every day after school.（用过去分词作状语，贴合单元语法重点） 3.This experience teaches me that nothing is impossible with persistence.（升华主题，体现坚持的核心价值，贴合单元内涵） 【拓展1】 你的朋友Lisa在英语演讲比赛中失利，感到非常沮丧，甚至想放弃英语学习。请你写一封邮件，分享你的坚持经历并鼓励她，词数不少于60。 Dear Lisa, I’m sorry to hear you’re upset about the speech contest. I’ve been through a similar situation, and I’d like to share my experience with you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1范文】 Dear Lisa, I’m sorry to hear you’re upset about the speech contest. I’ve been through a similar situation, and I’d like to share my experience with you. Last year, I failed my English exam and wanted to give up. But my teacher told me about Helen Keller, who overcame blindness and deafness to become a great writer. I started practicing English every day—reading articles, recording my voice, and joining a speaking club. It was hard, but I kept going. This term, I won the school English speaking competition! Failure is not the end. Your speech was wonderful, and you just need more practice. Never give up, and you’ll succeed next time. I’ll practice with you if you want! Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1译文】 亲爱的莉萨： 听说你因为演讲比赛而沮丧，我很为你难过。我也有过类似的经历，想和你分享一下。 去年，我英语考试不及格，想要放弃。但老师给我讲了海伦·凯勒的故事，她克服了失明和失聪的困境，成为了一位伟大的作家。我开始每天练习英语——读文章、录语音、加入口语俱乐部。过程很艰难，但我坚持了下来。这学期，我赢得了学校英语演讲比赛的冠军！ 失败不是终点。你的演讲非常精彩，你只是需要更多练习。永不放弃，下次你一定会成功的。如果你愿意，我可以和你一起练习！ 你的， 李华 【拓展2】 请根据以下提示，写一篇短文，论述“坚持是成功的关键”，词数70左右，开头已给出。 提示 信息 核心观点 成功的道路从不是一帆风顺的，坚持是跨越困境、实现目标的关键因素 理由 坚持积累能突破能力局限；坚持能磨练意志；坚持能抓住成功的机会 呼吁 面对困难不退缩，用坚持书写属于自己的成功 Success never comes easily. It requires courage, effort, and most importantly, persistence. No great achievement can be made without sticking to it. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【拓展2范文】 Success never comes easily. It requires courage, effort, and most importantly, persistence. No great achievement can be made without sticking to it. Eric Weihenmeyer, the blind climber, reached the top of Mt. Qomolangma after years of training. His story shows that persistence helps us overcome weaknesses and keep going when things get hard. Every step forward, no matter how small, brings us closer to success. Don’t let failures stop you. Keep trying, and you’ll find that persistence is the key to unlocking your potential and achieving your goals. 【拓展2译文】 成功从不会轻易到来。它需要勇气、努力，而最重要的是坚持。没有坚持不懈，就无法取得伟大的成就。 盲人登山家埃里克·魏亨麦尔经过多年训练，成功登上了珠穆朗玛峰的顶峰。他的故事表明，坚持能帮助我们克服弱点，在困境中继续前行。每一步前进，无论多么微小，都能让我们离成功更近。 不要让失败阻挡你。继续尝试，你会发现，坚持是发掘潜力、实现目标的关键。 本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累 一、核心主题词汇 1.坚持与成长相关（单元重点） · 困境与挑战：struggle a lot 遇到很多困难；temporary obstacles 暂时的障碍；weakness 弱点；failure 失败；challenging 具有挑战性的；difficulties 困难 · 分词用法相关：现在分词（作定语/状语）：the climbing boy 正在爬山的男孩；inspired by 受到……启发；过去分词（作定语/表语）：a broken guitar 一把坏吉他；be encouraged 受到鼓舞 · 坚持与行动：persistence 坚持；keep trying 不断尝试；stick to 坚持；practice regularly 定期练习；overcome 克服；achieve goals 实现目标；never give up 永不放弃 · 结果与感悟：receive loud applause 赢得热烈掌声；unlock potential 发掘潜力；great achievement 伟大的成就；make progress 取得进步；succeed 成功 1. 语法相关（单元重点） · 现在分词用法（表主动/进行）： · The boy playing the guitar is my classmate.（正在弹吉他的男孩是我的同学。） · Seeing the encouraging video, I decided to keep practicing.（看到这段鼓舞人心的视频，我决定继续练习。） · 过去分词用法（表被动/完成）： · The story told by the teacher moved everyone.（老师讲的故事感动了所有人。） · Inspired by his persistence, we tried our best to finish the task.（受到他坚持精神的启发，我们尽力完成了任务。） · 分词作定语固定表达： · a running man 跑步的人；broken glass 碎玻璃；spoken English 英语口语；fallen leaves 落叶 1. 表达类（单元基础） · 逻辑连接：but 但是；and 并且；as long as 只要；gradually 渐渐地；finally 最终；just like 就像；after 之后 · 感悟表达：nothing is impossible 没有什么是不可能的；the key to success 成功的关键；overcome weaknesses 克服弱点；bring us closer to success 让我们离成功更近 二、实用句型积累 1.讲述坚持不懈的经历（贴合单元核心） · Last... I wanted to..., but...—just like... 去年……我想……但……——就像……，例：Last term, I wanted to learn swimming, but I was afraid of water—just like the girl who feared heights in the textbook. · At first, I couldn’t..., but... Inspired, I... 一开始，我不能……但……受到启发后，我……，例：At first, I couldn’t memorize English words, but I didn’t give up. Inspired by my deskmate, I reviewed 10 words every day. · After... I... and received... 经过……后，我……并获得了……，例：After three months of hard work, I mastered swimming and received praise from my coach. 1. 鼓励他人坚持（贴合单元主题） · I’ve been through a similar situation. 我也有过类似的经历，例：I’ve been through a similar situation when I failed the math test. · Never give up, and you’ll... 永不放弃，你将会……，例：Never give up, and you’ll pass the exam with flying colors. · You just need more practice. 你只是需要更多练习，例：Your painting is great. You just need more practice to win the competition. 1. 论述坚持的重要性（贴合单元内涵） · Success never comes easily. It requires... 成功从不会轻易到来，它需要……，例：Success never comes easily. It requires persistence and hard work. · Sb.’s story shows that persistence helps us... 某人的故事表明，坚持能帮助我们……，例：Helen Keller’s story shows that persistence helps us overcome any difficulty. · Every step forward, no matter how small, brings us... 每一步前进，无论多么微小，都能让我们……，例：Every step forward, no matter how small, brings us closer to our dreams. 三、课堂实用句型 · 提问句型：Why did Eric Weihenmeyer decide to climb Mt. Qomolangma?；What difficulties did you meet in your persistent experience?；How did the writer overcome the problem of short fingers?；Why is persistence important for success?；Have you ever given up something and regretted it? · 回答句型：Because he wanted to challenge himself and never give up his dream.；I couldn’t play the guitar well at first, but I practiced every day.；He used a soft pick and practiced slowly to improve.；Because it helps us overcome obstacles and keep moving forward.；Yes, I once gave up learning piano, but now I regret not sticking to it. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $