Unit 8 You Find What You Are Looking for 作文学案 2025-2026学年教科版五四学制（2012）九年级英语下册

Unit 8 You Find What You Are Looking for 作文学案 【写作导引】 本单元以“You Find What You Are Looking for”为话题，属于“人生价值”主题范畴中“态度决定认知”主题群，核心聚焦“用英语讲述态度影响认知的经历、分享对‘心存善念见美好’的理解、论述‘认知由心态塑造’的理念’’，运用定语从句及人际认知相关核心词汇，提升叙事类与议论类写作的逻辑性和深刻性。常见写作角度包括：① 讲述一次因心态不同而有不同认知的经历；② 给笔友分享对“你寻找什么便会发现什么”的感悟；③ 论述“积极心态塑造美好认知”；④ 仿写房地产经纪人的故事传递正向态度的力量。所有内容严格贴合课本话题与语言点，突出“哲理性”和“引导性”，可直接用于课堂同步训练。 【单元话题】 “心态改变所见”。请用英语写一篇短文，讲述一次你因心态不同而对人或事产生不同认知的经历，包括背景、过程、不同心态下的认知及感悟，词数80-100左右，题目为“How My Attitude Changed What I Saw”。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 How My Attitude Changed What I Saw Just like the young couple and Frank in the story, my attitude once changed how I saw my new classmate Lily. When Lily transferred to our class, I thought she was cold and unfriendly—she rarely talked to others. I avoided her, focusing only on her "distance." But my teacher told me: "People find what they are looking for." I decided to change my attitude. I greeted her first and offered help with her homework. Soon, I found she was just shy, and we became good friends. This experience teaches me that our attitude shapes our perception. If we look for the best in others, we will find kindness and warmth. A positive attitude is the key to seeing the beauty around us. 【译文】 心态如何改变我的所见 就像故事中的年轻夫妇和弗兰克一样，我的心态曾经改变了我对新同学莉莉的认知。 莉莉转到我们班时，我觉得她冷漠又不友好——她很少和别人说话。我刻意避开她，只关注她的“疏远”。但老师告诉我：“你寻找什么，就会发现什么。”我决定改变态度，主动和她打招呼，还主动帮她辅导作业。很快，我发现她只是害羞，我们还成了好朋友。 这次经历让我明白，心态塑造认知。如果我们主动寻找他人的闪光点，就会发现善意与温暖。积极的心态是发现身边美好的关键。 亮点词块 1.transfer to 转到 2.focus on 关注 3.change ones attitude 改变态度 4.offer help 提供帮助 5.shape ones perception 塑造认知 6.look for the best in others 寻找他人的闪光点 7.positive attitude 积极心态 高分句子 1.When Lily transferred to our class, I thought she was cold and unfriendly—she rarely talked to others.（用定语从句隐含初始认知，贴合单元语法重点） 2.But my teacher told me: "People find what they are looking for."（呼应课本核心哲理，贴合单元主题） 3.This experience teaches me that our attitude shapes our perception.（升华主题，点明心态与认知的关系，贴合单元内涵） 【拓展1】 你的外国笔友Peter总抱怨身边的人不够友善，感觉很难融入集体，请你写一封邮件，分享课本故事带给你的感悟及改变认知的方法，词数不少于60。 Dear Peter, Im sorry to hear you always complain that people around you arent friendly. The story of Mrs. Noble in my textbook really gives me deep thoughts. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1范文】 Dear Peter, Im sorry to hear you always complain that people around you arent friendly. The story of Mrs. Noble in my textbook really gives me deep thoughts. Frank complained about his neighbors and co-workers, so he thought everyone was rude. But the young couple looked for kindness, and they found it. This shows that what we see depends on our attitude. For you, first, try to find others strengths instead of focusing on flaws. Second, take the initiative to be kind—smile or offer a small help. People will respond to your kindness. I believe if you change your attitude and look for the best in others, youll find friendly people and fit in soon. Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1译文】 亲爱的彼得： 听说你总抱怨身边的人不够友善，我很为你担心。我课本里诺布尔夫人的故事让我有了深刻的思考。 弗兰克抱怨他的邻居和同事，所以他觉得所有人都很粗鲁；但那对年轻夫妇主动寻找善意，也确实找到了。这表明，我们看到的世界取决于自己的心态。对你来说，首先试着发现别人的优点，而不是盯着缺点；其次主动释放善意——一个微笑或一次小小的帮助就好。 人们会回应你的友善。我相信只要你改变态度，主动寻找他人的闪光点，就会遇到友好的人，很快融入集体。 你的， 李华 【拓展2】 请根据以下提示，写一篇短文，论述“积极心态塑造美好认知”，词数70左右，开头已给出。 提示 信息 核心观点 积极心态能让人主动发现美好，塑造正向认知，而消极心态只会让人陷入负面情绪 理由 积极心态关注优点；积极心态促进主动沟通；积极心态带来友善回应 呼吁 保持积极心态，以善意看待世界，收获更多美好 A positive attitude helps us see the beauty around us and shapes a positive perception of the world. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【拓展2范文】 A positive attitude helps us see the beauty around us and shapes a positive perception of the world. Just like the young couple in the story, positive people look for the best in others and find kindness. Positive attitudes make us focus on strengths, encourage active communication, and bring friendly responses. On the contrary, negative people only see flaws and complain constantly. We should keep a positive attitude, treat others with kindness, and look for the good in life. In this way, we will find a warmer and more beautiful world. 【拓展2译文】 积极的心态帮助我们发现身边的美好，塑造对世界的正向认知。 就像故事中的年轻夫妇一样，积极的人主动寻找他人的闪光点，也能收获善意。积极心态让我们关注优点、主动沟通，还能得到他人的友善回应；相反，消极的人只看到缺点，不断抱怨。 我们应该保持积极心态，以善意对待他人，主动寻找生活中的美好。这样一来，我们就会发现一个更温暖、更美好的世界。 本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累 一、核心主题词汇 1.心态与认知相关（单元重点） · 心态与态度：positive attitude 积极心态；negative attitude 消极心态；change ones attitude 改变态度；look for 寻找；focus on 关注；complain about 抱怨；perception 认知；view 看法 · 定语从句相关：who 指代人；which/that 指代物；whose 指代所属关系；where 指代地点 · 故事与感悟：real estate agent 房地产经纪人；current neighbors 现在的邻居；kind and considerate 善良体贴；negative qualities 负面品质；fit in 融入；friendly 友善的；shy 害羞的；warmth 温暖 · 表达与动作：transfer to 转到；offer help 提供帮助；greet sb first 主动和某人打招呼；respond to 回应；find strengths 发现优点；focus on flaws 关注缺点 1. 语法相关（单元重点） · 定语从句（指代人）： · The couple who looked for kindness found it.（主动寻找善意的那对夫妇找到了善意。）；The classmate who is shy rarely talks.（害羞的那个同学很少说话。） · 定语从句（指代物/事）： · The story which teaches us about attitude is meaningful.（那个教我们认识心态的故事很有意义。）；The help that I offered changed our friendship.（我提供的帮助改变了我们的友谊。） · 定语从句（指代地点）： · Pleasantville is a town where people live peacefully.（欢乐谷是一个人们和平共处的小镇。）；The classroom where we met is full of memories.（我们相遇的那个教室充满了回忆。） 1. 表达类（单元基础） · 逻辑连接：just like 就像；but 但是；on the contrary 相反；first 首先；second 其次；in this way 这样；because 因为；so 所以 · 感悟表达：shape ones perception 塑造认知；look for the best in others 寻找他人的闪光点；focus on strengths 关注优点；fit in 融入集体；bring friendly responses 带来友善回应；the beauty around us 身边的美好 二、实用句型积累 1.讲述心态改变认知的经历（贴合单元核心） · Just like...in the story, my attitude once changed... 就像故事中的……，我的心态曾经改变了……，例：Just like Frank in the story, my attitude once changed how I saw my new teacher. · When...I thought...but... 当……时，我认为……但……，例：When I first met him, I thought he was unfriendly but I later found he was just busy. · This experience teaches me that... 这次经历让我明白……，例：This experience teaches me that attitude decides what we see. 1. 分享心态调整的方法（贴合单元主题） · This shows that what we see depends on... 这表明我们看到的取决于……，例：This shows that what we see depends on our own attitude. · For you, first...second... 对你来说，首先……其次……，例：For you, first be active to communicate, second look for others kindness. · I believe if you..., youll... 我相信如果你……，你会……，例：I believe if you change your attitude, youll find more friends. 1. 论述积极心态的重要性（贴合单元内涵） · A positive attitude helps us...and shapes... 积极的心态帮助我们……并塑造……，例：A positive attitude helps us connect with others and shapes a happy life. · Just like...positive people... 就像……积极的人……，例：Just like the young couple, positive people always find the good in life. · We should...and...In this way, we will... 我们应该……并……，这样我们就会……，例：We should keep positive and be kind to others. In this way, we will收获 more joy. 三、课堂实用句型 · 提问句型：Why did Mrs. Noble tell Frank he would find the same people in Pleasantville?；Have you ever changed your attitude and seen things differently?；What does "You find what you are looking for" mean?；How did the writer change his opinion of Lily?；Why is a positive attitude important for seeing the good? · 回答句型：Because Frank only saw negative qualities in others.；Yes, I once hated running but changed my attitude and fell in love with it.；It means our attitude shapes what we notice and experience.；He greeted her first and offered help, then found she was shy.；Because it makes us focus on strengths and kindness instead of flaws. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $