Unit 4 Wang Wei's Dream 作文学案 2025-2026学年教科版五四学制（2012）九年级英语下册

Unit 4 Wang Wei’s Dream 作文学案 【写作导引】 本单元以“Wang Wei's Dream”为话题，属于“追求理想”主题范畴，核心聚焦“用英语讲述追逐梦想的经历、分享坚持理想的感悟、论述‘信念+奋斗=成功’的理念’’，运用情态动词表能力（can/could/will be able to） 及理想相关核心词汇，提升叙事类与议论类写作的感染力和逻辑性。常见写作角度包括：① 讲述一次为理想努力奋斗的经历；② 给笔友分享对“坚持梦想”的理解；③ 论述“信念是实现理想的基石”；④ 仿写王伟的故事传递追梦精神。所有内容严格贴合课本话题与语言点，突出“励志性”和“实践性”，可直接用于课堂同步训练。 【单元话题】 “我的追梦之旅”。请用英语写一篇短文，讲述一次你为实现某个理想（如学好英语、参加比赛等）努力奋斗的经历，包括理想、过程、遇到的困难及收获，词数80-100左右，题目为“My Journey to Achieve My Dream”。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 My Journey to Achieve My Dream My dream is to be a fluent English speaker, just like Wang Wei who chased his engineering dream. At first, I couldn’t speak English confidently and was afraid of public speaking. But I remembered Wang Wei’s story—faith and hard work make dreams come true. I practiced speaking every morning, watched English movies, and joined the school English club. When I failed the oral test, I didn’t give up. Instead, I asked my teacher for help and corrected my mistakes one by one. After half a year, I won the school English speech contest. This experience teaches me that no dream is out of reach. As long as we believe in ourselves and keep trying, we will be able to achieve what we want. 【译文】 我的追梦之旅 我的梦想是成为一名英语流利的使用者，就像追逐工程梦的王伟一样。 一开始，我不能自信地说英语，还害怕公开演讲。但我想起了王伟的故事——信念和努力能让梦想成真。我每天早上练习口语，看英语电影，还加入了学校英语俱乐部。当我口语考试失利时，我没有放弃，而是向老师求助，逐一改正错误。 半年后，我赢得了学校英语演讲比赛。这次经历让我明白，没有遥不可及的梦想。只要我们相信自己、坚持不懈，就一定能实现心中所想。 亮点词块 1. fluent English speaker 英语流利的使用者 1. chase one’s dream 追逐梦想 1. public speaking 公开演讲 1. oral test 口语考试 1. correct mistakes 改正错误 1. out of reach 遥不可及的 1. keep trying 坚持不懈 高分句子 1. At first, I couldn’t speak English confidently and was afraid of public speaking.（用couldn’t表过去能力不足，贴合单元语法重点） 1. But I remembered Wang Wei’s story—faith and hard work make dreams come true.（呼应课本核心情节，贴合单元主题） 1. As long as we believe in ourselves and keep trying, we will be able to achieve what we want.（用will be able to表未来能力，升华主题，贴合单元内涵） 【拓展1】 你的外国笔友Peter对“如何坚持梦想”感到困惑，经常因为困难而半途而废，请你写一封邮件，分享王伟的故事带给你的感悟及坚持梦想的方法，词数不少于60。 Dear Peter, I’m sorry to hear you often give up on your dreams when facing difficulties. The story of Wang Wei in my textbook really inspires me a lot. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1范文】 Dear Peter, I’m sorry to hear you often give up on your dreams when facing difficulties. The story of Wang Wei in my textbook really inspires me a lot. Wang Wei dreamed of being an engineer, but his family couldn’t afford tuition. However, he didn’t lose faith. He studied extra hard and got a full scholarship. His story tells me that perseverance and faith are key to achieving dreams. For you, first, set small goals to keep motivated. Second, don’t fear failure—it’s part of growth. Finally, ask for help when stuck, just like Wang Wei trusted his teachers and parents. Dreams won’t come true easily, but with persistence, you will be able to make them happen. I believe you can stick to your dreams and succeed! Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1译文】 亲爱的彼得： 听说你遇到困难就经常放弃梦想，我很为你担心。我课本里王伟的故事真的给了我很多启发。 王伟梦想成为一名工程师，但他家负担不起学费。然而，他没有失去信念，学习格外努力，最终获得了全额奖学金。他的故事告诉我，毅力和信念是实现梦想的关键。对你来说，首先，设定小目标保持动力；其次，不要害怕失败——它是成长的一部分；最后，遇到困境时寻求帮助，就像王伟信任他的老师和父母一样。 梦想不会轻易实现，但只要坚持不懈，你一定能让它成真。我相信你能坚守梦想并取得成功！ 你的， 李华 【拓展2】 请根据以下提示，写一篇短文，论述“信念是实现理想的基石”，词数70左右，开头已给出。 提示 信息 核心观点 信念是支撑人们追逐理想的基石，能让人在困境中坚持、在挫折中前行 理由 信念给予奋斗动力；信念让人克服恐惧；信念让人不轻易放弃 呼吁 心怀信念，脚踏实地，勇敢追逐自己的理想 Faith is the cornerstone of achieving dreams. It gives people the strength to keep going when facing difficulties. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【拓展2范文】 Faith is the cornerstone of achieving dreams. It gives people the strength to keep going when facing difficulties. Just like Wang Wei, who had faith in his engineering dream even when his family was poor. Faith provides motivation to work hard, helps us overcome fears, and keeps us from giving up easily. Without faith, many dreams would die halfway. We should hold firm to our beliefs and take practical actions. With faith and effort, we will be able to turn our dreams into reality. 【拓展2译文】 信念是实现梦想的基石，它给予人们在困境中坚持前行的力量。 就像王伟一样，即使家境贫寒，他依然对自己的工程梦抱有信念。信念提供努力的动力，帮助我们克服恐惧，让我们不轻易放弃。没有信念，许多梦想会半途而废。 我们应该坚守信念，付诸实际行动。有了信念和努力，我们一定能将梦想变为现实。 本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累 一、核心主题词汇 1. 理想与奋斗相关（单元重点） · 理想与目标：dream 梦想；goal 目标；chase one’s dream 追逐梦想；achieve one’s dream 实现梦想；fluent English speaker 英语流利的使用者；engineering dream 工程梦 · 能力相关（情态动词）：can 能；could 过去能；will be able to 将来能；be able to 能够；couldn’t 过去不能；be afraid of 害怕（表能力相关的心理障碍） · 故事与感悟：faith 信念；perseverance 毅力；hard work 努力；tuition 学费；scholarship 奖学金；overcome difficulties 克服困难；correct mistakes 改正错误；give up 放弃 · 行动与表达：practice speaking 练习口语；join the club 加入俱乐部；ask for help 求助；set small goals 设定小目标；keep motivated 保持动力；take practical actions 付诸实际行动 1. 语法相关（单元重点） · 情态动词表能力： · 现在能力（can/can’t）：I can practice English every day.（我能每天练习英语。）；She can’t speak in public.（她不能在公共场合发言。） · 过去能力（could/couldn’t）：He couldn’t afford the tuition before.（他以前负担不起学费。）；They couldn’t finish the task alone.（他们以前不能独自完成任务。） · 将来能力（will be able to/won’t be able to）：We will be able to achieve our dreams.（我们将来能实现梦想。）；She won’t be able to give up easily.（她将来不会轻易放弃。） · 常用句型： · 能力变化：At first, I couldn’t… but now I can…（一开始我不能……但现在我能……） · 能力展望：As long as…, we will be able to…（只要……，我们就能……） 1. 表达类（单元基础） · 逻辑连接：just like 就像；but 但是；however 然而；instead 相反；as long as 只要；finally 最终；without 没有 · 感悟表达：cornerstone 基石；out of reach 遥不可及；turn into reality 变为现实；keep going 坚持前行；die halfway 半途而废；give up 放弃 二、实用句型积累 1. 讲述追梦经历（贴合单元核心） · My dream is to… just like… 我的梦想是……就像……，例：My dream is to be a writer just like the famous author in the book. · At first, I couldn’t… but I remembered… 一开始我不能……但我想起了……，例：At first, I couldn’t run fast but I remembered the athlete’s story. · This experience teaches me that… 这次经历让我明白……，例：This experience teaches me that faith can overcome all difficulties. 1. 分享追梦方法（贴合单元主题） · His story tells me that… 他的故事告诉我……，例：His story tells me that hard work pays off. · For you, first… second… finally… 对你来说，首先……其次……最后……，例：For you, first set clear goals, second keep practicing, finally never lose faith. · With…, you will be able to… 有了……，你就能……，例：With perseverance, you will be able to achieve your dream. 1. 论述信念的重要性（贴合单元内涵） · Faith is the cornerstone of… 信念是……的基石，例：Faith is the cornerstone of chasing dreams. · Just like… who… 就像……的……，例：Just like Wang Wei who stuck to his dream. · Without…, many… would… 没有……，许多……会……，例：Without faith, many dreams would never come true. 三、课堂实用句型 · 提问句型：What was Wang Wei’s dream?；Why did Wang Wei need a scholarship?；Have you ever chased a dream?；How can we keep faith when facing difficulties?；What can we learn from Wang Wei’s story? · 回答句型：His dream was to be an engineer.；Because his family didn’t have enough money for tuition.；Yes, I once tried to learn playing the piano and practiced every day.；We can remember our original aspiration and ask for help from others.；We can learn that faith and hard work are important for achieving dreams. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $