Unit 1 The Picture of Peace 作文学案 2025-2026学年教科版五四学制（2012）英语九年级下册

Unit 1 The Picture of Peace 作文学案 【写作导引】 本单元以“The Picture of Peace”为话题,属于“和平”主题范畴,核心聚焦“用英语阐释和平的真谛、分享对内心平静的理解、讲述追求和平的经历”,运用现在完成时及和平相关核心词汇,提升议论类与叙事类写作的深刻性和感染力。常见写作角度包括:① 阐释对“真正和平”的理解;② 给笔友分享一次内心获得平静的经历;③ 论述“困境中的平静才是真和平”;④ 仿写国王选画故事传递和平理念。所有内容严格贴合课本话题与语言点,突出“哲理性”和“实践性”,可直接用于课堂同步训练。 【单元话题】 “我心中的和平”。请用英语写一篇短文,阐释你对和平的理解,结合具体事例说明真正的和平是什么,词数80-100左右,题目为“Peace in My Heart”。 _ 【范文】 Peace in My Heart After reading the story of the two artists, I have a deeper understanding of peace. True peace is not a world without noise or danger, but a calm heart in the middle of chaos. Last term, I faced a difficult group project and constant arguments with teammates. Instead of getting angry, I listened patiently and tried to understand others. Finally, we finished the project successfully. That experience showed me peace is about respecting differences and staying calm when facing problems. Just like the mother bird in the storm, we can find peace as long as we keep a steady mind. Peace in the heart is the most precious gift we can have. 【译文】 我心中的和平 读完两位画家的故事后,我对和平有了更深刻的理解。 真正的和平并非没有喧嚣与危险的世界,而是在混乱中保持内心的平静。上学期,我参与了一个困难的小组项目,与队友们争论不断。我没有生气,而是耐心倾听,努力理解他人。最终,我们成功完成了项目。那次经历让我明白,和平就是尊重差异,在面对问题时保持冷静。 就像暴风雨中的鸟妈妈一样,只要我们保持坚定的心态,就能找到和平。内心的和平是我们能拥有的最珍贵的礼物。 亮点词块 1.deeper understanding of 对……更深刻的理解 2.in the middle of chaos 在混乱之中 3.constant arguments 不断的争论 4.respect differences 尊重差异 5.stay calm 保持冷静 6.steady mind 坚定的心态 7.precious gift 珍贵的礼物 高分句子 1.True peace is not a world without noise or danger, but a calm heart in the middle of chaos.(呼应课本核心哲理,贴合单元主题) 2.That experience showed me peace is about respecting differences and staying calm when facing problems.(运用现在完成时关联经历与感悟,贴合单元语法重点) 3.Just like the mother bird in the storm, we can find peace as long as we keep a steady mind.(借用课本意象,生动阐释和平内涵,贴合单元核心) 【拓展1】 你的外国笔友Peter对“真正的和平”感到困惑,请你写一封邮件,分享课本故事带给你的感悟及你对和平的理解,词数不少于60。 Dear Peter, You asked about the true meaning of peace, and the story of the two artists in my textbook really made me think deeply. _ Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1范文】 Dear Peter, You asked about the true meaning of peace, and the story of the two artists in my textbook really made me think deeply. One artist painted a quiet lake, but the king chose the other’s work—a bird feeding her babies in a violent storm. It taught me that peace isn’t the absence of trouble, but courage and calm in trouble. When I failed my math exam last month, I didn’t panic. Instead, I made a study plan and kept calm. Now I have improved a lot. Peace is a state of mind. As long as we stay calm and positive, we can find peace anywhere. I hope you can also find your inner peace. Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1译文】 亲爱的彼得: 你问起真正的和平是什么,我课本里两位画家的故事让我有了深刻的思考。 一位画家画了一片宁静的湖泊,但国王却选择了另一位画家的作品——暴风雨中一只鸟在喂养幼鸟。这让我明白,和平并非没有困境,而是在困境中拥有勇气与平静。上个月我数学考试失利时,没有慌张,而是制定了学习计划,保持冷静。现在我已经进步了很多。 和平是一种心态。只要我们保持冷静和积极,在哪里都能找到和平。希望你也能找到内心的平静。 你的, 李华 【拓展2】 请根据以下提示,写一篇短文,论述“困境中的和平才是真和平”,词数70左右,开头已给出。 提示 信息 核心观点 真正的和平不在于环境宁静,而在于困境中坚守内心的平静与包容 理由 顺境的平静易获得;困境的和平显力量;内心平静能化解矛盾 呼吁 学会在喧嚣中保持平静,用包容与理解创造真正的和平 True peace does not lie in a quiet environment, but in keeping a calm and inclusive heart when facing difficulties. _ 【拓展2范文】 True peace does not lie in a quiet environment, but in keeping a calm and inclusive heart when facing difficulties. It’s easy to feel peaceful in a quiet place, but real peace shows its power in trouble. Just like the bird in the storm, staying calm helps us solve problems. Moreover, a peaceful heart makes us inclusive, which can resolve conflicts. We should learn to stay calm in noise and chaos. With understanding and a steady mind, we can create true peace for ourselves and others. 【拓展2译文】 真正的和平不在于宁静的环境,而在于面对困难时保持平静与包容的内心。 在安静的地方感受和平很容易,但真正的和平在困境中才彰显力量。就像暴风雨中的小鸟一样,保持冷静能帮助我们解决问题。此外,平静的内心让我们学会包容,这能化解矛盾。 我们应该学会在喧嚣与混乱中保持平静,用理解和坚定的心态,为自己和他人创造真正的和平。 本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累 一、核心主题词汇 1.和平相关(单元重点) 和平与心态:peace 和平;calm 平静的;steady mind 坚定的心态;inner peace 内心的和平;inclusive 包容的;positive 积极的;chaos 混乱;violent storm 狂暴的暴风雨 现在完成时相关:have understood 已经理解;have experienced 已经经历;have improved 已经进步;have learned 已经学会;have shown 已经表明;have resolved 已经化解 故事与感悟:artist 画家;kingdom 王国;reflect 反射;waterfall 瀑布;mountainside 山腰;admire 欣赏;precious 珍贵的;resolve conflicts 化解矛盾 困境与行动:face difficulties 面对困难;constant arguments 不断的争论;stay calm 保持冷静;listen patiently 耐心倾听;respect differences 尊重差异;overcome trouble 克服困境 1. 语法相关(单元重点) 现在完成时(表经历/感悟): 主语+have/has+过去分词:I have experienced the power of peace.(我体验过和平的力量。);She has understood the true meaning of peace.(她已经明白和平的真谛。) 现在完成时(表持续影响): The story has made me think about peace deeply.(这个故事让我深刻思考和平。);His calm attitude has helped us resolve the conflict.(他的冷静态度帮助我们化解了矛盾。) 现在完成时(表动作完成): We have finished the project with peace and cooperation.(我们通过和平合作完成了项目。);They have learned to stay calm in trouble.(他们已经学会在困境中保持冷静。) 1. 表达类(单元基础) 逻辑连接:just like 就像;instead of 而不是;moreover 此外;as long as 只要;finally 最终;therefore 因此 感悟表达:lie in 在于;show its power 彰显力量;absence of trouble 没有困境;state of mind 一种心态;deeper understanding 更深刻的理解 二、实用句型积累 1.阐释和平的真谛(贴合单元核心) True peace is not… but… 真正的和平不是……而是……,例:True peace is not the absence of conflict but the ability to resolve it calmly. After reading… I have a deeper understanding of… 读完……后,我对……有了更深刻的理解,例:After reading the textbook story, I have a deeper understanding of real peace. Just like… we can… 就像……我们可以……,例:Just like the mother bird in the storm, we can stay calm in trouble. 1. 分享和平相关经历(贴合单元主题) When I… I didn’t… instead… 当我……时,我没有……而是……,例:When I faced arguments, I didn’t get angry instead I listened patiently. That experience showed me that… 那次经历让我明白……,例:That experience showed me that peace can help us overcome difficulties. I have… and this has taught me… 我已经……这教会了我……,例:I have cooperated with different people and this has taught me the value of peace. 1. 论述和平的重要性(贴合单元内涵) … does not lie in… but in… ……不在于……而在于……,例:Real peace does not lie in quiet surroundings but in a calm heart. It’s easy to… but real… 做……很容易,但真正的……,例:It’s easy to feel peaceful in comfort but real peace is tested in trouble. We should learn to… with… 我们应该学会……用……,例:We should learn to face chaos with a peaceful mind. 三、课堂实用句型 提问句型:What is true peace according to the textbook story?;Have you ever experienced inner peace in trouble?;Why did the king choose the second artist’s painting?;How can we keep peace in our daily life?;What does peace mean to you? 回答句型:True peace is a calm heart in the middle of noise and danger.;Yes, I once stayed calm during a group conflict and solved it.;Because it showed the true meaning of peace—calm in trouble.;We can listen to others patiently and respect differences.;To me, peace is understanding and harmony between people. 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $