Unit 7 The Rewards of Kindness 作文学案 2025-2026学年教科版五四学制（2012）英语九年级上册

该初中英语学案聚焦“善意与回报”主题写作，核心涵盖叙事与议论类文本，重点训练副词及善意相关词汇运用。通过写作导引明确目标，单元话题提供基础任务，范文、译文、亮点词块及高分句子搭建学习支架，衔接拓展练习，形成从基础到提升的完整学习脉络。 该资料特色在于融合语言能力与思维品质培养，通过词块积累和高分句子解析提升表达精准度，借助经历讲述与价值论述锻炼分析感悟能力。同时传递温暖正能量，契合文化意识中的品格涵养，拓展练习层次分明，助力学生掌握写作方法，有效提升课堂效率与综合素养。

Unit 7 The Rewards of Kindness 作文学案 【写作导引】 本单元以“The Rewards of Kindness”为话题,属于“帮助他人”主题范畴中“善意与回报”主题群,核心聚焦“用英语讲述善意故事、分享助人收获、论述善良的价值”,运用副词及善意相关核心词汇,提升叙事类与议论类写作的情感感染力和表达精准度。常见写作角度包括:① 讲述一次自己或他人行善的经历;② 给朋友写邮件分享对“善意有回报”的理解;③ 论述“善良是人生宝贵的品质”;④ 仿写童话传递善意的力量。所有内容严格贴合课本话题与语言点,突出“温暖感”和“正能量”,可直接用于课堂同步训练。 【单元话题】 “一次温暖的善意之举”。请用英语写一篇短文,讲述一次你向他人行善或接受他人善意的经历,包括背景、过程、结果及感悟,词数80-100左右,题目为“A Warm Act of Kindness”。 _ 【范文】 A Warm Act of Kindness Last winter, I experienced a warm act of kindness that I will never forget—just like Charity in the story. One cold afternoon, I missed the last bus and had to walk home alone. I felt cold and worried, walking slowly along the street. Suddenly, an old man stopped his bike and smiled kindly. “It’s too cold for you to walk,” he said gently. He offered to give me a ride. On the way, he encouraged me to stay positive when facing difficulties. When I got home safely, I wanted to thank him, but he had already ridden away. This experience teaches me that even small acts of kindness can warm people’s hearts. We should always be kind to others, for kindness is a treasure that makes the world better. 【译文】 一次温暖的善意之举 去年冬天,我经历了一次温暖的善意之举,让我永生难忘——就像故事中的查丽蒂那样。 一个寒冷的下午,我错过了末班车,不得不独自步行回家。我又冷又着急,沿着街道慢慢走着。突然,一位老人停下自行车,友善地笑了笑。“这么冷的天,你走路太冷了,”他温和地说,并主动提出载我一程。路上,他鼓励我遇到困难时要保持乐观。 当我安全到家想要感谢他时,他已经骑车离开了。这次经历让我明白,即使是小小的善意之举,也能温暖人心。我们应该永远对他人友善,因为善良是让世界变得更美好的珍宝。 亮点词块 1.act of kindness 善意之举 2.miss the last bus 错过末班车 3.offer to give a ride 主动提供搭车 4.stay positive 保持乐观 5.warm people’s hearts 温暖人心 6.a valuable treasure 宝贵的珍宝 7.face difficulties 面对困难 高分句子 1.One cold afternoon, I missed the last bus and had to walk home alone. I felt cold and worried, walking slowly along the street.(用副词slowly修饰动作,贴合单元语法重点) 2.Suddenly, an old man stopped his bike and smiled kindly. “It’s too cold for you to walk,” he said gently.(呼应课本善意主题,细节描写生动,贴合单元内涵) 3.This experience teaches me that even small acts of kindness can warm people’s hearts.(升华主题,体现善良的价值,贴合单元德育目标) 【拓展1】 你的外国笔友Peter最近对“善意是否有回报”感到困惑,请你写一封邮件,分享你对这个问题的理解及课本故事的感悟,词数不少于60。 Dear Peter, You asked about whether kindness always brings rewards, and the story of Charity in my textbook gives me a lot of thoughts. _ Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1范文】 Dear Peter, You asked about whether kindness always brings rewards, and the story of Charity in my textbook gives me a lot of thoughts. Charity was kind to a beggar and gave him her only bread. Her kindness was rewarded—everything she touched turned into gold. But I think the greatest reward of kindness is not material things, but the warm feeling in our hearts. When we help others sincerely, we make friends and build trust. Kindness is like a seed that grows into love. Let’s keep being kind to people around us, and we’ll find the world becomes warmer and more beautiful. Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1译文】 亲爱的彼得: 你问起善意是否总能带来回报,我课本里查丽蒂的故事让我有了很多思考。 查丽蒂对一个乞丐非常善良,把自己仅有的面包给了他。她的善意得到了回报——她触摸的一切都变成了金子。但我认为,善意最大的回报不是物质财富,而是我们心中的温暖感觉。当我们真诚地帮助他人时,我们会交到朋友,建立信任。 善良就像一颗种子,会生长出爱。让我们继续对身边的人友善,就会发现世界变得更加温暖和美好。 你的, 李华 【拓展2】 请根据以下提示,写一篇短文,论述“善良是人生最宝贵的品质”,词数70左右,开头已给出。 提示 信息 核心观点 善良是人生最宝贵的品质,能点亮自己与他人的生活 理由 善良赢得真挚友谊;善良化解矛盾分歧;善良让世界更和谐 呼吁 每个人都应践行善良,用小善汇聚大爱 Kindness is the most precious quality in life. It can light up both our own lives and the lives of others. _ 【拓展2范文】 Kindness is the most precious quality in life. It can light up both our own lives and the lives of others. First, kind people easily win sincere friendship—everyone likes to be with those who are warm-hearted. Second, kindness can resolve conflicts gently, just like Charity’s kindness changed the wizard’s attitude. What’s more, kindness makes the world more harmonious. We should all practice kindness in daily life. A small help or a kind word can make a big difference. Let’s spread kindness everywhere. 【拓展2译文】 善良是人生最宝贵的品质,它能点亮我们自己和他人的生活。 首先,善良的人容易赢得真挚的友谊——每个人都喜欢和温暖的人相处;其次,善良能温和地化解矛盾,就像查丽蒂的善意改变了巫师的态度;更重要的是,善良让世界更和谐。 我们都应该在日常生活中践行善良。一次小小的帮助或一句友善的话语都能带来巨大改变。让我们把善意传播到每一个角落。 本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累 一、核心主题词汇 1.善意相关(单元重点) 善意与行动:kindness 善良;kind 善良的;act of kindness 善意之举;be kind to 对……友善;help others 帮助他人;offer help 提供帮助;sincere 真诚的;warm-hearted 热心的;generous 慷慨的 副词相关:kindly 友善地;gently 温和地;sincerely 真诚地;slowly 慢慢地;quickly 迅速地;warmly 温暖地;greatly 非常;deeply 深深地 故事与感悟:reward 回报;treasure 珍宝;material things 物质财富;trust 信任;friendship 友谊;conflict 矛盾;harmonious 和谐的;light up 点亮 表达与情感:worried 担忧的;grateful 感激的;warm 温暖的;positive 乐观的;encourage 鼓励;resolve 化解;spread 传播 1. 语法相关(单元重点) 副词(修饰动词): 方式副词:smile kindly 友善地微笑;speak gently 温和地说话;help sincerely 真诚地帮助;walk slowly 慢慢地走 程度副词:greatly appreciate 非常感激;deeply moved 深受感动;very cold 非常冷;quite warm 相当温暖 副词(修饰形容词/其他副词): 修饰形容词:really kind 非常善良;too cold 太冷;so warm 如此温暖;very precious 非常宝贵 修饰副词:walk very slowly 走得很慢;speak quite gently 说得相当温和;act so generously 表现得如此慷慨 1. 表达类(单元基础) 逻辑连接:first 首先;second 其次;what’s more 更重要的是;just like 就像;for 因为;so 因此;even 即使 感悟表达:light up 点亮;make a big difference 带来巨大改变;warm people’s hearts 温暖人心;build trust 建立信任;resolve conflicts 化解矛盾 二、实用句型积累 1.讲述善意经历(贴合单元核心) I experienced a warm act of kindness that… 我经历了一次温暖的善意之举,它……,例:I experienced a warm act of kindness that changed my view of the world. When I…, someone… 当我……时,有人……,例:When I was lost in the new city, a stranger helped me kindly. This experience teaches me that… 这次经历让我明白……,例:This experience teaches me that kindness is the most beautiful language in the world. 1. 分享对善意的理解(贴合单元主题) The story of… gives me a lot of thoughts. ……的故事让我有了很多思考,例:The story of Charity gives me a lot of thoughts about kindness. I think the greatest reward of kindness is not… but… 我认为善意最大的回报不是……而是……,例:I think the greatest reward of kindness is not money but the feeling of happiness. Kindness is like… that… 善良就像……,它……,例:Kindness is like sunshine that warms everyone around. 1. 论述善良的价值(贴合单元内涵) … is the most precious quality in life. ……是人生最宝贵的品质,例:Kindness is the most precious quality in life. There are three reasons why… ……有三个原因,例:There are three reasons why kindness is so important. We should all… and… 我们都应该……并……,例:We should all be kind to others and spread love everywhere. 三、课堂实用句型 提问句型:What did Charity do to help the beggar?;Have you ever experienced an act of kindness?;Why is kindness an important quality?;How did the old man help the writer in the sample?;What rewards can kindness bring? 回答句型:She gave her only piece of bread to the beggar.;Yes, a classmate helped me with my homework when I was ill.;Because it can warm hearts and build friendship.;He offered to give the writer a ride home on his bike.;Kindness can bring friendship, trust and a warmer world. 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $