Unit 3 Election Promises 作文学案 -2025-2026学年教科版五四学制（2012）九年级英语上册

Unit 3 Election Promises 作文学案 【写作导引】 本单元以“Election Promises”为话题，属于“真理与诚信”主题范畴中“诚信竞选”主题群，核心聚焦“用英语描述竞选场景、分享对‘靠谱承诺’的看法、论述‘言出必行’的竞选原则’’，运用祈使句及竞选相关核心词汇，提升叙事类与议论类写作的逻辑性和说服力。常见写作角度包括：① 讲述一次班级竞选的经历；② 给朋友写邮件分享对“空头承诺”的见解；③ 论述“诚信是竞选的基石”；④ 仿写竞选演讲传递务实理念。所有内容严格贴合课本话题与语言点，突出“务实性”和“诚信性”，可直接用于课堂同步训练。 【单元话题】 “一次难忘的竞选”。请用英语写一篇短文，讲述一次你或他人参与竞选的经历，包括竞选承诺、过程及结果，词数80-100左右，题目为“An Unforgettable Election”。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 An Unforgettable Election Last semester, our class held a monitor election, and my deskmate Li Ming decided to run for the position. Unlike other candidates who made unrealistic promises like “no homework”, Li Ming spoke seriously: “I can’t change all rules, but I promise to help organize class activities and listen to your voices.” He also said he would help with after-class study groups. Everyone trusted his practical words and cheered loudly. In the end, Li Ming won by a large margin. This election teaches me that people value real commitments more than empty words. A good leader should keep their promises instead of just saying what others want to hear. 【译文】 一次难忘的竞选 上学期，我们班举行了班长竞选，我的同桌李明决定参选。 不像其他候选人许下“没有家庭作业”这类不切实际的承诺，李明严肃地说：“我不能改变所有规则，但我承诺会协助组织班级活动，倾听大家的声音。”他还说会帮忙组织课后学习小组。大家都信任他务实的话语，大声欢呼。最后，李明以较大优势获胜。 这次竞选让我明白，人们更看重实在的承诺而非空洞的言辞。一个好的领导者应该信守承诺，而不是只说别人想听的话。 亮点词块 1.run for the position 竞选某个职位 2.unrealistic promises 不切实际的承诺 3.practical words 务实的话语 4.by a large margin 以较大优势 5.real commitments 实在的承诺 6.empty words 空洞的言辞 7.listen to one’s voices 倾听某人的声音 高分句子 1.Unlike other candidates who made unrealistic promises like “no homework”, Li Ming spoke seriously: “I can’t change all rules, but I promise to help organize class activities and listen to your voices.”（呼应课本核心情节，对比空头承诺与务实承诺，贴合单元主题） 2.Keep your promises instead of just saying what others want to hear.（运用祈使句提出建议，贴合单元语法重点） 3.This election teaches me that people value real commitments more than empty words.（升华主题，体现竞选的诚信本质，贴合单元内涵） 【拓展1】 你的外国笔友Peter即将参加学校学生会竞选，他想知道如何做出靠谱的承诺，请你写一封邮件，分享你的建议及理由，词数不少于60。 Dear Peter, I’m excited to hear you’re running for student council president! The story of Erica in my textbook tells us a lot about making election promises. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1范文】 Dear Peter, I’m excited to hear you’re running for student council president! The story of Erica in my textbook tells us a lot about making election promises. Erica lost because she made popular but impossible promises. So, my first suggestion is: make realistic promises. For example, “I’ll organize monthly book-sharing activities” instead of “I’ll eliminate all exams”. Second, keep your promises simple and clear—people need to know exactly what you’ll do. Most importantly, only promise what you can keep. Voters trust those who are honest and practical. I believe you’ll win with sincere and achievable promises! Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1译文】 亲爱的彼得： 听说你要竞选学生会主席，我真为你高兴！我课本里埃丽卡的故事让我们对竞选承诺有了很多思考。 埃丽卡之所以失败，是因为她许下了受欢迎但无法实现的承诺。所以我的第一个建议是：许下切实可行的承诺。比如“我会每月组织书籍分享活动”，而不是“我会取消所有考试”。其次，承诺要简洁明了——大家需要清楚知道你会做什么。最重要的是，只承诺你能做到的事。 选民信任诚实务实的人，我相信你会凭借真诚且可实现的承诺获胜！ 你的， 李华 【拓展2】 请根据以下提示，写一篇短文，论述“诚信是竞选的基石”，词数70左右，开头已给出。 提示 信息 核心观点 诚信是竞选成功的关键，空头承诺终将失败 理由 诚信赢得选民信任；务实承诺展现能力；言出必行树立威信 呼吁 竞选者应坚守诚信，用实际行动兑现承诺 Honesty is the cornerstone of a successful election. No one can win true support with empty promises. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【拓展2范文】 Honesty is the cornerstone of a successful election. No one can win true support with empty promises. First, honest promises make voters trust you—people will not believe those who say whatever others want to hear. Second, practical commitments show your ability to take responsibility. Finally, keeping promises after winning builds your authority. As the textbook teaches us, don’t make promises you can’t keep. Candidates should stick to honesty and prove themselves with real actions. 【拓展2译文】 诚信是竞选成功的基石，没有人能靠空头承诺赢得真正的支持。 首先，诚实的承诺能让选民信任你——人们不会相信那些只说顺耳话的人；其次，务实的承诺能展现你承担责任的能力；最后，当选后兑现承诺能树立你的威信。 正如课本教导我们的，不要许下无法实现的承诺。竞选者应坚守诚信，用实际行动证明自己。 本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累 一、核心主题词汇 1.竞选相关（单元重点） · 竞选与承诺：election 选举；run for 竞选；candidate 候选人；promise 承诺；commitment 承诺；unrealistic 不切实际的；practical 务实的；empty words 空洞的言辞；keep one’s promise 信守承诺 · 祈使句相关：keep 坚守；make 做出；listen to 倾听；organize 组织；trust 信任；choose 选择；don’t make 不要做出；let’s 让我们 · 过程与结果：hold an election 举行竞选；speak seriously 严肃发言；win by a large margin 以较大优势获胜；lose the election 竞选失败；vote for 投票支持；cheer loudly 大声欢呼 · 观点与感悟：realistic 切实可行的；sincere 真诚的；achievable 可实现的；cornerstone 基石；authority 威信；responsibility 责任 1. 语法相关（单元重点） · 祈使句（表建议/呼吁）： · 肯定式：Keep your promises!（信守你的承诺！）；Make practical commitments!（做出务实的承诺！）；Listen to voters’ voices!（倾听选民的声音！） · 否定式：Don’t make unrealistic promises!（不要许下不切实际的承诺！）；Don’t say empty words!（不要说空洞的话！） · 祈使句（表指令/号召）： · Let’s support honest candidates!（让我们支持诚实的候选人！）；Choose those who keep their words!（选择言出必行的人！） 1. 表达类（单元基础） · 逻辑连接：first 首先；second 其次；finally 最后；unlike 不像；instead of 而不是；as 正如 · 感悟表达：value more than 比……更看重；build authority 树立威信；take responsibility 承担责任；stick to honesty 坚守诚信 二、实用句型积累 1.讲述竞选经历（贴合单元核心） · [Someone] decided to run for… 某人决定竞选……，例：My classmate Lucy decided to run for our school’s student council. · Unlike other… who…, [someone]… 不像其他……的人，某人……，例：Unlike other candidates who made big promises, Lucy focused on small but useful things. · This election teaches me that… 这次竞选让我明白……，例：This election teaches me that honesty is more important than popularity. 1. 分享竞选建议（贴合单元主题） · My first suggestion is to… 我的第一个建议是……，例：My first suggestion is to make promises you can keep. · Don’t… instead of… 不要……而要……，例：Don’t say what others want to hear instead of what you can do. · Voters trust those who… 选民信任……的人，例：Voters trust those who are sincere and practical. 1. 论述竞选原则（贴合单元内涵） · … is the cornerstone of… ……是……的基石，例：Keeping promises is the cornerstone of a successful election. · There are three reasons why… ……有三个原因，例：There are three reasons why honest promises matter in elections. · As the textbook teaches us, we should… 正如课本教导我们的，我们应该……，例：As the textbook teaches us, we should never make empty promises. 三、课堂实用句型 · 提问句型：What did Li Ming promise in the election?；Why did Erica lose the election?；What makes a good election promise?；How can candidates win voters’ trust?；Have you ever taken part in an election? · 回答句型：He promised to help organize class activities and listen to students’ voices.；Because she made promises she couldn’t keep.；A good election promise is realistic and achievable.；By making honest and practical commitments.；Yes, I ran for study monitor and promised to help with group study. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $