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Unit 4 Helping out 作文学案
【写作导引】
本单元以“Helping out”为话题,属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“互助与善意”主题群,核心聚焦“用英语讲述助人故事、规划公益活动、传递善意传承”,运用情态动词(must/may/can) 及助人相关核心词汇,提升叙事类与应用类写作的情感感染力和实用性。常见写作角度包括:① 描述一次难忘的助人经历;② 给笔友分享善意传递的故事;③ 规划一天的公益助人活动;④ 论述互助的意义。所有内容严格贴合课本话题与语言点,突出“善意性”和“实践性”,可直接用于课堂同步训练。
【单元话题】
“一次难忘的助人经历”。请用英语写一篇短文,描述一次你帮助他人或被他人帮助的经历,包括过程、感受及收获,词数60-80左右,题目为“A Memorable Experience of Helping Out”。
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【范文】
A Memorable Experience of Helping Out
Last weekend, I met an elderly man who was lost on the street, and I decided to help him.
He couldn’t remember his address, so I asked him for key information patiently. Luckily, he mentioned a nearby park. I walked with him to the park, and we met his worried family there. His daughter thanked me warmly. I felt a strong sense of happiness and achievement.
This experience taught me that even small acts of kindness can bring great warmth to others. We should always be ready to lend a helping hand.
【译文】
一次难忘的助人经历
上周末,我遇到一位在街上迷路的老人,于是决定帮他。
他记不起自己的地址,我耐心地向他询问关键信息。幸运的是,他提到了附近的一个公园。我陪他走到公园,在那里遇到了他焦急的家人。他的女儿热情地感谢了我,我感到强烈的幸福感和成就感。
这次经历让我明白,即使是小小的善举,也能给他人带来巨大的温暖。我们应该随时准备伸出援手。
亮点词块
1.elderly man 老人
2.get lost 迷路
3.key information 关键信息
4.nearby park 附近的公园
5.worried family 焦急的家人
6.sense of achievement 成就感
7.small acts of kindness 小小的善举
8.lend a helping hand 伸出援手
高分句子
1.He couldn’t remember his address, so I asked him for key information patiently.(描述助人过程,贴合单元“主动助人”主题)
2.I felt a strong sense of happiness and achievement.(表达助人后的感受,符合课本“善意带来满足”的核心思想)
3.This experience taught me that even small acts of kindness can bring great warmth to others.(升华主题,运用情态动词相关语境表达,贴合单元语法重点)
【拓展1】
你的外国笔友Peter想了解中国的公益活动,请你写一封邮件,向他分享一次你参与的公益活动及感受,词数不少于50。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad you’re interested in public welfare activities in China! I once joined a “Read to Animals” activity, and it was really meaningful.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展1范文】
Dear Peter,
I’m glad you’re interested in public welfare activities in China! I once joined a “Read to Animals” activity, and it was really meaningful.
We went to a local animal hospital. Some of us read stories to the homeless animals, while others donated food and toys. The animals seemed calmer when we read to them. I learnt that animals need care and company just like humans. This activity made me realise that helping others—including animals—can make the world warmer.
If you come to China, I’d like to invite you to join such activities with me!
Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展1译文】
亲爱的彼得:
很高兴你对中国的公益活动感兴趣!我曾经参加过一个“给动物读书”的活动,它非常有意义。
我们去了当地的一家动物医院,有些人给无家可归的动物读故事,另一些人捐赠食物和玩具。当我们读书时,动物们似乎变得更平静了。我了解到,动物和人类一样需要关爱和陪伴。这次活动让我意识到,帮助他人——包括动物——能让世界变得更温暖。
如果你来中国,我想邀请你和我一起参加这样的活动!
你的,
李华
【拓展2】
请根据以下提示,写一篇短文,规划一天的校园助人活动,词数50左右,开头已给出。
提示
信息
活动主题
校园互助日
活动内容
帮助低年级同学辅导作业、清理校园垃圾、帮助老师整理图书
活动意义
培养互助精神,让校园更美好
We are going to hold a “Campus Helping Day” to spread kindness and friendship.
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【拓展2范文】
We are going to hold a “Campus Helping Day” to spread kindness and friendship.
In the morning, we’ll help younger students with their homework. At noon, we’ll clean up the campus together. In the afternoon, we’ll assist teachers in organising books in the library. Everyone must take part actively and be patient.
This activity will help us develop the spirit of mutual help and make our campus more beautiful.
【拓展2译文】
我们将举办“校园互助日”活动,以传递善意和友谊。
上午,我们会帮助低年级同学辅导作业;中午,一起清理校园垃圾;下午,协助老师整理图书馆的图书。每个人都必须积极参与,保持耐心。
这次活动将帮助我们培养互助精神,让我们的校园变得更美好。
本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累
一、核心主题词汇
1.助人相关(单元重点)
· 助人场景:help the elderly 帮助老人;get lost 迷路;donate food 捐赠食物;clean up the campus 清理校园;tutor homework 辅导作业;organise books 整理图书;homeless animals 无家可归的动物
· 善意传递:spread kindness 传递善意;a circle of goodwill 善意的循环;small acts of kindness 小小的善举;lend a helping hand 伸出援手;mutual help 互助
· 情态动词相关:must 必须;may 可能;can 可以;mustn’t 禁止;may not 可能不;can’t 不能
· 感受与评价:sense of achievement 成就感;meaningful 有意义的;warmth 温暖;happiness 幸福;patient 耐心的
1. 语法相关(单元重点)
· 情态动词表推测:
· must(肯定推测):He must be lost.(他一定是迷路了。)
· may/might(可能推测):It may rain, so take an umbrella.(可能会下雨,带把伞吧。)
· can’t(否定推测):He can’t find his way alone.(他自己找不到路。)
· 情态动词表意愿/建议:
· can(可以):We can help clean the park.(我们可以帮忙清理公园。)
· must(必须):We must be kind to animals.(我们必须善待动物。)
· should(应该):We should help those in need.(我们应该帮助有需要的人。)
1. 表达类(单元基础)
· 活动规划:hold an activity 举办活动;in the morning/noon/afternoon 上午/中午/下午;take part actively 积极参与;develop the spirit of 培养……精神
· 过程描述:ask for 询问;walk with 陪同;meet up with 遇见;thank warmly 热情感谢;donate sth to 向……捐赠某物
二、实用句型积累
1.描述助人经历(贴合单元核心)
· I once + 助人动作 +, and it made me + 感受. 我曾经……,这让我感到……,例:I once helped a blind man cross the street, and it made me feel proud.
· When I + 场景, I noticed + 他人困境. So I decided to + 助人动作. 当我……时,我注意到……,于是我决定……,例:When I passed the park, I noticed a child crying. So I decided to help him find his parents.
· With my help, + 积极结果. I learnt that + 感悟. 在我的帮助下,……,我明白……,例:With my help, she finished her homework on time. I learnt that helping others can make us happy.
1. 分享善意传递故事(贴合单元主题)
· A few years ago, I was helped by + 他人. So when I saw + 类似场景, I decided to + 传递善意. 几年前,我被……帮助过,所以当我看到……时,我决定……,例:A few years ago, I was helped by a stranger when I lost my wallet. So when I saw someone in the same trouble, I decided to lend a hand.
· The kindness I received inspired me to + 助人动作. 我收到的善意激励我……,例:The kindness I received inspired me to volunteer at the animal hospital every weekend.
· It’s amazing how a small kind act can + 影响. 令人惊讶的是,一个小小的善举能……,例:It’s amazing how a small kind act can create a circle of goodwill.
1. 规划助人活动(贴合单元内涵)
· We are going to + 活动主题 + to + 活动目的. 我们将举办……活动,旨在……,例:We are going to organise a book donation activity to help children in poor areas.
· During the activity, we can + 具体动作1, + 具体动作2 and + 具体动作3. 活动中,我们可以……、……和……,例:During the activity, we can collect books, pack them and send them to the countryside.
· Everyone must + 要求动作, and we should + 态度要求. 每个人必须……,而且我们应该……,例:Everyone must bring at least one book, and we should be careful with the packages.
三、课堂实用句型
· 提问句型:Have you ever helped someone in need?;What did you do to help others?;How did you feel after helping others?;What public welfare activities have you joined?;Why is mutual help important in society?
· 回答句型:Yes, I once helped an elderly woman carry her bags.;I helped clean up the community park with my classmates.;I felt a strong sense of achievement and happiness.;I joined a “Read to Animals” activity at the local hospital.;Because it makes the world warmer and helps people get through difficulties.
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