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读后续写表达提升(一)
高频情绪+细节经典表达
翻译:我很开心。I am happy.
(换主语): 开心的情绪抓住了我。
Delight seized me.
(加介短): 一股开心的情绪抓住了我。
A strong sense of delight seized me.
(加并列): 开心与振奋的情绪抓住了我。
A strong sense of delight and excitement seized me.
(加副词): 即刻地,一股开心与振奋的情绪抓住了我。
Instantly, a strong sense of delight and excitement seized me.
(词汇升级): 一股开心与振奋的情绪即刻抓住了我。
Instantly, a strong sense of delight mingled with excitement seized me.
(加特写): 一股开心与振奋的情绪即刻抓住了我, 我心脏剧烈地怦怦跳。
经典句式1:Instantly, a strong sense of delight mingled with excitement seized me and my heart started to beat dramatically/violently/slightly. (无灵主语+细节辅助)
经典句式2:Never had I been so frightened that I rooted myself to the spot with palms sweating, legs trembling and throat tightening. (倒装句+细节辅助)
常用细节描写语料补充:
legs/hands/lips trembling violently /slightly 手/脚/嘴唇剧烈/轻微颤抖
heart beating/pounding/thumping 心砰砰跳
tears welling up in her eyes 眼眶湿润
throat tightening喉咙发紧
forehead / eyebrows knotted in a frown 额前/眉毛皱成一团
eyes glistening眼里闪烁微光 手心出汗 palms sweating
eg: She smiled gently, her eyes glistening with tears of gratitude.
她温柔地笑了笑,感激的泪水在她的眼中闪烁。
II.知识点内化+默写(时态全部设定为一般过去时)
微微颤抖:
剧烈跳动:
喉咙发紧:
眼眶湿润:
眉毛皱成一团:
眼里闪烁微光:
手心出汗:
开心交织着振奋:
紧张交织着焦虑:
绝望交织着悲伤:
III.知识迁移运用
1.描写喜 (happiness/delight/pleasure快乐;satisfaction满意;gratitude感激;relief宽慰;pride自豪)
2.描写怒(anger/rage愤怒;disgust厌恶; hate憎恨; jealousy妒忌;confusion困惑)
3.描写哀(sadness/sorrow悲伤; disappointment ;despair绝望;depression沮丧;regret后悔;guilt内疚
4.描写不安(fear/fright/horror/terror恐惧;worry/anxiety/nervousness;embarrassment;shame)
情绪感受类名词及形容词对照表(37组)
情绪感受类名词/形容词对照表(37组)
情绪感受
名词
形容词
1
快乐
happiness/delight/pleasure
happy/delighted/pleased
2
沮丧
upset/depression
upset/depressed
3
悲伤
sadness/sorrow
sad/sorrowful
4
愤怒
anger/rage
angry/annoyed
5
惊讶
surprise/ astonishment/amazement
surprised/astonished/amazed
6
恐惧
fear/fright/horror
afraid/frightened/terrified
7
失望
disappointment
disappointed
8
绝望
desperation,despair,frustration
helpless/desperate/frustrated
9
怀疑
doubt
doubtful
10
厌恶
disgust/hate
disgusted
11
焦急
worry/anxiety/nervousness
worried/anxious/nervous
12
压力
stress/pressure
stressed
13
放松
relaxation
relaxed
14
后悔
regret
regretful
15
愧疚
guilt
guilty
16
尴尬
embarrassment/awkwardness
uneasy/embarrassed/awkward
17
羞愧
shame
ashamed
18
害羞
shyness
shy
19
感恩
gratitude
grateful/thankful
20
感动
空
touched/moved
21
骄傲
pride
proud
22
相信
confidence
confident/convinced
23
鼓舞
encouragement/inspiration
encouraged/inspired
24
劳累
tiredness/exhaustion
tired/exhausted/worn-out
25
宽慰
relief
relieved
26
疑惑
puzzlement/confusion
puzzled/confused
27
满意
satisfaction
satisfied/content
28
渴望
eagerness
eager/longing
29
同情
sympathy
sympathetic
30
兴趣
interest/curiosity
interested/curious
31
冷静
calmness
calm
33
着迷
obsession
obsessed
34
敬畏
respect
respected
35
嫉妒
jealousy
jealous
36
钦佩
admiration
admired
37
期待
hope/expectation
hopeful/expectant
附:情绪表达词汇检测
名词
形容词
快乐
happiness/delight/pleasure
happy/delighted/pleased
沮丧
upset/depression
悲伤
sadness/sorrow
愤怒
anger/rage
惊讶
surprise/ astonishment/amazement
恐惧
fear/fright/horror
失望
disappointment
绝望
desperation,despair,frustration
怀疑
doubt
厌恶
disgust/hate
焦急
worry/anxiety/nervousness
压力
stress/pressure
放松
relaxation
后悔
regret
愧疚
guilt
尴尬
embarrassment/awkwardness
羞愧
shame
害羞
shyness
感恩
gratitude
骄傲
pride
相信
confidence
鼓舞
encouragement/inspiration
劳累
tiredness/exhaustion
宽慰
relief
疑惑
puzzlement/confusion
满意
satisfaction
渴望
eagerness
同情
sympathy
兴趣
interest/curiosity
冷静
calmness
着迷
obsession
敬畏
respect
嫉妒
jealousy
钦佩
admiration
期待
hope/expectation
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