Unit 1 Career talks 单元话题写作满分范文15篇-2025-2026学年八年级英语下册重难点讲练全攻略（外研版）

2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit 1 Career talks 单元话题（工作与职业）写作满分范文15篇 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．请根据下面信息，写一篇短文，介绍你的未来： 我将来要成为一个优秀的医生。我将在一所大医院工作。每天我都在帮助病人恢复健康 (help patients to return to health)，给他们提供治疗 (give treatment to)，给他们提供健康建议 (give... some advice on health)。我还会去老人院 (the Old Home) 为老人服务 (work for the old) …我喜欢我的工作，因为我是一个有责任心的人 (a person with responsibility)。 要求： 1. 内容须包含所提供的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2. 书写认真，句子通顺； 3. 词数：不少于65词 (开头已给出，但不计入总数)。 I will become a better doctor in the future. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I will become a better doctor in the future. I’ll work in a big hospital where I can help patients to return to health every day. My job includes giving treatment to sick people and giving them some advice on health. Besides hospital work, I’ll also go to the Old Home to work for the old. I truly love my job because I’m a person with responsibility. Making others healthy makes me happy. To achieve this dream, I’ll study medicine hard from now on. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ② 时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”。 ③ 提示：根据提示写作。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步：承接给出的开头，介绍自己的工作地点； 第二步：介绍自己的工作内容以及想成为医生的原因； 第三步：介绍为了成为医生要做的努力。 [亮点词汇] ①sick people病人 ②Besides hospital work除了医院工作 ③makes me happy使我快乐 ④achieve this dream实现这个梦想 ⑤from now on从现在开始 [高分句型] ①I’ll work in a big hospital where I can help patients to return to health every day. (where引导的限制性定语从句) ②I truly love my job because I’m a person with responsibility. (because引导的原因状语从句) 2．你对未来职业的憧憬是什么? 请你以 “I want to be a/ an _________” 为题写一篇短文。词数: 100词左右 (已给出的部分不计入总词数)，可适当发挥。 提纲 回答 What is your dream job? Which motto (座右铭) encourages you most? Why do you like this job? How will you get your future dream job? I want to be a/ an _________ I have a dream. I want to be ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I want to be a lawyer I have a dream. I want to be a lawyer. Never give up, and great things will happen. This motto always cheers me up. I am drawn to being a lawyer because I want to help people get justice. It’s cool to use laws to protect the weak. Also, I love arguing and finding solutions to problems. To make my dream come true, I’ll study hard, especially in subjects like politics and history. After class, I can read books about laws. Besides, I’ll try to take part in speech competitions to improve my speaking skills. I believe I can make it with hard work one day. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，包括梦想职业、座右铭、喜欢该职业的原因以及如何获得未来梦想职业，考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“I have a dream. I want to be...”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“梦想职业是什么、鼓励自己的座右铭、喜欢该职业的原因以及如何获得该职业”几个方面重点介绍自己对未来职业的憧憬； 第三步，书写结语。可总结自己的梦想，或表达实现梦想的决心等。 [亮点词汇] ①be drawn to被……吸引 ②come true实现 ③take part in参加 ④make it成功 [高分句型] I am drawn to being a lawyer because I want to help people get justice.（原因状语从句） 3．学校将举办“我的梦想职业”主题演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿，分享你的梦想职业、原因及实现计划。要求： 1. 梦想职业是什么、选择的原因 (至少2点)、实现计划 (至少2点)； 2. 语言通顺，条理清晰； 3. 120 词左右。 My Dream Job Speech Dear teachers and classmates, it’s my great honor to share my dream job with you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 【答案】One possible version: My Dream Job Speech Dear teachers and classmates, it’s my great honor to share my dream job with you. My dream is to become a teacher. There are two main reasons for this choice. Firstly, I truly enjoy being around kids. Their curiosity and boundless energy never fail to bring me joy. Secondly, teachers yield a great influence on students. I hope to positively shape my students’ lives in a meaningful way. To turn my dream into reality, I have two concrete plans. I’ll study diligently to achieve excellent grades, especially in the subjects I aim to teach. Also, I’ll actively participate in teaching-related clubs and activities for practical experience. I believe with unwavering hard work and persistence, I can realize my dream. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿，主题为“我的梦想职业”； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点包括梦想职业、选择原因（至少两点）及实现计划（至少两点），需确保内容完整，条理清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。简要介绍自己很荣幸分享梦想职业，引出下文； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。首先明确梦想职业是什么，接着从个人兴趣、职业价值等方面阐述选择该职业的原因，最后详细说明实现梦想的具体计划，如学习相关知识、积累实践经验等； 第三步，书写结语。总结梦想的重要性，并表达对实现梦想的信心，同时感谢听众。 [亮点词汇] ①main reasons主要原因 ②be around在……周围 ③never fail to do总是能够，总是会 ④long to do渴望做某事 ⑤wield a great influence on对……有巨大影响 [高分句型] ①Their curiosity and boundless energy never fail to bring me joy.（主谓宾宾补结构） ②To turn my dream into reality, I have two concrete plans.（动词不定式作目的状语） 4．当代青年，应以梦为马，不断探索中国的未来。今天的我们，有机会把整个世界作为想象和行动的空间，去一展拳脚，实现抱负。请结合以下几个问题，以“My Dream Job”为题写一篇短文，介绍你梦想的职业。1. What is your dream job? 2. Why do you want to do it? 3. How are you going to do that? 要求：1.语句通顺、句意连贯;字迹工整，在答题卡上规范书写。 2.可适当发挥，不少于80词。 3.不得出现真实的姓名校名和班级。 My Dream Job_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Dream Job     My dream job is to be a teacher. I think teaching is a meaningful job because teachers can help students grow. I want to become a teacher because I enjoy sharing knowledge and helping others. Moreover, teachers play an important role in shaping the future of our country.     To achieve my dream, I will study hard to gain more knowledge. I will also practice speaking in public to improve my communication skills. Most importantly, I will learn from my teachers and try to be patient and creative.     I believe that if I keep working hard, my dream will come true one day. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时； ③提示：围绕“你的梦想职业”展开，具体介绍你的梦想职业是什么，为什么想从事这个职业，实现梦想的方法。可适当增加细节，避免出现语法错误，确保语句通顺。 [写作步骤] 第一步：引出主题——梦想职业是教师； 第二步：介绍想成为教师的原因以及实现理想职业的方法； 第三步：书写结语，相信自己的梦想会成功。 [亮点词汇] ① help sb. do sth. 帮助某人做某事 ② moreover 此外 ③ practice doing sth. 练习做某事 [高分句型] ①I think teaching is a meaningful job because teachers can help students grow.（宾语从句，because引导的原因状语从句） ② To achieve my dream, I will study hard to gain more knowledge. （动词不定式作目的状语） 5．根据要求完成作文。 在今天的英语课上，你的英语老师就“理想职业”以及“如何下决心”这一话题让同学们分享自己的想法。 1. What do you want to be when you grow up? 2. Why do you like this job? 3. How do you make your resolutions? 参考词：ideal (理想的), promise 要求： 1.词数80-100左右； 2.请根据以上的提示和要求，结合自己的实际情况表达你的观点，并适当发挥； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名； 4.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。 My ideal job In today’s English class, we talk about our ideal jobs. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文: My Ideal Job In today’s English class, we talk about our ideal jobs. My ideal job is to be a doctor. I want to be a doctor because I think it’s a very meaningful job. Doctors help sick people get better and make them healthy again. That’s why I like this job. To make my dream come true, I make some resolutions. First, I promise to study hard. Second, I need to read more books. Third, I will try to be kind and patient, just like a good doctor should be. I believe if I keep my promises and work hard, I can become a doctor one day. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时，一般将来时； ③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用文章已给开头，点明理想职业； 第二步，根据题干的要点，说明原因以及如何制定决心； 第三步，表达期待并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①come true实现 ②study hard努力学习 [高分句型] ①First, I promise to study hard.（不定式作宾语） ②I believe if I keep my promises and work hard, I can become a doctor one day.（宾语从句，if引导的条件状语从句） 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．你校英语报将要举行“职业规划”主题征文活动。假如你是李华，请你根据个人职业理想写一篇短文参与这次征文活动，内容包括： 1.你的职业理想； 2.选择这个职业的理由； 3.你会为此做哪些准备。 注意： 1.词数90左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名。 I’m Li Hua. I’d like to share with you about my ideas and plans for my future job. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: I’m Li Hua. I’d like to share with you about my ideas and plans for my future job. I think I’ll be a writer when I grow up. One reason is that I love reading and writing. Another is that I hope my stories can not only bring joy to readers but also touch their hearts and make a difference in their lives. To make my dream come true, I need to make myself a better person. First, I will study hard and go to college. Second, I’ll read different kinds of books, such as novels, poems and short stories. What’s more, I’ll keep on writing stories so that I can improve my writing skills. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已明确，需适当补充细节，注意行文连贯与词数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开篇点题，引出自己的职业理想； 第二步：说明选择该职业的理由； 第三步：阐述为实现理想的具体准备措施，收尾总结。 [亮点词汇] ①not only...but also不仅……而且 ②different kinds of不同种类的 ③keep on坚持 [高分句型] ①I hope my stories can not only bring joy to readers but also touch their heart and make a difference in their lives. (not only...but also并列结构) 7．青年最富有朝气，最富有梦想。如果你是一名工程师，你可以用所学的技术去改善人的生活环境；如果你是一名医生，你可以用精湛的医术去治病救人……最近，梦想网设立了一个论坛，请按照提示写一篇不少于80词的短文。 参考词汇：operation手术  volunteer志愿者  fine健康的 提示： 1. What’s your dream job? 2. Why do you want to do it according (按照) to your own experience (经历)? 3. How are you going to make your dream come true? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Everyone has their own dream job. So do I. When I was young, I wanted to be a singer or an actor. I wanted to be famous or make much money. But three years ago, my grandpa was seriously ill. He had to stay at the hospital for almost one month. From then on, I wanted to be a doctor or a nurse to help more people. To make my dream come true, I am going to study harder. I am going to study medicine in college. At the same time, I will read more books about medicine. If possible, I will be a volunteer in the hospital. I believe my dream can come true. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：以一般现在时为主，穿插一般过去时； ③提示：围绕“个人梦想职业”展开，突出“因亲人经历改变梦想”的核心逻辑。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先介绍自己曾经的梦想职业及初衷。 第二步，再讲述梦想转变的契机，明确现在的梦想职业。 第三步，最后阐述实现梦想的具体行动规划。 第四步，结尾表达对梦想实现的信心。 [亮点词汇] ①dream job梦想职业 ②seriously ill重病 ③come true实现 [高分句型] ①When I was young, I wanted to be a singer or an actor.（when引导时间状语从句） ②To make my dream come true, I am going to study harder.（动词不定式作目的状语） 8．假如你是李华，你校正在开展以“职面未来”为主题的职业规划活动。现向学生征集未来职业等信息。请你根据以下调查问卷，用英语给活动负责人Ms. Smith写一封邮件，就调查问卷内容阐述你的职业规划。 Your Future Job1. What do you want to be in the future? □A doctor.     □A teacher.     □Others 2. Why do you choose that? 3. How are you going to achieve your goal? 参考词汇： encourage, dream, try one’s best, work hard, knowledge, improve, ... 要求：1.短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥； 2.语句正确，意思通顺、连贯，书写规范； 3.短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4.词数：不少于60。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。） Dear Ms. Smith, I’m Li Hua. I’m glad to share my future job plan here. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Ms. Smith, I’m Li Hua. I’m glad to share my future job plan here. I want to be a teacher in the future. Teachers can pass on knowledge and encourage students to follow their dreams—my primary school teacher once inspired me a lot, so I hope to do the same for others. To achieve this goal, I’ll study hard to build a solid knowledge base now. I’ll also practice communication skills and join volunteer teaching activities to gain experience. I’ll try my best to become a warm and responsible teacher. Yours,   Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：为“一般现在时和一般将来时”； ③提示：以“职面未来”为主题，向Ms. Smith阐述自己未来想成为教师的职业规划，包括选择原因及实现目标的方式。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头问候并点明主题，表明要分享自己的职业规划。 第二步，中间详细介绍未来想从事的职业、选择该职业的原因，以及实现目标的具体做法。 第三步，结尾表达成为优秀教师的决心。 [亮点词汇] ①pass on传递；传授 ②inspire激励；鼓舞 ③solid knowledge base扎实的知识基础 [高分句型] To achieve this goal, I’ll study hard to build a solid knowledge base now.（运用了不定式作目的状语）        9．你校要举办英语演讲比赛，主题为“My Dream Job”。请根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文为此做准备。 提示: （括号里的信息可以用。） 1.What do you want to be when you grow up?   (an English teacher) 2. Why do you want to be a(n)...?   (interesting;   be good at English) 3. How are you going to realize your dream?   (memorize English words every day;  read more books in English; listen to English songs; practice speaking English more... ) 要求: 1.词数80—100,可适当发挥； 2.演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone! I’m happy to share my dream job with all of you here. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ No pain, no gain. I believe as long as I try my best, my dream will come true someday. Thank you. 【答案】 Hello, everyone! I’m happy to share my dream job with all of you here. I want to be an English teacher when I grow up. This job is interesting because I love helping students learn new things. Also, I am good at English, which gives me confidence. To realize my dream, I will memorize English words every day. I will read more English books to improve my reading skills. Listening to English songs can make learning fun. Besides, I will practice speaking English more by talking with friends or joining an English club. I know it needs hard work, but I will never give up. No pain, no gain. I believe as long as I try my best, my dream will come true someday. Thank you. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是讲稿； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍梦想工作； 第二步，具体阐述想成为英语老师的原因； 第三步，列举具体行动实现梦想。 [亮点词汇] ①be good at擅长 ②give up放弃 ③as long as只要 [高分句型] ①I want to be an English teacher when I grow up. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②This job is interesting because I love helping students learn new things. (because引导的原因状语从句) 10．假定你是李华，在上周你校举办的“职业体验日”活动中，你们尝试了不同工作。请按提示要求写邮件给英国好友Brian，描述你的体验、感受和对未来职业的畅想。 注意: 词数80—100，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Career Exploration Day • tried different jobs. . . • had the chance to. . . • learned. . . • It helped me understand. . . • It opened my eyes to. . . • I felt. . . • . . . • I dream of. . . • I will. . . Dear Brian, How are you? Last week, our school held a “Career Exploration Day”, and I want to share this exciting event with you! _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________     What about you? Do schools in the UK organize similar activities? I’d love to hear about your ideas! Best wishes, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Brian, How are you? Last week, our school held a “Career Exploration Day”, and I want to share this exciting event with you! Firstly, I role-played as a doctor with toy patients. It made me realize it was important to be patient. Then, I became a chef in the cooking corner, making pizza dough. Most surprisingly, the engineering workshop taught me basic robotics! Through role-playing, I learned practical communication skills. This experience opened my eyes to various career paths. I felt more confident about choosing my future major. I dream of becoming an AI engineer, so I will study programming seriously now. What about you? Do schools in the UK organize similar activities? I’d love to hear about your ideas! Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：电子邮件； ②时态：一般过去时、一般现在时； ③提示：需包含表格中三个板块的要点，描述体验、感受及未来职业畅想，词数80-100。 [写作步骤] 第一步，描述活动体验； 第二步，表达个人感受与收获； 第三步，畅想未来职业并说明行动决心。 [亮点词汇] ①role-play as扮演 ②open one’s eyes to使某人见识到 ③career paths职业道路 ④study programming学习编程 [高分句型] ①It made me realize it was important to be patient.（省略that的宾语从句） ②I dream of becoming an AI engineer, so I will study programming seriously now.（so引导结果状语从句） 能力综合实践5篇 11．随着新年的钟声即将敲响，我们站在新的起点，对未来充满憧憬。一份清晰的未来规划，能让我们在成长路上更有方向。请以“My Dream Job”为题，写一篇短文，分享你的职业梦想与新年规划。 写作要求： 1. 开篇结合新年语境，引出你的梦想职业； 2. 说明你渴望从事该职业的2个核心原因，可结合个人经历、榜样影响或职业意义； 3. 提出2-3条切实可行的实现计划，需符合八年级学生的身份，比如“坚持每天阅读科普书籍”“主动向相关职业的人请教”； 4. 语言简洁明了，语法正确，条理清晰，字数控制在80-100词； 5. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、班级信息。 My Dream Job __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 My Dream Job As the New Year approaches, I dream of becoming a teacher. Here are the reasons. Firstly, teaching is meaningful because it helps children grow. My English teacher inspired me with her patience. Secondly, I enjoy sharing knowledge and seeing students’ progress. To achieve this, I will study harder, especially in English and science. I plan to read educational books every weekend. Also, I’ll talk to teachers about their experiences. I believe these steps will lead me to my dream job. 【详解】【总体分析】 ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般将来时和一般现在时； ③提示：结合新年背景引出梦想职业并说明2个原因及提出2条学生可行计划。 【写作步骤】 第一步：用新年语境开篇，直接点明梦想职业； 第二步：介绍原因及可行的计划； 第三步：表达决心。 【亮点词汇】 ①dream of梦想 ②plan to do sth.计划做某事 【高分句型】 ①As the New Year approaches, I dream of becoming a teacher.（运用as引导时间状语从句） ②I will study harder, especially in English and science.（运用especially强调具体行动） ③I believe these steps will lead me to my dream job.（省略that的宾语从句） 12．每个人的梦想职业都离不开过去经验的积累与未来的努力，回望过去与展望未来，能让梦想更清晰。假如你是李华，你们学校正在举办“英语特色活动周”活动，英语社团组织开展以“说梦想，话未来”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，谈谈你的未来规划。 内容包括以下要点： 1. What are you going to be in the future? 2. Share your reasons and experience connected with your dream. 3. How do you plan to improve yourself for your dream? 写作要求：1. 不得使用真实姓名和学校名；2. 包含所有的提示要点，合理使用比较级；3. 词数约80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My Dream Job Boys and girls! It’s my honor to speak here. Today, I’d like to talk about my dream job in the future. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： My Dream Job Boys and girls! It’s my honor to speak here. Today, I’d like to talk about my dream job in the future. I want to become an English teacher. I have loved English since primary school. I often helped my classmates with English homework, which made me feel happy and useful. I think teaching is more meaningful than many other jobs because I can help students learn and grow. To achieve my dream, I will study harder. I plan to read more English books. I also want to be more patient and friendly, because a good teacher should understand students better. I believe I can make my dream come true. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：主要使用一般现在时和一般将来时； ③提示：需围绕未来梦想职业、相关理由与经历、自我提升计划展开，合理使用比较级，语言积极有力，结构完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开场问候并引出演讲主题； 第二步，明确说明未来的梦想职业； 第三步，分享与梦想相关的经历及选择理由； 第四步，阐述为实现梦想制定的提升计划； 第五步，表达信心并结束演讲。 [亮点词汇] ①dream job梦想职业 ②since primary school自从小学以来 ③more meaningful更有意义的 ④make my dream come true使我的梦想成真 [高分句型] ①I often helped my classmates with English homework, which made me feel happy and useful. (which引导非限制性定语从句) ②I think teaching is more meaningful than many other jobs because I can help students learn and grow. (because引导原因状语从句，比较级结构) ③To achieve my dream, I will study harder. (不定式作目的状语) 13．请根据要求完成短文写作，理想是人们的指路明灯。假如你们学校英文网站要进行话题为“我的梦想工作”的征文活动，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，用于投稿。 注意： （1）可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。 （2）不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。 （3）语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的标题已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。 My Dream Job Everyone has his or her own dream job, and so do I. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Dream Job Everyone has his or her own dream job, and so do I. My dream job is to be an English teacher. I am good at learning English. Besides, I am good with children, because I am outgoing and kind to everyone. To make my dream come true, I make a good plan. First, I am going to work harder to get good grades in all subjects, especially English. Second, I am going to learn more teaching skills after going to university. I hope my dream will come true. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：围绕“梦想职业（英语教师）”展开，介绍选择该职业的原因及实现梦想的计划，注意包含题干所给的全部要点，保证拼写和语法正确。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明自己的梦想职业是英语教师； 第二步，说明选择该职业的理由； 第三步，列举实现梦想的具体计划，并表达对梦想的期待。 [亮点词汇] ①dream job梦想职业 ②be good at擅长 ③make one’s dream come true实现某人的梦想 [高分句型] ①Besides, I am good with children, because I am outgoing and kind to everyone.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②To make my dream come true, I make a good plan.（动词不定式作目的状语） 14．人类因梦想而伟大，人生因拼搏而精彩；梦想引领人生，拼搏创造奇迹。每个人都有梦想，你的梦想是什么？某英语学习网站正在开展“梦想成就未来”的征文比赛，请参照思维导图，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你的理想工作。 要求：1. 短文要包含思维导图中提到的内容； 2. 词数80左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Dream Job As the saying goes, “Humans are great because of dreams, and life is wonderful because of hard work.” My dream is to be a doctor, since doctors save lives and help people stay healthy—a truly meaningful and noble job. I plan to work in a big hospital at home to serve my community. To make it happen, I’ll study hard, especially science, read medical books, and gain experience by volunteering. With effort, my dream will surely come true. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“思维导图”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“理想职业、原因、工作地点以及实现方式”几个方面重点介绍； 第三步，书写结语。表达“梦想一定会实现”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①save lives拯救生命 ②stay healthy保持健康 ③serve my community服务我的社区 ④gain experience获得经验 [高分句型] ①My dream is to be a doctor, since doctors save lives and help people stay healthy—a truly meaningful and noble job.（since引导原因状语从句） ②To make it happen, I’ll study hard, especially science, read medical books, and gain experience by volunteering.（动词不定式作目的状语） 15．青春，是心里有火，眼里有光。你们都有幸遇见这样的时代，但是时代更有幸遇见这样的你们。青春路上，你对未来职业的憧憬是什么?请你以“I want to be a/ an ________”为题写一篇短文。 要求： 1.词数80 左右; 2.请根据以上的提示和要求，结合自己的实际情况表达你的观点，并适当发挥； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名； 4.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。 I want to be a/ an_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I want to be a teacher I want to be a teacher in the future. The motto that encourages me most is “Teachers’ biggest happiness is to see the children grow up!” I think teachers are the most important people in our lives. They teach us knowledge. They help us with our study. If I’m a teacher, I’ll be very patient with my students and try my best to make my lessons interesting. To be a teacher, I’ll work hard from now on. I believe it will come true one day. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：以一般现在时为主；一般将来时为辅，时态使用准确、区分清晰； ③提示：完整包含“点明梦想、梦想动因、职业期许、实现计划”核心要点，逻辑连贯，要点齐全，词数符合要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇直抒胸臆，点明自己的梦想 —— 未来成为一名大学教师，开门见山，紧扣主题； 第二步，引用励志格言，阐述教师在人生中的重要意义，同时说明自己成为教师后会有的做法，支撑梦想的合理性； 第三步，提出实现梦想的具体行动，表达不会放弃的决心，最后坚定信念，相信梦想终将实现，收束全文。 [亮点词汇] ①in the future将来 ②encourage鼓励 ③be patient with 对……有耐心 ④try one’s best尽某人最大努力 [高分句型] ①The motto that encourages me most is “Teachers’ biggest happiness is to see the children grow up!”（that引导定语从句） ②If I’m a teacher, I’ ll be very patient with my students and try my best to make my lessons interesting.（if引导条件状语从句） 22 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 23 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit 1 Career talks 单元话题（工作与职业）写作满分范文15篇 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．请根据下面信息，写一篇短文，介绍你的未来： 我将来要成为一个优秀的医生。我将在一所大医院工作。每天我都在帮助病人恢复健康 (help patients to return to health)，给他们提供治疗 (give treatment to)，给他们提供健康建议 (give... some advice on health)。我还会去老人院 (the Old Home) 为老人服务 (work for the old) …我喜欢我的工作，因为我是一个有责任心的人 (a person with responsibility)。 要求： 1. 内容须包含所提供的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2. 书写认真，句子通顺； 3. 词数：不少于65词 (开头已给出，但不计入总数)。 I will become a better doctor in the future. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．你对未来职业的憧憬是什么? 请你以 “I want to be a/ an _________” 为题写一篇短文。词数: 100词左右 (已给出的部分不计入总词数)，可适当发挥。 提纲 回答 What is your dream job? Which motto (座右铭) encourages you most? Why do you like this job? How will you get your future dream job? I want to be a/ an _________ I have a dream. I want to be ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．学校将举办“我的梦想职业”主题演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿，分享你的梦想职业、原因及实现计划。要求： 1. 梦想职业是什么、选择的原因 (至少2点)、实现计划 (至少2点)； 2. 语言通顺，条理清晰； 3. 120 词左右。 My Dream Job Speech Dear teachers and classmates, it’s my great honor to share my dream job with you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 4．当代青年，应以梦为马，不断探索中国的未来。今天的我们，有机会把整个世界作为想象和行动的空间，去一展拳脚，实现抱负。请结合以下几个问题，以“My Dream Job”为题写一篇短文，介绍你梦想的职业。1. What is your dream job? 2. Why do you want to do it? 3. How are you going to do that? 要求：1.语句通顺、句意连贯;字迹工整，在答题卡上规范书写。 2.可适当发挥，不少于80词。 3.不得出现真实的姓名校名和班级。 My Dream Job_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ My Dream Job     My dream job is to be a teacher. I think teaching is a meaningful job because teachers can help students grow. I want to become a teacher because I enjoy sharing knowledge and helping others. Moreover, teachers play an important role in shaping the future of our country.     To achieve my dream, I will study hard to gain more knowledge. I will also practice speaking in public to improve my communication skills. Most importantly, I will learn from my teachers and try to be patient and creative.     I believe that if I keep working hard, my dream will come true one day. 5．根据要求完成作文。 在今天的英语课上，你的英语老师就“理想职业”以及“如何下决心”这一话题让同学们分享自己的想法。 1. What do you want to be when you grow up? 2. Why do you like this job? 3. How do you make your resolutions? 参考词：ideal (理想的), promise 要求： 1.词数80-100左右； 2.请根据以上的提示和要求，结合自己的实际情况表达你的观点，并适当发挥； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名； 4.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。 My ideal job In today’s English class, we talk about our ideal jobs. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．你校英语报将要举行“职业规划”主题征文活动。假如你是李华，请你根据个人职业理想写一篇短文参与这次征文活动，内容包括： 1.你的职业理想； 2.选择这个职业的理由； 3.你会为此做哪些准备。 注意： 1.词数90左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名。 I’m Li Hua. I’d like to share with you about my ideas and plans for my future job. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．青年最富有朝气，最富有梦想。如果你是一名工程师，你可以用所学的技术去改善人的生活环境；如果你是一名医生，你可以用精湛的医术去治病救人……最近，梦想网设立了一个论坛，请按照提示写一篇不少于80词的短文。 参考词汇：operation手术  volunteer志愿者  fine健康的 提示： 1. What’s your dream job? 2. Why do you want to do it according (按照) to your own experience (经历)? 3. How are you going to make your dream come true? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假如你是李华，你校正在开展以“职面未来”为主题的职业规划活动。现向学生征集未来职业等信息。请你根据以下调查问卷，用英语给活动负责人Ms. Smith写一封邮件，就调查问卷内容阐述你的职业规划。 Your Future Job1. What do you want to be in the future? □A doctor.     □A teacher.     □Others 2. Why do you choose that? 3. How are you going to achieve your goal? 参考词汇： encourage, dream, try one’s best, work hard, knowledge, improve, ... 要求：1.短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥； 2.语句正确，意思通顺、连贯，书写规范； 3.短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4.词数：不少于60。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。） Dear Ms. Smith, I’m Li Hua. I’m glad to share my future job plan here. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 9．你校要举办英语演讲比赛，主题为“My Dream Job”。请根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文为此做准备。 提示: （括号里的信息可以用。） 1.What do you want to be when you grow up?   (an English teacher) 2. Why do you want to be a(n)...?   (interesting;   be good at English) 3. How are you going to realize your dream?   (memorize English words every day;  read more books in English; listen to English songs; practice speaking English more... ) 要求: 1.词数80—100,可适当发挥； 2.演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone! I’m happy to share my dream job with all of you here. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ No pain, no gain. I believe as long as I try my best, my dream will come true someday. Thank you. 10．假定你是李华，在上周你校举办的“职业体验日”活动中，你们尝试了不同工作。请按提示要求写邮件给英国好友Brian，描述你的体验、感受和对未来职业的畅想。 注意: 词数80—100，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Career Exploration Day • tried different jobs. . . • had the chance to. . . • learned. . . • It helped me understand. . . • It opened my eyes to. . . • I felt. . . • . . . • I dream of. . . • I will. . . Dear Brian, How are you? Last week, our school held a “Career Exploration Day”, and I want to share this exciting event with you! _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________     What about you? Do schools in the UK organize similar activities? I’d love to hear about your ideas! Best wishes, Li Hua 能力综合实践5篇 11．随着新年的钟声即将敲响，我们站在新的起点，对未来充满憧憬。一份清晰的未来规划，能让我们在成长路上更有方向。请以“My Dream Job”为题，写一篇短文，分享你的职业梦想与新年规划。 写作要求： 1. 开篇结合新年语境，引出你的梦想职业； 2. 说明你渴望从事该职业的2个核心原因，可结合个人经历、榜样影响或职业意义； 3. 提出2-3条切实可行的实现计划，需符合八年级学生的身份，比如“坚持每天阅读科普书籍”“主动向相关职业的人请教”； 4. 语言简洁明了，语法正确，条理清晰，字数控制在80-100词； 5. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、班级信息。 My Dream Job __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．每个人的梦想职业都离不开过去经验的积累与未来的努力，回望过去与展望未来，能让梦想更清晰。假如你是李华，你们学校正在举办“英语特色活动周”活动，英语社团组织开展以“说梦想，话未来”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，谈谈你的未来规划。 内容包括以下要点： 1. What are you going to be in the future? 2. Share your reasons and experience connected with your dream. 3. How do you plan to improve yourself for your dream? 写作要求：1. 不得使用真实姓名和学校名；2. 包含所有的提示要点，合理使用比较级；3. 词数约80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My Dream Job Boys and girls! It’s my honor to speak here. Today, I’d like to talk about my dream job in the future. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．请根据要求完成短文写作，理想是人们的指路明灯。假如你们学校英文网站要进行话题为“我的梦想工作”的征文活动，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，用于投稿。 注意： （1）可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。 （2）不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。 （3）语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的标题已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。 My Dream Job Everyone has his or her own dream job, and so do I. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．人类因梦想而伟大，人生因拼搏而精彩；梦想引领人生，拼搏创造奇迹。每个人都有梦想，你的梦想是什么？某英语学习网站正在开展“梦想成就未来”的征文比赛，请参照思维导图，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你的理想工作。 要求：1. 短文要包含思维导图中提到的内容； 2. 词数80左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．青春，是心里有火，眼里有光。你们都有幸遇见这样的时代，但是时代更有幸遇见这样的你们。青春路上，你对未来职业的憧憬是什么?请你以“I want to be a/ an ________”为题写一篇短文。 要求： 1.词数80 左右; 2.请根据以上的提示和要求，结合自己的实际情况表达你的观点，并适当发挥； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名； 4.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。 I want to be a/ an_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 5 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $