重难点13 高分模板：写作表达万能框架（重难专练）（上海专用）2026年高考英语二轮复习讲练测

重难点13 高分模板：写作表达万能框架 ( 内容导航 速度提升 技巧掌握 手感养成 重难考向聚焦 锁定目标 精准打击： 覆盖五大应用文类型，统一段落逻辑 重难技巧突破 授予利器 瓦解难点： 开头、主体、结尾必背句型，适配所有场景 重难保分练 稳扎稳打 必拿分数 ： 四大核心热点配套金句，直接填充 重难抢分练 突破瓶颈 争夺高分： 模板实战示范 ， 避免模板化生硬，实现个性化高分 重难冲刺练 模拟实战 挑战顶尖： 配套热点题目，强化直接套用能力 。 ) 考点 2021-2025年考情 命题趋势 考点1：建议类书信（5年 7 考） 2025二模普陀（宿舍问题建议）、2025二模徐汇（丰富老年人生活建议）、2025二模闵行（体育大课间活动建议）、2023 秋考（义卖活动改进建议）、2022.1 秋考（晨跑安排建议）、2021.1 秋考（课程选择建议）、2021.6 秋考（课程选择建议） 1. 场景贴近校园/社区生活，聚焦 “问题解决+具体方案”；2. 要求建议务实可操作，需搭配 “建议+理由” 的逻辑链；3. 语气需礼貌得体，兼顾针对性与可行性 考点2：申请/意愿类书信（5年 6 考） 2025二模虹口（寄宿家庭申请）、2025二模杨浦（主题活动选择申请）、2025二模金山（专业选择意愿）、2023 秋考（展览展品申请）、2022.7 秋考（志愿者申请）、2021.1 秋考（课程选择意愿） 1. 核心突出 “意愿+支撑理由”，理由需结合自身优势/需求；2. 常涉及校园活动、专业选择、志愿服务等场景；3. 需明确表达诉求，同时体现匹配度与诚意 考点3：观点/ 看法类书信（5年 4 考） 2025二模长宁（AI 与学习看法）、2025二模崇明（文化传承看法）、2023 秋考（未来生活看法）、2022.1 秋考（人工甜味剂饮料看法） 1. 多涉及热点话题（AI、文化、环保等），要求观点明确；2. 需结合实例（自身经历/社会现象）增强说服力；3. 可采用 “观点+ 理由+补充说明” 的辩证结构 考点4：感谢/慰问类书信（5年 3 考） 2025二模崇明（文化展览感谢信）、2022.7 秋考（帮助他人感谢信）、2021.6 秋考（支持感谢） 1. 场景多为活动参与、他人帮助、指导支持等；2. 需具体提及感谢事由（如活动收获、帮助细节）；3. 语气真挚，可搭配 “收获+展望” 的结尾 一、核心框架：万能结构模板（五大应用文通用） 万能总框架：“三段式黄金结构”（所有题型 100% 适配） 段落 核心功能 字数占比 万能逻辑 首段 点明目的/背景 20%-25% 场景引入→核心目的（1-2 句搞定） 主体段 具体内容/细节 50%-60% 分点展开（3-4 个核心点）→ 细节支撑 末段 总结/呼吁/期待 20%-25% 呼应首段→行动/感谢/期待（1-2 句收尾） 分题型万能框架（直接替换括号内容即可套用） 1.书信类（建议信/感谢信/邀请信/介绍信） 首段：Dear+称谓，I’m writing to （说明目的：put forward suggestions on.../express my thanks for.../invite you to.../introduce...to you）.As （简要背景：a resident of the community/a student of Class 3）, I feel it necessary/pleased to share/advise... 主体段：Firstly, （第一点内容：具体建议/感谢原因/邀请细节/介绍要点）.For example, （补充细节：we can.../you helped me.../the activity will be held.../the festival is famous for...）.Besides, （第二点内容）.What’s more, （第三点内容）—it will help us/to... 末段：I sincerely hope （期待：you can consider my suggestions/you will accept my invitation/you will enjoy the introduction）.Thank you for your time/attention. （结尾客套语：Yours sincerely,/Best wishes,） （署名：Li Hua） 2.通知类 首段：Notice 活动目的：promote.../enrich.../help...）, （发起方：our school/the community） will hold （活动名称：an activity/a competition/a training course）.The details are as follows. 主体段：Time: （具体时间：from...to...on...） （具体地点：the school hall/community activity center） （分点说明：First,...Second,...Besides,...） （参与要求：Please sign up by.../Participants should.../Bring...if necessary） 末段：For more information, contact （联系人/方式：Li Hua at 12345678/su@school.com）.We welcome your active participation! （发起方：The Students’ Union/The Community Service Center） 日期：Month Day, Year） 3.演讲稿类 首段：Good morning/afternoon, everyone! I’m honored to stand here to talk about （演讲主题：“Low-carbon Life”/“Youth and Responsibility”/“Digital Literacy”）.As we all know, （主题背景：this topic is closely related to our daily life/it’s crucial for us to...）. 主体段：Firstly, （第一论点：the importance of.../we should...）.For instance, （举例支撑：last year, I.../a recent survey shows that...）.Secondly, （第二论点）.What’s more, （第三论点）—only in this way can we... 末段：In conclusion, （总结主题）.Let’s （呼吁行动：take action to.../cherish.../improve ourselves）! Thank you! 4.倡议书类 首段：Proposal 背景：the growing awareness of.../the problem of...becoming more serious）, it’s our duty to （倡议核心：take action to.../promote.../protect...）.We hereby put forward the following proposals. 主体段：First, （倡议点 1：we should...by...）.For example, （具体做法：reduce plastic use by bringing reusable bags）.Second, （倡议点 2）.Besides, （倡议点 3）—these small actions will make a great difference. 末段：Let’s join hands to （呼应核心）.Together, we can （预期效果：build a better.../achieve.../pass down...）! （发起方：The Students’ Union/Community Volunteers） 日期：Month Day, Year） 5.留言条/便条类 首段：Dear+称谓，to （说明事由：inform you of.../ask for leave.../consult you about...）. 主体段：（具体信息：时间+事件+要求：I have to...due to.../The homework is...and the activity will be held.../Could you please tell me...）. 末段：Please （客套语：call me back if you have time/accept my apology/let me know your reply）.署名：Li Hua） （日期：Month Day） 二、句型宝库：高分万能句型（直接替换括号内容） 1.开头万能句型（适配所有题型首段） 目的型：I’m writing to （put forward suggestions on.../express my sincere thanks for.../invite you to participate in...）. 背景型：With the rapid development of.../As society progresses,.../In recent years, the problem of...has aroused widespread concern. 引入型：As we all know,.../It’s universally acknowledged that.../There is no doubt that... 通知型：To enrich our campus life/promote environmental protection, we are going to hold... 演讲型：Today, I want to share my views on.../The topic I’m going to talk about is closely related to each of us. 2.主体段万能句型（分点/逻辑衔接） 分点引导：Firstly,.../Second,.../Besides,.../What’s more,.../Last but not least,... 举例支撑：For example,.../For instance,.../Take...as an example,.../A recent experience of mine shows that... 原因分析：The reason why...is that.../Due to.../As a result of.../Because of... 利弊说明：On one hand,...On the other hand,.../Although...,.../However,... 建议提出：We should.../It’s advisable to.../We’d better.../It’s our duty to... 细节补充：In addition,.../Furthermore,.../What’s important is that.../Especially,... 3.结尾万能句型（适配所有题型末段） 期待型：I sincerely hope that.../I’m looking forward to your reply/arrival. 呼吁型：Let’s take action to.../Let’s join hands to.../It’s time for us to... 感谢型：Thank you again for your selfless help/consideration.I really appreciate it. 总结型：In conclusion,.../In short,.../To sum up,.../From what has been mentioned above,... 祝愿型：Best wishes for you!/May you have a wonderful time!/Wish you all the best! 三、话题金句：热点话题万能表达（直接填充） 热点 1：低碳环保与可持续发展 核心金句： a.Living a low-carbon life is not only beneficial to environmental protection but also conducive to sustainable development. b.We can contribute to protecting the planet by reducing plastic use, saving energy and choosing green travel. c.Waste classification is a small action that can make a great difference to building a cleaner world. d.It’s crucial for us to raise environmental awareness and take immediate action to reduce pollution. 热点 2：传统文化传承与文化自信 核心金句： a.Intangible cultural heritage is an important part of Chinese culture, and it’s our responsibility to pass it down. b.Traditional festivals like the Mid-Autumn Festival and Spring Festival symbolize family reunion and carry people’s good wishes. c.Participating in traditional craft activities helps us enhance cultural confidence and learn more about folk art. d.Promoting traditional culture not only enriches our life but also strengthens our national identity. 热点 3：数字生活与信息素养 核心金句： a.Electronic devices bring convenience to our life, but we should use them properly to avoid addiction. b.Improving digital literacy helps us distinguish false information and protect ourselves in the online world. c.Balancing online and offline life is essential for our physical and mental health. d.We should guide the elderly to cross the digital divide and enjoy the convenience of digital life. 热点 4：实践育人与社会责任 核心金句： a.Volunteer service is a meaningful way to contribute to society and cultivate a sense of responsibility. b.Social practice activities help us gain valuable experience and understand the importance of teamwork. c.Caring for others, such as the elderly and left-behind children, makes our society warmer. d.As young people, we should take on our responsibilities and use our youth to make the world a better place. （建议用时：20分钟） 示范 1：建议信（低碳生活） 题目：给社区负责人写一封建议信，建议在社区推广低碳生活。 模板套用过程： 1.首段：套用书信首段模板 "Dear Sir/Madam, writing to put forward suggestions on promoting low-carbon life in our community.As a resident who cares about environmental protection, I feel it necessary to share some practical ideas." 2.主体段：套用分点句型+环保金句 we can post notices to remind residents to save energy by turning off lights and taps when not in use.As we all know, saving energy is crucial for environmental protection.Besides, it’s advisable to improve waste classification facilities and organize volunteers to guide residents—waste classification is a small action that can make a great difference.What’s more, we can encourage green travel by advocating walking or cycling for short trips, which is beneficial to both the environment and our health." 3.末段：套用结尾期待句型 I sincerely hope you can consider my suggestions.Thank you for your attention and efforts in environmental protection.ours sincerely, Li Hua" 套用结果（高分范文）： Dear Sir/Madam, I’m writing to put forward suggestions on promoting low-carbon life in our community.As a resident who cares about environmental protection, I feel it necessary to share some practical ideas. Firstly, we can post notices to remind residents to save energy by turning off lights and taps when not in use.As we all know, saving energy is crucial for environmental protection.Besides, it’s advisable to improve waste classification facilities and organize volunteers to guide residents—waste classification is a small action that can make a great difference.What’s more, we can encourage green travel by advocating walking or cycling for short trips, which is beneficial to both the environment and our health. I sincerely hope you can consider my suggestions.Thank you for your attention and efforts in environmental protection. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 示范 2：演讲稿（科技与生活） 题目：发表“科技与生活”主题演讲稿。 模板套用过程： 1.首段：套用演讲首段模板 "Good morning, everyone! to stand here to talk about“Technology and Life”.As we all know, technology is developing rapidly and has become an indispensable part of our daily life." 2.主体段：套用分点+利弊句型+数字生活金句，technology brings great convenience to us—we can communicate with friends far away through video calls and shop online without going out.For example, during the pandemic, online classes and work from home became possible thanks to technology.Secondly, however, overuse of electronic devices may affect our physical and mental health.It’s crucial for us to use technology properly.What’s more, improving digital literacy helps us make better use of technology and avoid being misled by false information." 3.末段：套用呼吁句型 conclusion, technology is a double-edged sword.Let’s use it wisely to serve our life better and create a more convenient and healthy world! Thank you!" 套用结果（高分范文）： Good morning, everyone! I’m honored to stand here to talk about“Technology and Life”.As we all know, technology is developing rapidly and has become an indispensable part of our daily life. Firstly, technology brings great convenience to us—we can communicate with friends far away through video calls and shop online without going out.For example, during the pandemic, online classes and work from home became possible thanks to technology.Secondly, however, overuse of electronic devices may affect our physical and mental health.It’s crucial for us to use technology properly.What’s more, improving digital literacy helps us make better use of technology and avoid being misled by false information. In conclusion, technology is a double-edged sword.Let’s use it wisely to serve our life better and create a more convenient and healthy world! Thank you! 示范 3：倡议书（践行低碳生活） 题目：发起“践行低碳生活”的倡议书。 模板套用过程： 1.首段：套用倡议书首段模板 "Proposal Dear friends, With the growing awareness of environmental protection, it’s our duty to live a low-carbon life.We hereby put forward the following proposals to build a greener community." 2.主体段：套用倡议分点+环保金句，we should save resources by turning off lights and taps in time and reusing textbooks and bags.Living a low-carbon life is beneficial to sustainable development.Second, we need to reduce pollution by avoiding disposable plastic products and sorting waste properly.What’s more, choose green travel such as walking, cycling or taking public transport instead of private cars—this not only protects the environment but also keeps us healthy." 3.末段：套用呼吁句型 ’s join hands to take immediate action.Together, we can make our life healthier and our planet more beautiful! The Students’ Union June 10, 2026" 套用结果（高分范文）： Proposal Dear friends, With the growing awareness of environmental protection, it’s our duty to live a low-carbon life.We hereby put forward the following proposals to build a greener community. First, we should save resources by turning off lights and taps in time and reusing textbooks and bags.Living a low-carbon life is beneficial to sustainable development.Second, we need to reduce pollution by avoiding disposable plastic products and sorting waste properly.What’s more, choose green travel such as walking, cycling or taking public transport instead of private cars—this not only protects the environment but also keeps us healthy. Let’s join hands to take immediate action.Together, we can make our life healthier and our planet more beautiful! The Students’ Union June 10, 2026 （建议用时：20分钟） 技巧 1：替换同义表达（打破模板同质化） 基础模板句：We should save energy. 优化后：It’s advisable to conserve energy./We are supposed to cherish energy resources. 基础模板句：It’s important to protect the environment.> 优化后：It’s crucial/vital/significant to safeguard the environment. 技巧 2：添加个性化细节（让模板“活”起来） 通用模板：For example, we can do something.：For example, last month our class organized a tree-planting activity in the community, and we planted over 50 trees—this small action helped green our neighborhood. 技巧 3：灵活调整句型结构（避免排比式生硬） 生硬模板：First, we should...Second, we should...Besides, we should...后：To begin with, we can...Furthermore, it’s a good idea to...What’s more, we may... 技巧 4：匹配语气与对象（细节加分） 对官方/长辈：I would appreciate it if you could.../We sincerely hope that...（正式礼貌） 对朋友/同学：It’s great to.../Let’s try our best to...（亲切自然） （建议用时：40分钟） 1．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 当下，年轻人消费日益注重“情绪价值”, 推动了以汉服、盲盒、剧场体验等为代表的“情绪经济(emotion economy)”的兴起。学校英语报现举办以“我看情绪经济”为主题的征文活动，请你以学生李华的身份投稿，分享你对这一现象的理解与思考。 请确保你的稿件包含以下内容： 1)简述对此现象的理解； 2)结合具体事例，谈谈你对此现象的看法。 (注：文中不得出现考生姓名、学校等真实个人信息。) _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 In recent years, the “emotion economy” has gained popularity among young consumers who seek emotional satisfaction through purchases, such as Hanfu, blind boxes, and theater experiences. This trend reflects a shift from material needs to emotional and cultural fulfillment. For instance, buying Hanfu is not just about wearing traditional clothing but also about connecting with cultural heritage and expressing identity. While this boosts cultural industries and personal happiness, it may also lead to impulsive spending or over-commercialization. Therefore, it is important for young people to balance emotional desires with rational consumption, ensuring that the emotion economy enriches life without causing financial strain or waste. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文。要求考生以学生李华的身份向学校英语报投稿，围绕“我看情绪经济”的主题，简述对该现象的理解，并结合具体事例谈谈看法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 兴起：gain popularity → rise/ boom/ flourish 寻求：seek → pursue/ search 促进：boost → promote/ enhance/ fuel 冲动消费：impulsive spending → impulsive purchases/ reckless consumption 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：This trend reflects a shift from material needs to emotional and cultural fulfillment. 拓展句：This trend indicates a transition away from material demands toward emotional and cultural satisfaction. 【点睛】【高分句型1】In recent years, the “emotion economy” has gained popularity among young consumers who seek emotional satisfaction through purchases, such as Hanfu, blind boxes, and theater experiences. (运用了who引导的定语从句) 【高分句型2】While this boosts cultural industries and personal happiness, it may also lead to impulsive spending or over-commercialization. (运用了while引导的让步状语从句) 2．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是中华中学的高三学生张晶，你校英文报正在开展“AI and Our Life”的主题征文活动。 你有意参加，你的征文内容须包括： 1.具体描述一次你使用AI 的经历和感受; 2.谈谈你对高中学生使用AI 的看法和建议。 注：文中不得透露你的真实信息。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】    As a senior student, I once used an AI learning tool for a challenging physics problem. Instead of simply providing answers, it guided me through detailed explanations and practical examples. I was impressed by its round-the-clock availability and patience, which transformed my frustration into a productive learning experience.     I believe AI offers significant benefits to high school students when used appropriately. It can act as a personalized tutor, making complex topics easier to grasp. However, excessive reliance may undermine our ability to think independently. Therefore, I suggest treating AI as a supplementary tool rather than a shortcut. Always attempt problems on your own before turning to AI for verification or further insight. Ultimately, true understanding stems from our own efforts — AI should only assist, not replace the learning process. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以中华中学高三学生张晶的名义向校英文报投稿，围绕“AI and Our Life”主题分享使用AI的经历，并阐述对高中生使用AI的看法与建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 沮丧：frustration → discouragement/ depression 依赖：reliance → dependence 有挑战性的，有难度的：challenging → demanding 辅助的：supplementary → supportive/ auxiliary 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Instead of simply providing answers, it guided me through detailed explanations and practical examples. 拓展句：Instead of simply providing the answer, it guided me through detailed explanations and practical examples, which turned my confusion into clear understanding and made the abstract concepts much easier to grasp. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I was impressed by its round-the-clock availability and patience, which transformed my frustration into a productive learning experience. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】I believe AI offers significant benefits to high school students when used appropriately. (运用了省略that的宾语从句和状语从句的省略) 3．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高三学生李华，你即将参加学校组织的十八岁成人仪式。请给父母写一封信，表达你的感恩之情，内容需包括： 1.在你成长过程中，父母对你影响最深的一件事； 2.对未来的展望或承诺。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Mom and Dad,     As I stand on the threshold of adulthood, I’m writing to express my deepest gratitude for everything you have given me. Looking back, it’s your quiet, consistent support that has shaped me most. I still remember how, before every important exam, Mom would prepare my favorite meals and Dad would simply pat my shoulder — never pressuring, just silently believing in me. That unwavering faith taught me more about courage and calm than any words could.     In the years to come, I may stumble, I may wander, but I will always carry your love and lessons within me. I promise to face challenges with the same resilience you showed me, to pursue my dreams with integrity, and to become someone who makes you proud not just by achievement, but by character.     Thank you for being my anchors and my wings. With all my love, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以高三学生李华的身份给父母写一封信，在十八岁成人仪式之际表达感恩，回忆成长中父母影响最深的事，并展望未来的承诺。 【详解】1.词汇积累 即将：on the threshold of → on the verge of/on the brink of 坚定不移的：unwavering → steadfast/unshakable 坚韧：resilience → persistence 成就：achievement→ accomplishment 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：I still remember how, before every important exam, Mom would prepare my favorite meals and Dad would simply pat my shoulder — never pressuring, just silently believing in me. 拓展句：I still cherish the memory that before every important exam, Mom would prepare my favorite meals, while Dad would simply pat my shoulder — never pressuring, just silently believing in me. 【点睛】【高分句型1】As I stand on the threshold of adulthood, I’m writing to express my deepest gratitude for everything you have given me. (运用了as引导的时间状语从句和省略that的定语从句) 【高分句型2】I promise to face challenges with the same resilience you showed me, to pursue my dreams with integrity, and to become someone who makes you proud not just by achievement, but by character. (运用了省略that/which的定语从句和who引导的定语从句) 4．Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学的学生王华，你的英国好友Thomas将作为交换生到你校学习，他对“生涯规划”系列活动颇有兴趣，想参加其中一个论坛(forum)。请你给他写一封邮件，从下面海报中推荐一个论坛并谈谈推荐理由。 Planning your future 时间 论坛主题 主讲人 Jan.10 13:00-15:00 探索职业兴趣 Discover career interests 生涯导师 Career tutor Jan.11 9:00-11:00 高效管理时间 Manage time effectively 学生代表 Student representative Jan.11 13:00-15:00 建立友好关系 Build good relationships 心理老师 Psychology teacher （文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Thomas, I was thrilled to hear about your interest in our “Planning Your Future” series! Given that you’ll soon be adjusting to life and studies at Mingqi High School, I’d especially recommend the forum on “Build Good Relationships”. While all the topics are valuable, building connections is truly the foundation for a successful and enjoyable exchange experience. This forum, led by our approachable psychology teacher, will provide practical strategies for making friends, understanding cultural nuances in communication, and seeking support when needed. Starting your journey with strong interpersonal skills will not only ease your transition but also enrich your learning in all other areas, including time management and career exploration later on. It would be a great first step to feel at home here. Let me know if you’d like me to join you! I look forward to your arrival. Best regards, Wang Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以学生王华的身份，给英国交换生Thomas写邮件，从“生涯规划”系列活动中推荐一个论坛并说明理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 推荐：recommend → propose 调整，适应：adjust → adap 实用的：practical →functional 缓解：ease → alleviate 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Starting your journey with strong interpersonal skills will not only ease your transition but also enrich your learning in all other areas, including time management and career exploration later on. 拓展句：Beginning your exchange journey with excellent interpersonal abilities can make your adaptation smoother and enhance your studies in various fields, including time management and career exploration later on. 【点睛】【高分句型1】This forum, led by our approachable psychology teacher, will provide practical strategies for making friends, understanding cultural nuances in communication, and seeking support when needed.(运用了过去分词短语作后置定语) 【高分句型2】Starting your journey with strong interpersonal skills will not only ease your transition but also enrich your learning in all other areas, including time management and career exploration later on. (运用了动名词短语作主语以及“not only...but also...”连接两个并列结构) 5．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 今年，部分学校将试行中小学“春秋假”,即缩减原本的寒暑假期，并在每年春季和秋季两个学期为学生增设相应的短假期。假设你是明启中学的李明，你校正针对这一方案向全体师生征集意见与建议，请你给学生会写一封邮件表达你的看法和建议。内容须包括： 1. 你是否支持设立春秋假； 2. 你的理由。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Dear Students’ Union, I’m Li Ming from Grade 10, and I fully support the introduction of spring and autumn holidays in our school calendar. While summer and winter breaks are long, they often lead to learning loss and irregular routines. Shorter, more frequent breaks — like a week in April and October — could help students recharge without falling behind. These “seasonal holidays” also offer great chances to connect with nature during mild weather, reducing stress and improving mental health. Plus, families could plan meaningful short trips that are more affordable and less crowded than peak-season travel. That said, I suggest these holidays not fall right before exams and that teachers avoid assigning heavy homework during them, so students can truly rest. Thank you for considering my opinion! Best regards, Li Ming 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以明启中学学生李明的身份给学生会写邮件，针对中小学试行“春秋假”的方案表达看法并说明理由，需明确是否支持该方案。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 支持：support → approve of 学习脱节：learning loss → academic regression 恢复精力：recharge → refresh 繁重的作业：heavy homework → excessive assignments 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：These “seasonal holidays” also offer great chances to connect with nature during mild weather, reducing stress and improving mental health. 拓展句：These “seasonal holidays” also offer great chances that enable people to connect with nature during mild weather, reducing stress and improving mental health. 【点睛】【高分句型1】While summer and winter breaks are long, they often lead to learning loss and irregular routines.（运用了while引导的让步状语从句） 【高分句型2】These “seasonal holidays” also offer great chances to connect with nature during mild weather, reducing stress and improving mental health.（运用现在分词短语reducing stress and improving mental health作状语） 6．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学高三学生李华，学校英文杂志社正在举办“New Year, New Me”主题征文活动，邀请同学们分享自己的新年愿望与成长规划。你发现自己近半年存在一些健康方面 的问题，希望改变生活习惯做出调整。请你投稿一篇短文，内容必须包括： (1)描述你目前面临的健康问题(如睡眠不足、缺乏运动、用眼过度等); (2)分析该问题产生的主要原因； (3)你的新年决心及期待的效果。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】As a Senior Three student at Mingqi High School, I’m writing to share my New Year’s resolutions, which are all about fixing my health issues. Lately, I’ve been suffering from sleep deprivation and eye strain. Every day, piles of homework and endless review tasks keep me up till midnight, leaving me tired in class. Also, I spend hours staring at my phone and laptop without breaks, making my eyes sore all the time. Worse still, I have no time for exercise due to my tight study schedule. For a better new year, I resolve to manage my time wisely, finishing homework efficiently to sleep at least eight hours daily. I’ll also take a 10-minute break every hour when studying and do 20 minutes of jogging every evening. I hope these changes will make me healthier and more energetic to face the college entrance exam. 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇征文。要求考生以“New Year, New Me”为题写一篇短文投稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 疲惫的：tired→exhausted 盯着：stare at→fix one’s eyes on 有效地：efficiently→effectively 面对：face→confront 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Every day, piles of homework and endless review tasks keep me up till midnight, leaving me tired in class. 拓展句：Every day, piles of homework and endless review tasks keep me up till midnight, which leaves me tired in class. 【点睛】[高分句型1] As a Senior Three student at Mingqi High School, I’m writing to share my New Year’s resolutions, which are all about fixing my health issues.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句） [高分句型2] I hope these changes will make me healthier and more energetic to face the college entrance exam.（运用了省略了that的宾语从句） 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 重难点13 高分模板：写作表达万能框架 ( 内容导航 速度提升 技巧掌握 手感养成 重难考向聚焦 锁定目标 精准打击： 覆盖五大应用文类型，统一段落逻辑 重难技巧突破 授予利器 瓦解难点： 开头、主体、结尾必背句型，适配所有场景 重难保分练 稳扎稳打 必拿分数 ： 四大核心热点配套金句，直接填充 重难抢分练 突破瓶颈 争夺高分： 模板实战示范 ， 避免模板化生硬，实现个性化高分 重难冲刺练 模拟实战 挑战顶尖： 配套热点题目，强化直接套用能力 。 ) 考点 2021-2025年考情 命题趋势 考点1：建议类书信（5年 7 考） 2025二模普陀（宿舍问题建议）、2025二模徐汇（丰富老年人生活建议）、2025二模闵行（体育大课间活动建议）、2023 秋考（义卖活动改进建议）、2022.1 秋考（晨跑安排建议）、2021.1 秋考（课程选择建议）、2021.6 秋考（课程选择建议） 1. 场景贴近校园/社区生活，聚焦 “问题解决+具体方案”；2. 要求建议务实可操作，需搭配 “建议+理由” 的逻辑链；3. 语气需礼貌得体，兼顾针对性与可行性 考点2：申请/意愿类书信（5年 6 考） 2025二模虹口（寄宿家庭申请）、2025二模杨浦（主题活动选择申请）、2025二模金山（专业选择意愿）、2023 秋考（展览展品申请）、2022.7 秋考（志愿者申请）、2021.1 秋考（课程选择意愿） 1. 核心突出 “意愿+支撑理由”，理由需结合自身优势/需求；2. 常涉及校园活动、专业选择、志愿服务等场景；3. 需明确表达诉求，同时体现匹配度与诚意 考点3：观点/ 看法类书信（5年 4 考） 2025二模长宁（AI 与学习看法）、2025二模崇明（文化传承看法）、2023 秋考（未来生活看法）、2022.1 秋考（人工甜味剂饮料看法） 1. 多涉及热点话题（AI、文化、环保等），要求观点明确；2. 需结合实例（自身经历/社会现象）增强说服力；3. 可采用 “观点+ 理由+补充说明” 的辩证结构 考点4：感谢/慰问类书信（5年 3 考） 2025二模崇明（文化展览感谢信）、2022.7 秋考（帮助他人感谢信）、2021.6 秋考（支持感谢） 1. 场景多为活动参与、他人帮助、指导支持等；2. 需具体提及感谢事由（如活动收获、帮助细节）；3. 语气真挚，可搭配 “收获+展望” 的结尾 一、核心框架：万能结构模板（五大应用文通用） 万能总框架：“三段式黄金结构”（所有题型 100% 适配） 段落 核心功能 字数占比 万能逻辑 首段 点明目的/背景 20%-25% 场景引入→核心目的（1-2 句搞定） 主体段 具体内容/细节 50%-60% 分点展开（3-4 个核心点）→ 细节支撑 末段 总结/呼吁/期待 20%-25% 呼应首段→行动/感谢/期待（1-2 句收尾） 分题型万能框架（直接替换括号内容即可套用） 1.书信类（建议信/感谢信/邀请信/介绍信） 首段：Dear+称谓，I’m writing to （说明目的：put forward suggestions on.../express my thanks for.../invite you to.../introduce...to you）.As （简要背景：a resident of the community/a student of Class 3）, I feel it necessary/pleased to share/advise... 主体段：Firstly, （第一点内容：具体建议/感谢原因/邀请细节/介绍要点）.For example, （补充细节：we can.../you helped me.../the activity will be held.../the festival is famous for...）.Besides, （第二点内容）.What’s more, （第三点内容）—it will help us/to... 末段：I sincerely hope （期待：you can consider my suggestions/you will accept my invitation/you will enjoy the introduction）.Thank you for your time/attention. （结尾客套语：Yours sincerely,/Best wishes,） （署名：Li Hua） 2.通知类 首段：Notice 活动目的：promote.../enrich.../help...）, （发起方：our school/the community） will hold （活动名称：an activity/a competition/a training course）.The details are as follows. 主体段：Time: （具体时间：from...to...on...） （具体地点：the school hall/community activity center） （分点说明：First,...Second,...Besides,...） （参与要求：Please sign up by.../Participants should.../Bring...if necessary） 末段：For more information, contact （联系人/方式：Li Hua at 12345678/su@school.com）.We welcome your active participation! （发起方：The Students’ Union/The Community Service Center） 日期：Month Day, Year） 3.演讲稿类 首段：Good morning/afternoon, everyone! I’m honored to stand here to talk about （演讲主题：“Low-carbon Life”/“Youth and Responsibility”/“Digital Literacy”）.As we all know, （主题背景：this topic is closely related to our daily life/it’s crucial for us to...）. 主体段：Firstly, （第一论点：the importance of.../we should...）.For instance, （举例支撑：last year, I.../a recent survey shows that...）.Secondly, （第二论点）.What’s more, （第三论点）—only in this way can we... 末段：In conclusion, （总结主题）.Let’s （呼吁行动：take action to.../cherish.../improve ourselves）! Thank you! 4.倡议书类 首段：Proposal 背景：the growing awareness of.../the problem of...becoming more serious）, it’s our duty to （倡议核心：take action to.../promote.../protect...）.We hereby put forward the following proposals. 主体段：First, （倡议点 1：we should...by...）.For example, （具体做法：reduce plastic use by bringing reusable bags）.Second, （倡议点 2）.Besides, （倡议点 3）—these small actions will make a great difference. 末段：Let’s join hands to （呼应核心）.Together, we can （预期效果：build a better.../achieve.../pass down...）! （发起方：The Students’ Union/Community Volunteers） 日期：Month Day, Year） 5.留言条/便条类 首段：Dear+称谓，to （说明事由：inform you of.../ask for leave.../consult you about...）. 主体段：（具体信息：时间+事件+要求：I have to...due to.../The homework is...and the activity will be held.../Could you please tell me...）. 末段：Please （客套语：call me back if you have time/accept my apology/let me know your reply）.署名：Li Hua） （日期：Month Day） 二、句型宝库：高分万能句型（直接替换括号内容） 1.开头万能句型（适配所有题型首段） 目的型：I’m writing to （put forward suggestions on.../express my sincere thanks for.../invite you to participate in...）. 背景型：With the rapid development of.../As society progresses,.../In recent years, the problem of...has aroused widespread concern. 引入型：As we all know,.../It’s universally acknowledged that.../There is no doubt that... 通知型：To enrich our campus life/promote environmental protection, we are going to hold... 演讲型：Today, I want to share my views on.../The topic I’m going to talk about is closely related to each of us. 2.主体段万能句型（分点/逻辑衔接） 分点引导：Firstly,.../Second,.../Besides,.../What’s more,.../Last but not least,... 举例支撑：For example,.../For instance,.../Take...as an example,.../A recent experience of mine shows that... 原因分析：The reason why...is that.../Due to.../As a result of.../Because of... 利弊说明：On one hand,...On the other hand,.../Although...,.../However,... 建议提出：We should.../It’s advisable to.../We’d better.../It’s our duty to... 细节补充：In addition,.../Furthermore,.../What’s important is that.../Especially,... 3.结尾万能句型（适配所有题型末段） 期待型：I sincerely hope that.../I’m looking forward to your reply/arrival. 呼吁型：Let’s take action to.../Let’s join hands to.../It’s time for us to... 感谢型：Thank you again for your selfless help/consideration.I really appreciate it. 总结型：In conclusion,.../In short,.../To sum up,.../From what has been mentioned above,... 祝愿型：Best wishes for you!/May you have a wonderful time!/Wish you all the best! 三、话题金句：热点话题万能表达（直接填充） 热点 1：低碳环保与可持续发展 核心金句： a.Living a low-carbon life is not only beneficial to environmental protection but also conducive to sustainable development. b.We can contribute to protecting the planet by reducing plastic use, saving energy and choosing green travel. c.Waste classification is a small action that can make a great difference to building a cleaner world. d.It’s crucial for us to raise environmental awareness and take immediate action to reduce pollution. 热点 2：传统文化传承与文化自信 核心金句： a.Intangible cultural heritage is an important part of Chinese culture, and it’s our responsibility to pass it down. b.Traditional festivals like the Mid-Autumn Festival and Spring Festival symbolize family reunion and carry people’s good wishes. c.Participating in traditional craft activities helps us enhance cultural confidence and learn more about folk art. d.Promoting traditional culture not only enriches our life but also strengthens our national identity. 热点 3：数字生活与信息素养 核心金句： a.Electronic devices bring convenience to our life, but we should use them properly to avoid addiction. b.Improving digital literacy helps us distinguish false information and protect ourselves in the online world. c.Balancing online and offline life is essential for our physical and mental health. d.We should guide the elderly to cross the digital divide and enjoy the convenience of digital life. 热点 4：实践育人与社会责任 核心金句： a.Volunteer service is a meaningful way to contribute to society and cultivate a sense of responsibility. b.Social practice activities help us gain valuable experience and understand the importance of teamwork. c.Caring for others, such as the elderly and left-behind children, makes our society warmer. d.As young people, we should take on our responsibilities and use our youth to make the world a better place. （建议用时：20分钟） 示范 1：建议信（低碳生活） 题目：给社区负责人写一封建议信，建议在社区推广低碳生活。 模板套用过程： 1.首段：套用书信首段模板 "Dear Sir/Madam, writing to put forward suggestions on promoting low-carbon life in our community.As a resident who cares about environmental protection, I feel it necessary to share some practical ideas." 2.主体段：套用分点句型+环保金句 we can post notices to remind residents to save energy by turning off lights and taps when not in use.As we all know, saving energy is crucial for environmental protection.Besides, it’s advisable to improve waste classification facilities and organize volunteers to guide residents—waste classification is a small action that can make a great difference.What’s more, we can encourage green travel by advocating walking or cycling for short trips, which is beneficial to both the environment and our health." 3.末段：套用结尾期待句型 I sincerely hope you can consider my suggestions.Thank you for your attention and efforts in environmental protection.ours sincerely, Li Hua" 套用结果（高分范文）： Dear Sir/Madam, I’m writing to put forward suggestions on promoting low-carbon life in our community.As a resident who cares about environmental protection, I feel it necessary to share some practical ideas. Firstly, we can post notices to remind residents to save energy by turning off lights and taps when not in use.As we all know, saving energy is crucial for environmental protection.Besides, it’s advisable to improve waste classification facilities and organize volunteers to guide residents—waste classification is a small action that can make a great difference.What’s more, we can encourage green travel by advocating walking or cycling for short trips, which is beneficial to both the environment and our health. I sincerely hope you can consider my suggestions.Thank you for your attention and efforts in environmental protection. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 示范 2：演讲稿（科技与生活） 题目：发表“科技与生活”主题演讲稿。 模板套用过程： 1.首段：套用演讲首段模板 "Good morning, everyone! to stand here to talk about“Technology and Life”.As we all know, technology is developing rapidly and has become an indispensable part of our daily life." 2.主体段：套用分点+利弊句型+数字生活金句，technology brings great convenience to us—we can communicate with friends far away through video calls and shop online without going out.For example, during the pandemic, online classes and work from home became possible thanks to technology.Secondly, however, overuse of electronic devices may affect our physical and mental health.It’s crucial for us to use technology properly.What’s more, improving digital literacy helps us make better use of technology and avoid being misled by false information." 3.末段：套用呼吁句型 conclusion, technology is a double-edged sword.Let’s use it wisely to serve our life better and create a more convenient and healthy world! Thank you!" 套用结果（高分范文）： Good morning, everyone! I’m honored to stand here to talk about“Technology and Life”.As we all know, technology is developing rapidly and has become an indispensable part of our daily life. Firstly, technology brings great convenience to us—we can communicate with friends far away through video calls and shop online without going out.For example, during the pandemic, online classes and work from home became possible thanks to technology.Secondly, however, overuse of electronic devices may affect our physical and mental health.It’s crucial for us to use technology properly.What’s more, improving digital literacy helps us make better use of technology and avoid being misled by false information. In conclusion, technology is a double-edged sword.Let’s use it wisely to serve our life better and create a more convenient and healthy world! Thank you! 示范 3：倡议书（践行低碳生活） 题目：发起“践行低碳生活”的倡议书。 模板套用过程： 1.首段：套用倡议书首段模板 "Proposal Dear friends, With the growing awareness of environmental protection, it’s our duty to live a low-carbon life.We hereby put forward the following proposals to build a greener community." 2.主体段：套用倡议分点+环保金句，we should save resources by turning off lights and taps in time and reusing textbooks and bags.Living a low-carbon life is beneficial to sustainable development.Second, we need to reduce pollution by avoiding disposable plastic products and sorting waste properly.What’s more, choose green travel such as walking, cycling or taking public transport instead of private cars—this not only protects the environment but also keeps us healthy." 3.末段：套用呼吁句型 ’s join hands to take immediate action.Together, we can make our life healthier and our planet more beautiful! The Students’ Union June 10, 2026" 套用结果（高分范文）： Proposal Dear friends, With the growing awareness of environmental protection, it’s our duty to live a low-carbon life.We hereby put forward the following proposals to build a greener community. First, we should save resources by turning off lights and taps in time and reusing textbooks and bags.Living a low-carbon life is beneficial to sustainable development.Second, we need to reduce pollution by avoiding disposable plastic products and sorting waste properly.What’s more, choose green travel such as walking, cycling or taking public transport instead of private cars—this not only protects the environment but also keeps us healthy. Let’s join hands to take immediate action.Together, we can make our life healthier and our planet more beautiful! The Students’ Union June 10, 2026 （建议用时：20分钟） 技巧 1：替换同义表达（打破模板同质化） 基础模板句：We should save energy. 优化后：It’s advisable to conserve energy./We are supposed to cherish energy resources. 基础模板句：It’s important to protect the environment.> 优化后：It’s crucial/vital/significant to safeguard the environment. 技巧 2：添加个性化细节（让模板“活”起来） 通用模板：For example, we can do something.：For example, last month our class organized a tree-planting activity in the community, and we planted over 50 trees—this small action helped green our neighborhood. 技巧 3：灵活调整句型结构（避免排比式生硬） 生硬模板：First, we should...Second, we should...Besides, we should...后：To begin with, we can...Furthermore, it’s a good idea to...What’s more, we may... 技巧 4：匹配语气与对象（细节加分） 对官方/长辈：I would appreciate it if you could.../We sincerely hope that...（正式礼貌） 对朋友/同学：It’s great to.../Let’s try our best to...（亲切自然） （建议用时：40分钟） 1．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 当下，年轻人消费日益注重“情绪价值”, 推动了以汉服、盲盒、剧场体验等为代表的“情绪经济(emotion economy)”的兴起。学校英语报现举办以“我看情绪经济”为主题的征文活动，请你以学生李华的身份投稿，分享你对这一现象的理解与思考。 请确保你的稿件包含以下内容： 1)简述对此现象的理解； 2)结合具体事例，谈谈你对此现象的看法。 (注：文中不得出现考生姓名、学校等真实个人信息。) _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是中华中学的高三学生张晶，你校英文报正在开展“AI and Our Life”的主题征文活动。 你有意参加，你的征文内容须包括： 1.具体描述一次你使用AI 的经历和感受; 2.谈谈你对高中学生使用AI 的看法和建议。 注：文中不得透露你的真实信息。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高三学生李华，你即将参加学校组织的十八岁成人仪式。请给父母写一封信，表达你的感恩之情，内容需包括： 1.在你成长过程中，父母对你影响最深的一件事； 2.对未来的展望或承诺。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学的学生王华，你的英国好友Thomas将作为交换生到你校学习，他对“生涯规划”系列活动颇有兴趣，想参加其中一个论坛(forum)。请你给他写一封邮件，从下面海报中推荐一个论坛并谈谈推荐理由。 Planning your future 时间 论坛主题 主讲人 Jan.10 13:00-15:00 探索职业兴趣 Discover career interests 生涯导师 Career tutor Jan.11 9:00-11:00 高效管理时间 Manage time effectively 学生代表 Student representative Jan.11 13:00-15:00 建立友好关系 Build good relationships 心理老师 Psychology teacher （文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 今年，部分学校将试行中小学“春秋假”,即缩减原本的寒暑假期，并在每年春季和秋季两个学期为学生增设相应的短假期。假设你是明启中学的李明，你校正针对这一方案向全体师生征集意见与建议，请你给学生会写一封邮件表达你的看法和建议。内容须包括： 1. 你是否支持设立春秋假； 2. 你的理由。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学高三学生李华，学校英文杂志社正在举办“New Year, New Me”主题征文活动，邀请同学们分享自己的新年愿望与成长规划。你发现自己近半年存在一些健康方面 的问题，希望改变生活习惯做出调整。请你投稿一篇短文，内容必须包括： (1)描述你目前面临的健康问题(如睡眠不足、缺乏运动、用眼过度等); 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