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重难点11 概要写作:信息整合精炼法 ( 内容导航 速度提升 技巧掌握 手感养成 重难考向聚焦 锁定目标 精准打击: 明确近 5 年题型分布、命题特征,精准定位提分重点 重难技巧突破 授予利器 瓦解难点: 拆解四大信息整合精炼技巧,搭配真题实例深化理解 重难保分练 稳扎稳打 必拿分数 : 针对单一整合类型训练,夯实核心信息提炼基本功 重难抢分练 突破瓶颈 争夺高分: 聚焦复杂文本整合、逻辑连贯表达、冗余信息剔除 重难冲刺练 模拟实战 挑战顶尖: 完整概要训练,还原命题场景,强化字数把控与得分效率 ) 考点 2021-2025年考情 命题趋势 考点1:现象 - 原因-对策类(5年6 考) 2025 秋考;2023 秋考;2022.7 秋考;2021.6 秋考;2025 二模杨浦;2025 二模浦东 1. 核心考查 “现象描述→原因分析→解决方案” 的逻辑链整合;2. 需提炼关键因果关系,省略具体数据和例证;3. 优先保留原文核心对策,弱化次要建议 考点2:观点对比类(5年5 考) 2025 二模普陀;2025 二模青浦;2025 二模崇明;2022.1 秋考;2021.1 秋考 1. 明确不同立场的核心观点,避免片面表述;2. 用简洁连词(while/however)衔接对立观点;3. 提炼作者最终倾向,不遗漏关键态度 考点3:概念 - 特征 - 影响类(5年4考) 2025 二模闵行;2025 二模静安;2023 秋考;2021.6 秋考 1. 精准概括核心概念定义,不添加额外释义;2. 筛选最关键的特征(3 个以内)和影响;3. 避免复制原文专业术语,用通俗表达转述 考点4:研究 - 发现 - 结论类(5 年 3 考) 2025 秋考;2025 二模长宁;2022.7 秋考 1. 提炼研究的核心对象、方法和关键发现;2. 保留结论中的建议或启示;3. 省略研究过程中的细节数据和实验步骤 技巧 1:现象 - 原因 - 对策类 —— 逻辑链压缩法(对应考点 1) 核心步骤:定位现象(主题句)→ 提炼核心原因(≤2 个)→ 筛选关键对策(≤2 个) 精炼原则:删除具体案例、数据和冗余形容词,用 “现象 + 原因 + 对策” 的简洁结构整合 常用衔接词:due to/owing to;thus/therefore;to address this/in response to 真题例题(2025 二模杨浦・原文节选) Urban green spaces play a vital role in improving the quality of life in cities. Studies have shown the various benefits brought about by green spaces. For example, research from the University of Exeter found that people living near green spaces reported higher levels of happiness and life satisfaction. However, many cities are facing the challenge of preserving these spaces due to rapid urbanization. In some areas, parks are being replaced by commercial buildings or housing projects to meet the growing demand for space. Meanwhile, the tendency to cut funding for the maintenance of urban green spaces is becoming increasingly common. For example, in Liverpool, UK, budget cuts led to reduced maintenance in parks, with less frequent tree trimming and litter collection. These short-sighted approaches ignore the long-term benefits of green spaces, such as their ability to combat climate change by absorbing carbon dioxide and reducing urban heat. It is high time that governments acknowledged the significance of investing in the preservation of green spaces. Only by integrating green spaces into city designs can we create truly habitable and sustainable urban environments. 概要答案:Urban green spaces benefit city life, but rapid urbanization and funding cuts threaten their preservation. Governments should integrate green spaces into city designs to ensure sustainable urban environments.(41 词) 技巧 2:观点对比类 —— 立场提炼法(对应考点 2) 核心步骤:识别对立立场(双方 / 多方观点)→ 提炼每方核心论点(1-2 个)→ 点明作者倾向(若有) 精炼原则:避免重复表述,用对比连词衔接,不遗漏关键立场 常用衔接词:while/whereas;on the one hand...on the other;however/nevertheless 真题例题(2025 二模普陀・原文节选) As technologies become more human-like, there’s been a push to make them genderless. However, Stanford’s Ashley Martin suggests that people still have a fixed perception of gendered objects in traditional ways. While removing gender might seem like a simple way to fix it, Martin’s research indicates that gender remains a fundamental way people form connections with products. While gendering products may be good marketing, it may also emphasize outdated or harmful ideas about power and identity. The qualities commonly associated with men, such as competitiveness and dominance, are more valued than those associated with women. Yet Martin’s study also found that creating a gender-neutral object was difficult. However, Martin sees a silver lining: she believes humanizing products can reduce or reverse stereotypes. 概要答案:Though there’s a push for genderless technology, Martin’s research shows gendered products enhance people’s connection and marketing effect but may reinforce stereotypes. Creating gender-neutral products is hard, and humanizing products may reverse biases.(45 词) 技巧 3:概念 - 特征 - 影响类 —— 核心要素提取法(对应考点 3) 核心步骤:定义核心概念(1 句话)→ 筛选关键特征(本质属性)→ 概括主要影响(积极 / 消极) 精炼原则:删除举例、比喻和修饰性语句,保留 “概念 + 特征 + 影响” 的核心框架 常用衔接词:with/which;thus/therefore;not only...but also... 真题例题(2025 二模闵行・原文节选) Do you love forest bathing or taking walks in the forests? Then once in a while, you’ve witnessed a somewhat appealing phenomenon in which tree crowns in the forest seem to deliberately keep to themselves and avoid touching each other. Strange as this may seem, it is, in fact, a natural phenomenon and has a name: crown shyness. There are many theories behind this fascinating phenomenon, but the most convincing one relates to competition and defense. By maintaining gaps between their crowns, they can maximize their intake of these necessities, ensuring healthy growth and a balanced ecosystem. Additionally, crown shyness acts as a protective barrier against insects and diseases. Crown shyness allows each tree to access enough sunlight... It also plays a role in reducing wind resistance. 概要答案:Crown shyness, a natural phenomenon where tree crowns avoid touching, mainly results from competition for resources and defense needs. It benefits forests by ensuring sunlight access and reducing wind damage.(38 词) 技巧 4:研究 - 发现 - 结论类 —— 实验结果浓缩法(对应考点 4) 核心步骤:明确研究对象 / 目的→ 提炼关键发现(≤2 个)→ 概括结论 / 建议 精炼原则:省略研究过程、样本数据和实验细节,聚焦 “目的 + 发现 + 结论” 常用衔接词:find/show/indicate;therefore/thus;it is suggested that 真题例题(2025 秋考・原文节选) The universe expands with every passing second, stretching the space between galaxies like dough rising in an oven. But just how fast is this expansion happening? As telescopes like Hubble strive to answer this fundamental question, they encounter a perplexing gap between theoretical predictions and observed data. Hubble’s measurements indicate a faster rate of expansion in the modern universe compared to what was expected based on observations of the universe more than 13 billion years ago by the European Space Agency’s Planck satellite. Recent data from the Hubble telescope have significantly reduced the possibility that this discrepancy is merely a statistical fluke. To determine distances in the universe, scientists rely on a “cosmic distance ladder” method. Despite increased precision, their calculated Hubble constant remains at odds with the value predicted by Planck. 概要答案:Scientists use Hubble and Planck to study the universe’s expansion rate, but there’s a gap between their measurements. Recent Hubble data show the discrepancy is not a fluke, though the constant still conflicts with Planck’s prediction.(43 词) (建议用时:20分钟) 类别 1:现象 - 原因 - 对策类 1.(2025 二模松江・原文节选) You Could Have “Recycling Misconception”!A decades-long effort to educate people about recycling has mostly backfired. The study found that an overemphasis on recycling has distracted us from better options like generating less waste. When asked to rank the Three Rs, nearly half got the answer wrong. Michaela Barnett owes this “recycling misconception” to corporate campaigns shifting blame to individuals. Recycling rules are confusing, like the “chasing arrows” symbol misleading consumers. Less than 10% of global plastic is recycled. True progress demands reducing consumption and holding corporations accountable for sustainable manufacturing. 答案:A study shows decades of recycling education backfired, leading to “recycling misconception” due to corporate blame-shifting and confusing rules. True progress requires less consumption and corporate accountability.(40 词) 2.(2022.7 秋考・原文节选) The pet food industry has received unkind remarks as to the true origin of its ingredients for decades. Now the industry faces another source of criticism as a new book starts a debate about the environmental impact of owning a well-fed pet. The book’s authors say that some pets have a surprisingly high “ecological footprint”. For example, the eco-footprint of a cat is almost the same as what is needed to run a small car. The authors put forward ideas like processing pests into cat food to attenuate this impact. The Pet Food Manufacturers Association defends that the meat and fish used in pet foods are of sufficient quality for human consumption but more than humans need. Recycling these by-products avoids waste. 答案:The pet food industry faces criticism over ingredient origin and pets’ high ecological footprint, with the book proposing solutions like pest-based pet food. The industry defends itself by noting recycled by-products avoid waste.(42 词) 类别 2:观点对比类 1.(2021.1 秋考・原文节选) Ann Grand is a visual thinker. When somebody speaks to her, the words are instantly translated into pictures. Unlike most people, her thoughts move from video-like images to generalizations. Her memories usually appear in order of time, and the images are always specific. Visual thinking has enabled Grand to build entire systems in her imagination. This was important to her as an equipment designer. Before construction, she would test-run the equipment in her mind. Her sharp awareness of details led to noteworthy observations about animals, helping her create better designs. 答案:Ann Grand is a visual thinker who thinks in specific, time-ordered images. This ability helped her test equipment mentally as a designer and make detailed observations to improve her animal-related designs.(39 词) 2.(2022.1 秋考・原文节选) Artificially sweetened diet drinks make no difference to weight gain and should not be seen as healthier. A review concludes there is nothing to support claims that sugar-free drinks can help prevent obesity. Industry sponsored studies may be biased. There have been concerns that diet drinks might lead people to consume more calories by stimulating sweet taste buds. The new study found that evidence relating to the healthiness of these drinks was inconclusive. Leading nutritionist Professor Susan Jebb said replacing sugary drinks with artificially sweetened alternatives did no harm. Dietitian Professor Tom Sanders criticized the research as an opinion piece. 答案:Artificially sweetened drinks aren’t healthier or helpful for weight loss, with inconclusive health evidence and potential industry bias. Experts hold different views on the research, but replacing sugary drinks with them is harmless.(43 词) 类别 3:概念 - 特征 - 影响类 1.(2025 二模黄浦・原文节选) Does this situation sound familiar? A friend asks “Hey, what are you up to this weekend?” You reply, and she immediately shares her own plan. I call this “boomerasking”. Boomeraskers ask a question, let others answer and then bring the focus back to themselves. For many people, self-disclosure feels great. But boomerasking is the worst way as it takes away the benefits of asking questions. Sincere questions and listening build understanding and connection. Boomerasking makes others feel unimportant. So don’t boomerask! Focus on others when they share their perspective before talking about yourself. 答案:“Boomerasking” refers to asking a question but quickly shifting the conversation to oneself. Though it satisfies self-disclosure, it ruins the benefits of sincere communication. We should focus on others first.(37 词) 2.(2023 秋考・原文节选) Teenagers should be pulled off the sofa. For many years, scientists thought that the human brain was fully mature before the teen years. However, more recent research shows that although the brain reaches its maximum size between the ages of 12 and 14, brain development is not yet complete. The brain's functionally different sections communicate through synapses. Scientists have found that synapses grow or die away depending on how much they are used. Teenagers can shape their brain development through choices. During this period, used cells and connections survive, while unused ones die. Therefore, what teenagers do could affect their rest of life. 答案:Contrary to previous beliefs, teenagers’ brain development is incomplete even when reaching maximum size. Synapses’ survival depends on usage, so teenagers’ choices can shape their brain and influence their future.(39 词) 类别 4:研究 - 发现 - 结论类 1.(2025 二模长宁・原文节选) How many digital devices do you use throughout the day? These devices give off blue light. The question is: Should you be concerned? According to WebMD, there is no current proof that regular exposure to blue light leads to long-term eye damage. Yet several other studies seem to demonstrate a connection. Blue wavelengths are good for attention during the day but may affect sleep at night by misleading the body into believing it’s still daytime. To lessen risks, reducing screen brightness and using blue-light-blocking apps can help. The most effective approach is to avoid digital devices before bed. 答案:Opinions vary on whether blue light from digital devices harms health. It boosts daytime attention but may disrupt sleep. To reduce risks, lower screen brightness, use relevant apps and avoid devices before bed.(38 词) 2.(2023 秋考・原文节选) Doctors operate in a world of statistics and probability. Yet they’ve long been taught to convey confidence. Now experts ask whether this certainty does more harm than good. With information overload, answers are rarely black or white. Medicine has always fallen short of the certainty in math. Doctors in training need to be accustomed to weighing odds. Technology has helped redefine the quest for certainty. Computers can give more accurate diagnoses than doctors but can’t communicate with patients in a comforting way. 答案:Doctors are taught to convey certainty, but experts question this as medical answers are rarely absolute. Trainee doctors need to weigh odds, and while technology aids accurate diagnoses, it lacks comforting communication.(40 词) (建议用时:20分钟) 类别 1:现象 - 原因 - 对策类 1.(2025 秋考・原文节选) Remote work has become increasingly prevalent in recent years, especially after the global pandemic. Many employees appreciate its flexibility, such as saving time on commuting and balancing work with family life. However, this work mode also brings challenges. A survey shows that over 60% of remote workers report feeling isolated, and nearly half struggle with work-life boundaries, often working longer hours than in offices. Experts point out that the lack of face-to-face interaction and unclear work schedules are the main causes. To address these issues, companies are advised to organize regular online team-building activities and set clear working hour guidelines. Employees can also create dedicated workspaces at home to separate work from daily life. 答案:Remote work is popular for its flexibility but causes isolation and blurred work-life boundaries due to insufficient interaction and unclear schedules. Companies and employees should take measures like team-building activities and dedicated workspaces to solve these problems.(45 词) 2.(2025 二模浦东・原文节选) Food waste has become a serious global issue. It is estimated that one-third of all food produced worldwide is wasted each year, from farm to table. This not only wastes resources like water and land but also contributes to environmental pollution. The main reasons include overproduction by retailers to avoid stockouts, improper storage by consumers, and strict aesthetic standards for fruits and vegetables (many are discarded for being “imperfect”). To reduce food waste, retailers can adopt flexible ordering systems, and consumers should plan meals in advance. Governments can also promote food donation programs and raise public awareness. 答案:Food waste is a severe global problem, wasting resources and polluting the environment. It is mainly caused by overproduction, improper storage and strict aesthetic standards. Retailers, consumers and governments should take corresponding measures to tackle it.(40 词) 类别 2:观点对比类 1.(2025 二模青浦・原文节选) Should schools ban homework on weekends? This debate has aroused widespread attention. Supporters argue that weekends should be a time for students to rest and develop hobbies, as excessive homework increases stress and leaves no time for family activities. They believe that quality rest can improve academic performance in the long run. Opponents, however, hold that weekend homework helps consolidate knowledge learned during the week, especially for students who need extra practice. They worry that banning homework would lead to a decline in academic performance, as students might spend too much time on entertainment instead of study. Educators suggest that the key is not to ban homework but to optimize its quality and quantity, ensuring it is meaningful and not overly burdensome. 答案:There’s a debate over whether to ban weekend homework. Supporters believe it allows students to rest and reduce stress, while opponents argue it helps consolidate knowledge. Educators suggest optimizing homework’s quality and quantity instead of banning it.(42 词) 2.(2021.6 秋考・原文节选) Some people believe that social media has strengthened interpersonal relationships by enabling people to stay in touch with friends and family far away. They argue that platforms like WeChat and Facebook make communication more convenient, allowing people to share daily life and support each other anytime. Others disagree, claiming that social media weakens real relationships. They point out that many people spend too much time scrolling through social media, neglecting face-to-face interactions. A study shows that heavy social media users are more likely to feel lonely than those who use it moderately. 答案:Opinions are divided on social media’s impact on relationships. Some say it strengthens connections by facilitating convenient communication, while others argue it weakens real interactions and causes loneliness due to excessive use.(39 词) 类别 3:概念 - 特征 - 影响类 1.(2025 二模静安・原文节选) “Digital minimalism” is a lifestyle that emphasizes reducing unnecessary digital consumption to focus on what truly matters. Its core features include limiting social media use, uninstalling unused apps, and setting specific times for checking emails and messages. Digital minimalists believe that this lifestyle can reduce stress caused by information overload and improve focus. It also allows more time for physical activities, face-to-face communication and personal growth. However, it does not mean abandoning digital tools entirely—instead, it advocates using them intentionally and purposefully. 答案:Digital minimalism is a lifestyle of reducing unnecessary digital consumption, featuring limited social media use and intentional tool application. It reduces stress, improves focus and frees up time for meaningful activities without abandoning digital tools.(41 词) 2.(2022.7 秋考・原文节选) “Silent tourism” has emerged as a new travel trend in recent years. Unlike traditional tourism that involves visiting crowded attractions and taking photos, silent tourism focuses on quiet experiences, such as hiking in remote mountains, reading in a local library, or simply enjoying the scenery in a peaceful village. This trend reflects people’s desire to escape the noise and stress of urban life. It allows travelers to connect more deeply with nature and local culture, and promotes sustainable tourism by reducing the impact on popular attractions. However, it requires travelers to be more patient and mindful. 答案:Silent tourism, a new travel trend different from traditional crowded tourism, focuses on quiet experiences. It meets people’s need to escape urban stress, deepens connections with nature and culture, and promotes sustainable tourism with required mindfulness.(40 词) 类别 4:研究 - 发现 - 结论类 1.(2022.7 秋考・原文节选) A team of researchers from Harvard University conducted a study on the relationship between reading paper books and e-books. They recruited 200 participants, dividing them into two groups: one group read a novel in paper form, and the other read the same novel on an e-reader. After finishing the book, participants took a test on plot details and character memories. The results showed that the paper book group scored 20% higher than the e-book group. Researchers concluded that reading paper books helps with deeper comprehension and longer retention, as the physical experience of turning pages and seeing the book’s layout aids memory. 答案:Harvard researchers studied the difference between reading paper books and e-books with 200 participants. The paper book group performed better in comprehension and memory tests, leading to the conclusion that paper books aid deeper understanding and longer retention.(43 词) 2.(2021.6 秋考・原文节选) Scientists at the University of California carried out an experiment to explore the effects of music on plant growth. They grew three groups of tomato plants: one group was exposed to classical music for 3 hours a day, another to rock music, and the third to no music at all. After two months, the researchers measured the plants’ height and fruit yield. The results indicated that the plants exposed to classical music grew 15% taller and produced 20% more fruit than the control group. The rock music group showed no significant difference from the group with no music. The scientists suggested that classical music’s regular rhythm may stimulate plant growth. 答案:UC scientists experimented on tomato plants’ growth with classical music, rock music and no music. Classical music made plants taller and more productive, while rock music had no effect, suggesting classical music’s rhythm stimulates growth.(40 词) (建议用时:30分钟) 1.Directions:Read the following passage.Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible. What is AI’s Role in Art Creation? As artificial intelligence advances across creative fields, a question emerges: Do people want AI to become an artist or simply a tool for artistic creation? Evidence suggests that while the public is increasingly familiar with AI systems, they would prefer to see AI supporting human creativity rather than replacing it. A key reason lies in the human dimension of art. When people picture their favorite works, say, Van Gogh’s The Starry Night, what they value is not merely technical delivery but the emotional depth tied to human experience. In a recent survey, over 60 percent said they would value their favorite artwork less if told it was AI-produced. Their responses highlight a shared belief: People seek the imaginative struggles and personal histories behind creative works, a quality machines cannot genuinely copy. Concerns about originality and copyright strengthen this resistance. Respondents criticized AI outputs as unoriginal, seeing them as mere reflections of models trained on vast quantities of human-created materials. The possibility of unauthorized data use and unclear artistic ownership fuels distrust. These worries reveal why people hesitate to view AI-generated materials-especially films-as real art: It lacks clear authorship and true creative intention. Yet attitudes shift when AI assists rather than replaces human artists. Forty-two percent of participants regarded users of AI as artists who provided clear creative direction — a sign of openness to human-AI collaboration. This perspective points to a real obstacle in today’s creative world: Many individuals with ideas lack the resources or skills to realize them. In such cases, AI can serve as an enabling tool, lowering costs and expanding access to creative expression. Ultimately, people value art as a human-centered means of connection. While AI can broaden artistic possibilities, it’s best used as a tool that supports and enriches human vision. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible. Catania Turns the Tables on Blue Crabs In a suburb of Catania on Sicily’s east coast, smoke rises from street stalls grilling horse meat, while youngsters gather around counters selling seltz limone e sale — a soda drink with lemon and sea salt. Amid this lively scene, a family of ex-fishers, the Salamones, have opened La Fish, a seafood restaurant that dares to challenge local diet traditions. Alongside Sicily’s classics like swordfish (剑鱼) and tuna, tonight’s tasting menu features a surprising newcomer to the island’s tables — the Atlantic blue crab. These blue-clawed, olive-shelled crabs, originally from the western Atlantic Ocean, have become an ecological threat in the Mediterranean. Without natural enemies, they feed on young clams, destroying shellfish harvests and destroying Italy’s reputation as one of the world’s top clam producers. Their rapid spread has been linked to rising sea temperatures, which have made Sicilian waters increasingly welcoming to non-native species. What began as an environmental concern is gradually turning into a test of human adaptability. People in Sicily are responding in creative ways. One form of response comes from chef Mario Contadino, who celebrates the crab’s sweet and delicate flavor. He serves it on sticky sushi rice with onions, bell peppers, garlic, tomatoes, celery, and edible (可食用的) flowers to appeal to hesitant locals. “Catania people can be closed-minded, “he admits, “but that first bite does not lie. “Another response comes from scientists. Marine biologist Francesco Tiralongo of the University of Catania argues that embracing such non-native species in local diets is”a necessary response to climate change and ecological challenges. “ Social acceptance is following slowly but steadily. In the fish market behind Piazza del Duomo, shopkeeper Rosario now sells 20 kilograms of blue crab a day, saying customers love its taste. Meanwhile, the Salamone family turns the outsider into opportunity: by presenting blue crab as a fancy food, they show that”anything can be edible. “ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point (s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible. Winter Home Cooking In winter, when days shorten too quickly, cooking helps me keep a clear sense of time rather than soften feelings. Water boiling at six, bread warming at seven, dishes washed before eight give order to evenings that might otherwise fade into each other. It is not comfort I seek, but a simple structure that keeps the season from collapsing into sameness. Recipes that require only salt, heat and patience appeal to me most. Cutting the vegetables into equal pieces and watching them cook at a steady pace offers a small but steady sense of control, which is rare in winter weeks filled with delays and sudden changes. The kitchen does not ask me to feel better, only to follow steps that stay predictable. Cooking is one of the few tasks in which progress is visible. Soup deepens, rice softens, sauce thickens, and each minute has form. Unlike scrolling through messages or sitting in long silence, the cooker gives feedback I can trust. Winter often slows thought without slowing hours, and cooking helps bring them back into agreement. Some dishes come from memory rather than instruction. A noodle soup my grandmother made on cold weekends, or apples baked the way she preferred, returns without ceremony. Winter does not make these meals sentimental, only familiar. The warmth is not emotional but a quiet link to past routines, a small record of hands that cooked before mine. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4.Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible. Social media posts Like other millennials, Ms. Yu, a graphic designer, went through her bumpy teen years amid the rise of first-wave social media such as Friendster and Myspace. “Social media was very interesting and fresh to me, as it was a convenient way to connect with others,” she recalls. About three years ago, however, she started feeling less rosy about social media. “I was spending so much time taking photos to post online, hoping to get positive comments. I would be embarrassed if I received few ‘likes’ for my posts. I would ask myself, ‘Why did more people like someone else’s posts but not mine? Are my posts not good enough? Am I not good enough?’” Ms. Yu was eventually able to overcome her self-doubt by cutting back on time spent on social media, and using it only in cases where it would potentially boost rather than weaken her confidence. Her experience highlights the double-edged nature of social media. Clinical Psychologist Ms. Michelle Tan notes that it can be a powerful tool for relieving social isolation and loneliness. Online communities provide emotional support, often helping users turn online connections with like-minded people into real-life friendships. They can also serve as a motivational tool for achieving goals like quitting smoking or getting in shape. On the other hand, it could invite negative social comparisons with other online users and lower a person’s self-worth. Excessive virtual engagement may weaken real-life social skills. Also, being anonymous online makes cyberbullying more likely. Still, mental health issues can’t be blamed solely on social media, as multiple factors play a role. The key, therefore, is to develop healthy online habits (or cyber wellness).“To be cyber well on social media is to strike a healthy balance between online and offline activities,” says Mrs Low-Lim, a member of the Media Literacy Council. A person’s daily living and social functioning should not be affected by social media. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5.Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible. What’s the best way to fell a tree? Felling a tree is naturally dangerous, and without proper chainsaw training, hiring a professional tree surgeon is essential. While the underlying principles are straightforward, the risks are high. The optimal time for felling is winter, when trees are inactive. For deciduous (落叶的) trees, the absence of leaves is critical, as dense leaves can act like a sail in the wind, making the tree’s fall direction unpredictable. Always call a professional if power lines, buildings, or unusual trunk shapes are involved. Preparation is vital. Ensure your chainsaw is sharp, fueled, and oiled. Select a clear, open direction for the tree to fall, ensuring people and pets are a safe distance away. Remember that trees are often much larger than they appear, so accurately judge their height and width. Crucially, plan and clear a swift escape route away from the intended fall path. The cutting process involves two main stages. First, create a directional notch (切口) on the side facing the fall direction. About 60cm from the ground, make a 70-degree downward cut into one-third of the trunk’s diameter. Then, make a horizontal cut to meet the first, removing the wedge of wood. Next, move to the opposite side to make the felling cut. Saw horizontally, just above the notch’s base. Once a third of the way through, pause to drive in felling wedges (楔子). These prevent the saw from binding and guide the tree to fall correctly. Continue cutting until only a tenth of the trunk remains, forming a “hinge.” Remove the saw. If a loud crack signals the tree is falling, walk calmly along your escape route—never run with a chainsaw. If it remains standing, carefully tap the wedges further. Should any complications arise, retreat to a safe distance and immediately call for professional assistance.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6.Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible. Mercury (汞)Threat in Ocean A newly-published study, led by researchers from Peking University with experts from the United States, the United Kingdom and the Netherlands, has found that ocean, with its continental shelf holding the largest amount of mercury, is now facing a rapidly increasing possibility of mercury release. According to the study, continental shelves are disturbed by human activities. Trawling, during which fishermen pull wide nets behind their ships for fish, is one to blame. When the fishing boats with large nets drag through the seabed, they boost the release rate of mercury buried for decades or centuries. The research also uncovered the similar negative impact of dredging, where people remove mud and unwanted materials from the shelf with special machines to deepen it or look for something. The above activities disturb over 5,000 tons of mercury annually, speeding up its release. Meanwhile, climate change is worsening the situation. The researchers have concluded from their observation that the increasing quantity of mercury release in recent decades from ocean is related to global warming, a tendency with various side effects. They explained that rising temperatures put the decomposition of organic matter in continental shelves on a faster track, promoting the amount of mercury release. Another study on waters, continental shelf being a part, has shown that for every 10℃ increase in temperature, the breakdown rate of sediments (沉积物) almost doubles. Therefore, it is suggested that policies be made on banning or at least reducing inappropriate ocean resource development based on scientific assessment and international cooperation. And a clear goal for a slower global warming pace, supported by reliable scientific research, should be set and then translated into an actionable strategy and achieved worldwide. If these measures are adopted, this last line of mercury defense will probably be safeguarded. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权,侵权必究! 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $ 重难点11 概要写作:信息整合精炼法 ( 内容导航 速度提升 技巧掌握 手感养成 重难考向聚焦 锁定目标 精准打击: 明确近 5 年题型分布、命题特征,精准定位提分重点 重难技巧突破 授予利器 瓦解难点: 拆解四大信息整合精炼技巧,搭配真题实例深化理解 重难保分练 稳扎稳打 必拿分数 : 针对单一整合类型训练,夯实核心信息提炼基本功 重难抢分练 突破瓶颈 争夺高分: 聚焦复杂文本整合、逻辑连贯表达、冗余信息剔除 重难冲刺练 模拟实战 挑战顶尖: 完整概要训练,还原命题场景,强化字数把控与得分效率 ) 考点 2021-2025年考情 命题趋势 考点1:现象 - 原因-对策类(5年6 考) 2025 秋考;2023 秋考;2022.7 秋考;2021.6 秋考;2025 二模杨浦;2025 二模浦东 1. 核心考查 “现象描述→原因分析→解决方案” 的逻辑链整合;2. 需提炼关键因果关系,省略具体数据和例证;3. 优先保留原文核心对策,弱化次要建议 考点2:观点对比类(5年5 考) 2025 二模普陀;2025 二模青浦;2025 二模崇明;2022.1 秋考;2021.1 秋考 1. 明确不同立场的核心观点,避免片面表述;2. 用简洁连词(while/however)衔接对立观点;3. 提炼作者最终倾向,不遗漏关键态度 考点3:概念 - 特征 - 影响类(5年4考) 2025 二模闵行;2025 二模静安;2023 秋考;2021.6 秋考 1. 精准概括核心概念定义,不添加额外释义;2. 筛选最关键的特征(3 个以内)和影响;3. 避免复制原文专业术语,用通俗表达转述 考点4:研究 - 发现 - 结论类(5 年 3 考) 2025 秋考;2025 二模长宁;2022.7 秋考 1. 提炼研究的核心对象、方法和关键发现;2. 保留结论中的建议或启示;3. 省略研究过程中的细节数据和实验步骤 技巧 1:现象 - 原因 - 对策类 —— 逻辑链压缩法(对应考点 1) 核心步骤:定位现象(主题句)→ 提炼核心原因(≤2 个)→ 筛选关键对策(≤2 个) 精炼原则:删除具体案例、数据和冗余形容词,用 “现象 + 原因 + 对策” 的简洁结构整合 常用衔接词:due to/owing to;thus/therefore;to address this/in response to 真题例题(2025 二模杨浦・原文节选) Urban green spaces play a vital role in improving the quality of life in cities. Studies have shown the various benefits brought about by green spaces. For example, research from the University of Exeter found that people living near green spaces reported higher levels of happiness and life satisfaction. However, many cities are facing the challenge of preserving these spaces due to rapid urbanization. In some areas, parks are being replaced by commercial buildings or housing projects to meet the growing demand for space. Meanwhile, the tendency to cut funding for the maintenance of urban green spaces is becoming increasingly common. For example, in Liverpool, UK, budget cuts led to reduced maintenance in parks, with less frequent tree trimming and litter collection. These short-sighted approaches ignore the long-term benefits of green spaces, such as their ability to combat climate change by absorbing carbon dioxide and reducing urban heat. It is high time that governments acknowledged the significance of investing in the preservation of green spaces. Only by integrating green spaces into city designs can we create truly habitable and sustainable urban environments. 概要答案:Urban green spaces benefit city life, but rapid urbanization and funding cuts threaten their preservation. Governments should integrate green spaces into city designs to ensure sustainable urban environments.(41 词) 技巧 2:观点对比类 —— 立场提炼法(对应考点 2) 核心步骤:识别对立立场(双方 / 多方观点)→ 提炼每方核心论点(1-2 个)→ 点明作者倾向(若有) 精炼原则:避免重复表述,用对比连词衔接,不遗漏关键立场 常用衔接词:while/whereas;on the one hand...on the other;however/nevertheless 真题例题(2025 二模普陀・原文节选) As technologies become more human-like, there’s been a push to make them genderless. However, Stanford’s Ashley Martin suggests that people still have a fixed perception of gendered objects in traditional ways. While removing gender might seem like a simple way to fix it, Martin’s research indicates that gender remains a fundamental way people form connections with products. While gendering products may be good marketing, it may also emphasize outdated or harmful ideas about power and identity. The qualities commonly associated with men, such as competitiveness and dominance, are more valued than those associated with women. Yet Martin’s study also found that creating a gender-neutral object was difficult. However, Martin sees a silver lining: she believes humanizing products can reduce or reverse stereotypes. 概要答案:Though there’s a push for genderless technology, Martin’s research shows gendered products enhance people’s connection and marketing effect but may reinforce stereotypes. Creating gender-neutral products is hard, and humanizing products may reverse biases.(45 词) 技巧 3:概念 - 特征 - 影响类 —— 核心要素提取法(对应考点 3) 核心步骤:定义核心概念(1 句话)→ 筛选关键特征(本质属性)→ 概括主要影响(积极 / 消极) 精炼原则:删除举例、比喻和修饰性语句,保留 “概念 + 特征 + 影响” 的核心框架 常用衔接词:with/which;thus/therefore;not only...but also... 真题例题(2025 二模闵行・原文节选) Do you love forest bathing or taking walks in the forests? Then once in a while, you’ve witnessed a somewhat appealing phenomenon in which tree crowns in the forest seem to deliberately keep to themselves and avoid touching each other. Strange as this may seem, it is, in fact, a natural phenomenon and has a name: crown shyness. There are many theories behind this fascinating phenomenon, but the most convincing one relates to competition and defense. By maintaining gaps between their crowns, they can maximize their intake of these necessities, ensuring healthy growth and a balanced ecosystem. Additionally, crown shyness acts as a protective barrier against insects and diseases. Crown shyness allows each tree to access enough sunlight... It also plays a role in reducing wind resistance. 概要答案:Crown shyness, a natural phenomenon where tree crowns avoid touching, mainly results from competition for resources and defense needs. It benefits forests by ensuring sunlight access and reducing wind damage.(38 词) 技巧 4:研究 - 发现 - 结论类 —— 实验结果浓缩法(对应考点 4) 核心步骤:明确研究对象 / 目的→ 提炼关键发现(≤2 个)→ 概括结论 / 建议 精炼原则:省略研究过程、样本数据和实验细节,聚焦 “目的 + 发现 + 结论” 常用衔接词:find/show/indicate;therefore/thus;it is suggested that 真题例题(2025 秋考・原文节选) The universe expands with every passing second, stretching the space between galaxies like dough rising in an oven. But just how fast is this expansion happening? As telescopes like Hubble strive to answer this fundamental question, they encounter a perplexing gap between theoretical predictions and observed data. Hubble’s measurements indicate a faster rate of expansion in the modern universe compared to what was expected based on observations of the universe more than 13 billion years ago by the European Space Agency’s Planck satellite. Recent data from the Hubble telescope have significantly reduced the possibility that this discrepancy is merely a statistical fluke. To determine distances in the universe, scientists rely on a “cosmic distance ladder” method. Despite increased precision, their calculated Hubble constant remains at odds with the value predicted by Planck. 概要答案:Scientists use Hubble and Planck to study the universe’s expansion rate, but there’s a gap between their measurements. Recent Hubble data show the discrepancy is not a fluke, though the constant still conflicts with Planck’s prediction.(43 词) (建议用时:20分钟) 类别 1:现象 - 原因 - 对策类 1.(2025 二模松江・原文节选) You Could Have “Recycling Misconception”!A decades-long effort to educate people about recycling has mostly backfired. The study found that an overemphasis on recycling has distracted us from better options like generating less waste. When asked to rank the Three Rs, nearly half got the answer wrong. Michaela Barnett owes this “recycling misconception” to corporate campaigns shifting blame to individuals. Recycling rules are confusing, like the “chasing arrows” symbol misleading consumers. Less than 10% of global plastic is recycled. True progress demands reducing consumption and holding corporations accountable for sustainable manufacturing. 答案:A study shows decades of recycling education backfired, leading to “recycling misconception” due to corporate blame-shifting and confusing rules. True progress requires less consumption and corporate accountability.(40 词) 2.(2022.7 秋考・原文节选) The pet food industry has received unkind remarks as to the true origin of its ingredients for decades. Now the industry faces another source of criticism as a new book starts a debate about the environmental impact of owning a well-fed pet. The book’s authors say that some pets have a surprisingly high “ecological footprint”. For example, the eco-footprint of a cat is almost the same as what is needed to run a small car. The authors put forward ideas like processing pests into cat food to attenuate this impact. The Pet Food Manufacturers Association defends that the meat and fish used in pet foods are of sufficient quality for human consumption but more than humans need. Recycling these by-products avoids waste. 答案:The pet food industry faces criticism over ingredient origin and pets’ high ecological footprint, with the book proposing solutions like pest-based pet food. The industry defends itself by noting recycled by-products avoid waste.(42 词) 类别 2:观点对比类 1.(2021.1 秋考・原文节选) Ann Grand is a visual thinker. When somebody speaks to her, the words are instantly translated into pictures. Unlike most people, her thoughts move from video-like images to generalizations. Her memories usually appear in order of time, and the images are always specific. Visual thinking has enabled Grand to build entire systems in her imagination. This was important to her as an equipment designer. Before construction, she would test-run the equipment in her mind. Her sharp awareness of details led to noteworthy observations about animals, helping her create better designs. 答案:Ann Grand is a visual thinker who thinks in specific, time-ordered images. This ability helped her test equipment mentally as a designer and make detailed observations to improve her animal-related designs.(39 词) 2.(2022.1 秋考・原文节选) Artificially sweetened diet drinks make no difference to weight gain and should not be seen as healthier. A review concludes there is nothing to support claims that sugar-free drinks can help prevent obesity. Industry sponsored studies may be biased. There have been concerns that diet drinks might lead people to consume more calories by stimulating sweet taste buds. The new study found that evidence relating to the healthiness of these drinks was inconclusive. Leading nutritionist Professor Susan Jebb said replacing sugary drinks with artificially sweetened alternatives did no harm. Dietitian Professor Tom Sanders criticized the research as an opinion piece. 答案:Artificially sweetened drinks aren’t healthier or helpful for weight loss, with inconclusive health evidence and potential industry bias. Experts hold different views on the research, but replacing sugary drinks with them is harmless.(43 词) 类别 3:概念 - 特征 - 影响类 1.(2025 二模黄浦・原文节选) Does this situation sound familiar? A friend asks “Hey, what are you up to this weekend?” You reply, and she immediately shares her own plan. I call this “boomerasking”. Boomeraskers ask a question, let others answer and then bring the focus back to themselves. For many people, self-disclosure feels great. But boomerasking is the worst way as it takes away the benefits of asking questions. Sincere questions and listening build understanding and connection. Boomerasking makes others feel unimportant. So don’t boomerask! Focus on others when they share their perspective before talking about yourself. 答案:“Boomerasking” refers to asking a question but quickly shifting the conversation to oneself. Though it satisfies self-disclosure, it ruins the benefits of sincere communication. We should focus on others first.(37 词) 2.(2023 秋考・原文节选) Teenagers should be pulled off the sofa. For many years, scientists thought that the human brain was fully mature before the teen years. However, more recent research shows that although the brain reaches its maximum size between the ages of 12 and 14, brain development is not yet complete. The brain's functionally different sections communicate through synapses. Scientists have found that synapses grow or die away depending on how much they are used. Teenagers can shape their brain development through choices. During this period, used cells and connections survive, while unused ones die. Therefore, what teenagers do could affect their rest of life. 答案:Contrary to previous beliefs, teenagers’ brain development is incomplete even when reaching maximum size. Synapses’ survival depends on usage, so teenagers’ choices can shape their brain and influence their future.(39 词) 类别 4:研究 - 发现 - 结论类 1.(2025 二模长宁・原文节选) How many digital devices do you use throughout the day? These devices give off blue light. The question is: Should you be concerned? According to WebMD, there is no current proof that regular exposure to blue light leads to long-term eye damage. Yet several other studies seem to demonstrate a connection. Blue wavelengths are good for attention during the day but may affect sleep at night by misleading the body into believing it’s still daytime. To lessen risks, reducing screen brightness and using blue-light-blocking apps can help. The most effective approach is to avoid digital devices before bed. 答案:Opinions vary on whether blue light from digital devices harms health. It boosts daytime attention but may disrupt sleep. To reduce risks, lower screen brightness, use relevant apps and avoid devices before bed.(38 词) 2.(2023 秋考・原文节选) Doctors operate in a world of statistics and probability. Yet they’ve long been taught to convey confidence. Now experts ask whether this certainty does more harm than good. With information overload, answers are rarely black or white. Medicine has always fallen short of the certainty in math. Doctors in training need to be accustomed to weighing odds. Technology has helped redefine the quest for certainty. Computers can give more accurate diagnoses than doctors but can’t communicate with patients in a comforting way. 答案:Doctors are taught to convey certainty, but experts question this as medical answers are rarely absolute. Trainee doctors need to weigh odds, and while technology aids accurate diagnoses, it lacks comforting communication.(40 词) (建议用时:20分钟) 类别 1:现象 - 原因 - 对策类 1.(2025 秋考・原文节选) Remote work has become increasingly prevalent in recent years, especially after the global pandemic. Many employees appreciate its flexibility, such as saving time on commuting and balancing work with family life. However, this work mode also brings challenges. A survey shows that over 60% of remote workers report feeling isolated, and nearly half struggle with work-life boundaries, often working longer hours than in offices. Experts point out that the lack of face-to-face interaction and unclear work schedules are the main causes. To address these issues, companies are advised to organize regular online team-building activities and set clear working hour guidelines. Employees can also create dedicated workspaces at home to separate work from daily life. 答案:Remote work is popular for its flexibility but causes isolation and blurred work-life boundaries due to insufficient interaction and unclear schedules. Companies and employees should take measures like team-building activities and dedicated workspaces to solve these problems.(45 词) 2.(2025 二模浦东・原文节选) Food waste has become a serious global issue. It is estimated that one-third of all food produced worldwide is wasted each year, from farm to table. This not only wastes resources like water and land but also contributes to environmental pollution. The main reasons include overproduction by retailers to avoid stockouts, improper storage by consumers, and strict aesthetic standards for fruits and vegetables (many are discarded for being “imperfect”). To reduce food waste, retailers can adopt flexible ordering systems, and consumers should plan meals in advance. Governments can also promote food donation programs and raise public awareness. 答案:Food waste is a severe global problem, wasting resources and polluting the environment. It is mainly caused by overproduction, improper storage and strict aesthetic standards. Retailers, consumers and governments should take corresponding measures to tackle it.(40 词) 类别 2:观点对比类 1.(2025 二模青浦・原文节选) Should schools ban homework on weekends? This debate has aroused widespread attention. Supporters argue that weekends should be a time for students to rest and develop hobbies, as excessive homework increases stress and leaves no time for family activities. They believe that quality rest can improve academic performance in the long run. Opponents, however, hold that weekend homework helps consolidate knowledge learned during the week, especially for students who need extra practice. They worry that banning homework would lead to a decline in academic performance, as students might spend too much time on entertainment instead of study. Educators suggest that the key is not to ban homework but to optimize its quality and quantity, ensuring it is meaningful and not overly burdensome. 答案:There’s a debate over whether to ban weekend homework. Supporters believe it allows students to rest and reduce stress, while opponents argue it helps consolidate knowledge. Educators suggest optimizing homework’s quality and quantity instead of banning it.(42 词) 2.(2021.6 秋考・原文节选) Some people believe that social media has strengthened interpersonal relationships by enabling people to stay in touch with friends and family far away. They argue that platforms like WeChat and Facebook make communication more convenient, allowing people to share daily life and support each other anytime. Others disagree, claiming that social media weakens real relationships. They point out that many people spend too much time scrolling through social media, neglecting face-to-face interactions. A study shows that heavy social media users are more likely to feel lonely than those who use it moderately. 答案:Opinions are divided on social media’s impact on relationships. Some say it strengthens connections by facilitating convenient communication, while others argue it weakens real interactions and causes loneliness due to excessive use.(39 词) 类别 3:概念 - 特征 - 影响类 1.(2025 二模静安・原文节选) “Digital minimalism” is a lifestyle that emphasizes reducing unnecessary digital consumption to focus on what truly matters. Its core features include limiting social media use, uninstalling unused apps, and setting specific times for checking emails and messages. Digital minimalists believe that this lifestyle can reduce stress caused by information overload and improve focus. It also allows more time for physical activities, face-to-face communication and personal growth. However, it does not mean abandoning digital tools entirely—instead, it advocates using them intentionally and purposefully. 答案:Digital minimalism is a lifestyle of reducing unnecessary digital consumption, featuring limited social media use and intentional tool application. It reduces stress, improves focus and frees up time for meaningful activities without abandoning digital tools.(41 词) 2.(2022.7 秋考・原文节选) “Silent tourism” has emerged as a new travel trend in recent years. Unlike traditional tourism that involves visiting crowded attractions and taking photos, silent tourism focuses on quiet experiences, such as hiking in remote mountains, reading in a local library, or simply enjoying the scenery in a peaceful village. This trend reflects people’s desire to escape the noise and stress of urban life. It allows travelers to connect more deeply with nature and local culture, and promotes sustainable tourism by reducing the impact on popular attractions. However, it requires travelers to be more patient and mindful. 答案:Silent tourism, a new travel trend different from traditional crowded tourism, focuses on quiet experiences. It meets people’s need to escape urban stress, deepens connections with nature and culture, and promotes sustainable tourism with required mindfulness.(40 词) 类别 4:研究 - 发现 - 结论类 1.(2022.7 秋考・原文节选) A team of researchers from Harvard University conducted a study on the relationship between reading paper books and e-books. They recruited 200 participants, dividing them into two groups: one group read a novel in paper form, and the other read the same novel on an e-reader. After finishing the book, participants took a test on plot details and character memories. The results showed that the paper book group scored 20% higher than the e-book group. Researchers concluded that reading paper books helps with deeper comprehension and longer retention, as the physical experience of turning pages and seeing the book’s layout aids memory. 答案:Harvard researchers studied the difference between reading paper books and e-books with 200 participants. The paper book group performed better in comprehension and memory tests, leading to the conclusion that paper books aid deeper understanding and longer retention.(43 词) 2.(2021.6 秋考・原文节选) Scientists at the University of California carried out an experiment to explore the effects of music on plant growth. They grew three groups of tomato plants: one group was exposed to classical music for 3 hours a day, another to rock music, and the third to no music at all. After two months, the researchers measured the plants’ height and fruit yield. The results indicated that the plants exposed to classical music grew 15% taller and produced 20% more fruit than the control group. The rock music group showed no significant difference from the group with no music. The scientists suggested that classical music’s regular rhythm may stimulate plant growth. 答案:UC scientists experimented on tomato plants’ growth with classical music, rock music and no music. Classical music made plants taller and more productive, while rock music had no effect, suggesting classical music’s rhythm stimulates growth.(40 词) (建议用时:30分钟) 1.Directions:Read the following passage.Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible. What is AI’s Role in Art Creation? As artificial intelligence advances across creative fields, a question emerges: Do people want AI to become an artist or simply a tool for artistic creation? Evidence suggests that while the public is increasingly familiar with AI systems, they would prefer to see AI supporting human creativity rather than replacing it. A key reason lies in the human dimension of art. When people picture their favorite works, say, Van Gogh’s The Starry Night, what they value is not merely technical delivery but the emotional depth tied to human experience. In a recent survey, over 60 percent said they would value their favorite artwork less if told it was AI-produced. Their responses highlight a shared belief: People seek the imaginative struggles and personal histories behind creative works, a quality machines cannot genuinely copy. Concerns about originality and copyright strengthen this resistance. Respondents criticized AI outputs as unoriginal, seeing them as mere reflections of models trained on vast quantities of human-created materials. The possibility of unauthorized data use and unclear artistic ownership fuels distrust. These worries reveal why people hesitate to view AI-generated materials-especially films-as real art: It lacks clear authorship and true creative intention. Yet attitudes shift when AI assists rather than replaces human artists. Forty-two percent of participants regarded users of AI as artists who provided clear creative direction — a sign of openness to human-AI collaboration. This perspective points to a real obstacle in today’s creative world: Many individuals with ideas lack the resources or skills to realize them. In such cases, AI can serve as an enabling tool, lowering costs and expanding access to creative expression. Ultimately, people value art as a human-centered means of connection. While AI can broaden artistic possibilities, it’s best used as a tool that supports and enriches human vision. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Most people prefer AI as a tool for art rather than an independent artist because they value the human emotion and personal history behind artworks. Concerns about originality and copyright also lead to resistance toward AI-generated art. However, if AI assists human artists by lowering creative barriers, it is more widely accepted. Ultimately, art is seen as a human-centered form of connection. 【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章探讨了人工智能在艺术创作中的角色,指出大众更倾向于AI作为创作工具而非独立艺术家,原因是人们看重艺术背后的人类情感与个人经历,且担忧AI作品的原创性和版权问题;AI辅助人类创作、降低创作门槛时易被接受,艺术终究是以人类为核心的情感联结方式。 【详解】1. 要点摘录(列出至少5个要点,均为原文原句) ①Evidence suggests that while the public is increasingly familiar with AI systems, they would prefer to see AI supporting human creativity rather than replacing it. ②When people picture their favorite works, say, Van Gogh’s The Starry Night, what they value is not merely technical delivery but the emotional depth tied to human experience. ③In a recent survey, over 60 percent said they would value their favorite artwork less if told it was Al-produced. ④Concerns about originality and copyright strengthen this resistance. ⑤Forty-two percent of participants regarded users of AI as artists who provided clear creative direction — a sign of openness to human-AI collaboration. ⑥In such cases, AI can serve as an enabling tool, lowering costs and expanding access to creative expression. ⑦Ultimately, people value art as a human-centered means of connection. 2. 缜密构思 以第①点总起,点明大众对AI的核心定位;整合②③点,说明人们重视艺术的人文属性是排斥AI替代创作的关键;以第④点作为原创性与版权层面的抗拒原因;整合⑤⑥点,体现大众对AI辅助创作的接受度及AI的作用;以第⑦点总结艺术的核心属性,最终整合所有要点形成与答案一致的表述。 3. 遣词造句 Most people prefer AI as a tool for art rather than an independent artist because they value the human emotion and personal history behind artworks. Concerns about originality and copyright also lead to resistance toward AI-generated art. However, if AI assists human artists by lowering creative barriers, it is more widely accepted. Ultimately, art is seen as a human-centered form of connection. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Most people prefer AI as a tool for art rather than an independent artist because they value the human emotion and personal history behind artworks.(运用了because引导原因状语从句) [高分句型2] However, if AI assists human artists by lowering creative barriers, it is more widely accepted.(运用了if引导条件状语从句) 2.Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible. Catania Turns the Tables on Blue Crabs In a suburb of Catania on Sicily’s east coast, smoke rises from street stalls grilling horse meat, while youngsters gather around counters selling seltz limone e sale — a soda drink with lemon and sea salt. Amid this lively scene, a family of ex-fishers, the Salamones, have opened La Fish, a seafood restaurant that dares to challenge local diet traditions. Alongside Sicily’s classics like swordfish (剑鱼) and tuna, tonight’s tasting menu features a surprising newcomer to the island’s tables — the Atlantic blue crab. These blue-clawed, olive-shelled crabs, originally from the western Atlantic Ocean, have become an ecological threat in the Mediterranean. Without natural enemies, they feed on young clams, destroying shellfish harvests and destroying Italy’s reputation as one of the world’s top clam producers. Their rapid spread has been linked to rising sea temperatures, which have made Sicilian waters increasingly welcoming to non-native species. What began as an environmental concern is gradually turning into a test of human adaptability. People in Sicily are responding in creative ways. One form of response comes from chef Mario Contadino, who celebrates the crab’s sweet and delicate flavor. He serves it on sticky sushi rice with onions, bell peppers, garlic, tomatoes, celery, and edible (可食用的) flowers to appeal to hesitant locals. “Catania people can be closed-minded, “he admits, “but that first bite does not lie. “Another response comes from scientists. Marine biologist Francesco Tiralongo of the University of Catania argues that embracing such non-native species in local diets is”a necessary response to climate change and ecological challenges. “ Social acceptance is following slowly but steadily. In the fish market behind Piazza del Duomo, shopkeeper Rosario now sells 20 kilograms of blue crab a day, saying customers love its taste. Meanwhile, the Salamone family turns the outsider into opportunity: by presenting blue crab as a fancy food, they show that”anything can be edible. “ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 In Sicily, the invasive Atlantic blue crab threatens local shellfish but has inspired creative responses. Chefs like Mario Contadino promote its culinary value, while scientists advocate its consumption as an adaptation to climate change. Gradually, locals are accepting it as a food source, transforming an ecological threat into a culinary opportunity. 【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍西西里卡塔尼亚人如何把入侵物种大西洋蓝蟹“化害为宝”——从生态威胁变为餐桌新宠,体现了人类对气候变化与物种入侵的灵活应对。 【详解】1. 要点摘录 ①Invasive Atlantic blue crab, linked to rising sea temperatures, devours young clams and damages Italy’s shellfish reputation. ②Chef Mario Contadino promotes its sweet meat with creative dishes; biologist Francesco Tiralongo argues eating it is a necessary climate-adaptation strategy. ③Fish vendor Rosario now sells 20 kg daily; the Salamone family present it as fancy food, winning slow but steady social acceptance. 2. 缜密构思 将①压缩为“入侵原因+危害”;将②整合为“厨师+科学家”双轨对策;将③概括为“市场接受+身份转变”,形成“问题—对策—结果”三段式。 3. 遣词造句 The warming-mediated Atlantic blue crab invades Sicilian waters, wrecking clam beds. Catania counters by culinary rebranding: chefs craft enticing recipes and scientists endorse consumption as climate adaptation. Gradual public acceptance now converts the pest into a profitable delicacy. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Chefs like Mario Contadino promote its culinary value, while scientists advocate its consumption as an adaptation to climate change.(运用了while连接两个句子,强调前后两者的对比) [高分句型2] Gradually, locals are accepting it as a food source, transforming an ecological threat into a culinary opportunity.(运用了现在分词transforming作状语) 3.Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point (s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible. Winter Home Cooking In winter, when days shorten too quickly, cooking helps me keep a clear sense of time rather than soften feelings. Water boiling at six, bread warming at seven, dishes washed before eight give order to evenings that might otherwise fade into each other. It is not comfort I seek, but a simple structure that keeps the season from collapsing into sameness. Recipes that require only salt, heat and patience appeal to me most. Cutting the vegetables into equal pieces and watching them cook at a steady pace offers a small but steady sense of control, which is rare in winter weeks filled with delays and sudden changes. The kitchen does not ask me to feel better, only to follow steps that stay predictable. Cooking is one of the few tasks in which progress is visible. Soup deepens, rice softens, sauce thickens, and each minute has form. Unlike scrolling through messages or sitting in long silence, the cooker gives feedback I can trust. Winter often slows thought without slowing hours, and cooking helps bring them back into agreement. Some dishes come from memory rather than instruction. A noodle soup my grandmother made on cold weekends, or apples baked the way she preferred, returns without ceremony. Winter does not make these meals sentimental, only familiar. The warmth is not emotional but a quiet link to past routines, a small record of hands that cooked before mine. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】示例: Cooking keeps me grounded in time, when winter time collapses rapidly. I’m mostly in simple recipes, where I have steady control, on changeable winter days. When days fly, I can’t even reflect clearly, while visible cooking progresses push me off massive messages or silence. Besides, winter brings familiarity to dishes in my memory, which connects present me and past routines. 【导语】本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者冬日烹饪的体验,烹饪为其带来时间秩序与掌控感,其可见进展协调思绪,且记忆中的菜肴搭建起与过往的联结。 【详解】1. 要点摘录: ①In winter, when days shorten too quickly, cooking helps me keep a clear sense of time rather than soften feelings. It is not comfort I seek, but a simple structure that keeps the season from collapsing into sameness. ②Recipes that require only salt, heat and patience appeal to me most. Cutting the vegetables into equal pieces and watching them cook at a steady pace offers a small but steady sense of control. ③Cooking is one of the few tasks in which progress is visible. Winter often slows thought without slowing hours, and cooking helps bring them back into agreement. ④Some dishes come from memory rather than instruction. The warmth is not emotional but a quiet link to past routines, a small record of hands that cooked before mine. 2. 缜密构思: 整合①②③点,提炼烹饪在冬日为作者带来的核心价值(时间秩序、掌控感、协调思绪);以第④点补充记忆类菜肴的意义 3.遣词造句: Cooking keeps me grounded in time, as winter time collapses quickly. I’m fond of simple recipes, where I have steady control, on changeable winter days. Days flying, I can’t even reflect clearly, while visible cooking progresses push me off massive messages or silence. Besides, winter brings familiarity to dishes in my memory, connecting present me and past routines. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Cooking keeps me grounded in time, when winter time collapses rapidly.(用when引导的时间状语从句对一段部分内容进行总结) [高分句型2]I’m fond of simple recipes, where I have steady control, on changeable winter days. (用where引导非限定性定语从句对第二段部分内容进行总结) 4.Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible. Social media posts Like other millennials, Ms. Yu, a graphic designer, went through her bumpy teen years amid the rise of first-wave social media such as Friendster and Myspace. “Social media was very interesting and fresh to me, as it was a convenient way to connect with others,” she recalls. About three years ago, however, she started feeling less rosy about social media. “I was spending so much time taking photos to post online, hoping to get positive comments. I would be embarrassed if I received few ‘likes’ for my posts. I would ask myself, ‘Why did more people like someone else’s posts but not mine? Are my posts not good enough? Am I not good enough?’” Ms. Yu was eventually able to overcome her self-doubt by cutting back on time spent on social media, and using it only in cases where it would potentially boost rather than weaken her confidence. Her experience highlights the double-edged nature of social media. Clinical Psychologist Ms. Michelle Tan notes that it can be a powerful tool for relieving social isolation and loneliness. Online communities provide emotional support, often helping users turn online connections with like-minded people into real-life friendships. They can also serve as a motivational tool for achieving goals like quitting smoking or getting in shape. On the other hand, it could invite negative social comparisons with other online users and lower a person’s self-worth. Excessive virtual engagement may weaken real-life social skills. Also, being anonymous online makes cyberbullying more likely. Still, mental health issues can’t be blamed solely on social media, as multiple factors play a role. The key, therefore, is to develop healthy online habits (or cyber wellness).“To be cyber well on social media is to strike a healthy balance between online and offline activities,” says Mrs Low-Lim, a member of the Media Literacy Council. A person’s daily living and social functioning should not be affected by social media. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】As a graphic designer, Ms. Yu went through her bumpy teen years on social media and benefited a lot from it. But later she experienced and overcame the feeling of self-doubt caused by the use of social media. Her experience proves that social media is a double-edged sword, and the key is to use it wisely. 【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说,作为一名平面设计师,余女士在社交媒体上度过了坎坷的青少年时期,并从中受益匪浅。但后来她经历并克服了因使用社交媒体而产生的自我怀疑感。她的经验证明,社交媒体是一把双刃剑,关键是要明智地使用它。 【详解】1 要点摘录 ①Like other millennials, Ms. Yu, a graphic designer, went through her bumpy teen years amid the rise of first-wave social media such as Friendster and Myspace. ②About three years ago, however, she started feeling less rosy about social media. ③Her experience highlights the double-edged nature of social media. ④The key, therefore, is to develop healthy online habits (or cyber wellness). 2.缜密构思: 将第1、3两个要点进行重组,将第3、4两个要点进行整合。 3.遣词造句 As a graphic designer, Ms. Yu went through her bumpy teen years on social media and benefited a lot from it. But later she experienced and overcame the feeling of self-doubt caused by the use of social media. Her experience proves that social media is a double-edged sword, and the key is to use it wisely. 【点睛】[高分句型1] But later she experienced and overcame the feeling of self-doubt caused by the use of social media.(运用了过去分词caused作后置定语) [高分句型2] Her experience proves that social media is a double-edged sword, and the key is to use it wisely.(运用了that引导的宾语从句) 5.Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible. What’s the best way to fell a tree? Felling a tree is naturally dangerous, and without proper chainsaw training, hiring a professional tree surgeon is essential. While the underlying principles are straightforward, the risks are high. The optimal time for felling is winter, when trees are inactive. For deciduous (落叶的) trees, the absence of leaves is critical, as dense leaves can act like a sail in the wind, making the tree’s fall direction unpredictable. Always call a professional if power lines, buildings, or unusual trunk shapes are involved. Preparation is vital. Ensure your chainsaw is sharp, fueled, and oiled. Select a clear, open direction for the tree to fall, ensuring people and pets are a safe distance away. Remember that trees are often much larger than they appear, so accurately judge their height and width. Crucially, plan and clear a swift escape route away from the intended fall path. The cutting process involves two main stages. First, create a directional notch (切口) on the side facing the fall direction. About 60cm from the ground, make a 70-degree downward cut into one-third of the trunk’s diameter. Then, make a horizontal cut to meet the first, removing the wedge of wood. Next, move to the opposite side to make the felling cut. Saw horizontally, just above the notch’s base. Once a third of the way through, pause to drive in felling wedges (楔子). These prevent the saw from binding and guide the tree to fall correctly. Continue cutting until only a tenth of the trunk remains, forming a “hinge.” Remove the saw. If a loud crack signals the tree is falling, walk calmly along your escape route—never run with a chainsaw. If it remains standing, carefully tap the wedges further. Should any complications arise, retreat to a safe distance and immediately call for professional assistance.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Tree felling is dangerous, so those without professional chainsaw training must hire a tree surgeon. Winter is optimal for felling leafless trees. Prepare the chainsaw, a safe fall direction and an escape route first, then make a directional notch and a felling cut with wedges, leaving a hinge. Retreat calmly when the tree falls and call professionals if in trouble. 【导语】​本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍了砍伐树木的相关注意事项,指出伐树存在危险性,无专业链锯操作培训需聘请专业人员,还说明了适宜的砍伐时间、前期准备工作、具体砍伐步骤以及突发状况的应对方法。​ 【详解】1.​要点摘录​ ① Tree felling is dangerous, and people without proper chainsaw training must hire a professional tree surgeon.​ ② The best time to fell trees is winter when trees are inactive and deciduous trees have no leaves.​ ③ Preparation for tree felling is vital, including checking the chainsaw, choosing a safe fall direction and planning an escape route.​ ④ The cutting process has two stages: making a directional notch on the fall side first, then a felling cut on the opposite side with felling wedges, leaving a tenth of the trunk as a “hinge”.​ ⑤ When the tree is falling, people should retreat calmly along the escape route; if there are complications, call professionals immediately.​ 2.缜密构思​ 将要点①整合为伐树的安全前提,要点②归纳为适宜的砍伐时间,要点③合并为前期准备的核心内容,要点④梳理成具体的砍伐操作流程,要点⑤整合为突发状况的应对措施​ 3.遣词造句​ Tree felling is a risky task, so those lacking professional chainsaw training should turn to professional tree surgeons.​ Winter is the optimal season for felling trees, especially when deciduous trees lose their leaves to avoid unpredictable falling directions.​ Before felling, you need to get the chainsaw ready, select a safe falling area and plan an escape route in advance.​ The cutting work includes making a directional notch on the target fall side and then a felling cut on the opposite side with wedges to guide the tree, while keeping a small part of the trunk as a hinge.​ When the tree starts to fall, you should leave along the escape route calmly, and call for professional help once any problems occur.​ 【点睛】​[高分句型 1] Tree felling is dangerous, so those without professional chainsaw training must hire a tree surgeon.​(该句运用了so引导的并列句)​ [高分句型 2]Prepare the chainsaw, a safe fall direction and an escape route first, then make a directional notch and a felling cut with wedges, leaving a hinge.​ (该句使用了现在分词短语leaving a hinge作伴随状语)​ 6.Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible. Mercury (汞)Threat in Ocean A newly-published study, led by researchers from Peking University with experts from the United States, the United Kingdom and the Netherlands, has found that ocean, with its continental shelf holding the largest amount of mercury, is now facing a rapidly increasing possibility of mercury release. According to the study, continental shelves are disturbed by human activities. Trawling, during which fishermen pull wide nets behind their ships for fish, is one to blame. When the fishing boats with large nets drag through the seabed, they boost the release rate of mercury buried for decades or centuries. The research also uncovered the similar negative impact of dredging, where people remove mud and unwanted materials from the shelf with special machines to deepen it or look for something. The above activities disturb over 5,000 tons of mercury annually, speeding up its release. Meanwhile, climate change is worsening the situation. The researchers have concluded from their observation that the increasing quantity of mercury release in recent decades from ocean is related to global warming, a tendency with various side effects. They explained that rising temperatures put the decomposition of organic matter in continental shelves on a faster track, promoting the amount of mercury release. Another study on waters, continental shelf being a part, has shown that for every 10℃ increase in temperature, the breakdown rate of sediments (沉积物) almost doubles. Therefore, it is suggested that policies be made on banning or at least reducing inappropriate ocean resource development based on scientific assessment and international cooperation. And a clear goal for a slower global warming pace, supported by reliable scientific research, should be set and then translated into an actionable strategy and achieved worldwide. If these measures are adopted, this last line of mercury defense will probably be safeguarded. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 Human activities like trawling and dredging disturb mercury stored in continental shelves, accelerating its release into the ocean. Climate change further worsens the situation by speeding up organic matter decomposition, which increases mercury release. The study suggests policies to limit harmful ocean exploitation and global cooperation to slow warming, helping protect this final defense against mercury pollution. 【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说诸如拖网捕鱼和疏浚等人类活动会破坏大陆架上储存的汞,加速汞向海洋的释放。气候变化则进一步加剧了这一状况,因为它加快了有机物的分解,从而增加了汞的释放量。该研究建议制定政策来限制有害的海洋开发活动,并呼吁全球合作以减缓全球变暖,从而有助于保护这一抵御汞污染的最后一道防线。 【详解】1. 要点摘录 ①A newly-published study, led by researchers from Peking University with experts from the United States, the United Kingdom and the Netherlands, has found that ocean, with its continental shelf holding the largest amount of mercury, is now facing a rapidly increasing possibility of mercury release. ②Meanwhile, climate change is worsening the situation. They explained that rising temperatures put the decomposition of organic matter in continental shelves on a faster track, promoting the amount of mercury release. ③Therefore, it is suggested that policies be made on banning or at least reducing inappropriate ocean resource development based on scientific assessment and international cooperation. And a clear goal for a slower global warming pace, supported by reliable scientific research, should be set and then translated into an actionable strategy and achieved worldwide. If these measures are adopted, this last line of mercury defense will probably be safeguarded. 2. 缜密构思 将第1个要点进行综述,将第2、3两个要点进行整合。 3. 遣词造句 Human activities like trawling and dredging disturb mercury stored in continental shelves, accelerating its release into the ocean. Climate change further worsens the situation by speeding up organic matter decomposition, which increases mercury release. The study suggests policies to limit harmful ocean exploitation and global cooperation to slow warming, helping protect this final defense against mercury pollution. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Climate change further worsens the situation by speeding up organic matter decomposition, which increases mercury release.运用which引导非限制性定语从句对原文第三段进行了概括。 [高分句型2] The study suggests policies to limit harmful ocean exploitation and global cooperation to slow warming, helping protect this final defense against mercury pollution.用现在分词helping作状语从句对最后一段进行了概括,表达非常高级。 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权,侵权必究! 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $

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