2026届高考英语读后续写专项复习---邮差维姬与阿玛的暖心故事 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Under the hot afternoon sun, Amma waited beside her mud-walled house. Then Viki, the postman, arrived on his bicycle with a money order. Seeing him, Amma’s tired eyes instantly shone with life. She pushed herself up, her movements slow but eager. “Viki!” she called out, her voice thin but filled with joy. She forgot everything else, wanting nothing more than to hear his voice. “Let me talk to my boy first.” “Amma, I really don’t have much time today,” Viki said gently, knowing how delicate her happiness was. “Just for a minute! It will only take a minute, Viki!” Viki pulled out his old mobile phone. “Alright, but please be quick,” he said, handing her the device. With trembling fingers, Amma answered. After a brief exchange filled with her side of the conversation—questions about health, food, and when he would visit — she ended the call and her face lit up. A wide, genuine smile spread across her wrinkled face, making her look years younger. Viki handed her the money. “Here you go, Amma. Ten hundred dollars.” She counted the notes carefully, her thumb brushing against the paper. Selecting one, she folded it neatly and pressed it into Viki’s hand. “This is for you,” she insisted. “Why, Amma?” he protested, trying to push it back. She smiled warmly. “You brought me my son’s money, and you let me talk to him. Your kindness costs something, doesn’t it? Please, keep it.” Though he continued to refuse, she insisted. Finally, he pocketed the note, accepting her gift along with her blessings. He waved goodbye and mounted his bicycle. He had pedalled only a short distance when a familiar voice stopped him. “Viki!” It was Ramu, Viki’s workmate. “What are you doing? Why do you do this every single month?” Ramu asked with curiosity keeping his voice low. “You bring her your own money and pretend it’s from her son. Not only that, you give me money to talk to her on phone as her son! Why?” Viki hadn’t expected anyone to notice. He looked away, his eyes fixed on the horizon. “It’s... complicated.” “Tell me,” Ramu pressed. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Taking a deep breath, Viki told him the truth. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Viki nodded slowly, a sad look in his eyes. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色： ___________________________________________________________________________2．视角 第__________________________人称视角 3．时空线 夏日午后（阿玛在泥墙屋旁等候，邮差维姬送来汇票）→ 互动场景（阿玛急切与“儿子”通话，通话后笑容满面，坚持给维姬小费）→ 真相伏笔（维姬收下小费离开，被同事拉穆叫住）→ 疑问爆发（拉穆质问维姬，揭穿其自掏腰包、找人假扮儿子的秘密）→ （续写）_____________________________（维姬向拉穆坦白真相，讲述背后缘由）→ （续写）_____________________（维姬抒发心声，拉穆领悟善意，升华主题） 4．文章线索 （1）“维姬的善意隐瞒与拉穆的直白质问”构成核心矛盾，这一矛盾对情节发展有何作用？如何推动人物情感变化及主题凸显？ （2）“维姬坦白真相”是情节转折的关键，这一情节为何能强化“善意与温情”的主题？如何让人物形象更丰满？ “阿玛的期盼”“维姬的温柔迁就”“自掏腰包送钱”“找人假扮儿子”“拉穆的质问”这些细节有何意义？它们为后续“真相揭晓”做了怎样的铺垫？ （4）故事的情节推进逻辑是什么？从“阿玛等候—维姬送‘汇票’—互动温情—秘密揭穿—坦白真相”，情节发展背后凸显了怎样的主题脉络？ 5．情节线 等候场景：夏日午后，阿玛在屋旁等候，看到邮差维姬到来，疲惫的双眼燃起光芒，急切想与“儿子”通话→ 温情互动：维姬心软拿出手机，阿玛与“儿子”简短通话后满心欢喜，收到“汇票”后坚持给维姬小费，维姬推辞不过收下→ 秘密揭穿：维姬骑车离开不远，被同事拉穆叫住，拉穆质问其自掏腰包、找人假扮儿子的行为→ 真相倾诉：维姬意外被发现，陷入迟疑后决定坦白→ （续写）____________________________________________→ （续写）_________________________________________________________________ 6．情感线 维姬：面对阿玛期盼时的温柔、迁就→ 被坚持给小费时的无奈与动容→ 秘密被揭穿后的慌乱、迟疑→ 坦白真相时的沉重、真诚→ ______________________________ 阿玛：等候时的疲惫、期盼→ 见到维姬后的急切、喜悦→ 通话后的满足、欣慰→ 给小费时的真诚、坚定→ ___________________________ 拉穆：发现秘密后的好奇、疑惑→ 质问时的直白、不解→ 听完真相后的震惊、动容→ ___________________________ 7．文章大意概括 中文： ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文： ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．句式示例 宾语从句： ___________________________________________________________________________ 同位语： ___________________________________________________________________________ 状语从句： ___________________________________________________________________________ 比喻： ___________________________________________________________________________ 9．主题归类 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 二、情节构造 第一段提示句：Taking a deep breath, Viki told him the truth. 衔接句 1—— 对 “维姬的坦白内容与语气” 提问：维姬会讲述怎样的真相（如阿玛儿子的情况、自己帮忙的缘由）？语气会呈现怎样的特点？这些内容能体现维姬怎样的性格？ 衔接句 2—— 对 “第一段的过渡意义” 提问：第一段如何解答拉穆的疑问？如何为第二段的情感升华与主题凸显做铺垫？ 过渡逻辑：请说明第一段情节如何为第二段的 “主题升华” 做铺垫： __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第二段提示句：Viki nodded slowly, a sad look in his eyes. 衔接句 1—— 对 “维姬的心声与拉穆的反应” 提问：维姬会抒发怎样的心声（如对阿玛的心疼、对善意的理解）？拉穆会有怎样的神态、语言反应？ 衔接句 2—— 对 “情节结局与主题升华” 提问：两人的对话如何呼应“善意与温情”的核心主题？这一结局对人物形象完善及主题表达有何意义？ 主题： __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三、段落构思 第一段：Taking a deep breath, Viki told him the truth. 梳理第一段写作思路：①开篇承接提示句，描写维姬坦白时的神态、语气（如低沉、真诚）；②讲述真相核心（阿玛儿子已故/失联，自己不愿打破她的希望）；③刻画拉穆的即时反应（震惊、沉默），营造情感氛围。 续写： ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第二段：Viki nodded slowly, a sad look in his eyes. 梳理第二段写作思路：①开篇承接提示句，描写维姬的神态与心声（心疼阿玛，诠释善意的意义）；②刻画拉穆的态度转变（从疑惑到动容，主动提出帮忙）；③收尾呼应前文温情氛围，升华“善意守护”的主题。 续写： ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析（邮差维姬与阿玛主题）​ 1．角色：​ 维姬：善良温柔、心思细腻且富有同理心的邮差，默默用善意守护阿玛的希望，甘愿自掏腰包、找人配合演戏，不图回报，体现出平凡人的温情。 阿玛：年迈孤独，将所有期盼寄托在儿子身上，性格淳朴真诚，对维姬的帮助心怀感恩，用微薄的小费传递心意。 拉穆：直率好奇，起初不解维姬的行为，得知真相后被打动，代表了被善意感染的旁观者。​ 2．视角​ 第三人人称视角，能客观展现阿玛的期盼、维姬的善意与拉穆的转变，兼顾多个人物的行为与情感，让故事温情内核更突出。​ 3．时空线​ 夏日午后（阿玛在泥墙屋旁等候，邮差维姬送来汇票）→ 互动场景（阿玛急切与“儿子”通话，通话后笑容满面，坚持给维姬小费）→ 真相伏笔（维姬收下小费离开，被同事拉穆叫住）→ 疑问爆发（拉穆质问维姬，揭穿其自掏腰包、找人假扮儿子的秘密）→ （续写）路边（维姬向拉穆坦白真相，讲述背后缘由）→ （续写）路边（维姬抒发心声，拉穆领悟善意，升华主题）​ 4．文章线索​ （1）作用：推动情节从“温情互动”转向“真相揭晓”，是串联全文的核心动力；让维姬的情感从“温柔迁就”过渡到“真诚倾诉”，拉穆从“疑惑不解”转为“动容认同”，凸显“善意守护”的主题。​ （2）原因：真相揭露了维姬善意的本质，并非简单的“帮忙”，而是以牺牲自我利益为代价的温柔守护，让“善意与温情”的主题更深刻；既展现维姬的无私，也让其形象从“普通邮差”升级为“有温度的守护者”，更显丰满立体。​ 意义：阿玛的期盼铺垫了维姬守护的必要性；维姬的温柔迁就、自掏腰包等细节暗示了“汇票”与“通话”的真相，埋下伏笔；拉穆的质问则直接触发真相揭晓，让情节自然推进，为主题升华做好铺垫。​ （4）逻辑：按“期盼—守护—揭秘—倾诉”的脉络推进；主题脉络：平凡人的善意能照亮他人孤独的时光，真正的温情源于不计回报的守护与理解。​ 5．情节线​ 等候场景：夏日午后，阿玛在屋旁等候，看到邮差维姬到来，疲惫的双眼燃起光芒，急切想与“儿子”通话→ 温情互动：维姬心软拿出手机，阿玛与“儿子”简短通话后满心欢喜，收到“汇票”后坚持给维姬小费，维姬推辞不过收下→ 秘密揭穿：维姬骑车离开不远，被同事拉穆叫住，拉穆质问其自掏腰包、找人假扮儿子的行为→ 真相倾诉：维姬意外被发现，陷入迟疑后决定坦白→ （续写）维姬讲述阿玛儿子早已意外去世，自己不愿打破老人的希望，便每月自掏腰包送钱、找人假扮儿子通话→ （续写）维姬感慨善意的意义，拉穆深受触动，主动提出以后一起帮忙守护阿玛的希望。​ 6．情感线​ 维姬：面对阿玛期盼时的温柔、迁就→ 被坚持给小费时的无奈与动容→ 秘密被揭穿后的慌乱、迟疑→ 坦白真相时的沉重、真诚→ 抒发心声后的释然与坚定。​ 阿玛：等候时的疲惫、期盼→ 见到维姬后的急切、喜悦→ 通话后的满足、欣慰→ 给小费时的真诚、坚定→ 始终对儿子充满牵挂，对维姬满怀信任。​ 拉穆：发现秘密后的好奇、疑惑→ 质问时的直白、不解→ 听完真相后的震惊、动容→ 被感染后的愧疚与主动付出的意愿。​ 7．文章大意概括​ 中文：夏日午后，年迈的阿玛在屋旁等候邮差维姬，维姬带来了“儿子寄来的汇票”，还让阿玛与“儿子”通了电话，阿玛满心欢喜，坚持给维姬小费。维姬离开后被同事拉穆叫住，拉穆揭穿了维姬自掏腰包送钱、找人假扮阿玛儿子通话的秘密。维姬迟疑后向拉穆坦白，阿玛的儿子早已去世，他不愿打破老人的希望，便一直默默守护。最终拉穆被打动，决定和维姬一起守护阿玛的期盼。​ 英文：On a hot summer afternoon, the elderly Amma waited beside her mud-walled house for the postman Viki. Viki brought a "money order from her son" and let Amma talk to her "son" on the phone. Overjoyed, Amma insisted on giving Viki a tip. After Viki left, he was stopped by his colleague Ramu, who exposed the secret that Viki had been using his own money for the money order and asking someone to pretend to be Amma's son. Hesitant at first, Viki told Ramu the truth: Amma's son had passed away, and he didn't want to shatter the old lady's hope, so he had been guarding it silently. Finally, Ramu was moved and decided to help Viki protect Amma's expectation.​ 8．句式示例​ 宾语从句：Viki knew how delicate her happiness was.（维姬知道她的喜悦是多么脆弱。） 同位语：She folded it neatly and pressed it into Viki’s hand, a small note full of gratitude.（她把钱折整齐，塞进维姬手里，那张小纸条满载着感激。）​ 状语从句：Though he continued to refuse, she insisted.（尽管他一再推辞，她还是坚持要给。）​ 比喻：Amma’s hope for her son was like a fragile candle, and Viki’s kindness kept it burning.（阿玛对儿子的期盼如同一支脆弱的蜡烛，而维姬的善意让它始终燃烧。）​ 9．主题归类​ 善意的守护：平凡人的微小善意能守护他人的希望与尊严；温情的传递：不计回报的付出能温暖孤独的心灵，引发善意的共鸣；人性的美好：展现普通人身上的同理心与无私奉献精神，凸显人性本善的内核。​ 二、情节构造（邮差维姬与阿玛主题）​ 第一段提示句：Taking a deep breath, Viki told him the truth.​ 衔接句 1—— 对 “维姬的坦白内容与语气” 提问：维姬会讲述怎样的真相（如阿玛儿子的情况、自己帮忙的缘由）？语气会呈现怎样的特点？这些内容能体现维姬怎样的性格？ 答案：真相：阿玛的儿子三年前因意外去世，临终前托付维姬照顾母亲，维姬发现阿玛无法接受儿子离世的事实，便决定隐瞒真相，每月自掏腰包送钱，还请朋友假扮儿子通话。语气：低沉、真诚，带着一丝无奈与心疼。性格：体现维姬重承诺、有同理心、无私奉献的性格。​ 衔接句 2—— 对 “第一段的过渡意义” 提问：第一段如何解答拉穆的疑问？如何为第二段的情感升华与主题凸显做铺垫？​ 答案：解答疑问：直接说明维姬自掏腰包、找人假扮儿子的原因，回应拉穆的困惑；铺垫作用：通过讲述阿玛儿子的故事，渲染温情氛围，让拉穆的态度从疑惑转向动容，为第二段两人达成共识、共同守护阿玛做铺垫，凸显“善意传递”的主题。​ 过渡逻辑：请说明第一段情节如何为第二段的 “主题升华” 做铺垫：​ 第一段通过维姬的坦白，揭露了善意的本质——不是刻意的演戏，而是源于承诺与心疼的温柔守护，让拉穆彻底理解维姬的行为。这种情感铺垫让第二段拉穆主动提出帮忙的情节更合理，将“个人善意”升级为“双人守护”，使“善意传递”的主题更深刻、更有感染力。​ 第二段提示句：Viki nodded slowly, a sad look in his eyes.​ 衔接句 1—— 对 “维姬的心声与拉穆的反应” 提问：维姬会抒发怎样的心声（如对阿玛的心疼、对善意的理解）？拉穆会有怎样的神态、语言反应？​ 答案：心声：维姬感慨阿玛晚年孤独，儿子是她唯一的精神支柱，自己的付出不算什么，只要能让阿玛安度晚年就好，认为善意无需张扬，能温暖他人就有意义。拉穆反应：神态上愧疚低头、眼神动容，语言上主动道歉，提出以后一起帮忙，分担维姬的压力。​ 衔接句 2—— 对 “情节结局与主题升华” 提问：两人的对话如何呼应“善意与温情”的核心主题？这一结局对人物形象完善及主题表达有何意义？​ 答案：呼应主题：两人从“质疑与被质疑”转为“共识与合作”，体现了善意的感染力，呼应“温情传递”的核心。意义：完善人物形象，拉穆从旁观者变为参与者，维姬的善意不再孤单；主题上，将个人的无私付出升级为集体的温情守护，让“善意不分大小、传递自有力量”的主题更鲜明。​ 主题：​ 以平凡人的善意守护他人的精神寄托，温情可传递，善意能共鸣，微小的付出也能汇聚成照亮他人生命的光。​ 三、段落构思（邮差维姬与阿玛主题）​ 第一段：Taking a deep breath, Viki told him the truth.​ 梳理第一段写作思路：①开篇承接提示句，描写维姬坦白时的神态、语气（如低沉、真诚）；②讲述真相核心（阿玛儿子已故/失联，自己不愿打破她的希望）；③刻画拉穆的即时反应（震惊、沉默），营造情感氛围。​ 续写：​ Taking a deep breath, Viki told him the truth. “Amma’s son died in a car accident three years ago,” he said in a low voice, his eyes filled with sorrow. “He begged me to take care of his mother before passing away. I found Amma couldn’t accept the truth, so I decided to hide it from her.” He added that he used his own money for the monthly “money order” and asked a friend to pretend to be her son on the phone. Ramu stood frozen, his mouth agape, unable to say a word for a long while.​ 第二段：Viki nodded slowly, a sad look in his eyes.​ 梳理第二段写作思路：①开篇承接提示句，描写维姬的神态与心声（心疼阿玛，诠释善意的意义）；②刻画拉穆的态度转变（从疑惑到动容，主动提出帮忙）；③收尾呼应前文温情氛围，升华“善意守护”的主题。​ 续写：​ Viki nodded slowly, a sad look in his eyes. “She lives for the hope of her son. My small effort means everything to her,” he murmured. Ramu’s face turned red with shame. “I’m sorry I doubted you,” he said sincerely. “From now on, let’s do this together—I’ll help with the calls, and we can share the cost.” Viki smiled warmly, feeling a weight lifted from his shoulders. Under the hot sun, two postmen made a silent promise to guard an old lady’s last hope with kindness. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $