内容正文:
To begin with,it's really interesting for us to learn from
farmers.They can teach us how to grow vegetables,and then
we can try to plant fresh and healthy vegetables in our own
homes.Besides,picking tomatoes will be fun too.We can taste
the tomatoes picked by ourselves,which must be super
delicious.What's more,in order to make the trip more
interesting,we can add two more activities.We can feed the
cute little animals on the farm,like rabbits and chickens.Last
but not least,we can have a picnic there because sitting on the
grass,sharing food and laughing will make it a wonderful day
surely.
I believe this farm trip will not only let us get close to
nature but also bring us a lot of fun.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Wang Hua
主题九观点与建议表达
【主题佳句积累】一句子仿写
1)Whether or not we can pass the exam depends on how hard
we study.
2)The more books you read,the wiser you'll be.
3)Some students like playing basketball,while I prefer reading
in the library.
4)Some people have no idea about how important it is to save
water.
5)What comes first is to listen carefully in class.
【真题剖析】审题:说明文;第三人称和第一人称;一般
现在时
【润色与升格】
DAccording to the survey,about 10%of the students find it
enjoyable to pick up new skills through sports.
2About 40%of the students consider having fun as the most
amazing part,while about 25%think being fit and healthy is
the best thing about sports.
3We share laughter,cheer each other on,and the stress from
studies fades away in no time.
【实战演练】
第一篇
Recently,I have done a survey among my classmates
about how to spend the coming summer vacation.Here are
the results.
Some of my classmates believe that traveling is the best
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way to enjoy an exciting break.They say exploring new
places allows them to return feeling relaxed.What's more,
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it's a great chance to open their eyes and learn about
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different cultures.
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Others are excited to try something completely
new-whether it's picking up a skill like cooking,
surfing,or photography.They think stepping out of their
comfort zone will not only improve their abilities but also
make their summer truly unforgettable.
As for me,I've decided to spend my time volunteering.
Helping others and contributing to society sound like the
perfect way to make my vacation both active and
meaningful.After all,what could be better than making a
difference to people in need?
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第二篇
Should Students Use AI Tools in Learning?
AI is everywhere today,but should students use it in
learning?I firmly believe students should use AI tools for
learning.
Firstly,AI saves time on boring tasks.For example,when
we need to collect basic information for projects,AI can quickly
gather and sort information,allowing us to focus on deeper
thinking.Secondly,it helps the weak students learn.AI-based
educational platforms can provide proper study plans.If a
student struggles with math,then AI can offer targeted exercises
and explanations,meeting their needs.Moreover,AI can share
us learning resources from all over the world,which broadens
our horizons.
In conclusion,when we use Al tools properly,they are
valuable helpers in our learning journey.
主题十科技与未来
【主题佳句积累】一句子仿写
1)It's unbelievable that AI's learning ability is faster than we
imagined.
2)The progress of science and technology makes great
contributions to making our life more convenient.
3)As is known to all,many students are interested in getting
online.
4)If you often visit unsafe websites,your personal information
will be at risk/in danger.
【真题剖析】审题:说明文;第三人称和第一人称;一般
现在时
【润色与升格】
DThey make it easy for us to keep in touch with others and get
information easily.
2In education,e-books and online courses make it possible for
us to learn at anytime and anywhere.
3It's necessary for us to understand that technology is a double-
edged sword.
【实战演练】
Li Hua,a student from Hangzhou,has won a prize
in the Science Popularization and Innovation Competition
with a creative elderly assistant robot.Here is a report
about this robot.
The robot is tall and looks very cute with big eyes.
He looks like a friendly person,making it easier for the
elderly to accept him.
The robot is of great use.First,he can give the
elderly medicine on time when they are ill.He will also
call for help at once if they are in danger.Besides,the
robot can do some cooking and sweep the floor for the
elderly,which makes their life easier.Last but not least,
he is good at communicating with the elderly.He can tell
stories and jokes,bringing joy and laughter into the life
of the elderly.
Although robots can help us a lot,our love for the
elderly can't be replaced.Let's take good care of the
elderly with the help of robots,making sure they live
happily.
英语参考答案主题十科技与未来
(人工智能、科技发展等)
⊙主题探究
分析浙江和全国近2年中考真题可知,此主题有以下命题角度:①人工智能对学习和生活的影响;②人们
对科技发展的看法。
⊙主题短语积累
角度1人工智能对学习和生活
9.give useful study advice给出有用
7.search for information on the Internet
的影响
的学习建议
在互联网上搜索信息
1.change..for the better使.…变得
角度2人们对科技发展的看法
8.make friends online网上交友
l.draw public attention引起公众的
更好
g.pay attention to注意
关注
2.be amazed at对…感到惊讶
2.make a contribution/contributions
10.personal information个人信息
3.make full use of =take full advantage
to为…做贡献
11.bring some challenges带来一些
of充分利用…
3.change our way of life改变我们的
挑战
4.change people's lives改变人们的
生活方式
12.be careful当心
生活
4.improve living standards提高生活
l3.keep clear of..不和…接触;
水平
5.deal with应对;处理
远离…
5.make life more convenient and
6.send a message发信息
comfortable使生活更加方便、
14.stay away from远离
7.make life easier/more convenient
舒适
15.keep calm保持冷静
让生活更轻松/更便利
6.one of the most important inventions
16.be bad for/be harmful to/do harm
8.help with housework帮忙做家务
最重要的发明之一
to对…有害
⑨主题佳句积累
佳句赏析
句子仿写
@角度1
人工智能对学习和生活的影响
1.It's unbelievable that technology has progressed in such a rapid way.[RJI)令人难以置信的是,人工智能的
八下U9]
学习能力比我们想象的要快。
2.A much larger number/amount of information can be stored in more varied
[用句型It's unbelievable that
forms on the Internet than in books.WY九上M9]
仿写]
3.If we allow robots to enter the classroom,we can communicate with them,
which will make the class more interesting.(which引导的非限制性定语从
句,表明机器人对课堂的影响)
4.As technology continues to change,it's important to embrace lifelong2)科学技术的进步为使我们的生
learning to keep up with the pace.(高级词汇:①embrace v.拥抱;②keep
活更方便做出了巨大的贡献。
up with the pace跟上节奏)
[用短语make contributions to
5.There is no doubt that great changes will take place in our life in 20 years
doing sth.仿写]
(There is no doubt that..肯定科技对生活的影响)
6.I hope I can make contributions to the development of science and
technology in the future.
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主题写作进阶
@角度2人们对科技发展的看法
l.As is known to all,the Internet is playing a more and more important3)众所周知,很多学生对上网感兴
role in our daily life.(As is known to all众所周知)
趣。[用短语as is known to all
仿写]
2.Thanks to the space technology,our country has achieved a lot in exploring
space..(thanks to“多亏”,说明太空科技对国家的重大影响)
3.And it will be bad for our eyes if we spend much time going shopping on4)如果你常常访问不安全的网站,你
the Internet.(if引导条件状语从句,解释过度网购对我们的危害)
的个人信息将会处于危险之中。
[用f引导的条件状语从句仿写]
4.In my opinion,we should make good use of the Internet to study well and
get rid of the disadvantages of the Internet.
⊙真题剖析[2025金华一模]
DeepSeek的横空出世,机器人的秧歌舞,电影《哪吒2》的特技效果,引发
【审题】
了公众对科技发展的广泛关注。你校英文报正在组织相关的征文比赛,请
Step 1:审题干
根据下图提示,结合自己的生活体验
分享你的看法并投稿。
仔细阅读题干,并圈画重点内容
(主题、要点、文体、人称、时态等
内容要点
参考词汇
信息),明确写作任务。
daily life:smart phones,smart
what changes
homes,e-cars...
主题:对科技发展的看法
technology brings
e entertainment:movies,games,
videos...
要点:结合自己的生活体验发表
to us
education:e-books,online
courses...
对科技发展的看法
文体
what challenges
personal information safety
人称:
technology brings
untrue online information
too much time in front of the
to us
时态:
Technology
screen
Step2:审思维导图
左栏内容要点共三个方面:
●keep a clear mind
what we should do
●learn new technology
1what changes technology brings
●make good use of
to us
注意:1.文章中必须包含思维导图中的内容要点,参考词汇仅供选择使用;
2what challenges technology
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
brings to us
3.词数80左右;文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Technology is bringing great changes to our life.
③what we should do
注意:写作时从这三方面入手,
同时注意每个要点对应的角度
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【列框架】:参考给出的框架思维导图,需按要点提示逐步写作。
【润色与升格】
连句成篇
句子升格
Technology is bringing great changes to our life.
①用keep in touch with sb..升格
In daily life,we have smart phones.1They make it easy for us to
connect with others and get information easily.Smart homes can help us
control lights and appliances more conveniently.E-cars are more
environmentally-friendly.In entertainment,we enjoy amazing movies with
special visual effects.There are also different kinds of games and funny
②用make it possible for升格
videos online.2In education,e-books and online courses help us learn at
anytime and anywhere.
However,technology also brings challenges.Our personal information
may be in danger.There is a lot of untrue online information.And many of
us spend too much time in front of the screen.
③用It's necessary for sb.to do sth.升格
3We must understand that technology is a double-edged sword.We
should keep a clear mind,learn new technology to make our life better
and make good use of it instead of being controlled by it.
多样表达
①与…保持联系:connect with sb.=stay/keep in touch with sb.
②保持清醒的头脑:keep a clear mind=stay/keep calm and clear
③充分利用:make good use of=put..to good use
马实战演练
你同学李华设计的“老年人助手机器人(Elderly Assistant Robot)”在“杭州科普创新比赛”中获奖。假定
你是一名校园小记者,请你根据下列提示写一则报道,介绍这款机器人的外观、功能并表达看法。
Look
tall,cute...
要求:1.短文必须包括所给要点,选择
give medicine...
do housework...
communicate with..
使用参考词汇,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
Functions
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校
等信息;
4.词数80左右;文章的开头已给
Opinions
not replace,care,the elderly(老年人).
出,不计入总词数。
Li Hua,a student from Hangzhou,has won a prize in the Science Popularization and Innovation Competition
with a creative elderly assistant robot.Here is a report about this robot.
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