内容正文:
主题七人际关系与情感
(友情、亲情、人际沟通等)
⊙主题探究
人际关系
与情感
友情
亲情
人际沟通
①问题及解决方式
①情感表达与理解
沟通技巧及其重要性
②成长的意义
②对成长的影响
⊙主题短语积累
角度1友情
角度2亲情
l4.have an influence on..对…有
(1)问题及解决方式
(1)情感表达与理解
影响
l.have difficulty(in)doing sth.做某
1.be afraid to do sth.害怕做某事
角度3人际沟通
事有困难
2.under pressure承受很大压力
1.talk with sb.face to face和某人面
2.get on/along with..与…和睦相
3.need more personal space需要更
对面谈话
处;关系良好
多私人空间
2.keep in touch with sb.和某人保持
3.have a close relationship with...
4.have problems with..在…方面
联系
和…有亲密的关系
有问题
3.ask..for help向…寻求帮助
4.refuse to do sth.拒绝做某事
5.company with family陪伴家人
4.develop communication skills培养
5.argue/fight with sb.和某人吵架
6.advise sb.to do sth.suggest
交流技巧
6.hear from接到(某人的)信、电
doing sth.建议(某人)做某事
5.communicate with..和…沟通
话等
7.spend time with sb.与某人共度
6.be good with sb.善于和某人打
7.share joy with..和…分享喜悦
时光
交道
8.reach for your hand伸出援手
(2)对成长的影响
7.be friendly/kind/nice to sb.对某
9.pul/work together齐心协力;通力
8.be patient with sb.对某人有耐心
人友好/友善
合作
9.overcome any difficulties克服任何
8.believe in/trust sb.信任某人
(2)对成长的意义
困难
9.take pride in/be proud of
l0.bring out the best in me使我表现10.bring us warmth and courage带给
感到自豪
出最好的一面
我们温暖和勇气
10.stand out出色;杰出
l1.develop team spirit培养团队精神
11.be thankful to sb.感激某人
11.work hard on.…在…方面努力
12.achieve/realize one's dream实现
12.keep a good mood保持好心情
12.There is no need to worry about...
某人的梦想
13.be responsible for..对…负责
没有必要担心…
。主题佳句积累
佳句赏析
句子仿写
@角度1友情
l.The more I get to know Julie,the more I realized that we have a lot in 1)朋友是一个愿意倾听你、给你提
common.[RJ九全U11]
供帮助并给予你关心和支持的
2.We should respect each other's differences and learn from each other.
人。[用wh0引导的定语从句和
教材RU八上U10]
短语be willing to仿写]
3.I think friends are like books-we don't need a lot of them as long as they're
good.(as long as引导条件状语从句)
4.I think the first step is to find someone you trust to talk to.
5.You should be willing to share the sadness and happiness with others
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浙江新中考英语主题写作进阶
©角度2亲情
1.My problem is that I can't get on with my family..(that引导表语从句引出2)我的妈妈真的很关心我。当我
问题)》
难过时,她会坐在我旁边安慰
2.My parents are very understanding.When I fail my exam,they never push
我。[用when引导的时间状语
me so hard.(when引导时间状语从句,举例说明父母的包容)
从句仿写]
3.I'm stressed because my parents always push me to get an A in the exam.
(push sb.to do sth.迫使某人做某事)
4.In order to solve the problem,I picked up my courage and tried to
communicate with my parents.
@角度3人际沟通
l.Teamwork made me realize the importance of communication as well as trust3)为了避免误会,和别人聊天时,
among team members.
你要尽力把自己的想法表达清
2.It was useful for us to keep calm and communicate actively to deal with
楚。[用try one's best仿写]
problems.
3.Respecting each other is the key to having a better relationship.
4.If we want to build good personal relationships,we should try our best to
understand each other.
⊙真题剖析[2025台州椒江区二模]
假如你是李华,你的英国好友Mke向父母征询送什么生日礼物给同学
【审题】
Jack,他们意见不统一,并给他造成困惑。请你根据以下图文中的相关信息,
Step1:审题干
写一封邮件,向他推荐其中一个生日礼物并阐述理由
仔细阅读作文题干,并圈画重点内
容(主题、写作对象、文体、人称、时
Books
Flowers
态等信息),明确写作任务。
make him happy and relaxed
show our love and care
improve his language skills
bring beauty and a touch
of nature
主题:推荐一个生日礼物并阐述
help him get lots of knowledge
·smell nice and leave a
happy memory
理由(至少2点)
写作对象:好友Mike
文体:
人称:
注意:1.邮件需包含所选礼物至少两点相关信息,可适当发挥;
时态:
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
Step2:审导图信息
3.词数:80左右;邮件的首尾和第一句已给出,不计入总词数。
1.了解Mike的困惑:
Dear Mike
不确定给Jack送什么礼物。
How is everything going?
2.明确父母提供的两种礼物
信息:
一个是books,一个是flowers,分别
Yours,
给出送两种礼物的至少2个理由。
Li Hua
特别注意:只能选一种礼物推荐。
浙江新中考英语
主题写作进阶
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【列框架】
开头:表示问候,并直接给出自己的建议
句子:
开头
开头句:How is everything going?(已给出)
给出推荐理由(不少于两点)
将短语变为句子
理由l:make him happy and relaxed
句子:
Word Bank:be good for,light up one's day,bring
happiness...
理由2:improve his language skills
句子:
推荐
Word Bank:build up vocabulary and grammar
Books
skills,learn about more writting
中间
skills...
句子:
理由3:help him get lots of knowledge
Word Bank:enrich his daily life with new ideas.
lead sb.to do sth.,explore the world
句子:
理由1:show our love and care
Word Bank:choose...from,shout louder than
句子:
推荐
理由2:bring beauty and a touch of nature
Flowers
Word Bank brighten room,cheer up,remind of..
理由3:smell nice and leave a happy memory
句子:
Word Bank:create sweet memories,leave a deep
impression on...
句子:
结尾
结束语:希望提供的建议有用,并送上诚挚祝福
注:最后用连接词将上面句子连起来初步成篇章。
【润色与升格】(注意语言的得体性,给朋友写邮件,语言表达要轻松、愉快)
连句成篇
句子升格
范文一:推荐Books
①用when it comes to..升格
Dear Mike,
How is everything going?1I'm glad to share my thoughts on birthday
s
2Honestly,I like books better than flowers.There are many reasons for
②用prefer sth.to sth.升格
it.
3First of all,books can make him relaxed and bring him happiness.This
is good for his emotional well-being.Secondly,reading books is a great way to
improve his language skills.Reading builds up vocabulary and grammar skills
without any boring experience.Finally,books can lead him to explore the
③用which引导的非限定性定语从
world.From space science to ancient history,books open doors to new
句和短语be beneficial to升格
knowledge and cultures!
Hope my advice can help you.Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
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浙江新中考英语
主题写作进阶
范文二:推荐Flowers
①用come up with升格
Dear Mike,
How is everything going?DI've got a very good idea about birthday gifts
that you can choose.
I suggest flowers as birthday gifts rather than books for three reasons
First,flowers show love.Choosing someone's favourite flowers proves you truly
②用whenever和短语remind of升格
care.What's more,flowers bring nature's beauty.Blooms immediately
brighten up rooms like sunshine.Last but not least,they leave you sweet
memories.2I'm sure if Jack catches the smell of the flowers,it will
immediately make him think of the special gift you chose.Unlike ordinary
③用There's no doubt that和fall
gifts,flowers speak the language of the heart.
in love with升格
3I'm sure your friend will love your gift.
Yours,
Li Hua
马实战演练
父母是我们最亲的人,但我们有时会在与父母沟通时遇到困难。请根据所给思维导图的提示,以“How to
Communicate with Our Parents'”为题用英语写一篇短文,谈谈与父母沟通的技巧和做法。
要求:1.文中需包含思维导图中的主要内容;
2.文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名;
3.词数80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数。
Make a list of things
Talk with them
more!
our parents and we
disagree about.
Communicate
with our parents
If we have
disagreements,try
(not to get too angry!
Learn how to really
listern!..
How to Communicate with Our Parents
Communication with parents is very important in our life.
Hope you can have proper communication with your parents.
浙江新中考英语主题写作进阶
374)As students,we must always keep traffic rules in mind and
follow them strictly.
【真题剖析】
审题:应用文一发言稿;第一人称和第二人称;一般现
在时
【润色与升格】
DAs a saying goes,"Early to bed and early to rise makes a
man healthy,wealthy and wise.
2As for eating habits,we'd better keep balanced diets and
avoid overeating.
3Last but not least,I suggest drinking enough water every day.
【实战演练】
第一篇
范文一:
To keep fit,I prefer to exercise with partners.It's a great idea
because exercising with friends can bring me more fun and make
me feel less bored.Also,we can encourage each other when we
feel tired or lazy.This way,we not only improve our health but
also make our friendship stronger.
Starting from next month,I will exercise with my best
friend,Li Hua,three times a week after school.We will choose
different activities,like playing badminton on Monday,running
in the park on Wednesday,and swimming on weekends.We'll
also take photos to see our changes and cheer for each other
every time.
I believe if we keep moving together,we will stay healthy
and happy!
范文二:
To keep fit,I decide to get personal coaches.Personal
coaches can make plans just for me.These plans are good for
my body and what I want to achieve.Also,they can tell me how
to exercise in the right way and what to eat.
My plan is to have a one-hour training with the coach three
times a week.The coach will show me different exercises.
Sometimes we'll do exercises to make me strong,and sometimes
we'll do exercises to make me run faster.The coach will also
check if I'm doing the exercises correctly.Besides,the coach
will give me advice on food,like eating more vegetables and
less junk food.
With a personal coach,I can get fit in a good way.The
coach knows a lot and can help me all the time.I believe I'll
become healthier soon.
第二篇
School Safety
School safety is very important because it can provides a
good environment for students to study and grow.
Schools should take some measures to make sure of their
students'safety.First,set up rules to stop students from
fighting,so they won't get hurt.Second,to prevent accidents,
teachers can take turns to watch and remind students to pay
attention in some key areas such as hallways and playgrounds
during breaks.Third,students can have safety classes often,
which helps them know what to do when they face danger.
With these measures,our school will be a safer place.
主题七人际关系与情感
【主题佳句积累】一句子仿写
1)A friend is a person who is willing to listen to you,offer you
help,and give you care and support.
浙江新中考车
2)My mom really cares about me.When I'm sad,she will sit
next to/beside me and comfort me.
3)To avoid misunderstanding,when you chat with others,you
need to try your best to express your ideas clearly.
【真题剖析】
审题:应用文一邮件;第一和第二人称为主;一般现在时
【润色与升格】
范文一:
DWhen it comes to birthday gifts,I'm glad to share my
thoughts with you.
Honestly,I prefer books to flowers.
3 First of all,books can make him relaxed and bring him
happiness,which is beneficial to his emotional well-being.
范文二:
DI've come up with a very good idea about birthday gifts that
you can choose.
2I'm sure whenever Jack catches the smell of the flowers,it
will immediately remind him of the special gift you chose.
3There's no doubt that your friend will fall in love with your
gift.
【实战演练】
How to Communicate with Our Parents?
Communication with parents is very important in our life.
As we grow older,we'll find it not easy to communicate with our
parents.So what should we do when communicating with them?
Here are some of my ideas.
Firstly,we can make a list of things that our parents and
we disagree.Try to find out reasons why we disagree with each
other and accept each other's ideas little by little.If we still
have disagreements,we'd better not get too angry.Secondly
we should talk with them more!Sharing ideas can make us
closer.Besides,we should also learn how to really listen
Listening is a skill that must be learned and practiced.Finally,
be sure to be polite.
Hope you can have proper communication with your
parents.
主题八社会实践与观察
【主题佳句积累】一句子仿写
1)I believe that everyone can play a part in voluntary activities.
2)A day trip to the farm is of great value as it helps us
understand where food comes from.
3)I'm sure(that)it'll be relaxing to walk in the fresh air.
4)The West Lake is so beautiful that it takes my breath away.
5)We try our best to use cloth bags instead of plastic bags,and
主
this can make a real difference to the environment.
【真题剖析】审题:应用文一自荐信;第一人称;一般
写
现在时
作
【润色与升格】
进
DI'm really crazy about sports,especially running,and I'm
阶
ready to support school events with all my heart.
2I speak English fluently and I'm good at taking photos,which
I believe will be of great help for reporting during the sports
meet.
【实战演练】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'd like to choose Plan A-Exploring the Farm.I love
nature,and the farm is a great place to enjoy fresh air and green
fields.
英语参考答案
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