内容正文:
主题九观点与建议表达
(对某一现象或问题的看法和建议等)
已主题探究
分析浙江和全国近2年中考真题及模拟题可知,此主题有以下命题角度:①描述一个现象;②发表观点;
③提出建议。
⊙主题短语积累
角度1描述一个现象
2.be polite to对…有礼貌
14.It's possible that..有可能…
1.fail an exam考试不及格
3.obey the rules遵守规则
15.There are different ideas about...,
2.get into trouble遇到麻烦;陷入困境
4.get on well with与…相处得好
but I think..关于…有不同看
5.have courage to face sth.有勇气面
3.in the face of面对
法,但我认为…
对某事
角度3提出建议
4.deal with处理
6.overcome your trouble克服你的
1.had better do sth..最好做某事
5.laugh at/make fun of嘲笑;取笑
困难
2.ought to do sth./should do sth.
6.be worried about担心
7.learn from mistakes从错误中吸取
应该做某事
7.be absent from缺席
教训
3.Why not do sth.=Why don't you
8.feel stressed out感到压力大
8.get well prepared for为…做好
do sth.?你为什么不做某事呢?
9.suffer from遭受
准备
4.What/How about doing sth.?做某
l0.have difficulty(in)studying在学
9,make great progress取得巨大进步
事怎么样?
习方面有困难
10.in my opinion=from my point of5.It's a good idea to do sth.做某事
11.fall behind in study学业落后
view=as for me在我看来
是个好主意
12.be anxious/upset about..
11.t's clear to me that.我很6.You can try doing sth..你可以试着
清楚…
做某事
焦虑/难过
12.I hold the view that..我持有这7.It's necessary to do sth.有必要做
13.break the rules违反规则
样一种观点;我认为…
某事
角度2发表观点
13.It seems to me that.在我看来
8.There is no need to do sth.没有必
1.pay attention to注意;关注
似乎…
要做某事
⑨主题佳句积累
佳句赏析
句子仿写
巴角度1
描述一个现象
l.Everyone is born with the ability to learn.But whether or not you can do 1)我们能否通过考试取决于我们
this well depends on your learning habits.[RJ U1]
学习有多努力。[用短语whether
2.Exercise such as playing sports is fun,and you can spend time with your
or not和depend on仿写]
friends and family as you play together.[RJAU2]
3.Hobbies can make you grow as a person,develop your interests and help
you learn new skills.[WY八下M6]
4.You'll make mistakes along the way,but the key is to learn from your
mistakes and never give up.[RJ九全Ul4]
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浙江新中考英语主题写作进阶
色角度2发表观点
1.Teenagers think they should be allowed to practice their hobbies as much as:2)你读的书越多,就会变得越有智
they want..[RJ九全U7]
慧。[用“the+比较级,the+比
2.The earlier kids learn to be independent,the better it is for their future.
较级”仿写]
[RJ八下U3]
3.Although it's normal to want successful children,it's even more important to
have happy children..[RJ八下U4]
3)有些学生喜欢打篮球,而我更喜
4.While some people stick to only one kind of movie,I prefer watching
欢在图书馆看书。[用while,
different kinds depending on how I feel that day.[RJU9]
prefer doing sth.仿写]
5.As far as I am concerned,the ways to get along with classmates come
down to the following four aspects.
@角度3提出建议
1.Usually people have no idea about what to do during an earthquake,so here
4)有些人几乎不知道节约用水有
is some advice.[WY八上M12]
多重要。[用短语have no idea
2.As you mentioned in the letter,I have some advice for you.
about仿写]
3.You'd better tell him the truth now.He may be angry with you,but at
least you will show that you are honest.[WY M4]
5)首先要做的是在课堂上认真听
4.What comes first is to keep fit by taking part in all kinds of exercise like
讲。[用短语What comes first is
running and swimming.
to仿写]
5.If you put these suggestions above into use,I believe you'll build good
relationships with classmates.
⊙真题剖析[2025杭州西湖区一模]
英语杂志Sunny Teens正在征集中学生对体育运动的看法。你校开展了
【审题】
Step1:审题干
调查,下图是“What do you enjoy most about playing sports?”这一问题的汇总数
仔细阅读题干,并圈画重点内容
据。请用英语向杂志投稿,简要介绍调查结果(不少于三条),并结合个人
(主题、要点、文体、人称、时态等
信息),明确写作任务。
爱好谈谈你对该问题的看法。
主题:中学生对体育运动的看法
注意:1.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
要点:①简要介绍调查结果一
2.词数80左右;文章的开头已给出,不计人总词数。
做运动的五个原因(不少
Why do you play sports?
于三个);②结合个人爱好
Others
谈谈你对该问题的看法。
Learning new skills
文体:
人称:
Reducing stress
时态:
Having fun
Step2:审调查数据
Being fit and healthy
首先,此类作文要分析横轴和竖
0
5101520253040
轴分别代表的内容:
Percentage (%
横轴:百分比
Our school did a survey among students last week,asking what we enjoy most
竖轴:各类运动喜好原因的分类
about playing sports.
其次,要结合横轴和竖轴内容综
合分析,确定调查结果
最后,写作时要注意先描述调查
结果,再谈论自己的看法。
浙江新中考英语主题写作进阶
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【列框架】
开头句:Our school did a survey among students
开头:开门见山,引出调查结果
开头
last week,asking what we enjoy most
句子:
about playing sports..(已给出)
介绍一下调查结果(不少于三条)
将短语变为句子
结果1:Being fit and healthy::about25%
句子:
Word Bank:according to,keep fit/healthy,make
your body strong,lose weight
结果2:Having fun:about40%
Word Bank:prefer doing sth.,make you feel
句子:
happy/excited,create exciting
moments,a great way to enjoy
Opinions
yourself,cheer yourself up
中间
on sports
结果3:Reducing stress:about20%
句子:
Word Bank:choose to do sth.,let out stress,
calm your mind,make you feel
relaxed/better
结果4:Learning new skills:about10%
句子:
Word Bank:find...most amazing,take up new
hobbies,practice teamwork,
challenge yourself
结果5:0 thers:about5%
句子:
Word Bank:the best way to do sth.,make new
friends,learn to never give up,make
your life colorful
句子:
结尾
谈论自己的看法:be good for your health,help
you sleep well,keep energetic
注:最后用连接词将上面句子连起来初步成篇章。
【润色与升格】
连句成篇
句子升格
Our school did a survey among students last week,asking what we
①用find it enjoyable to pick up升格
enjoy most about playing sports.The results are quite interesting.
DAccording to the survey,about 10%of the students enjoy
learning new skills through sports.Another 20%enjoy sports because
it helps them reduce stress.2About 40%of the students consider
②用while连接两个句子升格,表示对比
having fun as the most amazing part,and about 25%think being fit
and healthy is the best thing about sports.Only 5%choose"Others".
As for me,I really like playing basketball.I enjoy the process of
learning new skills.It's a great way to challenge myself.Besides,
③用fade away和in no time升格
playing basketball with my friends fills us with joy.3We share
laughter,cheer each other on,and the stress from studies disappears
soon.Moreover,it keeps me fit and energetic.So,playing sports is
not only good for our body but also brings us joy and new skills.
多样表达
①根据/基于:according to=based on
②充满:be filled with=be full of
③此外;而且:moreover=what's more=besides=in addition
④保持健康:be fit and healthy=keep/'stay fit/healthy=keep/'stay in good health
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浙江新中考英语主题写作进阶
马实战演练
第一篇
假如你是李华,你在班级中开展了一项关于“如何度过初中毕业后的暑假”的调查。请根据下表调查结
果,写一篇英语短文在英语课上分享,并表达你的个人观点及理由。
Opinions
Reasons
·relax
Some classmates
go traveling
·increase knowledge
·develop abilities
Others
try new things
·get great pleasure
注意:1.文中必须包括所给的内容要点,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3.词数80左右,首句已给出,不计入总词数。
Recently,I have done a survey among my classmates about how to spend the coming summer vacation.
第二篇
学校下周将举行一场英语辩论赛,正反两方同学将以“Should students use AI tools in learning?”为主题展
开辩论。以下是正反两方所持观点及其论据。请你根据写作要求,结合自身实际,选择你认同的观点,用英语
写一篇辩论稿。
Should students use AI tools in learning?
The pros(正方)
The cons(反方)
VAI saves time on boring tasks.
x AI stops real thinking.
VAI helps weak students learn.
x AI kills creativity.
与l
Your opinions?
注意:1.文中须包含所选支持观点的要点提示,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Should Students Use AI Tools in Learning?
AI is everywhere today,but should students use it in learning?
浙江新中考英语主题写作进阶
45To begin with,it's really interesting for us to learn from
farmers.They can teach us how to grow vegetables,and then
we can try to plant fresh and healthy vegetables in our own
homes.Besides,picking tomatoes will be fun too.We can taste
the tomatoes picked by ourselves,which must be super
delicious.What's more,in order to make the trip more
interesting,we can add two more activities.We can feed the
cute little animals on the farm,like rabbits and chickens.Last
but not least,we can have a picnic there because sitting on the
grass,sharing food and laughing will make it a wonderful day
surely.
I believe this farm trip will not only let us get close to
nature but also bring us a lot of fun.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Wang Hua
主题九观点与建议表达
【主题佳句积累】一句子仿写
1)Whether or not we can pass the exam depends on how hard
we study.
2)The more books you read,the wiser you'll be.
3)Some students like playing basketball,while I prefer reading
in the library.
4)Some people have no idea about how important it is to save
water.
5)What comes first is to listen carefully in class.
【真题剖析】审题:说明文;第三人称和第一人称;一般
现在时
【润色与升格】
DAccording to the survey,about 10%of the students find it
enjoyable to pick up new skills through sports.
2About 40%of the students consider having fun as the most
amazing part,while about 25%think being fit and healthy is
the best thing about sports.
3We share laughter,cheer each other on,and the stress from
studies fades away in no time.
【实战演练】
第一篇
Recently,I have done a survey among my classmates
about how to spend the coming summer vacation.Here are
the results.
Some of my classmates believe that traveling is the best
主
way to enjoy an exciting break.They say exploring new
places allows them to return feeling relaxed.What's more,
写
it's a great chance to open their eyes and learn about
作
different cultures.
讲
阶
Others are excited to try something completely
new-whether it's picking up a skill like cooking,
surfing,or photography.They think stepping out of their
comfort zone will not only improve their abilities but also
make their summer truly unforgettable.
As for me,I've decided to spend my time volunteering.
Helping others and contributing to society sound like the
perfect way to make my vacation both active and
meaningful.After all,what could be better than making a
difference to people in need?
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第二篇
Should Students Use AI Tools in Learning?
AI is everywhere today,but should students use it in
learning?I firmly believe students should use AI tools for
learning.
Firstly,AI saves time on boring tasks.For example,when
we need to collect basic information for projects,AI can quickly
gather and sort information,allowing us to focus on deeper
thinking.Secondly,it helps the weak students learn.AI-based
educational platforms can provide proper study plans.If a
student struggles with math,then AI can offer targeted exercises
and explanations,meeting their needs.Moreover,AI can share
us learning resources from all over the world,which broadens
our horizons.
In conclusion,when we use Al tools properly,they are
valuable helpers in our learning journey.
主题十科技与未来
【主题佳句积累】一句子仿写
1)It's unbelievable that AI's learning ability is faster than we
imagined.
2)The progress of science and technology makes great
contributions to making our life more convenient.
3)As is known to all,many students are interested in getting
online.
4)If you often visit unsafe websites,your personal information
will be at risk/in danger.
【真题剖析】审题:说明文;第三人称和第一人称;一般
现在时
【润色与升格】
DThey make it easy for us to keep in touch with others and get
information easily.
2In education,e-books and online courses make it possible for
us to learn at anytime and anywhere.
3It's necessary for us to understand that technology is a double-
edged sword.
【实战演练】
Li Hua,a student from Hangzhou,has won a prize
in the Science Popularization and Innovation Competition
with a creative elderly assistant robot.Here is a report
about this robot.
The robot is tall and looks very cute with big eyes.
He looks like a friendly person,making it easier for the
elderly to accept him.
The robot is of great use.First,he can give the
elderly medicine on time when they are ill.He will also
call for help at once if they are in danger.Besides,the
robot can do some cooking and sweep the floor for the
elderly,which makes their life easier.Last but not least,
he is good at communicating with the elderly.He can tell
stories and jokes,bringing joy and laughter into the life
of the elderly.
Although robots can help us a lot,our love for the
elderly can't be replaced.Let's take good care of the
elderly with the help of robots,making sure they live
happily.
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