内容正文:
主题五
旅行与休闲
(地点推荐、休闲活动、旅游经历)
已主题探究
①经典景点:杭州西湖、雁荡山、故宫、大雁塔、布达拉官等
地点推荐
②自然景观:黄山、九寨沟、壶口瀑布等
③特色建筑:丽江古城、乌镇、宏村等
①轻松体验类:游西湖、野餐、放风筝、拍照等
旅行与休闲
休闲活动
②文化互动类:制作剪纸、尝试当地手工艺等
③运动探险类:爬山、划船、骑行等
旅游经历
途中趣事、旅行感悟
⊙主题短语积累
角度1地点推荐
l3.be right for正适合
8.put up a tent搭帐篷
1.prefer A to B比起B更喜欢A
14.all over the world/home and
9.make a fire生火
2.be attracted by被…吸引
abroad世界各地
10.buy local products买当地特产
11.eat local snacks吃当地的小吃
3.tourist attraction旅游景点
15.millions of visitors数以百万计的
4.places of interest名胜古迹
游客
角度3旅游经历
5.natural scenery自然景观
l6.have a large population拥有大量
1.have fun/have a good time/enjoy
的人口
oneself玩得开心
6.historical buildings历史建筑
角度2休闲活动
2.leam..from.…从…中学到…
7.pay a visit to参观
3.lose oneself in沉醉其中
1.set off动身;启程
8.one of the most popular a
attractions
4.feel at home感到舒适自在
2.give sb.alif捎某人一程
最受欢迎的景点之一
5.tired but happy疲惫但开心
3.go to the beach去海滩
9.be famous for因…而出名
6.an unforgettable experience一次难
4.enjoy the beauty of nature享受自
忘的经历
10.be famous as作为…而出名
然之美
7.leave a deep impression on sb.
11.have a history of.…years有…
5.climb the mountains爬山
某人留下深刻的印象
年的历史
6.visit the museums参观博物馆
8.leave sweet memories留下甜蜜的
12.locate in/lie in位于
7.go camping去露营
回忆
⑨主题佳句积累
佳句赏析
句子仿写
©角度1
地点推荐
l.One of the most interesting museums that I've ever been to is American 1)西湖是中国最美的湖泊之一,每
Computer Museum.
年很多人去游览。[用“one of
2.The sea in Hainan is blue and beautiful,where you can enjoy the beach and
the+形容词最高级+可数名词
sunshine.(where引导的定语从句)
复数”仿写]
3.Beijing is an ancient city with a lot of historical buildings.So you can learn
something about history here.
4.There are many places of interest in Beijing,but the one you can't miss is
the Great Wall
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@角度2休闲活动
l.Nothing beats taking a slow walk in the park after a busy day.The fresh air2)在古镇旅行时,我们决定参加当
and green trees always make me feel calm.
地的民俗舞会。[用短语take
2.It's nice to sit by the window,read a good book,and listen to soft music.
part in仿写]
Such simple things help me forget tiredness.
3.We can take part in many kinds of activities while visiting tea museum,
such as making tea and drinking tea.
4.I photoed many beautiful moments with my camera,hoping to keep the
memories alive forever.
@角度3旅游经历
1.Now more and more people are interested in traveling,considering it to be3)森林里的空气非常清新,我们忍不
an opportunity to experience life and increase knowledge.(consider...to be
住深呼吸,享受这一刻。[用“s0.
认为…是)
that.…引导的结果状语从句”仿写]
2.Traveling can not only help us see the best sights but also open our eyes to
the outside world.(用not only.but also.并列连接旅行的两个作用)
3.The scenery along the way was so breathtaking that I couldn't take my eyes4)当我去西湖边游玩时,我几乎无
off it..(so.that..引导结果状语从句)
法将目光从那清澈的湖水移开。
4.During the following days,we visited many places of interest,which all
[用短语take my eyes off仿写]
made a deep impression on me.(which引导非限制性定语从句,作补充
说明)
⊙真题剖析[2025浙江中考]
假如你是李华,你正在参与校报主题为“A Good Way to Relax'”的征稿
【审题】
Step1:审题干
活动,请根据以下相关信息,结合自身体验,选择或自定放松方式,完成一篇
仔细阅读题干,并圈画重点内容
稿件。
(主题、文体、人称、时态、要点等
信息),明确写作任务。
A Good Way to Relax
主题:A Good Way to Relax
+What do you do to relax?
文体:
Ways to relax
人称:
▲do sports
(when/where/with whom...)
▲read books
+What do you think of it?
时态:
▲watch movies
●keep healthy
Step2:审导图信息
A…
●open my eyes
。develop friendship
1.左栏信息(由主题可知,只能
●.…
介绍一种放松的方式)
Ways to relax
①do sports
注意:1.提供的信息仅供参考使用;
②read books
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
③watch movies
3.词数80词左右。
④…
A Good Way to Relax
2.右栏信息(提供了两种写作角
度)
角度1:介绍放松的方式
(时间、地,点、人物)
角度2:介绍这样做的好处
(保持健康、开阔眼界、增进友
谊……)
浙江新中考英语主题写作进阶
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【列框架】
开头句:开门见山,介绍适合你的一种放松的方式
句子:
Word Bank:Among all the way to relax,I think..is the perfect
开头
choice for me...,...of great importance to relax,
the best way to relax is to...,when it comes to
relax,I believe...
选择或自定一种
从两个角度展开写作
放松方式介绍
(此处以选择做运动为例)
将短语变为句子
角度1:What do you do to relax?
句子:
(when/where/with whom...)
Word Bank:every weekend,with
句子:
中间
my friends/my classmates,
play sports,in the park,in the
play ground,play with each
other,for about an hour a day.
①dosports
play basketball...
句子:
②read books
③watch movies
角度2:What do you think of it?
①keep healthy
句子:
④…
②open my eyes
③develop friendship
句子:
④..
Word Bank:be good for health,stay
strong and energetic,learn to
work as a team,open my eyes
on,made a great difference to,
help develop friendship...
结尾句:总结我的放松方式并希望了解其他的放松方式
句子:
结尾
Word Bank:in a word,in short,have a good time,have fin,
make...happyand healthy,benefit,Why not...?,
What about...?
注:最后用连接词将上面句子连起来初步成篇章。
【润色与升格】
连句成篇
句子升格
范文一:选择体育运动为最佳放松方式
①用短语when it comes to升格
A Good Way to Relax
DThere are many ways to get relaxed for us to choose from.As for
me,I'd like to do sports when I am busy or tired.
2On weekends,I often ask my friends or my father to play
②用which引导的定语从句升格
basketball with me in the playground.It's good for my health.We
always play against each other for about one and a half hours.Although
I feel tired after the game,it makes me full of energy and strong.
3Doing sports has influenced me a lot in my life.I can keep healthy
③用短语make a great difference to升格
and it helps me develop friendship.This is my way to get relaxed.
Would you like to share your good ways with me?
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主题写作进阶
范文二:选择阅读为最佳放松方式
①用短语be of great importance to升格
DAs our school life becomes increasingly busy,it is important to
find a good way to relax.Some people like listening to music or
watching movies,but I think the best way to relax is to read books.
②用s0.that结构升格
Last month,I felt very tired after a long day of study and two tests.
When I got home,I picked up a science book,sat by the window and
started reading.As soon as I began,I forgot about my tiredness.2The
③用短语make it possible for me to do
story was interesting,and I didn't even notice how much time had
sth.升格
passed.After that,I felt much better and more relaxed.
3Reading makes me open my eyes to new ideas.Not only does it
help me relax,but it also improves my thinking skills.I will continue
reading because it is both fun and useful.
马实战演练[2025金华义乌市二模]
假设你是李华,你的加拿大好友Robert计划暑假来中国体验city-walk(城市漫步)。请根据以下信息,
写一封邮件,向他推荐一处适合city-walk的地点。
Ilove nature.I am also interested in
Chinese culture.
Robert
old street
city park
·ancient
·peaceful
local food
beautiful views
traditional arts,like
fun activities.like
paper-cutting
playing Tai Chi
…
注意:1.邮件需包含所选地点的至少两点相关信息,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3.词数80左右,邮件的首尾和第一句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Robert,
I'm glad to know that you are planning a visit to China this summer holiday.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
浙江新中考英语主题写作进阶
29【真题剖析】审题:应用文一邮件;第一、二人称为
主;一般现在时
【润色与升格】
范文一:
DFirst,it's a good idea to watch some speech videos.
2Second,practice more with friends,as the saying goes/after
al,“practice makes perfect..”
3Last but not least,make it a habit to read short Chinese
articles aloud every morning,because it's helpful to make
your pronunciation better.
范文二:
DPractice Chinese writing carefully every day,because tidy
handwriting not only makes your work look much better,but
also makes it easy for teachers to read.
2Besides,there is no doubt that it is necessary to keep a
Chinese diary.
3It helps you put the skills you've learned to good use.
【实战演练】
范文一:
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to hear that you want to bring a traditional Chinese
gift for your family when you return to the UK.I'd like to
recommend paper-cutting to you.Here are my reasons.
First of all,paper-cutting is a traditional art that has a long
history in China.Skilled workers can cut red paper into many
different patterns,like lovely animals such as dragons and
birds,beautiful flowers and lucky Chinese characters.What's
more,it can show good wishes.For example,paper-cuttings
with the character“福”(fu,which means good luck)are often
used in festivals to wish for a happy and good life.It's not only
a gift but also a part of Chinese culture.
I'm sure your family will love it.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文二:
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to hear that you want to bring a traditional Chinese
gift for your family when you return to the UK.I think Chinese
painting is a great choice.Here are my reasons.
Chinese painting has a very long history.Artists use
different brushes and ink to make wonderful paintings which can
show the great beauty of Chinese art.For example,a landscape
painting with big mountains and clean rivers may make people
feel like they are in nature.A flower-and-bird painting is also
主
lovely,with fine details that make the things in it look real.
Either way,your family will be surprised by the special charm
写
of Chinese painting.What a good way to let them know about
作
Chinese art!
进
I'm sure your family will love it.
阶
Yours,
Li Hua
主题五旅行与休闲
【主题佳句积累】一句子仿写
1)The West Lake is one of the most beautiful lakes in China,
and many people visit it every year.
2)We decided to take part in the local folk dance party during
our trip to the old town.
3)The air in the forest was so fresh that we couldn't help taking
deep breaths to enjoy the moment
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4)When I visited the West Lake,I could hardly take my eyes
off the clear water
【真题剖析】
审题:说明文;第一人称为主;一般现在时
【润色与升格】
范文一:
DWhen it comes to getting relaxed,there are many ways for us
to choose from
2On weekends,I often ask my friends or my father to play
basketball with me in the playground,which is good for my
health.
3Doing sports has made a great difference to me in my life.
范文二:
DAs our school life becomes increasingly busy,it is of great
importance to find a good way to relax.
2The story was so interesting that I didn't even notice how
much time had passed.
3Reading makes it possible for me to open my eyes to new
ideas
【实战演练】
范文一:
Dear Robert,
I'm glad to know that you are planning a visit to China this
summer holiday.I strongly believe that you will fall in love with
the old street here!Here are my reasons.
First,there are ancient buildings with a long history.
Second,it's a good place to try different kinds of local food like
rice cakes and dumplings.Last but not least,you can also
enjoy traditional arts like paper-cutting here.People sell
colorful hand-made things too.Though the street is not wide,it
is quite busy.Walking along the street makes you have a better
understanding of Chinese culture.Don't forget to take photos to
record them!
I'm sure you'll have a great time.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
范文二:
Dear Robert,
I'm glad to know that you are planning a visit to China this
summer holiday.As I know,you are a fan of getting close to
nature,so I think the city park will be a better choice for you!
First,it is so peaceful that you can even hear birds
singing.Second,the tower in the centre of the park is the best
place to enjoy the beautiful views.Besides,every morning,
people play Tai Chi there,which is a good way to exercise.
They might invite you to join them.In the afternoon,you can
drink tea or play chess under the old tall trees.It's a perfect
place where you can relax and get a taste of local life.
Hope you will like it!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
主题六健康与安全
【主题佳句积累】一句子仿写
1)It's very important for our health to have good sleeping
habits.
2)Don't eat fast food too often because it is harmful to our
health.
3)Facing difficult situations bravely can not only make us
stronger,but also help us grow into wiser people
英语参考答案