内容正文:
主题八社会实践与观察
(志愿服务、劳动实践、环保活动等)
已主题探究
①分享志愿服务经历
①感受自然的力量:观察动植物,
②谈谈参加志愿服务的意义与感悟
志愿
体验四季变化
服务
亲近
②亲近自然的好处:缓解压力;
自然
培激发对自然的热爱
分享参加社会劳动的经历和
践
感受
社会
与
环保
①个人行动:环保生活减少浪费
劳动
观
活动
等);垃圾分类;资源再利用
①介绍家务的内容及对做家
劳动
察
②集体责任:校园环保活动;城
务的看法
实践
保护
市美化;旅游时注意环保
②描述一次做家务的经历并
家务
环境
③科技创新:环保作品展(变废为
谈谈体会
劳动
宝等)
⊙主题短语积累
角度1志愿服务
11.take out the rubbish倒垃圾
10.breathe the fresh air take in the
1.volunteer to do sth.志愿做某事
12.sweep the floor扫地
fresh air呼吸新鲜空气
2.give out food分发食物
13.wash clothes洗衣服
11.relax in nature在自然中放松
3.clean up the city parks清理城市
14.tidy(up)the room整理房间
12.watch the sunrise/sunset观看日
公园
15.make the bed整理床铺
出/日落
16.do housework/help with chores
(2)保护环境
4.help the homeless帮助无家可归的人
家务
5.cheer up the sick kids鼓舞生病的
13.cut down砍倒
17.take care of照顾
14.bein(great)danger处于(极大
孩子
18.depend on依靠;依赖
的)危险中
6.raise money for the disabled为残
l9.do one''s part in doing sth.尽某人
15.result in/lead to导致;造成
疾人筹钱
的职责做某事
16.be bad for be harmful to/do
角度2劳动实践
20.understand the idea of fairness
harm to对…有害
(1)社会劳动
解公平的概念
17.die out灭绝;消失
1.a meaningful activity有意义的活动
21.have a better relationship with
18.throw sth.around/,about到处乱
2.reduce study pressure减轻学习压力
parents和父母有更好的关系
扔某物
3.be good for our health有益于我们
角度3环保活动
19.bring out带来;引起
的健康
(1)亲近自然
20.call on sb.to do sth.号召某人
4.get a strong feeling of satisfaction
1.get close to nature亲近自然
做某事
获得强烈的满足感
2.get along with nature与自然和睦
21.make good use of.../put...to good
use好好利用…
5.be more independent and responsible
相处
3.explore the natural world探索自然
22.play a role/part in..在…中起
变得更独立和负责
世界
作用
6.be confident about oneself对自己
4.be worth visiting值得参观
23.have an influence/effect on.
感到自信
5.places of interest名胜古迹
影响;起作用
7.realize the importance of labor意识
6.unforgettable/sweet memories难忘/
24.take action采取行动
到劳动的重要性
甜美的回忆
25.protect...from/against...保护..
&.tired but happy累并快乐着
7.be known for因…而著名
不受…
(2)家务劳动
8.leave a deep impression on sb.
26.pull together齐心协力;通力合作
9.do the dishes洗餐具
某人留下深刻印象
27.pay attention to注意
10.cook meals/,dishes做饭
9.ride bicycles骑自行车
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主题写作进阶
②主题佳句积累
佳句赏析
句子仿写
©角度1志愿服务
l.Being a volunteer helps to develop our independence and teach us how to 1)我相信每个人都能在志愿活动
love others
中发挥作用。[用短语play a
2.I am willing to do voluntary activities that can enrich my knowledge and
part in仿写]
broaden my horizon
3.Let's start from the small things around us and play a part in creating a better
world
色角度2劳动实践
1.What makes me interested the most is that I can cook by myself.
2)农场一日游很有价值,因为它帮
2.All the living skills I will get through the process will be of great value to my
助我们了解食物从何而来。[用
later life
短语be of great value仿写]
3.Doing chores helps to develop children's independence and teaches them
how to look after themselves.[RJ八下U3]
4.It is important for us to learn how to do chores.
5.The more chores we do,the earlier we will learn to be independent.
“the+比较级,the+比较级”描述做家务的好处)
©角度3环保活动
l.It reminds us that the best things in life are free-一laughter,friends,family,3)我确信在清新的空气中散步会
and the beauty of nature and the countryside.[RJAU8]
很放松。[用be sure+(that)从
2.The mountain scenery is so beautiful that it takes my breath away.(take
句仿写]
one's breath away令人惊叹;让人叹绝)[新教材RJ八上Ul]
3.The colour white meets your eyes all round.The clouds are clean and soft,
like our white sheep.[新教材WY七下U5]
4.The sunset over the lake is one of the most beautiful things in the world.
4)西湖美得让人惊叹。[用短语
(one of+the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数“最…的…之一”)
take one's breath away仿写]
5.The more you enjoy nature,the happier you will be.
6.All these small things could add up and become big things that would
improve the environment.[RJ九全Ul3]
5)我们尽最大努力用布袋代替塑料
7.I've already tried my best to protect the environment.[WY M12]
袋,这样能对环境产生切实的影
8.In fact,even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to
响。[用短语try one's best to do
the environment.
sth.和make a difference to仿写]
9.We can save water by taking shorter showers and turning off the tap when
brushing our teeth.
@俗语谚语
1.Labor is often the father of pleasure.勤劳常为快乐之源。
2.The rose is in her hand,the flavor in mine.赠人玫瑰,手留余香。
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⊙真题剖析[2025嘉兴一模]
假设你是李华,你校英语报正在招募校运会志愿记者。请根据以下信
【审题】
Step1:审题干
息表要点,用英语写一封自荐信。
仔细阅读题干,并圈画重点内容
(主题、要点、文体、人称、时态等
Volunteer Information Card
信息),明确写作任务。
Personal
Class:
Name:
主题:自荐校运会志愿记者
information
要点:①根据信息表要点写一封
What you are most interested in:
The event
自荐信;②可适当发挥。
☐basketball
☐running
文体:
What you are good at:
人称:
speaking English well
口
Your reasons
时态:
Share your advantages as a volunteer:
Step2:审信息表
个人信息:Class and Name
注意:1.信件需包含信息卡中的相关信息,可适当发挥;
最感兴趣的项目(此处只能选择
2.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称等信息;
一个):basketball,running or.
3.词数80左右;信件的首尾和第一句已给出,不计入总词数。
自荐原因(此处可选择给出要点
Dear Sir/Madam,
或补充其他要点):
I'm glad to be a volunteer reporter for the school sports meeting.
DWhat you are good at:speaking
English well,.or.…
2 Share your advantages
as a
volunteer:have rich volunteer
Yours,
experience in school activities...
Li Hua
【列框架】
开头
开头句:I'm glad to be a volunteer reporter for the school sports
开头:介绍自己的个人信息:姓名、班级等
meeting..(已给出)
句子:
介绍自己最感兴趣的项目和自荐的原因(可适当发挥)
将短语变为句子
感兴趣的项目:What you are most interested in::basketball,
running or...
句子:
Word Bank:show great interest in,be crazy about,be willing to,
sports event
中间
自荐原因l:What you are good at:speaking English well,.take
photos/pictures
句子:
Word Bank:speak English fluently,be good at,enjoy/have fun
doing,do well in
自荐原因2:Share your advantages as a volunteer:.have rich
volunteer experience in school activities...
句子:
Word Bank:work well with others,take part in,join in,have a
passion for...
结尾
结尾句:Looking forward to your reply.
注:最后用连接词将上面句子连起来初步成篇章。
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【润色与升格】
连句成篇
句子升格
Dear Sir/Madam,
①用be ready to support..with all
I'm glad to be a volunteer reporter for the school sports meeting.I'm Li
my heart升格
Hua,a 15-year-old girl from Class 2,Grade 9.1I'm really crazy about
sports,especially running,and I want to support school events greatly.
Being energetic and outgoing,I enjoy working with others as a team.2I
speak English fluently and I'm good at taking photos,which I believe will
help report during the sports meet.With plenty of volunteer experience in
②用be of great help for升格
school activities,I'm confident that I can perform well and take my
responsibilities seriously.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
多样表达
①对…喜爱/痴迷:be crazy about=be fond of
②想要做某事:want to do sth.=would like to do sth.=feel like doing sth.
③擅长:be good at=do well in
④帮助:help=be helpful=be of great help
⑤许多/大量:plenty of=lots of=a great deal of=a number of
实战演练
假如你是王华,你校英语报Happy Times正在征集关于本学期社会实践(field trip)方案的意见。请写一封
邮件将你的意见发送到指定邮箱。邮件内容包括:
1.从下面两个方案中挑选一个并说明理由;
2.为该方案增补两项你喜欢的活动。
Plan A
Plan B
Exploring the Farm
Visiting the Science Park
Reasons:enjoy nature
Reasons:love science
Activities:
Activities:
learn from farmers
·watch robots dancing
·pick tomatoes
·learn about space
注意:1.根据上图所给提示,适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3.词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'd like to
Best wishes!
Yours,
Wang Hua
浙江新中考英语主题写作进阶
414)As students,we must always keep traffic rules in mind and
follow them strictly.
【真题剖析】
审题:应用文一发言稿;第一人称和第二人称;一般现
在时
【润色与升格】
DAs a saying goes,"Early to bed and early to rise makes a
man healthy,wealthy and wise.
2As for eating habits,we'd better keep balanced diets and
avoid overeating.
3Last but not least,I suggest drinking enough water every day.
【实战演练】
第一篇
范文一:
To keep fit,I prefer to exercise with partners.It's a great idea
because exercising with friends can bring me more fun and make
me feel less bored.Also,we can encourage each other when we
feel tired or lazy.This way,we not only improve our health but
also make our friendship stronger.
Starting from next month,I will exercise with my best
friend,Li Hua,three times a week after school.We will choose
different activities,like playing badminton on Monday,running
in the park on Wednesday,and swimming on weekends.We'll
also take photos to see our changes and cheer for each other
every time.
I believe if we keep moving together,we will stay healthy
and happy!
范文二:
To keep fit,I decide to get personal coaches.Personal
coaches can make plans just for me.These plans are good for
my body and what I want to achieve.Also,they can tell me how
to exercise in the right way and what to eat.
My plan is to have a one-hour training with the coach three
times a week.The coach will show me different exercises.
Sometimes we'll do exercises to make me strong,and sometimes
we'll do exercises to make me run faster.The coach will also
check if I'm doing the exercises correctly.Besides,the coach
will give me advice on food,like eating more vegetables and
less junk food.
With a personal coach,I can get fit in a good way.The
coach knows a lot and can help me all the time.I believe I'll
become healthier soon.
第二篇
School Safety
School safety is very important because it can provides a
good environment for students to study and grow.
Schools should take some measures to make sure of their
students'safety.First,set up rules to stop students from
fighting,so they won't get hurt.Second,to prevent accidents,
teachers can take turns to watch and remind students to pay
attention in some key areas such as hallways and playgrounds
during breaks.Third,students can have safety classes often,
which helps them know what to do when they face danger.
With these measures,our school will be a safer place.
主题七人际关系与情感
【主题佳句积累】一句子仿写
1)A friend is a person who is willing to listen to you,offer you
help,and give you care and support.
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2)My mom really cares about me.When I'm sad,she will sit
next to/beside me and comfort me.
3)To avoid misunderstanding,when you chat with others,you
need to try your best to express your ideas clearly.
【真题剖析】
审题:应用文一邮件;第一和第二人称为主;一般现在时
【润色与升格】
范文一:
DWhen it comes to birthday gifts,I'm glad to share my
thoughts with you.
Honestly,I prefer books to flowers.
3 First of all,books can make him relaxed and bring him
happiness,which is beneficial to his emotional well-being.
范文二:
DI've come up with a very good idea about birthday gifts that
you can choose.
2I'm sure whenever Jack catches the smell of the flowers,it
will immediately remind him of the special gift you chose.
3There's no doubt that your friend will fall in love with your
gift.
【实战演练】
How to Communicate with Our Parents?
Communication with parents is very important in our life.
As we grow older,we'll find it not easy to communicate with our
parents.So what should we do when communicating with them?
Here are some of my ideas.
Firstly,we can make a list of things that our parents and
we disagree.Try to find out reasons why we disagree with each
other and accept each other's ideas little by little.If we still
have disagreements,we'd better not get too angry.Secondly
we should talk with them more!Sharing ideas can make us
closer.Besides,we should also learn how to really listen
Listening is a skill that must be learned and practiced.Finally,
be sure to be polite.
Hope you can have proper communication with your
parents.
主题八社会实践与观察
【主题佳句积累】一句子仿写
1)I believe that everyone can play a part in voluntary activities.
2)A day trip to the farm is of great value as it helps us
understand where food comes from.
3)I'm sure(that)it'll be relaxing to walk in the fresh air.
4)The West Lake is so beautiful that it takes my breath away.
5)We try our best to use cloth bags instead of plastic bags,and
主
this can make a real difference to the environment.
【真题剖析】审题:应用文一自荐信;第一人称;一般
写
现在时
作
【润色与升格】
进
DI'm really crazy about sports,especially running,and I'm
阶
ready to support school events with all my heart.
2I speak English fluently and I'm good at taking photos,which
I believe will be of great help for reporting during the sports
meet.
【实战演练】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'd like to choose Plan A-Exploring the Farm.I love
nature,and the farm is a great place to enjoy fresh air and green
fields.
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To begin with,it's really interesting for us to learn from
farmers.They can teach us how to grow vegetables,and then
we can try to plant fresh and healthy vegetables in our own
homes.Besides,picking tomatoes will be fun too.We can taste
the tomatoes picked by ourselves,which must be super
delicious.What's more,in order to make the trip more
interesting,we can add two more activities.We can feed the
cute little animals on the farm,like rabbits and chickens.Last
but not least,we can have a picnic there because sitting on the
grass,sharing food and laughing will make it a wonderful day
surely.
I believe this farm trip will not only let us get close to
nature but also bring us a lot of fun.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Wang Hua
主题九观点与建议表达
【主题佳句积累】一句子仿写
1)Whether or not we can pass the exam depends on how hard
we study.
2)The more books you read,the wiser you'll be.
3)Some students like playing basketball,while I prefer reading
in the library.
4)Some people have no idea about how important it is to save
water.
5)What comes first is to listen carefully in class.
【真题剖析】审题:说明文;第三人称和第一人称;一般
现在时
【润色与升格】
DAccording to the survey,about 10%of the students find it
enjoyable to pick up new skills through sports.
2About 40%of the students consider having fun as the most
amazing part,while about 25%think being fit and healthy is
the best thing about sports.
3We share laughter,cheer each other on,and the stress from
studies fades away in no time.
【实战演练】
第一篇
Recently,I have done a survey among my classmates
about how to spend the coming summer vacation.Here are
the results.
Some of my classmates believe that traveling is the best
主
way to enjoy an exciting break.They say exploring new
places allows them to return feeling relaxed.What's more,
写
it's a great chance to open their eyes and learn about
作
different cultures.
讲
阶
Others are excited to try something completely
new-whether it's picking up a skill like cooking,
surfing,or photography.They think stepping out of their
comfort zone will not only improve their abilities but also
make their summer truly unforgettable.
As for me,I've decided to spend my time volunteering.
Helping others and contributing to society sound like the
perfect way to make my vacation both active and
meaningful.After all,what could be better than making a
difference to people in need?
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第二篇
Should Students Use AI Tools in Learning?
AI is everywhere today,but should students use it in
learning?I firmly believe students should use AI tools for
learning.
Firstly,AI saves time on boring tasks.For example,when
we need to collect basic information for projects,AI can quickly
gather and sort information,allowing us to focus on deeper
thinking.Secondly,it helps the weak students learn.AI-based
educational platforms can provide proper study plans.If a
student struggles with math,then AI can offer targeted exercises
and explanations,meeting their needs.Moreover,AI can share
us learning resources from all over the world,which broadens
our horizons.
In conclusion,when we use Al tools properly,they are
valuable helpers in our learning journey.
主题十科技与未来
【主题佳句积累】一句子仿写
1)It's unbelievable that AI's learning ability is faster than we
imagined.
2)The progress of science and technology makes great
contributions to making our life more convenient.
3)As is known to all,many students are interested in getting
online.
4)If you often visit unsafe websites,your personal information
will be at risk/in danger.
【真题剖析】审题:说明文;第三人称和第一人称;一般
现在时
【润色与升格】
DThey make it easy for us to keep in touch with others and get
information easily.
2In education,e-books and online courses make it possible for
us to learn at anytime and anywhere.
3It's necessary for us to understand that technology is a double-
edged sword.
【实战演练】
Li Hua,a student from Hangzhou,has won a prize
in the Science Popularization and Innovation Competition
with a creative elderly assistant robot.Here is a report
about this robot.
The robot is tall and looks very cute with big eyes.
He looks like a friendly person,making it easier for the
elderly to accept him.
The robot is of great use.First,he can give the
elderly medicine on time when they are ill.He will also
call for help at once if they are in danger.Besides,the
robot can do some cooking and sweep the floor for the
elderly,which makes their life easier.Last but not least,
he is good at communicating with the elderly.He can tell
stories and jokes,bringing joy and laughter into the life
of the elderly.
Although robots can help us a lot,our love for the
elderly can't be replaced.Let's take good care of the
elderly with the help of robots,making sure they live
happily.
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