内容正文:
第二部分
主题篇
主题一校园生活与活动
(社团活动、校园生活等)
。主题探究
编者按:本栏目分析浙江及全国近2年中考真题和模拟题书面表达,逐篇按照新课标主题及所写要点进行分
类,概括出每个主题下的角度及写作维度。
①介绍学校最美之地
①介绍课间活动并分享看法和感受
校园环境
课间/课
②介绍学校图书馆
②介绍课后活动安排及感受
与设施
后活动
①介绍社团活动内容与收获
①讲述校园生活中的故事及感受
②介绍对社团活动的看法及理由
多彩、
安
②回忆第一天入校时的所见所闻及感受
学校社团
全、有意
中学生
③为社团写招聘启事
义的学校
活回顾
③阐述初中三年的收获与不足以及对未
生活
来的期许
①介绍校园活动内容及选择理由
②介绍校园活动的经历及感受或
结合自己在学习、生活等方面的经历,
意义
校园活动
给新生给新生提建议
③介绍对校园活动的看法及建议
的建议
④介绍校园活动安排与邀请
⊙主题短语积累
角度1校园环境与设施
5.a science festival科技节
角度5对中学生活的回顾
1.school buildings学校建筑
6.an art festival艺术节
1.look back at回首
2.teaching building教学楼
7.a book sale图书义卖
2.used to过去常常
3.a reading corner阅读角
8.take an active part in colorful activities
3.graduate from从…毕业
4.the school hall学校大厅
4.come to an end结束
积极参加丰富多彩的活动
5.green school library绿色校图书馆
5,graduation ceremony毕业典礼
9.be ready to do sth.准备做某事
角度2学校社团
6.with the help of在…的帮助下
l0.attend the speech contest参加演
1.take up(尤指消遣)学着做;开
7.be thankful to对…感激
讲比赛
8.come to realize意识到
始做
11.make school life full of surprise
9.make sb.proud of me让某人以我
2.take place举行
学校生活充满惊喜
为傲
3.stand out出色;杰出
角度4课间/课后活动
角度6对新生的建议
4.aim to do sth.旨在做某事
l.take a short break休息一下
1.be full of hope充满希望
5.join various clubs actively积极加
2.after-school activities课后活动
2.be thirsty for knowledge渴望知识
入各种社团/俱乐部
3.look forward to期望;盼望
角度3校园活动
3.spare/free time课余生活
4.make full use of充分利用
4.get on/along well with sb.与某人
1.sports meeting运动会
好好相处
2.summer camp夏令营
5.have a wonderful time度过美好时光
5.communicate bravely with others
3.have a graduation party举办毕业
6.develop students'interest in sth.
敢地与他人交流
派对
培养学生对某事的兴趣
6.put.into practice把…付诸
4.school study tour/trip学校研学
7.balance study and life平衡学习和
实践
旅行
生活
7.follow school rules遵守学校规定
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浙江新中考
英语
主题写作进阶
Q主题佳句积累
佳句赏析
句子仿写
©角度1
校园环境与设施
l.The library is a treasure house of knowledge,where we can explore the 1)学校图书馆为我们提供了各种
world of books.
各样有教育意义的书籍。[用短
2.The playground is always full of laughter and joy during breaks,making our
语a variety of仿写]
school life more colorful.
3.The school dining hall offers a variety of delicious and nutritious food to
keep us energetic the whole day.(高级短语:①a variety of各种各样的,强
调食物的多样性;②nutritious food营养食物)
@角度2学校社团
l.We decided to put up signs around the school and hand out notices to tell2)为了让学生们的课余生活更加
students about the book sale.[RJ八下U2]
丰富多彩,学校已经组织了很多
2.To spread traditional Chinese culture,our school recently set up a paper-
活动。[用不定式作目的状语前
cutting club.(To spread..为目的状语前置,突出目的)
置,突出目的]
3.By joining this club,we can overcome our fear and shyness and become
more outgoing.
@角度3校园活动
1.Once a term,there is a parents'meeting,so our parents and teachers can
3)课间休息时有各种各样的活动,
talk about our progress.[WY九下M2]
像打篮球和跑步。[用there be
2.In order to promote Chinese food culture and make students'school life
句型仿写]
more colorful,our school held a food festival in the dining room last Friday.
(promote v.促进;弘扬)
3.It is an unforgettable experience that has enriched my knowledge and
deepened my understanding of Chinese culture.
@角度4课间/课后活动
1.It made him feel lucky to know that he was on a winning team.[RJ九全4)参加体育话动不仅能强身健体,
U11]
而且能放松身心。[用动名词作
2.Visiting the history museum provided us with a connection to the past,and
主语仿写]
we learned valuable lessons that textbooks could not teach.
3.The activities not only build up my body and mind but also provide a
perfect platform and rich choices for my future development.
4.Besides,after-school activities also free me from the heavy work of study
©角度5对中学生活的回顾
l.I hope you will remember the important people in your lives who helped and5)我们应该感谢我们的老师,他们
supported you.[RJ九全U14]
总是在学习方面帮助我们。[用
2.Looking back at these past three years,I remember many things.[RJ
who引导的定语从句仿写]
U14]
3.Even though I had a busy schedule,I always made time for reading because
I'm truly crazy about stories that teach me valuable lessons.
4.When I first walked into middle school,I was excited as well as worried.
浙江新中考英语主题写作进阶
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@角度6对新生的建议
1.As you set out on your new journey,you shouldn't forget where you came from.6)我希望你们都能充分利用机会,
[J九全U14](as在句中引导时间状语从句,表示“当…时”)
取得很好的进步。[用短语
2.Make the best use of your three years in junior high school.It will pass
make the best use of仿写]
quickly,and the memories you have will stay with you forever.(make the
best use of充分利用)
@俗语谚语
1.Well begun is half done..好的开始是成功的一半。
2.No pains,no gains..一分耕耘,一分收获。
⊙真题剖析[2024浙江中考]
假如你是张华,你的英国好友Alic©暑期将来中国游学。请根据以下相
【审题】
Step1:审题干
关信息,写引一封邮件,向她推荐一所合适的学校
仔细阅读题干,并圈画重点内容
(主题、写作对象、文体、人称、时
I like sports,and I'm
态等信息),明确写作任务。
interested in traditional
Chinese art.Chinese
主题:推荐一所合适的学校
food is great.
写作对象:
Alice
文体:
g。aa”a
人称:
My cousin's school
My school
时态:
.in the city centre
.in the countryside
·a new sports centre
Zhang Hua
◆a good ping-pong team
Step2:审导图信息
hand-made food classes
·local art clubs
1.明确Alice的需求:
d-sruowwena
①like sports
注意:1邮件需包含所选学校的至少两点相关信息,可适当发挥;
2be interested in traditional
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息
Chinese art
3.词数80左右;邮件的首尾和第一句已给出,不计入总词数。
③like Chinese food
Dear Alice,
2.了解两所学校的相关信息:
I'm excited to know that you are coming to China soon.
一所为My cousin's school,另
一所为My school,同时给出两
所学校的地理位置、配套设施
及特色课程,均为要推荐此学
校的理由。
Yours,
特别注意:只能选其一推荐。
Zhang Hua
【提炼思路】准确理解每个要点的内容,明确要点背后的意图,同时将要点信息进行整合,运用要点信息初步
构思写作框架
推荐
推荐My cousin's school
一所
推荐My school
学校
推荐理由
匹配Alice需求
推荐理由
匹配Alice需求
·in the city centre
·Ilike sports,
·in the countryside
Ilike sports.
·a good ping-pong team
Chinese food is great.
a new sports centre
I'm interested in
hand-made food classes
·local art clubs
traditional Chinese art.
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浙江新中考
英语
主题写作进阶
【列框架】
开头
开头句:I'm excited to know that you are coming to China soon.开头:开门见山,确定一所要推荐的学校
(已给出)
句子:
选择至少两点推荐理由
从短语变为句子
理由1l:in the city center
句子:
Aice需求:内容可适当发挥
Word Bank:located in,full of...
推荐My
理由2:a good ping-pong team
句子:
cousin's
Alice需求:I like sports..
school
Word Bank:provide...with,enjoy...
中间
理由3:hand-made food classes
句子:
Aice需求:Chinese food is great..
Word Bank:hesitate to...,make...by oneself
理由l:in the countryside
句子:
Alice需求:内容可适当发挥
Word Bank:lies in,enjoy...
推荐My
理由2:a new sports center
句子:
school
Alice需求:I like sports.
Word Bank:set up,a variety of...
理由3:local art clubs
句子:
Alice需求:interested in traditional Chinese art
Word Bank:a mix of,a member of...
总结+表达愿望:
句子:
结尾
①表达你的希望;②表达你对Alice的祝愿。
Word Bank:take one's advice,meet/satisfy one's needs...
注:最后用连接词将上面句子连起来初步成篇章。
【润色与升格】(注意语言的得体性,给朋友写邮件,语言表达要轻松、愉快)
连句成篇
句子升格
范文一:推荐My cousin's school
①用It's my pleasure to do sth.句型
Dear Alice,
升格
I'm excited to know that you are coming to China soon.DI'm happy
to give you some advice about your future school.
I believe that my cousin's school must be the best choice for you.
First of all,the school is in the city centre so that you can travel to some
②用which引导的定语从句升格
places of interest or go shopping very conveniently.2Besides,I think the
school with a good ping-pong team really suits you.I'm sure you will enjoy
playing ping-pong and other sports there.What's more,this school has
some hand-made food classes.3You can make Chinese food by yourself
③用not only.,but also..和have a
and understand Chinese food culture better.
better understanding of升格
These are the reasons why I believe you can go to my cousin's school.
I'm sure you'll have a great time there.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
浙江新中考英语
主题写作进阶
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范文二:推荐MIy school
①运用复合句(although引导的让步状
Dear Alice,
语从句)和短语the best choice for
I'm excited to know that you are coming to China soon.DMy school
sb.升格
is in the countryside.However,I still believe it's good for you to study
here.
2To start with,there is a new sports centre in our school.You can
enjoy exercising there whenever you want.Besides,our school provides
②用where引导的定语从句升格
you with a variety of local art clubs so that you can learn more about
traditional Chinese art here.3Most importantly,I've studied in this
school for three years,so I really know our teachers are very kind and
helpful.They are always ready to help us.
③用since/,as/because引导的原因状语
Without doubt,our school is a good place to make more friends and
从句和how引导的宾语从句升格
understand Chinese culture better.Hope you'll have a good time in China.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
多样表达
①靠自己:by yourself=on one'sown
②提建议:give advice=give suggestions
③首先:first of all=at first=in the first place=to start/begin with
④玩得高兴:have a great time=enjoy oneself=have fun=have a good time
⑤很高兴/乐意做某事:I'm happy to do sth.=It's my pleasure to do sth.
⑥无论何时:whenever=no matter when
⑦毫无疑问:without doubt=there is no doubt/that
⑧准备好做某事:be/get ready to do sth.=get prepared for sth.
⑨做某事对你来说是最好的选择/方式:It is the best choice for you..=It's the best way for you.
马实战演练[2025杭州拱墅区一模]
假如你是张华,你的英国好友Alic下学期将来中国进行游学。请根据以下相关信息,写一封邮件,向她
推荐一个合适的社团。
I have learned Chinese for several years in the UK because I'm so interested
in traditional Chinese culture.And the Chinese food is really delicious.
Chinese Folk Music Club
Chinese Cooking Club
in the music room
in the school dining hall
classes about music forms
classes about traditional food
米…
注意:1.邮件需包含所选社团的至少两点相关信息,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3.词数80左右;邮件的首尾和第一句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Alice,
I'm so excited to know that you will come to China soon.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
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浙江新中考英语主题写作进阶19.There is no need to worry about small things.
20.Reading is to the mind what exercise is to the body
21.Only through practice can we improve our skills.
22.How important it is to make a plan for the coming new year!
23.We can overcome any difficulties in life with hope in our
hearts.
技巧三扩写句子
【学以致用】
1.I like the library very much because there are different kinds
of books.
2.Be careful with the electricity and fire,for they may cause
terrible accidents.
3.Family members should share happiness and worries.For
example,when they feel sad,we should try to make them
happy.
4.If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer,I will try
my best to help animals.
5.We won't grow up unless we face difficulties bravely.
6.Learn to praise the people around us so that we can develop
good relationships with them.
7.We can discuss in groups freely.Therefore/As a result,we
can learn how to communicate and learn from each other.
8.I try hard to avoid using mobile phones or computers.I think
the light they give off is harmful to my eyes.
第二部分
主题一校园生活与活动
【主题佳句积累】一句子仿写
1)The school library provides us with a variety of educational
books.
2)To make students'free/spare time more colorful,the school
has organized many activities
3)There are various fun activities during breaks,like playing
basketball and running.
4)Taking part in sports activities not only strengthens my body
but also relaxes my mind.
5)We should thank our teachers who always help us with our
studies.
6)I hope you can make the best use of chances to make good progress.
【真题剖析】
审题:英国好友Alice;应用文一邮件;第一、二人称为主;
一般现在时
【润色与升格】
主
范文一:
DIt's my pleasure to give you some advice on your future
写
school.
作
Besides,I think the school which has a good ping-pong team
讲
really fits you well.
阶
3You can not only make Chinese food by yourself,but also
have a better understanding of Chinese food culture.
范文二:
DAlthough my school is in the countryside,I still believe it is
the best choice for you to study here.
2To start with,there is a new sports centre in our school,
where you can enjoy exercising whenever you like.
3 Most importantly,as/since/because I've studied in this
school for three years,I really know how kind and helpful
our teachers are.
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浙江新中考车
技巧四巧用衔接词
【学以致用】
1.Tea is not only good for our health,but also a key part of
many cultures.
2.I'm not sure whether Mrs.Liu still remembers me,but I want
to tell her that she will be in my heart forever.
3.She got a high score in the final exam because she made every
effort in studying.
4.Although Though my father is very busy,he always gives me
a hand when I am in trouble.
5.I'm going to do my best to get good grades so that I can go to
college to get a good education.
6.As soon as the teacher walks into the classroom,we will all
stand up and say“Good morning'”,
7.First/To begin with/First of all/First and most important/In
the first place,we should think about whether this plan is safe.
8.She is good at various subjects such as math,English and physics.
9.Learning a language requires practice and patience.Most
importantly,we need to be brave to speak.
10.Some students prefer reading in the library,while others
like studying in groups in the classroom.
11.He's always ready to help others.In other words,he's a very
kind person.
12.The trip was fun and full of suprises-in a word,it was perfect.
主题篇
【实战演练】
范文一:
Dear Alice,
I'm so excited to know that you will come to China soon.
Since you're interested in traditional Chinese culture and love
Chinese food,I strongly recommend the Chinese Cooking Club
to you.
First of all,the club has classes in the school dining hall,
which is big and has all the necessary tools.There,you can
learn to cook many kinds of traditional Chinese dishes,like the
tasty Beijing Roast Duck and the sweet-sour West Lake Fish.
What's more,the lessons also tell you interesting stories and
culture about these traditional foods.For example,you'll know
why dumplings are very important during Chinese New Year.
Besides,by joining this club,you'll not only learn how to cook
well but also understand Chinese food culture better,so your
study tour in China will be more special.
I believe you'll have a great time there.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
范文二:
Dear Alice,
I'm so excited to know that you will come to China soon.
Knowing your interest in traditional Chinese culture,I think the
Chinese Folk Music Club is a perfect choice for you.
To begin with,the club has classes in the music room,a
nice place with a great atmosphere.Here,you can learn about
various kinds of Chinese folk music.For example,there are
beautiful folk songs passed down for ages and interesting
instrumental music played on traditional instruments like the
erhu and pipa.What's more,there are lots of activities.You
can enjoy wonderful folk music shows and even try playing some
traditional instruments with teachers'help.What a fantastic way
to experience the beauty of Chinese traditional music!
Hope you'll love it.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
英语参考答案