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最新5年高考真题分类优化卷·英语(十七)
卷17应用文写作(二)
本卷共六题,每题15分,满分90分
一、(2024·北京)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报
的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年,他打算重点介
绍中国的发展成就,发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内
容包括:
1.建议投稿内容;
2.就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
【最新5年高考真题分类优化卷(26-Z)·英语(十七)17-1】
二、(2024·全国甲卷)
英语课要求做课堂展示,请你根据所给图片,以Development of
Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
shared bicycle
high-speed train
new energy vehicle
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport,Chinese
transport has an enormous development.
【17-2】
三、(2023·北京)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次
以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动,他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英
文给他回复,内容包括:
1.活动形式;
2.活动内容。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
【17-3】
四、(2023·全国甲卷)
你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以
一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.人物简介及事迹:
2.意义或启示。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.题目已为你写好。
【17-4】
五、(2025·全国Ⅱ卷)
(满分15分)假定你是校英文报编辑李华,外教Chris上个月答应写
一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给Chis写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)询问进展;
(2)提醒交稿时间。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80个左右:
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
Yours,
Li Hua
【17-5】
六、(2023·新课标全国卷)
假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外
教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:
1.节目介绍:
2.访谈的时间和话题。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【17-6】原句:Their performances are undoubtedly of high
quality,which makes the concert almost no different
from a live one.
拓展句:There is no doubt that their
performances are of high quality,which makes the
concert almost no different from a live one.
【点睛】[高分句型l]Their performances
are undoubtedly of high quality,which makes the
concert almost no different from a live one,(运用了
which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]I enjoyed every second of the concert
and was particularly attracted when the boys and
girls from Britain started to sing the traditional Chi-
nese song“Liang Zhu'”.(运用了when引导的时间状
语从句)
One possible version:
【满分作文一】
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
The performers from the two schools have done
their best in entertaining the audience with one song
after another.Their performances are undoubtedly of
high quality,which makes the concert almost no dif-
ferent from a live one.I enjoyed every second of the
concert and was particularly attracted when the boys
and girls from Britain started to sing the traditional
Chinese song "Liang Zhu".They performed the song
in a way that touched my heart and gave me a feeling
of connection.
I hope there will be more opportunities in the
future for us Chinese students and our international
friends to learn about and from each other.
【满分作文二】
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
The joint performance organized by our school
and a friendly school in the UK showcased a variety
of musical styles from different cultures.As an audi-
ence member,I was deeply impressed by the talented
musicians and singers who performed flawlessly.The
concert created a sense of unity and connection
among the viewers,despite the distance between us.
However,I think it would have been better if there
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were subtitles or translations for the lyrics of the
songs to make it more accessible for international
viewers.
Overall,it was an amazing event,and I look for
ward to more such collaborations in the future
【满分作文三】
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
With top-quality sound and video production,it
created an immersive and unforgettable viewing ex-
perience.What kept me utterly spellbound were the
sheer brilliance of the performers and seamless tran-
sition between each song.It is not hard to see that
each music piece was carefully selected and each per-
formance was filled with extraordinary/remarkable
passion and professionalism.The only drawback is
that information about the performers and their
backgrounds,particularly for those who are not fa-
miliar to the audience,is not provided enough.
It would be better to know more about their ex-
periences and how they honed their musical skills to
reach this level of excellence,enhancing the
audience's appreciation of their artistry.
卷17应用文写作(二)
【语篇解读】本簫书面表达属于应用文。外国
好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得
知今年新中国成立75周年,他打算重点介绍中国的
发展成就,要求考生给他回复邮件,就此给予他
建议。
【详解】1.词江积累
很好的:great-→wonderful
成就:achievement→accomplishment
建议:suggestion→advice
此外:in addition→what's more
2.句式拓展
句式变换
原句:It's great to hear you're planning to write about
China's achievements on the occasion of the 75th an-
niversary of the founding of this country.
拓展句:It's great to hear what you're planning to
write about is China's achievements on the occasion
】
of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this coun-
try.
【点睛】[高分句型l]To begin with,talk about
China's economic growth and technological advance
ments,which are the highlights in the past few dec
ades.(运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Then,projects like the Belt and Road
Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it
showcases China's determination to build a shared
future with the world.(运用了because引导的原因
状语从句)
One possible version:
Dear Jim,
It's great to hear you're planning to write about
China's achievements on the occasion of the 75th an-
niversary of the founding of this country.Here are a
few suggestions for your article.
To begin with,talk about China's economic
growth and technological advancements,which are
the highlights in the past few decades.Then,
projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good
topic to discuss because it showcases China's deter-
mination to build a shared future with the world.In
addition,you can also mention China's role in
helping solving global issues such as the global war-
ming,offering a more comprehensive view.
Looking forward to reading your article!
Yours,
Li Hua
二、
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求
考生根据所给图片,以Development of Transport in
China为题写一簫发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇激活
提供:offer→provide
极大地:dramatically>tremendously
减少:reduce→decrease
总之:in short→in a nutshell
2.句式拓展
筒单句变复合句
原句:Firstly,shared bicycles have emerged as a sym-
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bol of urban mobility,offering an affordable and
green alternative for short trips.
拓展句:Firstly,shared bicycles,which offer an af-
fordable and green alternative for short trips have e-
merged as a symbol of urban mobility.
【点睛】[高分句型l]Chinese transport has un-
dergone remarkable transformations,giving the Chi-
nese people access to different ways of travelling.
用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]These developments illustrate
China's journey towards a modern and efficient trans-
portation network that balances convenience with en-
vironmental responsibility.(运用了that引导的定语
从句)
One possible version:
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient
transport,Chinese transport has an enormous devel-
opment.Chinese transport has undergone
remarkable transformations,giving the Chinese
people access to different ways of travelling.
Firstly,shared bicycles have emerged as a
symbol of urban mobility,offering an affordable and
green alternative for short trips.Secondly,the
introduction of high-speed trains has dramatically
shortened travel times,making intercity travel faster
and more comfortable.Lastly,the proliferation of
new energy vehicles underscores China's dedication to
environmental sustainability,reducing reliance on
fossil fuels.These developments illustrate China's
journey towards a modern and efficient transportation
network that
balances
convenience with
environmental responsibility.
In short,China's transport system is embracing
innovation and eco-friendliness.
One possible version:
Dear Jim,
It's great to hear you're planning to write about
China's achievements on the occasion of the 75th an-
niversary of the founding of this country.Here are a
few suggestions for your article.
】
To begin with,talk about China's economic
growth and technological advancements,which are
the highlights in the past few decades.Then,projects
like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to
discuss because it showcases China's determination to
build a shared future with the world.In addition,you
can also mention China's role in helping solving
global issues such as the global warming,offering a
more comprehensive view.
Looking forward to reading your article!
Yours,
Li Hua
三、
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求
考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一
些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:suggestion→tip
提供:offer→provide
开展:carry out→conduct
主题:theme-→topic
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Hearing that you are planning a club activity
with the theme of"Green Beijing"and need my help,
I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
拓展句:Since you are planning a club activity with
the theme of "Green Beijing"and need my help,I am
writing to offer you my suggestions.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Hearing that you are plan-
ning a club activity with the theme of "Green
Beijing"and need my help,I am writing to offer you
my suggestions.(运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2]I think you can carry out this activity
in an interactive and experiential manner,which
means students can participate and have a better un-
derstanding of "Green Beijing"through getting in-
volved in different activities by themselves.(运用了
which引导非限制性定语从句)
One possible version:
Dear Jim,
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Hearing that you are planning a club activity
with the theme of "Green Beijing"and need my help,
I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
I think you can carry out this activity in an inter-
active and experiential manner,which means students
can participate and have a better understanding of
"Green Beijing"through getting involved in different
activities by themselves.You can showcase garbage
classification on site,plant trees and publicize sharing
economy,which will all fit into the theme of "Green
Beijing”.
Hopefully,you will get some inspiration from
my suggestions.Wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
四、
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求
考生为学校正举办的主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的
征文活动写一簫短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
著名的:well-known→famous
人物:figure→person
强调:emphasize→stress
基础:foundation→basis
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:His teachings shaped the moral and ethical
foundation of Chinese culture,fostering respect for
authority,harmonious relationships,and the pursuit
of knowledge.
拓展句:His teachings shaped the moral and ethical
foundation of Chinese culture,which fostered respect
for authority,harmonious relationships,and the
pursuit of knowledge.
【点睛】[高分句型l]Confucius traveled through-
out the country,imparting his wisdom to countless
disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese
society..(运用了现在分词作伴随状语)
[高分句型2]He stressed the self-cultivation,
respect for elders,and the pursuit of knowledge,
which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and
】
interconnected world..(运用了which引导的非限制
性定语从句)
One possible version:
Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese his-
tory.His teachings emphasized the importance of
moral values respect for elders,and social harmony.
Confucius traveled throughout the country,imparting
his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a pro-
found impact on Chinese society.
The significance of Confucius cannot be oversta-
ted.His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foun-
dation of Chinese culture,fostering respect for
authority,harmonious relationships,and the pursuit
of knowledge.Even today,his ideas continue to guide
individuals and communities in China and beyond.
Confucius's life offers valuable lessons.He
stressed the self-cultivation,respect for elders,and
the pursuit of knowledge,which serves as a guiding
light in our fast-paced and interconnected world.His
teachings remind us of the importance of integrity,com-
passion,and social responsibility.
五、
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要
求考生给外教Chris写一封邮件,询问他上个月答应
写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章的进展,并提醒
交稿时间。
【详解】1.词汇积累:
询问:inquire→ask
理解:understanding→comprehension
此外:also→besides
肯定地:surely→certainly
2.句式拓展:
简单句变复合句
原句:I'm writing to politely inquire about the pro-
gress of the article.
拓展句:As you know,I'm writing to politely inquire
about the progress of the article.
【,点睛】【高分句型l】Would you mind letting me
know how it's going?(运用了how引导的宾语从
句)
【高分句型2】Your insights into Canadian sports will
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surely enrich our readers'understanding of global
sports culture,which will be of benefit to us.
了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
One possible version:
Dear Chris,
Hope this email finds you well!Last month,
you kindly agreed to write an article about sports in
Canada,and we're all looking forward to reading it.
I'm writing to politely inquire about the
progress of the article.Would you mind letting me
know how it's going?Also,could I remind you that
the deadline for submission is this Friday,June
14th?Your insights into Canadian sports will surely
enrich our readers'understanding of global sports
culture,which will be of benefit to us.
Thank you again for your support
Best wishes,
Li Hua
六、
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求
考生写一封邮件邀请你的外教Caroline来你校的广
播站对英语节目“Talk and Talk'”做一次访谈。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:attend-→participate in
建立:establish-→set up
帮助:aid->assistance
许多:plenty of-→a lot of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:As our distinguished foreign language teacher,
your aid can help us a lot.
拓展句:You are our distinguished foreign language
teacher,whose aid can help us a lot.
【点睛】[高分句型l]This is an amazing program
where you can share your ideas with students.
了where引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Now,when having trouble in learning
English well,plenty of students urge to know how to
deal with it,.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句的省
略结构)
】
One possible version:
Dear Caroline,
This is my first time that I have invited you to
attend our program-Talk and Talk.It is ten years
since Talk and Talk was established.This is an amaz-
ing program where you can share your ideas with
students.Now,when having trouble in learning
English well,plenty of students urge to know how to
deal with it.As our distinguished foreign language
teacher,your aid can help us a lot.If you are available
on this Sunday,I together with the whole Talk and
Talk staff am waiting for your coming.I'd appreciate
it if you take my invitation into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
卷18应用文写作(三)
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文,假定
考生是李华,你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”,请你
给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信,邀请他一同
体验。
【详解】1.词汇积累
由…组成:consist of-→be made up of
位于:be located on→be situated on
与…相连接:be linked to→be connected to
预定:reserve-→book
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Recently,a newly-furnished section,consisting
of eight Group Learning Rooms,has been open to us
students in our school library.
拓展句:Recently,a newly-furnished section,which
consists of eight Group Learning Rooms,has been
open to us students in our school library.
【点睛】[高分句型l]Those rooms are equipped
with modern electronic facilities,all of which are
linked to the Internet..(of which引导的非限制性定
语从句)
[高分句型2]Located on the third floor beside the
online reading rooms,it can be accessible from 8 am
till9p.m.throughout the weekdays.(过去分词作状
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语)
One possible version:
Dear Michael,
Good news Recently,a newly-furnished
section,consisting of eight Group Learning Rooms,
has been open to us students in our school library.
Located on the third floor beside the online read-
ing rooms,it can be accessible from 8 a.m.till 9 p.
m.throughout the weekdays.Those rooms are e-
quipped with modern electronic facilities,all of which
are linked to the Internet.It's really convenient for us
to do some group projects.Why not ask our group
members to go and experience it?
Early reply and we can reserve one room for our
project.
Yours,
Li Hua
二、
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生
给在文化节上结识的外国朋友写一封信叙旧。
【详解】1.词汇积累
返回:come back to→return to
思念:miss→yearn
分享:share-,exchange
玩得开心:enjoy oneself→have a good time→
have fun
开心的:pleased-→happy-→delight-→content
过着快乐的生活:lead a happy life-→live a happy life
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:It has been a year since you came back to Ire--
land.I miss you so much.
拓展句:It has been a year since you came back to
Ireland and I miss you so much.
【点睛】[高分句型l]I still remember the very
day when we met at China-Ireland Cultural Festival
two years ago.(运用了定语从句)
[高分句型2]It was at that festival that you shared
so many interesting things about your country to-
gether,through which I learned a lot about your
food,culture and history.(运用了强调句型和定语从
】