Unit 5 介绍自然灾害及应对措施-2025-2026学年高中英语写作范文集合必修第二册（重庆大学版）

必修第二册重庆大学版 【自然灾害专题】 B版写作范文集合 自然灾害专题 【B版范文集合】自然灾害及应对措施 写作范文集合+逐段解析·重庆大学版必修第二册 范文赏析 【范文一】自然灾害及预防 Natural Disasters and Prevention Natural disasters like earthquakes and floods often cause great damage to human life and property.Earth- quakes may shake buildings down and hurt people,while floods can wash away houses and crops.It's important for us to know how to deal with them. When an earthquake happens,we should stay calm first.If we are indoors,hide under a strong table and avoid windows.If outdoors,move to an open area away from buildings and trees.After the earthquake,we need to help the injured and follow the government's instructions. For floods,we should pay attention to weather reports.If a flood is coming,we should prepare enough food and water,and move to higher places quickly.Never try to walk through deep water. By learning about these measures,we can protect ourselves better when disasters strike. 【范文一逐段解析】 开头段（灾害概述)： 用Natur al disasters like.引出主题，cause great damage to.强调危害：通过while对比地震 和洪水的不同影响，It's important to..点明学习应对措施的必要性。 中间段（地震应对）： 用When an earthquake happens.,分场景说明：室内用hide under,,室外用move to open area:After the earthquake..强调后续行动，follow government's instructions是实用建议。 结尾段（洪水应对)： pay attention to weather reports强调预警重要性，prepare enough food and water给出具体准 备措施，Never try to..用否定句强调危险行为。 【范文二】如何面对自然灾害 1 必修第二册重庆大学版 【自然灾害专题】 B版写作范文集合 How to Face Natur al Disasters Natural disasters are serious problems in many parts of the world.Common ones include typhoons,land- slides and droughts.Each of them has different effects and needs proper response. Typhoons often bring strong winds and heavy rain.Before a typhoon,we should close windows tightly and put outdoor things inside.During the typhoon,stay indoors and don't go out.Landslides usually happen in mountain areas after heavy rains.If you live there,be careful when it rains heavily and leave the area if told to do so.Droughts make land dry and crops die.We should save water in daily life to fight against droughts. Remember,knowing the right ways to deal with natural disasters can save lives.Let's learn more about them and stay safe. 【范文二逐段解析】 开头段（灾害分类)： 用serious problems强调严重性，Common ones include.列举三类灾害，needs proper response 过渡到应对措施。 中间段（分类应对)： 台风部分：Before..和During.分时段说明；滑坡部分：If you live there..针对特定人群；干 旱部分：save water in daily life提出长期策略。 结尾段（总结呼吁)： 用Remember.强调知识的重要性，can save lives点明核心价值，et's learn more.发出积极 号召。 高分亮点句型（可直接套用） 灾害描述类： Natural disasters like...cause great damage to.../...bring strong winds and heavy rain./...make land dry and crops die. 应对措施类： We should stay calm first./pay attention to weather reports/prepare enough food and water/ move to higher places quickly 分场景指导： If we are indoors,.../If outdoors,...Before a typhoon,.../During the typhoon,... 总结呼吁类： 必修第二册重庆大学版 【自然灾害专题】 B版写作范文集合 By learning about these measures,.../knowing the right ways...can save lives Let's learn more about them and stay safe. 仿写练习（结合亮点句型） 请根据提示，仿写一篇关于火灾应对的短文(80词左右)： 提示：火灾常见原因（电器短路/厨房明火），预防措施（检查电路/勿留明火无人），火灾发生时（用 湿毛巾捂口鼻走安全通道/勿用电梯)，火灾后（报警配合消防员）。 仿写框架参考： Fires are dangerous disasters.Common causes include and Before a fire,we should and When a fire happens,use a wet towel to cover your mouth and Never After escaping,call 119 immediately and Remember. can save lives. 常见错误修正（避坑指南） 主谓一致错误： 错误：Natural disasters causes damage.→正确：Natural disasters cause damage. 介词误用： 错误：move to higher place→正确：move to higher places错误：pay attention on weather reports →正确：pay attention to weather reports 时态错误： 错误：When earthquake happened→正确：When an earthquake happens 核心写作要点 结构清晰：开头（灾害类型+危害）一中间（分灾害说明应对措施）→结尾（总结重要性）。 时态统一：普遍事实用一般现在时，具体事件用过去时/将来时需明确区分。 逻辑连接：善用When/Before/.During/After/f等连接词明确时间顺序和条件关系。 实用建议：措施需具体可行（如hide under strong table),避免空泛建议。 3 必修第二册重庆大学版 【自然灾害专题】 B版写作范文集合 术语准确：使用正确灾害名称(typhoon/landslide/drought),避免中式表达。 4