Unit 2 探讨动物保护的问题与措施-2025-2026学年高中英语写作范文集合选择性必修第二册（重庆大学版）

选择性必修第二册重庆大学版 【写作专版】U2:探讨动物保护的间题与措施 写作专版 【范文集合】探讨动物保护的问题与措施 写作范文集合+逐段解析·重庆大学版选择性必修第二册 范文赏析 【范文一】Protecting Our Animal Friends Protecting Our Animal Friends Animals are our closest companions on Earth,but many species are facing serious threats today.One major problem is habitat loss caused by deforestation and urban expansion.As their living spaces shrink,animals struggle to find food and shelter.Another critical issue is illegal hunting and poaching,driven by the de- mand for fur,ivory,and exotic pets.Climate change also poses a significant risk,altering ecosystems and endangering species like polar bears and coral reef inhabitants. To address these problems,governments should establish more nature reserves and enforce stricter laws against illegal hunting.We students can also make a difference by reducing plastic use to protect marine life and supporting wildlife conservation organizations through donations or volunteer work.Remember, every small action counts in saving our animal friends. 【范文一逐段解析】 问题分析段： 开篇用Animals are our closest companions建立情感连接：通过One major problem./Another critical issue..清晰列举三大威胁：habitat loss,illegal hunting,climate change;用like polar bears and coral reef举例增强说服力。 措施建议段： 用To address these problems自然过渡；分政府层面(establish nature reserves/enforce stricter laws)和学生层面(educing plastic use/supporting organizations))提出解决方案：结尾evey small action counts强调个人行动的重要性。 【范文二】Why We Need to Protect Animals Why We Need to Protect Animals The importance of animalprotection cannot be overstated.Animalsplay vital roles in maintaining ecological 选择性必修第二册重庆大学版 【写作专版】U2:探讨动物保护的间题与措施 balance.For example,bees pollinateplants,ensuring the production of fruits and vegetables,while predators control the population of herbivores to prevent overgrazing.However,human activities have led to a rapid decline in animal populations.Pollution,especially plastic waste in oceans,harms sea creatures,and the introduction of invasive species disrupts local ecosystems. To protect animals,we must promote sustainable development.Companies should adopt eco-friendly prac- tices,and schools should educate students about biodiversity.Additionally,choosing cruelty-free products and avoiding wild animal products can reduce the demand for illegal hunting.Let's work together to create a harmonious world where humans and animals coexist peacefully. 【范文二逐段解析】 重要性阐述段： 首句cannot be overstated强调保护必要性；用play vital roles带出生态价值，For example引 出蜜蜂授粉和捕食者控量的具体案例：转折词However引出人类活动威胁。 解决方案段： 分三个层面提出措施：企业(eco-friendly practices)、学校(educate about biodiversity)、个人 (cruelty-free products):结尾coexist peacefully升华主题，呼应开篇。 高分亮点句型（可直接套用） 问题描述类： One major problem is...caused by.../Another critical issueis...driven by.../.poses a significant risk 生态价值类： play vital roles in maintaining.../ensure the production of.../control the population to prevent... 解决措施类： establish/enforce stricter laws against...adopt eco-friendly practices/reduce the demand for... 呼吁行动类： Every small action counts in...Let's work together to create.../coexist peacefully 仿写练习（结合亮点句型） 选择性必修第二册重庆大学版 【写作专版】U2:探讨动物保护的间题与措施 请根据以下提示，仿写动物保护短文（120词左右)： 提示：讨论海洋生物面临的问题（塑料污染、过度捕捞），并提出解决方案（政府监管、公众意识、 替代材料) 仿写框架参考： Marine creatures face severe threats today.One major problem is caused by plastic waste. Another critical issue is due to excessive fishing.These activities disrupt To address these problems,governments should We can make a difference by and choosing Additionally,supporting helps protect marine ecosystems Remember, in saving our oceans.Let's work together to 常见错误修正（避坑指南） 搭配错误： 错误：make a difference for marine life→正确：make a difference to marine life 错误：reduce the demand of illegal hunting→正确：reduce the demand for illegal hunting 单复数错误： 错误：many specie are facing threats→正确：many species are facing threats 逻辑错误： 错误：Climate change impro'es ecosystems一正确：Climate change alters/disrupts ecosystems 核心写作要点 问题分类清晰：使用One major problem../Another critical issue.…分类阐述威胁 例证具体化：结合like polar bears/such as plastic waste等具体案例增强说服力 方案分层级：区分政府/企业/个人不同主体的责任(governments should../we can..) 数据准确性：避免绝对化表述，用many species/significant1isk等适度量化 结尾升华：使用every action counts/coexist peacefully等呼吁性结语 3