内容正文:
实战演练
【高分范文】
My Mother Raised Me Up
In the journey of my growth,it was my mother who tru-
ly raised me up.Once,when I struggled with math and felt
like giving up,she sat beside me patiently,guiding me through
each problem.Her support and belief in my learning ability lit
up a tiny light within me
This experience taught me the power of love and never
giving up.It made me realize that challenges are chances for
growth.With my mother's encouragement,I learned to face
difficulties bravely,turning difficulties into stepping stones.
Her love and trust became my power,encouraging me to become
a more confident and determined person
Through this journey,I grew stronger and wiser,under-
standing that the love and support from family are the tiny lights
that light up our path in life
话题6劳动实践与志愿服务
真题剖析
【审题】应用;一;三;一般现在
【润色与升格】
1To start with,it's really interesting for us to learn from
farmers.
2In order to make the trip more interesting,we can add two
more activities.
3I believe this farm trip will not only let us get close to nature
but also bring us a lot of fun.
实战演练
【高分范文】
I did a survey on my classmates doing housework.Accord-
ing to the results,15%of them usually do housework,while
80%sometimes help with chores.Sadly,5%seldom do any
housework.This shows that most students are slow to take part
in household tasks.
To improve this,I suggest that my classmates spend some
time every day doing simple chores,like tidying up their
rooms,washing dishes or folding clothes.Housework is not
only helpful for keeping our homes clean and tidy but also good
for teaching us responsibilities.When we do chores,we learn to
care for our family.Let's all try to do more to help them,just
because small things can make a big difference!
话题7
学生学习与生活
真题剖析
【审题】记叙;一;一般过
【润色与升格】
OThe story that happened last Friday left a deep impression on
me.
2Fortunately,he was fine after receiving treatment.
3I realized that it's truly meaningful to give up a small personal
honor to help someone in need.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Dear Jeff,
How is everything going?It's never easy to learn Chinese
characters and passages.Even the Chinese people find it hard
话
to learn them well,so you needn't feel upset.Here are some
题
suggestions for you.
写
First,turn to the Internet for help when you have a prob-
lem.From the Internet,you can learn how to read and write the
作
characters.
What's more,you can learn from your Chinese
进
friends and I'll always be ready to help.But the most important
阶
is to keep on learning and reading.
册
Practice makes perfect.Keep on learning and hold on
to your goal.I'm sure you will make progress.
Yours,
Li Hu
话题8人际交往
真题剖析
【审题】说明;一;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DBy discussing with team members,we can come up with bet-
ter ideas.
2There is no doubt that communication can help us know more
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about our teammates.
3Doubting others will only weaken the group./Doubting others
only weakens the group.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Dear Zhang Ming,
I'm sorry to hear that you're having such trouble commu-
nicating with your parents.Don't worry!We can find ways to
improve it.
I know how you feel about your parents making decisions
for you and not understanding your interests.They probably
think they're protecting you,but this can make you feel uncom-
fortable.In my opinion,you should try to talk with them calm-
ly when they're not busy or stressed.Why not explain your
feelings honestly?Don't be afraid of disagreements.
As the saying goes,we learn and grow through solving
problems together.Remember,your parents love you deeply,
even if they don't show it in the way you expect.Be brave to
express yourself,and I believe things will get better.
Love.
Li Hua
话题9和谐社区与美丽家乡
真题剖析
【审题】说明:
;三;一般现在;一般将来
【润色与升格】
DWhat's more,we organize some interesting activities to make
our life rich and colorful.
2In my free time,I am willing to do some cleaning often.
3I hope what I have done can help make a difference to my
neighbourhood.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Beauty of My Hometown
I'm very glad to tell you something about my hometown.
It's the beauty in my eyes.
My hometown,Xinjiang,is a charming place.When it
comes to the beauty of view,the environment here is quite
pleasant.The sky is often clear,and the air is fresh.There
are many green spaces like the park.The park has a beautiful
lake,with willows by the sides.It's a great place for relaxation.
Besides the nice scenery,what makes Xinjiang more
attractive is the beauty of people.The neighbours are friendly
and helpful.They often greet each other and are ready to offer
a hand when someone is in need.Volunteers in Xinjiang are al-
so active.They work in communities,helping to keep the city
clean,and they also participate in charity activities,spreading
warmth.
I'm really proud of my hometown.I hope more and more
people can come here to enjoy the beauty of it.
话题10中华优秀传统文化
真题剖析
【审题】应用;三;一;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DWe are invited to vote for our favorite,and lion dance comes
first now.
2Besides,if I bring back home zongzi made by myself,it will
give my parents a pleasant surprise
3I am writing to you in the hope that you can vote for making
zongzi too.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Hi,class.I'm glad to share my plan about May Day cul-
tural tour with you.I am going to Xi'an by train during the May
Day holiday.Xi'an is a city full of historical and cultural herit-
ages.
First,I'll visit the Terracotta Army.It's a world-famous
wonder.I can learn a great deal about the history and art of the
Qin Dynasty there.Second,I'm looking forward to trying lo-
cal food like roujiamo and yangrou paomo.By tasting these spe-
cial foods,I can experience the local food culture.Also,I plan
to visit the ancient City Wall.Walking on it,I can enjoy the
scenery and imagine what life was like in the past.
I believe this trip will be a great chance for me to experi-
ence Chinese culture deeply.
考答案及解析话题10
中华优秀传统文化
命题角度探究
①代表中国文化的礼物:手工艺
风筝、剪纸、春联、中国结、京
春节、元宵节、端午节
剧、瓷器等
中秋节、重阳节等
中国传
具有代表
统节日
华优
性的中国
②中国人的取名文化、茶文化、
“家”文化
①基本社交礼仪:见面礼仪、
文化
待人接物、餐桌礼仪
传
《愚公移山》《西游记》《嫦娥
中国文
②其他:外出礼仪
奔月》等
化礼仪
讲好中国故事
化
②话题短语积累
角度1中国传统节日
2.be expected to do sth.被期望做
2.lion/dragon dance舞狮/龙
l.traditional festivals传统节日
某事
3.Beijing/Peking Opera京剧
2.the Spring Festival春节
3.shake hands握手
4.Chinese knot中国结
3.New Year'sEve除夕
4.table manners餐桌礼仪
5.be made of/from由…制成
4.make dumplings包饺子
5.try to be on time尽力准时
6.be used for.被用作…
5.put up couplets贴春联
6.respect the old and care for the
7.be known/famous for因…而著名
6.visit relatives走亲戚
young尊老爱幼
8.a symbol of Chinese culture中国
7.give lucky/gift money给压岁钱
7.drop by顺便访问
文化的一个象征
8.Spring Festival Gala春节联欢
8.laugh at嘲笑
晚会
9.have a long history历史悠久
9.rather than而不是
9.the Dragon Boat Festival端午节
角度4讲好中国故事
10.make zongzi包粽子
10.make sb.feel at home使某人感
1.Chinese classic works中国经典
11.dragon boat races龙舟比赛
到宾至如归
作品
12.in memory of..为了纪念…
1l.be hard on sb..严厉对待/批评2.the four Chinese literature classics
l3.the Mid-Autumn Festival中秋节
某人
中国四大名著
l4.admire/enjoy the moon赏月
12.wait in line排队
3.Journey to the West《西游记》
15.focus on good health and long
13.carry on/pass down traditions
4.take her father's place to fight in
life注重健康和长寿
承传统
the army替父从军
角度2中国文化礼仪
角度3具有代表性的中国文化
5.Yu Gong Moves the Mountains《愚
1.be supposed to do sth.应该做某事
I.paper cutting剪纸
公移山》
③话题佳句积累
©开头句
1.A growing number of foreigners are more and more interested in Chinese customs.(a growing number of
来越多的;more and more越来越,概括中国习俗目前的受欢迎程度)
2.It is a good way to learn about the culture of Xinjiang by visiting there.
3.I am extremely glad that you have an interest in our traditional Chinese culture.
@中间句
1.New Year is a wonderful time when family and friends come together to say goodbye to the old year and wel-
come the new one.[RJ九全U2]
2.It is said that a Chinese ruler called Shen Nong was the first to discover tea as a drink.[RJU6]
3.No matter how far away they live,young people show their love and respect for their parents by coming
home with gifts.(No matter+疑问词引导让步状语从句,表达年轻人对家人的重视)
4.Paper cutting is one of the great treasures in Chinese culture..(one of+可数名词复数…之一)
5.As we all know,all traditional red things play a special role in China.
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©结尾句
1.This story reminds us that you can never know what's possible unless you try to make it happen.[RJAU6]
2.I highly recommend that you visit the Great Wall to explore the long history of China.
3.in a word,we all love the festival because it can remind people of Chinese history..(in a word总之,用于总
结自己的观点)》
4.I hope to pass down these meaningful traditions and keep the spirit of the Spring Festival alive forever.
②俗语谚语
l.Culture is the root;confidence is the fruit..文化是根;自信是果。
2.When in Rome,do as the Romans do.入乡随俗。
⊙真题剖析
[2025广东]假设你是李明。你校计划与市博物馆合作举办民俗体验活
【审题】
动,需要同学们从若干民俗项目中选出最想体验的一项。你期待交换生Pete
话题:针对民俗体验项目投
也参与投票。请你根据以下思维导图的提示,写一封电子邮件给他。
票一事给交换生Peter发
注意:
邮件
给Peter的邮件
文体:
文
人称:介绍项目名称和得票
你的选择
目前票数最高的两项
情况用第
人
1.项目名称
1.舞狮
你的期待
称;介绍选择的理由
2.选择理由(2点)
2.…
用第
人称
3.项目前得票情况
时态:用
时
(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
要点:
(2)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名和考生的真实姓名;
①补全票数排名第二的项
(3)语句连贯,词数80左右。作文开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
目名称(民俗体验项目包
Dear Peter,
括:包粽子、编中国结、学
Our school and the city museum will hold an event for us to get a taste of a
习剪纸、体验扎染等)
folk custom.
②你选择的项目名称、选择
的理由以及所选项目目
前得票情况
结尾除表达对Peter投票该项国的期待外,还可邀请Peter
Best,
③表达你对Peter投票给该
和你一起体验等。
Li Ming
项目的期待
【写作框架】
DOur school and the city museum will hold an event for us to get a
taste of a folk custom.We are invited to vote for our favorite,and
开头:引出主题
lion dance comes first now..(表明写作背景以及目前民俗项目排
名信息,第一句已给出)
②The second most popular custom is..(引出自己选择的项目名称)
中间:介绍自己
①I also prefer to.,I think we must learn..(表明对该项目的态度)
Vote for Favorite
所选项目的名称
Folk Custom
及其理由和目前
②Besides,IlL(解释自己选择该项目的理由)
得票情况
③But so far,only.students..(阐述该项目目前的得票情况)
结尾:表达愿
①I am writing to you because I hope..(重申自己写邮件的目的)
望和期待
②I'n looking forward to your choice!!(表达自己对对方投票的期待)
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【润色与升格】
连句成篇
句子升格
Dear Peter,
①将该句改为被动句升格句子:
Our school and the city museum will hold an event for us to get
a taste of a folk custom.DOur school invite us to vote for our favor-
ite,and lion dance comes first now.The second most popular custom
is making zongzi.(要,点1:补全票数排名第二的项目名称)
I also prefer to make zongai,the traditional food of the Dragon
②用f引导的条件状语从句升格句子:
Boat Festival.I think we must learn the skill and pass down the tra-
dition.
2Besides,I'll give my parents a pleasant surprise by bringing back
home zongzi made by myself.But so far,only 98 students have cho-
sen this custom.(要,点2:介绍你选择的项目名称、选择的理由以
及所选项目目前的得票情况)
③用搭配“in the hope that'”升格句子:
3I am writing to you because I hope you can vote for making
zongzi too.I remember zongzi is your favorite Chinese food.I'm
looking forward to your choice!(要,点3:表达你对Peter投票给该
项目的期待)
Best,
Li Ming
【写作积累】
1.prefer to do sth.=like/love to do sth.喜欢做某事
2.because引导的原因状语从句可以和s0引导的并列句互换
马实战演练
[2025浙江二模]假如你是李华,计划在“五一”期间进行一次以“体验中国文化”为主题的旅行。请根据
下图提示,用英语写一份文化游计划,并在英语课上与同学们分享。
My May Day Cultural Tour
Where will you go?
What activities
Why do you plan to
How will you go there?
will you do?
do these activities?
.visit places of interest
learn about history/
try local food
。…
culture
5
注意:1.计划需包含至少三个活动,以上活动仅供参考;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
3.词数80-120。
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