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话题9
和谐社区与美丽家乡
⊙命题角度探究
①介绍社区基本情况
②宣传社区出圈景点
介绍美丽社区
③描绘梦想中的社区
①介绍家乡基本情况
和谐社区与
介绍家乡的
②介绍、赞美家乡的变化
美丽家乡
发展变化
③具体介绍家乡的某个景点
①介绍中国的大好河山,表达对祖国的热爱
介绍中国的
发展变化
②简要阐述中国在多方面的发展与变化并谈谈感受
⊙话题短语积累
角度1介绍美丽社区
5.welcome to...欢迎来到
4.develop rapidly快速发展
1.clean and tidy千净整洁
6.be famous/,known for因…而闻名
5.a long history and vast land历史
2.polite and friendly礼貌且友好
7.the home of.…的发源地
悠久,地域辽阔
3.various activities各种各样的活动
8.be rich in富含/盛产.
6.traditional food culture传统饮食
4.plant flowers种花
9.rich culture丰富的文化
文化
5.be full of laughter充满欢声笑语
l0.be free to对…免费
7.home and abroad国内外
6.pick up litter in the park在公园
I1.natural beauty自然风光
8.change for the better变得更好
捡垃圾
12.one of the most suitable living
9.take useful measures采取有效
措施
7.make eco-friendly products做环
cities最宜居的城市之一
保产品
l3.have great effects on对…有
10.make great achievements in many
fields在许多领域取得巨大成就
8.organize a book-sharing meeting
很大影响
l1.make…a reality使…成为
组织图书分享会
l4.convenient transportation便利的
现实
角度2介绍家乡的发展变化
交通
12.be the pride of成为…的骄傲
1.lie in/be located in the central
角度3介绍中国的发展变化
l3.achieve one's dream实现某人
part of.…位于…中部
1.be proud of为…感到自豪
的梦想
2.by the side of..在…旁边
2.in the past few years在过去的
14.better and better越来越好
3.have a large population人口众多
几年
l5.make contributions to society为社
4.places of interest名胜古迹
3.take place发生
会做贡献
⊙话题佳句积累
©开头句
1.Welcome to my neighbourhood and I'm glad to be your guide.(祈使句表明说话人的热情好客)
2.There are three tourist attractions I want to recommend to you.
3.China is a country with a long history and rich traditional culture.
4.I'm honored to give a speech on the great changes that have taken place in my hometown..(定语从句表明变
化的发生地点)
5.In recent years,great changes have taken place in our city with the help of the good policies of our coun-
try.(“with+名词短语”作方式状语,说明变化发生的条件)
新疆英语话题写作进阶册
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色中间句
1.The mountain scenery is so beautiful that it takes my breath away.[RJ新教材八上Ul]
2.It is usually very hot and sunny compared to other places..[WY八上M10](通过对比,体现家乡气候特,点)
3.This park is famous for its lake,bridges and the ancient buildings on the hill.[WYA M8]
4.The Yellow River runs through the city of Lanzhou and along the river there are many parks,as well as the
Zhongshan Bridge and so on.
5.Located on the banks of the Yellow River,this beautiful old city has a popular tourist attraction now.
6.The scene is as beautiful as a painting!(用as..as.,结构生动形容该地风景如画)
©结尾句
1.The environment in my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful,which adds to our happiness
(用more and more.结构表达事物的发展变化)
2.Even though it is old,it is full of interesting places to go and things to do.(Even though引导让步状语从
句,欲扬先抑来体现古城的魅力)
3.I'm sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in my hometown.
4.It is no wonder that hundreds of thousands of visitors spend their holidays here every year.
©俗语谚语
1.East or west,home is best.金窝银窝,不如自己的草窝。
2.Ten miles away from the city,each has its own local customs.离城十里路,各有各乡风。
3.Beauty is not beautiful,home water;Don't kiss,native people.美不美,家乡水;亲不亲,故乡人。
⊙真题剖析
[2025兰州]据报道,某小区花墙长势喜人,吸引众多游客前来打卡拍
【审题】
照。假如你是该小区住户,请根据以下内容为小区写一篇英文宣传报道
话题:为小区写宣传报道
向某英文杂志旅游专栏投稿。
文体:
文
人称:第
人称和第
Beautiful Neighbourhood
人称
What is the
What activities
What are you
时态:介绍社区情况和社区
neighbourhood like?
do people have?
going to do?
活动用
时;
介绍社区居民未来行
.clean and tidy...
·fun sports game
recycle or reuse
动时用
时
polite and friendly
·art shows like:
used things
要点:
drawing on stones
①介绍社区基本情况(如社
区环境、社区氛围、社区
基础设施等)
要求:1.报道应包括图示所有要点;
②介绍社区活动(可从满足
2.条理清晰,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
不同年龄阶层人们需求
3.文中不能出现真实的人名、地名、校名等信息;
的活动或按照活动目的
4.词数80词左右,文章标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
是休闲娱乐还是文化传
Beautiful Neighbourhood
播等角度来介绍)
It is reported that the lovely flowers of my neighbourhood have attracted lots
③社区居民未来行动(可从
of tourists.
保护社区环境、投身社区
建设、维护社区和谐等角
度介绍居民未来行动)
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新疆英语话题写作进阶册
【写作框架】
开头:点明主题
It is reported that the lovely flowers of my neighbourhood
have attracted lots of tourists.(已给出)
①社区情况:The most important thing is that.;The people here
are..(引出社区优点:千净整洁,居民友爱互助
②社区活动:Also,we organize some.;For kids,we have
Beautiful
中间:从社区情况、
Neighbourhood
社区活动、未来行动
Sometimes,we have..(分类介绍社区为居民提供
三个方面展开叙述
的丰富多彩的活动)
③未来行动:As for me,.Ican;In my free time,.I often.;
At the same time,L.(从自身出发,说明自己未来
将采取的行动)
结尾:表达感受
I'm proud that I can live in our beautiful neighbourhood.
(表明对能生活在美丽社区而感到自豪)
【润色与升格】
连句成篇
句子升格
Beautiful Neighbourhood
①用短语“what's more”升格句子:
It is reported that the lovely flowers of my neighbourhood have
attracted lots of tourists.
The most important thing is that my neighbourhood is clean and
tidy.(要点l:介绍社区基本情况)The people here are polite and
②用搭配“be willing to do sth.”升格
friendly,and we often help each other.DAlso,we organize some
句子:
interesting activities to make our life rich and colorful.For kids,we
have fun sports games,like badminton matches.Sometimes we have
interesting art shows such as drawing pictures on stones..(要,点2:介
绍社区活动)》
③用短语“make a difference”升格
As for me,I can recycle the used plastic bottles and reuse the
句子:
used paper boxes.2In my free time,I often do some cleaning.At
the same time,I take an active part in other volunteer activities.
③I hope what I have done can help my neighbourhood.(要,点3:社
区居民未来行动)
I'm proud that I can live in our beautiful neighbourhood.
马实战演练
家乡的美是生命中最美好的记忆。作为青少年的
我们,有责任和义务宣传我们家乡的美。请你以“Beau
Beauty of view
Environment
ty of My Hometown”为题围绕右图几个方面来介绍你家
景之美
Places to visit
乡的美。
Beauty of
My Hometown
注意:1.词数80-120;
Beauty of people
Neighbours
2.文中须包括所有内容要点,可适当发挥,使全
人之美
文连贯、通顺;
Volunteers
3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Beauty of My Hometown
新疆英语话题写作进阶册
37实战演练
【高分范文】
My Mother Raised Me Up
In the journey of my growth,it was my mother who tru-
ly raised me up.Once,when I struggled with math and felt
like giving up,she sat beside me patiently,guiding me through
each problem.Her support and belief in my learning ability lit
up a tiny light within me
This experience taught me the power of love and never
giving up.It made me realize that challenges are chances for
growth.With my mother's encouragement,I learned to face
difficulties bravely,turning difficulties into stepping stones.
Her love and trust became my power,encouraging me to become
a more confident and determined person
Through this journey,I grew stronger and wiser,under-
standing that the love and support from family are the tiny lights
that light up our path in life
话题6劳动实践与志愿服务
真题剖析
【审题】应用;一;三;一般现在
【润色与升格】
1To start with,it's really interesting for us to learn from
farmers.
2In order to make the trip more interesting,we can add two
more activities.
3I believe this farm trip will not only let us get close to nature
but also bring us a lot of fun.
实战演练
【高分范文】
I did a survey on my classmates doing housework.Accord-
ing to the results,15%of them usually do housework,while
80%sometimes help with chores.Sadly,5%seldom do any
housework.This shows that most students are slow to take part
in household tasks.
To improve this,I suggest that my classmates spend some
time every day doing simple chores,like tidying up their
rooms,washing dishes or folding clothes.Housework is not
only helpful for keeping our homes clean and tidy but also good
for teaching us responsibilities.When we do chores,we learn to
care for our family.Let's all try to do more to help them,just
because small things can make a big difference!
话题7
学生学习与生活
真题剖析
【审题】记叙;一;一般过
【润色与升格】
OThe story that happened last Friday left a deep impression on
me.
2Fortunately,he was fine after receiving treatment.
3I realized that it's truly meaningful to give up a small personal
honor to help someone in need.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Dear Jeff,
How is everything going?It's never easy to learn Chinese
characters and passages.Even the Chinese people find it hard
话
to learn them well,so you needn't feel upset.Here are some
题
suggestions for you.
写
First,turn to the Internet for help when you have a prob-
lem.From the Internet,you can learn how to read and write the
作
characters.
What's more,you can learn from your Chinese
进
friends and I'll always be ready to help.But the most important
阶
is to keep on learning and reading.
册
Practice makes perfect.Keep on learning and hold on
to your goal.I'm sure you will make progress.
Yours,
Li Hu
话题8人际交往
真题剖析
【审题】说明;一;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DBy discussing with team members,we can come up with bet-
ter ideas.
2There is no doubt that communication can help us know more
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about our teammates.
3Doubting others will only weaken the group./Doubting others
only weakens the group.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Dear Zhang Ming,
I'm sorry to hear that you're having such trouble commu-
nicating with your parents.Don't worry!We can find ways to
improve it.
I know how you feel about your parents making decisions
for you and not understanding your interests.They probably
think they're protecting you,but this can make you feel uncom-
fortable.In my opinion,you should try to talk with them calm-
ly when they're not busy or stressed.Why not explain your
feelings honestly?Don't be afraid of disagreements.
As the saying goes,we learn and grow through solving
problems together.Remember,your parents love you deeply,
even if they don't show it in the way you expect.Be brave to
express yourself,and I believe things will get better.
Love.
Li Hua
话题9和谐社区与美丽家乡
真题剖析
【审题】说明:
;三;一般现在;一般将来
【润色与升格】
DWhat's more,we organize some interesting activities to make
our life rich and colorful.
2In my free time,I am willing to do some cleaning often.
3I hope what I have done can help make a difference to my
neighbourhood.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Beauty of My Hometown
I'm very glad to tell you something about my hometown.
It's the beauty in my eyes.
My hometown,Xinjiang,is a charming place.When it
comes to the beauty of view,the environment here is quite
pleasant.The sky is often clear,and the air is fresh.There
are many green spaces like the park.The park has a beautiful
lake,with willows by the sides.It's a great place for relaxation.
Besides the nice scenery,what makes Xinjiang more
attractive is the beauty of people.The neighbours are friendly
and helpful.They often greet each other and are ready to offer
a hand when someone is in need.Volunteers in Xinjiang are al-
so active.They work in communities,helping to keep the city
clean,and they also participate in charity activities,spreading
warmth.
I'm really proud of my hometown.I hope more and more
people can come here to enjoy the beauty of it.
话题10中华优秀传统文化
真题剖析
【审题】应用;三;一;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DWe are invited to vote for our favorite,and lion dance comes
first now.
2Besides,if I bring back home zongzi made by myself,it will
give my parents a pleasant surprise
3I am writing to you in the hope that you can vote for making
zongzi too.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Hi,class.I'm glad to share my plan about May Day cul-
tural tour with you.I am going to Xi'an by train during the May
Day holiday.Xi'an is a city full of historical and cultural herit-
ages.
First,I'll visit the Terracotta Army.It's a world-famous
wonder.I can learn a great deal about the history and art of the
Qin Dynasty there.Second,I'm looking forward to trying lo-
cal food like roujiamo and yangrou paomo.By tasting these spe-
cial foods,I can experience the local food culture.Also,I plan
to visit the ancient City Wall.Walking on it,I can enjoy the
scenery and imagine what life was like in the past.
I believe this trip will be a great chance for me to experi-
ence Chinese culture deeply.
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