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话题8人际交往
口命题角度探究
①与家人、朋友或老师沟通的经历与体会
人际关系(家庭
同伴、师生)
②与家人、朋友或老师沟通的方法及建议
①讲述与他人或自己内心发生的冲突和解决方式(尊
重他人、倾听他人、换位思考等)
描述人际交往
中的问题与建
②讲述你的烦恼并寻求建议(适应新环境、交友困难
人际交往
议或解决方案
社交场合紧张、邻里矛盾、社团活动融入困难等)
①分享自己团队协作的经历,并谈谈感悟或看法
团队合作
②写一封关于表扬团队合作的表扬信
③写一篇关于团队合作的演讲稿
⊙话题短语积累
角度1人际关系(家庭、同伴、师生)
2.have difficulty (in)doing sth.
7.need more personal space需要更
1.get on/along well with与…和
某事有困难
多私人空间
睦相处/关系良好
3.have problems with..在…方
8.keep a good mood保持好心情
2.have a close relationship with...
面有问题
9.talk with sb.face to face和某人
4.peer pressure同伴压力
…有亲密的关系
面对面谈话
5.feel lonely and nervous感到孤独
3.company with their family陪伴他
和紧张
10.bring you closer together让你们
们的家人
6.refuse to do sth.拒绝做某事
更紧密
4.organize outdoor activities组织户
7.under much pressure在重压之下
11.There is no need to worry about...
外活动
8.lack of communication缺乏交流
没有必要担心…
5.share joy with..和…分享
9.ignore one's feelings忽略某人的
12.refuse properly/.politely合理地/
喜悦
感受
礼貌地拒绝
l0.be hard to fit in难以融入
角度3团队合作
6.bring us warmth and courage带给
【建议或解决方案】
1.believe in/,trust sb.信任某人
我们温暖和勇气
1.advise sb.to do sth.suggest
2.be responsible for...对…负责
7.create unforgettable memories
doing sth.建议(某人)做某事
3.take pride in./be proud of为,
造难忘的回忆
2.be friendly/kind/nice to sb..对某
感到自豪
8.bring out the best in me使我表
人友好/友善
3.spend time with sb.与某人共度
4.pull/work together齐心协力;通
现出最好的一面
角度2描述人际交往中的问题
时光
力合作
4.be patient with sb.对某人有耐心
5.develop team spirit培养团队精神
与建议或解决方案
5.reach for one's hand向某人伸出6.work hard on..在…方面努力
【问题】
援手
7.achieve/realize one's dream实现
1.argue/,fight/quarrel with sb.和某
6.keep in touch with sb.和某人保
某人的梦想
人吵架
持联系
8.achieve success获得成功
)话题佳句积累
巴开头句
1.My problem is that I can't get on with my family.Relations between my parents have become difficult.[RJA
下U4](开门见山,说明问题)
2.Why is communication important?Let me tell you my ideas.
3.I'm sorry to hear that you are not feeling well these days.(I'm sorry to hear that.,表示款意,用于信件开头语)
4.Everybody has his or her own way to do things,so we should understand each other.
5.I didn't realize the importance of teamwork until I finished a group task with others.
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新疆英语话题写作进阶册
@中间句
1.The more I get to know Julie,the more I realized that we have a lot in common.[RJ U11]
2.Mr Brown always took the time to explain things to me clearly whenever I couldn't understand anything.[RJ
全U14]
3.Although he's your best friend,you should still tell him that copying others'homework is wrong.[RJAU4]
4.But I think if we continue to pull together,we're going to win the next game.[RJ U11]
5.For example,.if I am sad,talking to my mom always makes me feel better.(举例说明人际交往中的建议)
6.As the saying goes,"A problem is halved if someone shares it."In other words,sharing a problem is like
cutting it in half..(引用谚语给出建议一分享)
@结尾句
1.We should respect each other's differences and learn from each other..[RJ新教材八上UI0]
2.Good communication can make our world a happier and more friendly place..(沟通的意义)
3.in my opinion,a good relationship with teachers helps us learn and grow..(表达自身观,点)
4.Now I realize that teamwork not only makes tasks easier but also brings us closer.
5.Only by working together can we achieve our goal(s)successfully.
心俗语谚语
1.Many hands make light work.众人拾柴火焰高;人多好办事。
2.Never do to others what you would not like them to do to you.己所不欲,勿施于人o
3.He that respects not is not respected..欲受人敬,要先敬人o
4.A friend in need is a friend indeed..患难见真情。
⊙真题剖析
[2024四川成都]你校英语报就“团队合作”这一话题征稿。请根据以下
【审题】
图示,以“Be a Good Team Member'”为题投稿。
话题:如何成为一名优秀的
团队成员
文体:
文
Good ideas
Better ideas.
人称:第
人称
Importance
时态:用
时
要点:
①说明团队合作的重要性
②详细介绍成为一名优秀
Ways
的团队成员的方法
③结语
Ending
温馨提示:前两段内容须包
含简笔画及图中文字信息;
注意:1.词数80左右;
第二段除了说明图中给出的
2.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
两个方法外,还须补充一个:
Be a Good Team Member
方法(如:互相信任、承担
好自己的职责、配合领导者
安排等);最后一段可以是
感悟,也可以是号召。
新疆英语话题写作进阶册
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【写作框架】
开头句示例:There is an old Chinese saying,“Unity makes strength.
开头:说明团队
This shows how powerful teamwork can be.
合作的重要性
Word bank:the importance of,discuss with,come up with better
ideas
Be a Good
中间:介绍成为
Word bank:communicate with,know more about teammates,listen
一名优秀的团队
to...carefully,express oneself,work together,understand/help/
Team Member
成员的方法
support each other,trust(each other)
结尾句示例:All in all,teamwork plays an important role in our
结尾:感悟/号召
daily life.
Word bank:Let's...,As far as I am concerned...
【润色与升格】
连句成篇
句子升格
Be a Good Team Member
①用短语“come up with”替换“get”升
There is an old Chinese saying,"Unity makes strength."This
格句子:
shows how powerful teamwork can be.1By discussing with team
members,we can get better ideas.But what makes someone a good
team member'?Here are three key tips.(要,点l:说明团队合作的重
要性)
First,keep communicating.2Communication can help us know
②用句型“There is no doubt that..”升
more about our teammates.Always listen carefully when others
格句子:
speak,and don't be afraid to share our own thoughts.Remember,
good communication solves half of the problems.Also,be ready
to help and support others.When facing difficulties,working togeth-
er makes us stronger as a whole.Most importantly,trust our team.3If
we doubt others,it will only weaken the group.Believe that everyone
③用动名词短语作主语将两个句子合
is doing their best,and we'll create a positive environment.(要,点2:
并,突出怀疑他人对团队的危害:
详细介绍成为一名优秀的团队成员的方法,补充方法:信任队友)
All in all,teamwork plays an important role in our daily life.
Teamwork not only improves our skills but also deepens friendships.
Let's work together to build a brighter future.(要,点3:发出号召,总
结全文)
【写作积累】
1.Good communication solves half of the problems..良好的沟通能解决一半的问题。2.be ready to为…做准备
3.play an important role/part in..在…中起重要作用/扮演重要角色
4.deepen friendship加深友谊
雪实战演练
[2025阿克苏三模]假如你是李华,你的好朋友张明向你倾诉,他的父母很少倾听他的想法,凡事总喜欢
帮他做决定,他们之间沟通不顺畅,这让他感到烦恼。请根据以下提示,用英语写一封信,谈谈他的困扰并提
出建议。
提示:1.他的困扰(如父母批评太多/不理解他的兴要求:1.参考所给提示,可适当发挥;
趣等);
2.语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确、书写规范;
2.你的建议:双方冷静时主动沟通;尝试让父
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
母理解他的想法。
4.词数80-120。
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新疆英语话题写作进阶册实战演练
【高分范文】
My Mother Raised Me Up
In the journey of my growth,it was my mother who tru-
ly raised me up.Once,when I struggled with math and felt
like giving up,she sat beside me patiently,guiding me through
each problem.Her support and belief in my learning ability lit
up a tiny light within me
This experience taught me the power of love and never
giving up.It made me realize that challenges are chances for
growth.With my mother's encouragement,I learned to face
difficulties bravely,turning difficulties into stepping stones.
Her love and trust became my power,encouraging me to become
a more confident and determined person
Through this journey,I grew stronger and wiser,under-
standing that the love and support from family are the tiny lights
that light up our path in life
话题6劳动实践与志愿服务
真题剖析
【审题】应用;一;三;一般现在
【润色与升格】
1To start with,it's really interesting for us to learn from
farmers.
2In order to make the trip more interesting,we can add two
more activities.
3I believe this farm trip will not only let us get close to nature
but also bring us a lot of fun.
实战演练
【高分范文】
I did a survey on my classmates doing housework.Accord-
ing to the results,15%of them usually do housework,while
80%sometimes help with chores.Sadly,5%seldom do any
housework.This shows that most students are slow to take part
in household tasks.
To improve this,I suggest that my classmates spend some
time every day doing simple chores,like tidying up their
rooms,washing dishes or folding clothes.Housework is not
only helpful for keeping our homes clean and tidy but also good
for teaching us responsibilities.When we do chores,we learn to
care for our family.Let's all try to do more to help them,just
because small things can make a big difference!
话题7
学生学习与生活
真题剖析
【审题】记叙;一;一般过
【润色与升格】
OThe story that happened last Friday left a deep impression on
me.
2Fortunately,he was fine after receiving treatment.
3I realized that it's truly meaningful to give up a small personal
honor to help someone in need.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Dear Jeff,
How is everything going?It's never easy to learn Chinese
characters and passages.Even the Chinese people find it hard
话
to learn them well,so you needn't feel upset.Here are some
题
suggestions for you.
写
First,turn to the Internet for help when you have a prob-
lem.From the Internet,you can learn how to read and write the
作
characters.
What's more,you can learn from your Chinese
进
friends and I'll always be ready to help.But the most important
阶
is to keep on learning and reading.
册
Practice makes perfect.Keep on learning and hold on
to your goal.I'm sure you will make progress.
Yours,
Li Hu
话题8人际交往
真题剖析
【审题】说明;一;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DBy discussing with team members,we can come up with bet-
ter ideas.
2There is no doubt that communication can help us know more
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about our teammates.
3Doubting others will only weaken the group./Doubting others
only weakens the group.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Dear Zhang Ming,
I'm sorry to hear that you're having such trouble commu-
nicating with your parents.Don't worry!We can find ways to
improve it.
I know how you feel about your parents making decisions
for you and not understanding your interests.They probably
think they're protecting you,but this can make you feel uncom-
fortable.In my opinion,you should try to talk with them calm-
ly when they're not busy or stressed.Why not explain your
feelings honestly?Don't be afraid of disagreements.
As the saying goes,we learn and grow through solving
problems together.Remember,your parents love you deeply,
even if they don't show it in the way you expect.Be brave to
express yourself,and I believe things will get better.
Love.
Li Hua
话题9和谐社区与美丽家乡
真题剖析
【审题】说明:
;三;一般现在;一般将来
【润色与升格】
DWhat's more,we organize some interesting activities to make
our life rich and colorful.
2In my free time,I am willing to do some cleaning often.
3I hope what I have done can help make a difference to my
neighbourhood.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Beauty of My Hometown
I'm very glad to tell you something about my hometown.
It's the beauty in my eyes.
My hometown,Xinjiang,is a charming place.When it
comes to the beauty of view,the environment here is quite
pleasant.The sky is often clear,and the air is fresh.There
are many green spaces like the park.The park has a beautiful
lake,with willows by the sides.It's a great place for relaxation.
Besides the nice scenery,what makes Xinjiang more
attractive is the beauty of people.The neighbours are friendly
and helpful.They often greet each other and are ready to offer
a hand when someone is in need.Volunteers in Xinjiang are al-
so active.They work in communities,helping to keep the city
clean,and they also participate in charity activities,spreading
warmth.
I'm really proud of my hometown.I hope more and more
people can come here to enjoy the beauty of it.
话题10中华优秀传统文化
真题剖析
【审题】应用;三;一;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DWe are invited to vote for our favorite,and lion dance comes
first now.
2Besides,if I bring back home zongzi made by myself,it will
give my parents a pleasant surprise
3I am writing to you in the hope that you can vote for making
zongzi too.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Hi,class.I'm glad to share my plan about May Day cul-
tural tour with you.I am going to Xi'an by train during the May
Day holiday.Xi'an is a city full of historical and cultural herit-
ages.
First,I'll visit the Terracotta Army.It's a world-famous
wonder.I can learn a great deal about the history and art of the
Qin Dynasty there.Second,I'm looking forward to trying lo-
cal food like roujiamo and yangrou paomo.By tasting these spe-
cial foods,I can experience the local food culture.Also,I plan
to visit the ancient City Wall.Walking on it,I can enjoy the
scenery and imagine what life was like in the past.
I believe this trip will be a great chance for me to experi-
ence Chinese culture deeply.
考答案及解析