内容正文:
实战演练
【高分范文】
My Mother Raised Me Up
In the journey of my growth,it was my mother who tru-
ly raised me up.Once,when I struggled with math and felt
like giving up,she sat beside me patiently,guiding me through
each problem.Her support and belief in my learning ability lit
up a tiny light within me
This experience taught me the power of love and never
giving up.It made me realize that challenges are chances for
growth.With my mother's encouragement,I learned to face
difficulties bravely,turning difficulties into stepping stones.
Her love and trust became my power,encouraging me to become
a more confident and determined person
Through this journey,I grew stronger and wiser,under-
standing that the love and support from family are the tiny lights
that light up our path in life
话题6劳动实践与志愿服务
真题剖析
【审题】应用;一;三;一般现在
【润色与升格】
1To start with,it's really interesting for us to learn from
farmers.
2In order to make the trip more interesting,we can add two
more activities.
3I believe this farm trip will not only let us get close to nature
but also bring us a lot of fun.
实战演练
【高分范文】
I did a survey on my classmates doing housework.Accord-
ing to the results,15%of them usually do housework,while
80%sometimes help with chores.Sadly,5%seldom do any
housework.This shows that most students are slow to take part
in household tasks.
To improve this,I suggest that my classmates spend some
time every day doing simple chores,like tidying up their
rooms,washing dishes or folding clothes.Housework is not
only helpful for keeping our homes clean and tidy but also good
for teaching us responsibilities.When we do chores,we learn to
care for our family.Let's all try to do more to help them,just
because small things can make a big difference!
话题7
学生学习与生活
真题剖析
【审题】记叙;一;一般过
【润色与升格】
OThe story that happened last Friday left a deep impression on
me.
2Fortunately,he was fine after receiving treatment.
3I realized that it's truly meaningful to give up a small personal
honor to help someone in need.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Dear Jeff,
How is everything going?It's never easy to learn Chinese
characters and passages.Even the Chinese people find it hard
话
to learn them well,so you needn't feel upset.Here are some
题
suggestions for you.
写
First,turn to the Internet for help when you have a prob-
lem.From the Internet,you can learn how to read and write the
作
characters.
What's more,you can learn from your Chinese
进
friends and I'll always be ready to help.But the most important
阶
is to keep on learning and reading.
册
Practice makes perfect.Keep on learning and hold on
to your goal.I'm sure you will make progress.
Yours,
Li Hu
话题8人际交往
真题剖析
【审题】说明;一;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DBy discussing with team members,we can come up with bet-
ter ideas.
2There is no doubt that communication can help us know more
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about our teammates.
3Doubting others will only weaken the group./Doubting others
only weakens the group.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Dear Zhang Ming,
I'm sorry to hear that you're having such trouble commu-
nicating with your parents.Don't worry!We can find ways to
improve it.
I know how you feel about your parents making decisions
for you and not understanding your interests.They probably
think they're protecting you,but this can make you feel uncom-
fortable.In my opinion,you should try to talk with them calm-
ly when they're not busy or stressed.Why not explain your
feelings honestly?Don't be afraid of disagreements.
As the saying goes,we learn and grow through solving
problems together.Remember,your parents love you deeply,
even if they don't show it in the way you expect.Be brave to
express yourself,and I believe things will get better.
Love.
Li Hua
话题9和谐社区与美丽家乡
真题剖析
【审题】说明:
;三;一般现在;一般将来
【润色与升格】
DWhat's more,we organize some interesting activities to make
our life rich and colorful.
2In my free time,I am willing to do some cleaning often.
3I hope what I have done can help make a difference to my
neighbourhood.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Beauty of My Hometown
I'm very glad to tell you something about my hometown.
It's the beauty in my eyes.
My hometown,Xinjiang,is a charming place.When it
comes to the beauty of view,the environment here is quite
pleasant.The sky is often clear,and the air is fresh.There
are many green spaces like the park.The park has a beautiful
lake,with willows by the sides.It's a great place for relaxation.
Besides the nice scenery,what makes Xinjiang more
attractive is the beauty of people.The neighbours are friendly
and helpful.They often greet each other and are ready to offer
a hand when someone is in need.Volunteers in Xinjiang are al-
so active.They work in communities,helping to keep the city
clean,and they also participate in charity activities,spreading
warmth.
I'm really proud of my hometown.I hope more and more
people can come here to enjoy the beauty of it.
话题10中华优秀传统文化
真题剖析
【审题】应用;三;一;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DWe are invited to vote for our favorite,and lion dance comes
first now.
2Besides,if I bring back home zongzi made by myself,it will
give my parents a pleasant surprise
3I am writing to you in the hope that you can vote for making
zongzi too.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Hi,class.I'm glad to share my plan about May Day cul-
tural tour with you.I am going to Xi'an by train during the May
Day holiday.Xi'an is a city full of historical and cultural herit-
ages.
First,I'll visit the Terracotta Army.It's a world-famous
wonder.I can learn a great deal about the history and art of the
Qin Dynasty there.Second,I'm looking forward to trying lo-
cal food like roujiamo and yangrou paomo.By tasting these spe-
cial foods,I can experience the local food culture.Also,I plan
to visit the ancient City Wall.Walking on it,I can enjoy the
scenery and imagine what life was like in the past.
I believe this trip will be a great chance for me to experi-
ence Chinese culture deeply.
考答案及解析话题7学生学习与生活
⊙命题角度探究
①如何学好一门新语言
①介绍校园活动内容及理由
②介绍自己喜欢的书籍
学校生涸
②介绍对校园活动的看法
③给同伴/新生的学习建议
学习方法
及建议
及建议
④分享某科目的学习方法与感受
学生学习
①介绍学校最美之地
与生活
①讲述校园生活中的故事及
感受
校园环境
②介绍学校图书馆
与设施
对中学生
②对未来的期许以及对高
活的回顾
中生活的规划
⊙话题短语积累
角度1学习方法及建议
12.learn by/teach oneself自学
2.have a graduation party举办毕业
1.pay attention to注意;关注
13.look up the dictionary查字典
派对
2.take notes做笔记
14.learn from.向…学习
3.a study tour/,trip研学旅行
3.take..seriously认真对待…
15.come up with提出
4.a science festival科技节
4.make full use of充分利用
5.a book sale图书义卖
l6.put..into practice把…付诸
5.be weak in.../be poor at...
6.take an active part in积极参加
实践
…方面不擅长
7.colorful school activities丰富多
角度2校园环境与设施
彩的校园活动
6.be good at do well in be skilled
1.teaching building教学楼
8.make school life full of surprise
in擅长
2.school hall学校大厅
使学校生活充满惊喜
7.draw a mind map画思维导图
3.green school library绿色校园图
角度4对中学生活的回顾
8.develop good study habits培养良
书馆
1.look back at回首
好的学习习惯
4.beautiful campus美丽的校园
2.graduate from从…毕业
9.take one's advice采纳某人的
5.modern and smart classroom现代
3.come to an end结束
建议
4.be thankful to对…感激
l0.with the help of在…的帮助下
化智能教室
5.come to realize意识到
11.listen to the teacher carefully
角度3学校生活
6.make sb.proud of me让某人以
认真听讲
1.sports meeting运动会
我为傲
Q话题佳句积累
@开头句
1.When I first walked into the middle school,I was excited as well as worried.
2.Everyone has their own way of learning English,and I find that watching English movies works best for me.
3.Looking back on my middle school years,I realize it was a journey full of growth and discovery.
@中间句
1.I discovered that listening to something interesting is the secret to language learning.[RJ U1]
2.After a long period of study,I often relax by listening to music or playing basketball,which helps me clear my
mind and be energetic..(which引导非限定性定语从句)
3.What's more,you should take notes so that you can review and digest what you don't understand.
4.Even though I had a busy schedule,I always made time for reading because I was truly crazy about stories that
teach me valuable lessons..(Even though引导让步状语从句,表达对阅读的热爱)
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心结尾句
1.Learning is a lifelong journey because every day brings something new.[RJ U1]
2.I hope you will remember the important people in your lives who helped and supported you.[RJ U14]
3.Make the best use of your three years in junior high school.It will pass quickly,and the memories you have
will stay with you forever.(make the best use of充分利用)
4.The library is a treasure house of knowledge,where we can explore the world of books.
@俗语谚语
1.There is no royal road to learning.学无坦途。
2.Knowledge is power.知识就是力量。
3.When a book is read a hundred times,its meanings will naturally become clear.读书百遍,其义自见。
4.A man becomes learned by asking questions..多问则业精。
⊙真题剖析
[2025安徽]假定你是李华。校英文报“STORY”专栏正在征集稿件,请
【审题】
你根据下面表格中的信息,以第一人称,用英语写一个故事投稿。
话题:学校运动会上助人为
When
last Friday morning
乐的故事
切勿遗漏表格
Where
school sports ground
文体:
文
中的任何信息
Who
I,my classmate
人称:第
人称
What
take part in,help,feel proud
时态:主要用
时
注意:
要点:
表格中给出了4个要点:故
1.短文须包含表格中的关键词,请增加细节以使故事完整;
事发生的时间、地点、人物
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
以及经过和感受。根据
3.词数80-100。
help,feel proud可以推测题
温警提示:结合表格信息可以判断,本文需要写出发生在操场上的助人故
目要求讲述的是助人为乐
事,如果故事发生在校园而非操场或故事中:心未体现助人为乐,即为偏离主
的故事
题。
【写作框架】
开头句示例:Life is full of unforgettable moments,whether they're
开头:引出主
题
about success,challenges or kindness.
Word bank:the story happened...,leave a deep impression on sb.
可参考的经历有:
1.“我”帮助别人:
①比赛中同学受伤,“我”放弃比赛进行帮助;
②比赛中遇到同学摔倒但他/她仍坚持完成比赛,“我”搀扶
他/她一起走过终点线;
中间:叙述有
③篮球/排球/足球等比赛中对手受伤,“我”呼吁大家暂停比
学校运动会上助
人为乐的故事
关学校运动会
赛,先进行救助等。
的经历
2.别人帮助“我”:
①比赛快要失败时,经某人帮助或在同学的鼓励下赢得比赛:
②比赛中自己受伤但得到同学的帮助仍坚持到最后等。
3.团队协作:
团体项目中互相体谅、互帮互助、互相配合后赢得比赛等。
结尾:表达
结尾句示例:However,I missed my own event in the process.At
对这次经历
first,I felt a little disappointed,but that emotion soon turned into
的感受
pride.
Word bank:meaningful,realize that...,personal honor
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【润色与升格】
连句成篇
句子升格
An Unforgettable Story
①用hat引导的定语从句将两句合并为
Life is full of unforgettable moments,whether they're about suc-
句升格句子:
cess,challenges or kindness.The story happened last Friday.It
left a deep impression on me.(要点l:介绍故事发生的时间)
It was a bright morning on the school sports ground.The place
was filled with cheers.During the 100-meter race,a classmate sud-
②用高级词汇“Fortunately”替换
denly fell.As I was responsible for helping with first aid,I quickly
“Luckily”升格句子:
rushed to offer help and bring water.Other classmates comforted him
and we waited for the staff to arrive.2Luckily,he was fine after
receiving treatment..(要,点2、3、4:介绍故事发生的地,点、人物及经
过)
③用句型“It's truly meaningful to do
However,I missed my own event in the process.At first,I felt
sth.”升格宾语从句中的内容:
a little disappointed,but that emotion soon turned into pride.3I
realized that giving up a small personal honor to help someone in
need was truly meaningful.Sometimes,the greatest success is not
won in competitions,but felt in the heart..(要点4:表达对这次经
历的感受)
【写作积累】
1.leave a deep impression on sb.给某人留下深刻的印象
2.be responsible for对…负责
3.receive treatment接受治疔
4.not.but..不是…而是…(用于通过对比突出重点)
马实战演练
假设你是李辉,最近你的美国笔友Jf对中国文学很感兴趣,但是在学习过程中遇到很多困难,比如很多
汉字不认识,读不懂文章的意思等,因此他发邮件向你求助,请用英文给他回复一封邮件。
内容包括:
1.表示理解并给予安慰;
2.提出建议(上网学习,向中国朋友求助…);
3.表示鼓励。
注意:
1.词数80-120(开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数);
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Jeff,
Yours,
Li Hui
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