内容正文:
实战演练
【高分范文】
My Mother Raised Me Up
In the journey of my growth,it was my mother who tru-
ly raised me up.Once,when I struggled with math and felt
like giving up,she sat beside me patiently,guiding me through
each problem.Her support and belief in my learning ability lit
up a tiny light within me
This experience taught me the power of love and never
giving up.It made me realize that challenges are chances for
growth.With my mother's encouragement,I learned to face
difficulties bravely,turning difficulties into stepping stones.
Her love and trust became my power,encouraging me to become
a more confident and determined person
Through this journey,I grew stronger and wiser,under-
standing that the love and support from family are the tiny lights
that light up our path in life
话题6劳动实践与志愿服务
真题剖析
【审题】应用;一;三;一般现在
【润色与升格】
1To start with,it's really interesting for us to learn from
farmers.
2In order to make the trip more interesting,we can add two
more activities.
3I believe this farm trip will not only let us get close to nature
but also bring us a lot of fun.
实战演练
【高分范文】
I did a survey on my classmates doing housework.Accord-
ing to the results,15%of them usually do housework,while
80%sometimes help with chores.Sadly,5%seldom do any
housework.This shows that most students are slow to take part
in household tasks.
To improve this,I suggest that my classmates spend some
time every day doing simple chores,like tidying up their
rooms,washing dishes or folding clothes.Housework is not
only helpful for keeping our homes clean and tidy but also good
for teaching us responsibilities.When we do chores,we learn to
care for our family.Let's all try to do more to help them,just
because small things can make a big difference!
话题7
学生学习与生活
真题剖析
【审题】记叙;一;一般过
【润色与升格】
OThe story that happened last Friday left a deep impression on
me.
2Fortunately,he was fine after receiving treatment.
3I realized that it's truly meaningful to give up a small personal
honor to help someone in need.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Dear Jeff,
How is everything going?It's never easy to learn Chinese
characters and passages.Even the Chinese people find it hard
话
to learn them well,so you needn't feel upset.Here are some
题
suggestions for you.
写
First,turn to the Internet for help when you have a prob-
lem.From the Internet,you can learn how to read and write the
作
characters.
What's more,you can learn from your Chinese
进
friends and I'll always be ready to help.But the most important
阶
is to keep on learning and reading.
册
Practice makes perfect.Keep on learning and hold on
to your goal.I'm sure you will make progress.
Yours,
Li Hu
话题8人际交往
真题剖析
【审题】说明;一;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DBy discussing with team members,we can come up with bet-
ter ideas.
2There is no doubt that communication can help us know more
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about our teammates.
3Doubting others will only weaken the group./Doubting others
only weakens the group.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Dear Zhang Ming,
I'm sorry to hear that you're having such trouble commu-
nicating with your parents.Don't worry!We can find ways to
improve it.
I know how you feel about your parents making decisions
for you and not understanding your interests.They probably
think they're protecting you,but this can make you feel uncom-
fortable.In my opinion,you should try to talk with them calm-
ly when they're not busy or stressed.Why not explain your
feelings honestly?Don't be afraid of disagreements.
As the saying goes,we learn and grow through solving
problems together.Remember,your parents love you deeply,
even if they don't show it in the way you expect.Be brave to
express yourself,and I believe things will get better.
Love.
Li Hua
话题9和谐社区与美丽家乡
真题剖析
【审题】说明:
;三;一般现在;一般将来
【润色与升格】
DWhat's more,we organize some interesting activities to make
our life rich and colorful.
2In my free time,I am willing to do some cleaning often.
3I hope what I have done can help make a difference to my
neighbourhood.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Beauty of My Hometown
I'm very glad to tell you something about my hometown.
It's the beauty in my eyes.
My hometown,Xinjiang,is a charming place.When it
comes to the beauty of view,the environment here is quite
pleasant.The sky is often clear,and the air is fresh.There
are many green spaces like the park.The park has a beautiful
lake,with willows by the sides.It's a great place for relaxation.
Besides the nice scenery,what makes Xinjiang more
attractive is the beauty of people.The neighbours are friendly
and helpful.They often greet each other and are ready to offer
a hand when someone is in need.Volunteers in Xinjiang are al-
so active.They work in communities,helping to keep the city
clean,and they also participate in charity activities,spreading
warmth.
I'm really proud of my hometown.I hope more and more
people can come here to enjoy the beauty of it.
话题10中华优秀传统文化
真题剖析
【审题】应用;三;一;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DWe are invited to vote for our favorite,and lion dance comes
first now.
2Besides,if I bring back home zongzi made by myself,it will
give my parents a pleasant surprise
3I am writing to you in the hope that you can vote for making
zongzi too.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Hi,class.I'm glad to share my plan about May Day cul-
tural tour with you.I am going to Xi'an by train during the May
Day holiday.Xi'an is a city full of historical and cultural herit-
ages.
First,I'll visit the Terracotta Army.It's a world-famous
wonder.I can learn a great deal about the history and art of the
Qin Dynasty there.Second,I'm looking forward to trying lo-
cal food like roujiamo and yangrou paomo.By tasting these spe-
cial foods,I can experience the local food culture.Also,I plan
to visit the ancient City Wall.Walking on it,I can enjoy the
scenery and imagine what life was like in the past.
I believe this trip will be a great chance for me to experi-
ence Chinese culture deeply.
考答案及解析话题6劳动实践与志愿服务
⊙命题角度探究
①介绍一项劳动技能
②介绍如何提高生活技能
劳动技
①介绍家务的内容及对做家务的看法
③谈谈如何养成劳动习惯
能介绍
家务
②描述一次做家务的经历并谈谈体会
动实践
劳动
③介绍做家务的好处和意义,倡导中
①分享参加劳动实践活动的经历
学生做家务
和感受
②说说自己想参加的一项劳动实践
志愿活
①分享志愿活动经历
活动及理由,并且对自己选择的
愿服务
动与公
②谈谈参加志愿活动的意义与感悟
活动提出建议
劳动实践
共服务
③介绍手工制作某个物品的过程并
与收获
分享心得
⊙话题短语积累
角度1劳动技能介绍
3.be more independent and respon-
9.do one's part in doing sth..尽某
1.develop labor habits养成劳动
sible变得更独立且负责
人的职责做某事
习惯
4.be confident about oneself对自己
10.have a better relationship with
2.learn some basic life skills学习
充满信心
parents和父母有更好的关系
一些基本的生活技能
5.realize the importance of labor
角度4志愿活动与公共服务
3.water flowers浇花
识到劳动的重要性
1.volunteer to do sth.志愿做某事
4.pick strawberries摘草莓
角度3家务劳动
2.give out food分发食物
1.do the dishes洗餐具
5.feed animals喂动物
2.take out the rubbish倒垃圾
3.clean up the city parks清理城市
6.plant trees植树
3.sweep the floor扫地
公园
7.grow vegetables种菜
4.wash/fold clothes洗/叠衣服
4.help the homeless帮助无家可归
角度2劳动实践与收获
5.tidy(up)a room整理房间
的人
I.reduce study pressure减轻学习
6.make the bed整理床铺
5.cheer up the sick kids鼓舞生病
压力
7.do housework/help with chores
的孩子
2.be good for our health有益于我
家务
6.raise money for the disabled为残
们的健康
8.depend on依靠;信赖
疾人筹钱
。话题佳句积累
@开头句
1.Labor education plays an important role in teenagers'development.
2.It is necessary for us to learn some basic life skills through labor education.
3.As teenagers,we are supposed to form good labor habits which are good for our growth.(which引导定语从句)
4.
Doing chores helps to develop children's independence and teaches them how to look after
themselves.[RJ八下U3]
5.I'm making some plans to work in an old people's home this summer.[RJ U2]
@中间句
1.Flower arranging is another skill that I want to learn because it can keep me calm and relaxed.
2.Taking part in social practice can connect what I've learned with real life in an interesting way.
3.Helping with chores not only helps me form good habits,but also helps to develop my life skills.
4.I am willing to do voluntary activities that can enrich my knowledge and broaden my horizons.
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@结尾句
1.The more chores we do,the earlier we will learn to be independent.(运用“the+比较级,the+比较级”结
构介绍做家务的好处)
2.All the living skills I will get through the process will be of great value to my later life.
3.Let's start from the small things around us and play a part in creating a better world!
⊙真题剖析
[2025湖北改编]假如你是王华,你校英语报Happy Times正在征集关于
【审题】
本学期社会实践(fi®ld trip)方案的意见。请写一封邮件将你的意见发送到指
话题:社会实践
定邮箱。邮件内容包括:
文体:
文
1.从下面两个方案中挑选一个并说明理由;
人称:主要为第
人称
2.为该方案增补两项你喜欢的活动。
和第
人称
Plan A
Plan B
时态:用
时
Exploring the Farm
Visiting the Science Park
要点:
Reasons:enjoy nature
Reasons:love science
①从两个方案中挑选一个
Activities:learn from farmers
Activities:watch robots dancing
并说明理由(本文挑选
pick tomatoes
learn about space
Plan A)
②为该方案增补两项你喜
欢的活动(如Plan A可以
写作要求:
补充的活动为:feed the
1.根据上图所给提示,适当发挥;
animals,have a picnic等;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
Plan B可以补充的活动
3.词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数。
为:try the VR program,
Dear Sir/Madam,
make some simple robots in
I'd like to
person等)
Best wishes!
Yours,
Wang Hua
【写作框架】
开头:表明自
开头句示例:I'd like to choose Plan A-Exploring the Farm
己的选择并简
(部分已给出)
单说明原因
Word bank:a place to enjoy fresh air and green fields
可介绍的活动有:
l.表格中给出的活动(learn from farmers,pick tomatoes)
Exploring the Farm
中间:介绍活
2.增补喜欢的活动(feed animals,have a picnic,.milk a
动的具体内容
cow,water flowers,plant seeds)
Word bank:super delicious,sit on the grass,surely make
it a wonderful day
结尾:表达对
活动的期望
Word bank:all in all.I'm sure that....there is no doubt that...
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【润色与升格】
连句成篇
句子升格
Dear Sir/Madam,
①用短语“to start with”替换“irst”,并用
I'd like to choose Plan A-Exploring the Farm.I love nature,
句型“t's+a.+for sb.+to do sth.”
and the farm is a great place to enjoy fresh air and green fields.
升格句子:
,点1:从两个方案中挑选一个并说明理由一本文挑选Plan A)
DFirst,learning from farmers is really interesting.They can
teach us how to grow vegetables,and then we can try to plant fresh
and healthy vegetables in our own homes.Picking tomatoes will be
②用短语“in order to'”升格句子:
fun too.We can taste the tomatoes picked by ourselves,which must
be super delicious.2To make the trip more interesting,we can add
two more activities.We can feed the cute little animals on the farm,
like rabbits and chickens.In the afternoon,I want to have a picnic
there because sitting on the grass,sharing food and laughing will
surely make it a wonderful day..(要,点2:为该方案增补两项你喜欢
③用连词词组“not only.but also..”升
的活动)
格句子:
3I believe this farm trip will let us get close to nature and bring
us a lot of fun.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Wang Hua
马实战演练
[2025北京]假设你是李华,你们班的英语课正在开展研究性学习,你选择研究同学们做家务的情况,为
此你对班里40名同学进行了问卷调查,下图是部分统计结果。请用英语写一篇80-120词左右的短文,简要
说明图表内容,并对班级同学参与家务劳动提出建议。
How often do you do housework?
提示词语:show,chores,spend,tidy up,helpful
内容提示:●What can you learn from the results?
Seldom
Offer some advice to your classmates
Sometimes
on doing housework.
目Usually
I did a survey on my classmates doing housework.
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