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话题5人物介绍
⊙命题角度探究
家人、朋友、同学、老师等
介绍身边的人(包含影响)
①航天、科技等领域的杰出人物
人物介绍
介绍名人(包含影响)
②历史名人革命英雄
③其他人
介绍自己感恩的人(感受及影响)
家人、老师、朋友、同学、身边的榜样、其他人
⊙话题短语积累
角度1介绍身边的人(包含影响)
16.set a good example for sb.为某
角度3
介绍自己感恩的人(感受
1.have a(n).…personality有
人树立好榜样
及影响)
的性格
17.keep one's promise信守承诺
l.be grateful/thankful to对…心
2.warm-hearted and easy-going
l8.lend a helping hand to sb.对某
存感激
心随和的
人施以援手
2.express one's thanks表达某人的
3.confident and optimistic自信乐
19.encourage sb.to do sth.鼓励某
感谢
观的
人做某事
3.appreciate one's help感激某人的
4.be good at=do well in在…做
得好,擅长…
20.offer to do sth.主动提出做某事
帮助
4.show one's appreciation表达某人
5.be weak in在某方面薄弱
角度2介绍名人(包含影响)
1.be born in出生于(某地)
的感激
6.be ready to do sth.=be willing to
5.without one's support没有某人的
do sth.乐于做某事
2.strong spirits坚韧的精神
支持/帮助
7.active and outgoing活跃外向的
3.make a great contribution to
6.have a great influence on sb.
8.play an important role/part in
对…做出巨大贡献
在…中扮演重要角色
对某人有很大影响
4.devote..tosb./sth.将…奉献
g.give sb.advice on在…方面给
7.be strict with对…严厉/严格
给某人/某物
某人建议
8.be in trouble遇到麻烦
5.fight for.…为…而奋斗/战斗
l0.overcome the difficulty克服困难
9.beyond one's imagination超出某
6.take an active part in积极参与
11.with one's help=with the help of7.day and night夜以继日地
人的想象
sb.在某人的帮助下
l0.make sb.full of confidence让某
8.give sb.the strength to do sth.
12.thanks to多亏
人充满信心
l3.face the difficulties bravely勇敢
给某人做某事的力量
11.benefit from..从…中受益
地面对困难
9.inspire sb.to do sth.激励某人
12.cheer sb.up使某人振作起来
14.introduce sb.tosb.向某人介
做某事
13.have difficulty (in)doing sth.
绍某人
l0.lead the field in..在…行业
做某事有困难
15.take good care of sb.
好好照顾
中居领先地位
14.return one's kindness报答某人
某人
11.be true to oneself坚守本心
的好意
⑨话题佳句积累
②开头句
1.But I think friends are like books-you don't need a lot of them as long as they're good.[RJA U3]
2.It's hard to believe that he used to have difficulties in school.[RJU4]
3.However,Li Wen was shy and was not able to make friends quickly in school.[RJU4]
4.Ma Li is a warm-hearted student who is always willing to help her classmates.(who引导定语从句)
5.With the support of her family and friends,Niu Yu slowly came out of the shadows..[WY新教材八上U6]
6.Shakespeare's timeless works,like Hamlet,continue to shape our understanding of human nature across cen-
turies.(timeless adi.永恒的;shape one's understanding of塑造某人对…的理解)
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@中间句
1.As a mother,she takes good care of me.As a friend,she can listen to me.As a teacher,she encourages me
instead of getting angry with my poor grades..(排比句层层递进,说明妈妈在“我”心中的伟大形象)
2.She completed the hard 10-year journey of finding herself again.[WY新教材八上U6]
3.Yuan Longping made a great contribution to agriculture in the world.
4.We should remember the heroes who once fought for our country.(fight for为…而战斗)
5.Mr Lee's red pen didn't correct my grammar-it rewrote my future.(rewrite one's future改写某人的未来)
6.She has a great influence on me,and her help is very useful for my development in the future.
7.Filled with warmth,I realized how much they love me.(how much引导宾语从句)
©结尾句
l.To learn from Wang Yaping,I am going to reflect on my weak points and work hard to do better..(s动词不定
式位于句首作目的状语;reflect on反思)
2.It's because of your efforts that I have made such rapid progress in my spoken English.(本句为强调句,被强
调的部分为“because of your efforts'”,突出“我”在英语口语方面取得快速进步的原因)
⊙真题剖析
[2025河南]假设你是李华,准备在学校毕业典礼(graduation ceremony)
【审题】
活动中演唱英文歌曲,想找一位搭档(partner)与你合唱Auld Lang Syne(《友
话题:“我”期望的合唱搭档
谊地久天长》)。请你以“The partner I'm looking for'”为主题,根据写作提示,
文体:
文
用英语写一篇发言稿,表达你对搭档的期许并陈述理由,在英语课前Daiy?
人称:第
人称和第
speech环节进行分享。
人称
写作提示:
时态:主要用
时
1.Would you like a boy or a girl to be your partner?
要点:左侧这3个问题即3
2.What do you hope he/she is good at?And why?
个要点。注意第2点和第3
3.What kind of person do you hope he/she is?And why?
点需要陈述理由
写作要求:
温馨提示:对搭档的期许
1.文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息,可适当发挥;
要围绕合唱《友谊地久天
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
长》展开。
3.词数100左右。
【写作框架】
开头句示例:Hello,everyone!I'm looking for a partner to sing the
开头:问候并表
明发言目的
English song Auld Lang Syne with me at the graduation ceremony.
Word bank:don't mind whether...,I hope...,express the warm feeling
中间:具体描述
①特长:be good at singing,.wonderful spoken English,.be familiar with
“我”期望的
想找什么样的搭
the song,clear pronunciation
合唱搭档
档(性别、特长
②性格:outgoing,.active,friendly,easy-going,hard-working,positive,
性格等及理由)
confident,responsible,...
结尾:表达找到
合适的合唱搭档
结尾句示例:I believe with such a partner,our performance will be
的意义
memorable.
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新疆英语话题写作进阶册
【润色与升格】
连句成篇
句子升格
Hello,everyone!I'm looking for a partner to sing the English song
①用which引导的非限定性定语从
Auld Lang Syne with me at the graduation ceremony.DI hope to find a
句将两句话合并为一句,升格
girl partner because girls usually have soft voices.A soft voice can
句子:
express the warm feeling of this song.((要点l:想找的搭档的性别,并
简要给出理由)
First,I wish to work with a partner who is good at singing as excel-
②用动词不定式位于句首作目的状
lent singing skills can lead to a successful act.2Also,it's better if she
语,并用短语“be familiar with”替
knows the song well,so we can practice smoothly.(要,点2:想找的搭档
换“know.wel”升格句子:
的特长,并说明理由)Moreover,it will be perfect if my would-be part-
ner is easy to get along with because there may be disagreement during
the preparation.3Staying positive will help us overcome any difficulty
③用搭配“be helpful for sb.todo
in preparation.(要点3:期望的合唱搭档的性格特征,并说明理由)
sth.”替换“help us”升格句子:
I believe with such a partner,our performance will be memorable.
Thanks for listening!
雪实战演练
你们学校英语广播站正在举办主题为“Tiny Lights in Growth(成长中的微光)”的征文活动,请结合“You
Raise Me Up(你鼓舞了我)”这首歌曲带给你的思考和启发,以“
Raised Me Up”为题写一篇征文参与
投稿。
Tiny Lights in Growth
You Raise Me Up
You raise me up,
so I can stand on mountains.
You raise me up,
to walk on stormy seas.
Share your story and
make your voice heard!
I am strong.
when I am on your shoulders
You raise me up,
to more than I can be
-Brendan Graham
月
要点:
1.描述一次令你倍受鼓舞的经历;
2.分享这次经历带给你的启示与成长。
注意:
1.短文须包含上述要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数80-120。
Raised Me Up
新疆英语话题写作进阶册
2510.I try hard to avoid using mobile phones or computers.I
think the light they give off is harmful to my eyes.
技巧四巧用衔接词
【学以致用】
1.Tea is not only good for our health,but also a key part of
Chinese culture
2.I'm not sure whether Mrs Liu still remembers me,but I want
第三部分
话题1
自我提升与职业规划
真题剖析
【审题】说明;
一;一般现在
【润色与升格】
(DI am neither too heavy nor too thin.
2I prefer people to think I am kind rather than beautiful.
3My favorite subject is science because it's full of wonders and
mysteries.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Face Your Problems
Everyone has problems in life.I once had a problem with
my math.I found it very difficult to understand the teacher in
class and my grades were poor.
The cause of the problem was that I didn't pay enough
attention in class and didn't do enough practice after class.To
solve it,I decided to change my study habits.I started to listen
carefully in class,take notes,and ask questions when I didn't
understand.After class,I did a lot of exercises and reviewed
the knowledge regularly.I also asked my teacher and
classmates for help when I needed it.
Remember,every problem is an opportunity to learn
and grow.With the right attitude and actions,we can over-
come any difficulties.
话题2经历与感受
真题剖析
【审题】记叙:一;一般过去
【润色与升格】
DAs a member of Animal Helpers,I volunteered to be respon-
sible for washing,feeding and playing with homeless dogs.
2I took some photos of them and made posters online to call on
more people to give a hand.
3When I saw the dogs be taken good care of by people and
bring people much fun,I got such a strong feeling of pride.
实战演练
【高分范文】
A Meaningful Birthday
Birthdays are always special,and this year,mine was truly
unforgettable.
On May 25,2025,with my parents and friends,I had a
meaningful birthday.At first,we gave away used books and
clothes to those in need.Then,we adopted a dog from an
animal shelter.After that,we made colorful greeting cards for
sick kids in the hospital.Later,we took part in a volunteer
activity at a nursing home,talking with the elderly.
This birthday made me spread warmth and love.I
discovered the true meaning of giving.I also learned that help-
ing others can bring more happiness to myself.What a
meaningful and unforgettable birthday I had!
话题3假期与旅行
真题剖析
【审题】说明;一;一般将来;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DWith the temperature rising,a colorful vacation is around the
corner
20n the top of the list is a self-improvement plan,which
includes reading books,watching movies and keeping diaries.
3In a word,I can't wait to enjoy the coming vacation.
实战演练
【高分范文一:推荐old street】
Dear Robert.
I'm glad to know that you are planning a visit to China this
summer holiday.
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to tell her that she will be in my heart forever.
3.She got a high score in the final exam because she made every
effort to study.
4.Though/Although my father is very busy,he always gives me
a hand when I am in trouble.
5.I'm going to do my best to get good grades so that I can go to
college to get a good education.
话题篇
I am sure you will fall in love with the old street here!It's
lined with ancient buildings that have a long history.It's a
good place to try different kinds of tasty local food like rice
cakes and dumplings.You can also enjoy traditional arts like
paper cutting here.People sell colorful hand-made things too.
Though the street isn't wide,it's quite busy.Walking along the
street makes you have a better understanding of Chinese cul-
ture.Don't forget to take photos to record them!
I'm sure you'll have a great time there.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【高分范文二:推荐city park】
Dear Robert,
I'm glad to know that you are planning a visit to China this
summer holiday.
If you're a fan of nature,the city park is a better choice!
It is so peaceful that you can even hear birds singing.The tow-
er in the centre of the park is the best place to enjoy the beauti-
ful views.Every morning,people play Tai Chi there,which is
a good way to exercise.They might invite you to join them.In
the afternoon,you can drink tea or play chess under the old tall
trees.It's a perfect place where you can relax and get a taste of
local life.
Hope you like it!
Best wishes.
Li Hua
话题4健康与安全
真题剖析
【审题】说明;一/二;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DIn my opinion,to get enough sleep,we should go to bed early
instead of staying up late at first.
(2And we had better exercise for an hour every day.
3Last but not least,we should care about our parents and help
them do some housework,such as sweeping the floor and wash-
ing clothes.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Our school did a survey about the methods of emotion mana-
gement among 1,000 students.Here are the results.45%of the
students prefer talking with others when they need to manage their
emotions.30%choose to listen to music,15%opt for doing
sports,and the remaining 10%use other methods.
I once had a tough experience with emotion manage-
ment.Before a crucial exam,I was extremely nervous.My
heart was pounding,and I felt like I had forgotten everything
I'd studied.Then,I decided to go for a run.As I was running,
话
the wind blew against my face,and I focused on my breathing.
Slowly,my mind cleared.
写
This experience taught me that when we're overwhelmed by
作
negative emotions,taking action is key.Physical activities like
running can help relieve stress hormones and calm us down.It's
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important to find what works for us and use it to manage our
阶
emotions effectively.
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话题5人物介绍
真题剖析
【审题】应用;一;三;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DI hope to find a girl partner because girls usually have soft
voices,which can express the warm feeling of this song.
2Also,to practice smoothly,it's better if she is familiar with
the song.
3Staying positive will be helpful for us to overcome any diffi-
culty in preparation.
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实战演练
【高分范文】
My Mother Raised Me Up
In the journey of my growth,it was my mother who tru-
ly raised me up.Once,when I struggled with math and felt
like giving up,she sat beside me patiently,guiding me through
each problem.Her support and belief in my learning ability lit
up a tiny light within me
This experience taught me the power of love and never
giving up.It made me realize that challenges are chances for
growth.With my mother's encouragement,I learned to face
difficulties bravely,turning difficulties into stepping stones.
Her love and trust became my power,encouraging me to become
a more confident and determined person
Through this journey,I grew stronger and wiser,under-
standing that the love and support from family are the tiny lights
that light up our path in life
话题6劳动实践与志愿服务
真题剖析
【审题】应用;一;三;一般现在
【润色与升格】
1To start with,it's really interesting for us to learn from
farmers.
2In order to make the trip more interesting,we can add two
more activities.
3I believe this farm trip will not only let us get close to nature
but also bring us a lot of fun.
实战演练
【高分范文】
I did a survey on my classmates doing housework.Accord-
ing to the results,15%of them usually do housework,while
80%sometimes help with chores.Sadly,5%seldom do any
housework.This shows that most students are slow to take part
in household tasks.
To improve this,I suggest that my classmates spend some
time every day doing simple chores,like tidying up their
rooms,washing dishes or folding clothes.Housework is not
only helpful for keeping our homes clean and tidy but also good
for teaching us responsibilities.When we do chores,we learn to
care for our family.Let's all try to do more to help them,just
because small things can make a big difference!
话题7
学生学习与生活
真题剖析
【审题】记叙;一;一般过
【润色与升格】
OThe story that happened last Friday left a deep impression on
me.
2Fortunately,he was fine after receiving treatment.
3I realized that it's truly meaningful to give up a small personal
honor to help someone in need.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Dear Jeff,
How is everything going?It's never easy to learn Chinese
characters and passages.Even the Chinese people find it hard
话
to learn them well,so you needn't feel upset.Here are some
题
suggestions for you.
写
First,turn to the Internet for help when you have a prob-
lem.From the Internet,you can learn how to read and write the
作
characters.
What's more,you can learn from your Chinese
进
friends and I'll always be ready to help.But the most important
阶
is to keep on learning and reading.
册
Practice makes perfect.Keep on learning and hold on
to your goal.I'm sure you will make progress.
Yours,
Li Hu
话题8人际交往
真题剖析
【审题】说明;一;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DBy discussing with team members,we can come up with bet-
ter ideas.
2There is no doubt that communication can help us know more
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about our teammates.
3Doubting others will only weaken the group./Doubting others
only weakens the group.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Dear Zhang Ming,
I'm sorry to hear that you're having such trouble commu-
nicating with your parents.Don't worry!We can find ways to
improve it.
I know how you feel about your parents making decisions
for you and not understanding your interests.They probably
think they're protecting you,but this can make you feel uncom-
fortable.In my opinion,you should try to talk with them calm-
ly when they're not busy or stressed.Why not explain your
feelings honestly?Don't be afraid of disagreements.
As the saying goes,we learn and grow through solving
problems together.Remember,your parents love you deeply,
even if they don't show it in the way you expect.Be brave to
express yourself,and I believe things will get better.
Love.
Li Hua
话题9和谐社区与美丽家乡
真题剖析
【审题】说明:
;三;一般现在;一般将来
【润色与升格】
DWhat's more,we organize some interesting activities to make
our life rich and colorful.
2In my free time,I am willing to do some cleaning often.
3I hope what I have done can help make a difference to my
neighbourhood.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Beauty of My Hometown
I'm very glad to tell you something about my hometown.
It's the beauty in my eyes.
My hometown,Xinjiang,is a charming place.When it
comes to the beauty of view,the environment here is quite
pleasant.The sky is often clear,and the air is fresh.There
are many green spaces like the park.The park has a beautiful
lake,with willows by the sides.It's a great place for relaxation.
Besides the nice scenery,what makes Xinjiang more
attractive is the beauty of people.The neighbours are friendly
and helpful.They often greet each other and are ready to offer
a hand when someone is in need.Volunteers in Xinjiang are al-
so active.They work in communities,helping to keep the city
clean,and they also participate in charity activities,spreading
warmth.
I'm really proud of my hometown.I hope more and more
people can come here to enjoy the beauty of it.
话题10中华优秀传统文化
真题剖析
【审题】应用;三;一;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DWe are invited to vote for our favorite,and lion dance comes
first now.
2Besides,if I bring back home zongzi made by myself,it will
give my parents a pleasant surprise
3I am writing to you in the hope that you can vote for making
zongzi too.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Hi,class.I'm glad to share my plan about May Day cul-
tural tour with you.I am going to Xi'an by train during the May
Day holiday.Xi'an is a city full of historical and cultural herit-
ages.
First,I'll visit the Terracotta Army.It's a world-famous
wonder.I can learn a great deal about the history and art of the
Qin Dynasty there.Second,I'm looking forward to trying lo-
cal food like roujiamo and yangrou paomo.By tasting these spe-
cial foods,I can experience the local food culture.Also,I plan
to visit the ancient City Wall.Walking on it,I can enjoy the
scenery and imagine what life was like in the past.
I believe this trip will be a great chance for me to experi-
ence Chinese culture deeply.
考答案及解析