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话题3
假期与旅行
[2025]
⊙命题角度探究
①暑假计划(放松自己、提升自己
①分享自己去某地的旅行计划
和新学期的计划等)[2025]
②策划旅行(如校园旅行、家
②邀请朋友在暑假期间参与活动
假期计划
假期与旅行
旅行
庭旅行等)
③谈谈对假期计划的看法
③讲述一次旅行经历
④对旅行的看法、收获及感悟
⊙话题短语积累
角度1假期计划
15.leave for动身去某地
7.book tickets (train tickets/plane
1.prepare for为…做准备
16.visit our relatives and friends
tickets)订票(火车票/机票)
2.would like to do sth.愿意/想要
走亲访友
8.book a hotel room预订酒店房间
做某事
17.do some reading阅读
9.choose a place to visit选择一个
3.plan to do sth.计划做某事
18.go swimming/shopping/fishing
地方去游览
4.decide to do sth..决定做某事
去游泳/购物/钓鱼
10.make a list of things to take
5.around the corner即将来临
19.have a good time =have fun
列一个要带的东西的清单
6.pay a visit to拜访;参观
enjoy oneself玩得开心
l1.enjoy the beauty of nature享受
7.can't wait to do sth.迫不及待做
20.take on new challenges迎接新
大自然之美
某事
挑战
8.join sb.in doing sth.加入某人
l2.an unforgettable experience一次
一起做某事
角度2旅行
难忘的经历
g.spare some time to do sth.留出
1.pack one'sbag收拾行李
13.make me stronger/more inde-
时间做某事
2.go on a trip去旅行
pendent使我更强壮/更独立
10.cook delicious food烹饪美味
3.feeling of satisfaction满足感
14.more than just a trip不仅仅是
佳肴
4.make a plan(for the trip)(为旅
一次旅行
11.travel abroad出国旅行
行)制订计划
l5.open one's eyes开阔某人的眼界
12.have a rest休息一下
5.get ready for the trip为旅行做准
16.bring back good memories带回
13.have a picnic去野餐
备
美好的回忆
l4.enjoy the beautiful scenery欣赏
6.look for information online在网
17.lose one's heart to..爱上(某个
美丽的风景
上查找信息
地方)
。话题佳句积累
@开头句
l.What a difference a day makes!My father and I decided to go to Penang Hill today.[RJ八上Ul](感叹句)
2.People spend their holidays in different ways.Some travel to see beautiful sights and landscape in strange,
faraway places.[RJ新教材八上Ul]
3.I hope to make next year better than this one,so I am going to make three resolutions..[RJ新教材八上U6]
4.The summer holiday is around the corner,and I can't wait to tell you about my exciting travel plan!(can't
wait to do sth.迫不及待做某事,引出下文)
5.This holiday was special because I did something meaningful-I worked as a volunteer at the local library.
@中间句
1.I just stayed at home most of the time to read and relax.[RJA U1]
2.I took part in a volunteer activity,where I helped clean up the park and it was very meaningful.(where
定语从句)
3.We are going to get there by high-speed train,which is both fast and comfortable.(which引导非限定性定语
从句)
新疆英语话题写作进阶册
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4.During the holiday,I not only read many interesting books but also learned to cook.
5.The view was so amazing that it took my breath away.(so..that..s如此…以至于…)
6.Trying the local food was one of the best parts of my trip.(one of the best parts of..…最好的部分之一)
7.Standing on the top of the mountain,I felt like I could see the whole world.(feel like感觉像…)
©结尾句
L.in conclusion,my holiday plan is a balance of family time,personal growth and relaxation.(总结自己对假
期计划的感受)
2.I not only had a good rest but also learned a lot.I really enjoyed my holiday.
3.This holiday was truly special,and I will always cherish the happy memories.(cherish the happy memories
珍藏快乐记忆)
②俗语谚语
l1.The world is a book,but people who do not travel read only one page.世界是一本书,而不旅行的人们只读
了其中的一页。
2.Life is like a journey.What you should care about is not the destination,but the scenery on the way and your
mood when you see the scenery.人生就像一场旅行。你应该在乎的不是目的地,而是沿途的风景以及看
风景的心情。
3.Travel can cultivate people's endurance and teach them tolerance..旅行能培养人的耐力,教给人宽容之
美德。
⊙真题剖析
[2025]某英文报刊以“Colorful Summer Vacation”为主题向广大初中生征
【审题】
稿。假设你是李明,请你以“Three Things to Do for Summer Vacation'”为题目,话题:多彩的暑假
参考以下提示,也可适当发挥,根据要求用英语写一篇短文投稿。
文体:
文
提示:
注意区分主题和题目,
人称:第
人称
1.自我提升;
此处为短文题国
时态:描述“计划”用
2.体重管理;
时;阐述做某件事的
3.研学旅行;
“原因”或“意义”用
4.娱乐交友;
时
…
要点:
要求:
从左侧提示的4项中任选2
1.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
项或3项,也可以自己发挥
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
1项(范文中所选的3项为:
3.词数80-120。
自我提升、体重管理、娱乐
交友)
【写作框架】
开头:表明暑
假即将来临,
Word bank:make a plan for,have decided to....have a...vacation
将要规划一个
充实的假期
暑假可做的一些事:
①自我提升:学习新技能(编程、绘画)、阅读、预习新课等。
②体重管理:定期锻炼、健康饮食、参与体育运动等
Three Things to
中间:具体描
③研学旅行:参观博物馆、科技馆、历史古迹,或到外地旅行了解
Do for Summer
述自己要在暑
风土人情等。
Vacation
假做的三件事
④娱乐交友:与朋友聚会、看电影、发展兴趣爱好等
⑤公益服务:看望孤寡老人、参与环保宣传活动、爱心义卖等。
(省略号内容)
结尾:表达
对暑假的美
Word bank:be very excited about.I am confident that....It will be
好期待
great to...
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新疆英语话题写作进阶册
【润色与升格】
连句成篇
句子升格
Three Things to Do for Summer Vacation
①用短语“around the corner”升格句子:
1With the temperature rising,a colorful vacation is coming.
Three things come into my mind when I am making a list.
2On the top of the list is a self-improvement plan.It
②用which引导的非限制性定语从句合
includes reading books,watching movies and keeping diaries
并两个句子:
Besides,I also plan to build up my body to keep a good shape and
stay lively.I'll invite some classmates to go to the gym together and
keep a daily record.The last thing is to relax with friends.It's a
nice chance to meet some friends who I haven't seen for a long time
③用搭配“can't wait to do sth.”升格
because of my busy study.(要,点:所选的3项一自我提升、体重
句子:
管理、娱乐交友)
3In a word,I'm looking forward to enjoying the coming
vacation.
【写作积累】
1.come into one's mind浮现在某人的脑海中
2.self-improvement plan自我提升计划
3.build up one's body强健体魄
4.in a word总而言之,简言之
实战演练
[2025金华义乌市二模]假设你是李华,你的加拿大好友Robert计划暑假来中国体验city-walk(城市漫
步)。请根据以下信息,写一封邮件,向他推荐一处适合city-walk的地点。
old street
·ancient
local food
traditional arts,like paper cutting
I love nature.I am
also interested in
Chinese culture.
city park
Robert
·peaceful
·beautiful views
fun activities,like playing Tai Chi
注意:
1.邮件需包含所选地点的至少两点相关信息,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3.词数80-120(邮件的首尾和第一句已给出,不计人总词数)。
Dear Robert,
I'm glad to know that you are planning a visit to China this summer holiday.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
新疆英语话题写作进阶册
1910.I try hard to avoid using mobile phones or computers.I
think the light they give off is harmful to my eyes.
技巧四巧用衔接词
【学以致用】
1.Tea is not only good for our health,but also a key part of
Chinese culture
2.I'm not sure whether Mrs Liu still remembers me,but I want
第三部分
话题1
自我提升与职业规划
真题剖析
【审题】说明;
一;一般现在
【润色与升格】
(DI am neither too heavy nor too thin.
2I prefer people to think I am kind rather than beautiful.
3My favorite subject is science because it's full of wonders and
mysteries.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Face Your Problems
Everyone has problems in life.I once had a problem with
my math.I found it very difficult to understand the teacher in
class and my grades were poor.
The cause of the problem was that I didn't pay enough
attention in class and didn't do enough practice after class.To
solve it,I decided to change my study habits.I started to listen
carefully in class,take notes,and ask questions when I didn't
understand.After class,I did a lot of exercises and reviewed
the knowledge regularly.I also asked my teacher and
classmates for help when I needed it.
Remember,every problem is an opportunity to learn
and grow.With the right attitude and actions,we can over-
come any difficulties.
话题2经历与感受
真题剖析
【审题】记叙:一;一般过去
【润色与升格】
DAs a member of Animal Helpers,I volunteered to be respon-
sible for washing,feeding and playing with homeless dogs.
2I took some photos of them and made posters online to call on
more people to give a hand.
3When I saw the dogs be taken good care of by people and
bring people much fun,I got such a strong feeling of pride.
实战演练
【高分范文】
A Meaningful Birthday
Birthdays are always special,and this year,mine was truly
unforgettable.
On May 25,2025,with my parents and friends,I had a
meaningful birthday.At first,we gave away used books and
clothes to those in need.Then,we adopted a dog from an
animal shelter.After that,we made colorful greeting cards for
sick kids in the hospital.Later,we took part in a volunteer
activity at a nursing home,talking with the elderly.
This birthday made me spread warmth and love.I
discovered the true meaning of giving.I also learned that help-
ing others can bring more happiness to myself.What a
meaningful and unforgettable birthday I had!
话题3假期与旅行
真题剖析
【审题】说明;一;一般将来;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DWith the temperature rising,a colorful vacation is around the
corner
20n the top of the list is a self-improvement plan,which
includes reading books,watching movies and keeping diaries.
3In a word,I can't wait to enjoy the coming vacation.
实战演练
【高分范文一:推荐old street】
Dear Robert.
I'm glad to know that you are planning a visit to China this
summer holiday.
新疆英语参
to tell her that she will be in my heart forever.
3.She got a high score in the final exam because she made every
effort to study.
4.Though/Although my father is very busy,he always gives me
a hand when I am in trouble.
5.I'm going to do my best to get good grades so that I can go to
college to get a good education.
话题篇
I am sure you will fall in love with the old street here!It's
lined with ancient buildings that have a long history.It's a
good place to try different kinds of tasty local food like rice
cakes and dumplings.You can also enjoy traditional arts like
paper cutting here.People sell colorful hand-made things too.
Though the street isn't wide,it's quite busy.Walking along the
street makes you have a better understanding of Chinese cul-
ture.Don't forget to take photos to record them!
I'm sure you'll have a great time there.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【高分范文二:推荐city park】
Dear Robert,
I'm glad to know that you are planning a visit to China this
summer holiday.
If you're a fan of nature,the city park is a better choice!
It is so peaceful that you can even hear birds singing.The tow-
er in the centre of the park is the best place to enjoy the beauti-
ful views.Every morning,people play Tai Chi there,which is
a good way to exercise.They might invite you to join them.In
the afternoon,you can drink tea or play chess under the old tall
trees.It's a perfect place where you can relax and get a taste of
local life.
Hope you like it!
Best wishes.
Li Hua
话题4健康与安全
真题剖析
【审题】说明;一/二;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DIn my opinion,to get enough sleep,we should go to bed early
instead of staying up late at first.
(2And we had better exercise for an hour every day.
3Last but not least,we should care about our parents and help
them do some housework,such as sweeping the floor and wash-
ing clothes.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Our school did a survey about the methods of emotion mana-
gement among 1,000 students.Here are the results.45%of the
students prefer talking with others when they need to manage their
emotions.30%choose to listen to music,15%opt for doing
sports,and the remaining 10%use other methods.
I once had a tough experience with emotion manage-
ment.Before a crucial exam,I was extremely nervous.My
heart was pounding,and I felt like I had forgotten everything
I'd studied.Then,I decided to go for a run.As I was running,
话
the wind blew against my face,and I focused on my breathing.
Slowly,my mind cleared.
写
This experience taught me that when we're overwhelmed by
作
negative emotions,taking action is key.Physical activities like
running can help relieve stress hormones and calm us down.It's
进
important to find what works for us and use it to manage our
阶
emotions effectively.
册
话题5人物介绍
真题剖析
【审题】应用;一;三;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DI hope to find a girl partner because girls usually have soft
voices,which can express the warm feeling of this song.
2Also,to practice smoothly,it's better if she is familiar with
the song.
3Staying positive will be helpful for us to overcome any diffi-
culty in preparation.
考答案及解析
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