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话题2
经历与感受
[2023,2022]
®命题角度探究
①阶段性成长回顾与感受
②生活中所珍惜的事物的经历与感受
③成功/失败的经历与感受
①日常生活中美好或充满爱的
经历与感受[2022]
④应对变化的经历与感受
②校园生活中的经历与感受
⑤难忘的运动经历与感受
成长与
经历
生活与
⑥突破自我的经历与感受
自我认知
与感受
情感体验
③自然与出行探索的经历与感受
⑦克服困难、解决问题的经历与感受
④体育运动的经历与感受
⑧实现自我成长与目标的经历与感
受[2023]
⑨在生活中应对挑战的经历与感受
©话题短语积累
角度1成长与自我认知
9.achieve success获得成功
5.practice hard努力练习
1.be in trouble处于困境中
l0.be worth valuing值得珍惜
6.be deeply touched被深深地感动
2.never give up永不放弃
11l.an unforgettable experience一次
7.leave sb.a deep impression
3.little by little一点点地
难忘的经历
给某人留下深刻的印象
4.make great efforts努力
角度2生活与情感体验
I.experience life体验生活
8.be beneficial to..对…有益
5.try one's best尽某人最大努力
6.the key to success成功的关键
2.the beauty of nature自然之美
9.a source of endless happiness
7.overcome countless challenges
3.make a reasonable choice做出合
无尽幸福的源泉
克服无数的挑战
理的选择
10.simple but precious moments
8.receive high praise获得高度赞扬
4.have fun doing sth.做某事很有趣
简单而珍贵的时刻
)话题佳句积累
@开头句
1.Looking back at these past three years,I had a lot of sweet memories.
2.Last year,I had a really hard time learning English..(have a hard time doing sth.做某事很困难)
3.Last summer holiday,Li Hua had a special experience as a little guide at Tianchi Science and Technology
Museum.
4.The most unforgettable experience in my life happened when I was a child,but it has stayed with me ever
since.
5.As soon as I got home from school the first day,I happily threw my schoolbag on the sofa and ate lots of
snacks.[WY九上M4]
6.This was the day we would get our exam results back,but I didn't answer the exam questions very well last
week.[RJ九全U11]
@中间句
1.Paula used to be really quiet.[RJ九全U4]
2.I regarded the competition as a challenge,which was also a good opportunity to improve my English.
3.The wind was blowing around while the rain was dropping hard against the ground.
4.How surprised and excited I was when I was told to get first prize!(用感叹句描述强烈的情感)
5.It was such an interesting experience that I would never forget it.(such.that..引导结果状语从句)
6.Playing basketball teaches me the spirit of not giving up and brings me happiness.
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新疆英语话题写作进阶册
7.This class not only made science interesting but also taught me to appreciate nature's wonders.
8.I remember that it was on the Spring Festival Eve.All of us were busy welcoming the happiest moment.
(that引导宾语从句;be busy doing sth.忙于做某事)
©结尾句
1.I finally understand that we need to share the housework to have a clean and comfortable home.[RJA U3]
2.Every experience is a learning chance,and we can always learn something valuable from it.
3.I come to realize that we will never know what we can achieve unless we try it.come to realize
语,表示“(突然)意识到”;句中含有what引导的宾语从句)
4.Like flowers in a garden,happiness comes in all forms-it doesn't look the same for everyone.
@俗语谚语
1.Happiness is everywhere around us.幸福就在我们身边。
2.Labor is the source of all happiness.劳动是幸福的源泉。
3.Well begun is half done.好的开始是成功的一半。
4.Experience is the best teacher..经验是最好的老师。
5.A fall into a pit,a gain in your wit..吃一堑,长一智。
6.Small actions,big changes..小行动,大改变。
⊙真题剖析
[2023]每个人的成长,都经历过很多次尝试,有成功、有失败、有欣喜、有
【审题】
泪水…请以“My First Try”为题,用英语写一篇短文,记录你成长中的第一
话题:成长中的第一次尝试
文体:
艾
次尝试。
人称和时态:
要求:
人称用第
人称;时态
1.语句通顺,意思连贯,内容翔实,语法正确,书写规范;
用
时
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
要点:(该题未给出具体要
3.词数80-120。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
点,故需根据题干提取要点)
①选一个第一次尝试的事
My First Try
件(可写的事件有:第一次
When it comes to the topic of“My First Try”,
参加演讲比赛、第一次学做
饭、第一次参加志愿活动、
第一次尝试骑自行车等)
②叙述这次尝试的经历
③分享这次尝试后的收获
与感受
【写作框架】
开头句示例:When it comes to the topic ofMy First Try”,I'Il
开头:引入第
never forget..(部分已给出)
次尝试的事
Word bank:the meaningful experience,go to the old people's
home,take part in an English speaking competition
My First Try
中间:详细描述
Word bank:wash the dogs,take photos,be responsible for,take
事件过程
good care of,give a hand
结尾句示例:I realize that each life is important and the tiny
结尾:分享这次尝
things I do can make a difference.
试的收获与感受
Word bank:from the bottom of one's heart.pull together.be
deeply touched,be proud of
新疆英语话题写作进阶册
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【润色与升格】
连句成篇
句子升格
My First Try
①用短语“be responsible for”升格,介绍
When it comes to the topic of "My First Try",I'll never
“我”志愿服务的内容:
forget the meaningful experience I had in Grade 7.It was my first
time to be a volunteer.(要点l:选一个第一次尝试的事件)
DAs a member of Animal Helpers,I volunteered to wash
②用短语“call on'”和“give a hand"升格,
feed and play with homeless dogs.At the same time,2I took
介绍“我”拍照和做海报的目的:
some photos of them and made posters online to get more people
to join us.Through my efforts,over eight dogs were lucky to
find their new homes.3When I saw people take good care of the
③将句子改为被动句,并用短语“get such
dogs and the dogs bring people much fun,I felt proud..(要,点2:叙
a strong feeling of”升格,介绍“我”参
述这次尝试的经历)
加志愿服务后的感受:
I realize that each life is important and the tiny things I do can
make a difference.(要,点3:分享这次尝试后的收获与感受)
【写作积累】
1.when it comes to..当谈到…
2.Itis/was+one's+序数词+time+tod0sth.这是某人第…次做某事。
3.at the same time与此同时
4.tiny adj.微小的
5.make a difference起作用或有影响
马实战演练
[2025山东济宁]某英文公众号正在举办以“A Meaningful Birthday”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,
请根据下面的提示信息,用英语写一篇征文,记录你经历的一次既难忘又有意义的生日。
Time
on May 25.2025
parents and friends
(People
give away used books or clothes
Activities)
☆adopt(领养)adog
☆
Meaning
四…
注意:
1.须包括以上所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现任何透露考生真实身份的信息;
3.词数80-120(标题已给出,不计入总词数)。
A Meaningful Birthday
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新疆英语话题写作进阶册10.I try hard to avoid using mobile phones or computers.I
think the light they give off is harmful to my eyes.
技巧四巧用衔接词
【学以致用】
1.Tea is not only good for our health,but also a key part of
Chinese culture
2.I'm not sure whether Mrs Liu still remembers me,but I want
第三部分
话题1
自我提升与职业规划
真题剖析
【审题】说明;
一;一般现在
【润色与升格】
(DI am neither too heavy nor too thin.
2I prefer people to think I am kind rather than beautiful.
3My favorite subject is science because it's full of wonders and
mysteries.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Face Your Problems
Everyone has problems in life.I once had a problem with
my math.I found it very difficult to understand the teacher in
class and my grades were poor.
The cause of the problem was that I didn't pay enough
attention in class and didn't do enough practice after class.To
solve it,I decided to change my study habits.I started to listen
carefully in class,take notes,and ask questions when I didn't
understand.After class,I did a lot of exercises and reviewed
the knowledge regularly.I also asked my teacher and
classmates for help when I needed it.
Remember,every problem is an opportunity to learn
and grow.With the right attitude and actions,we can over-
come any difficulties.
话题2经历与感受
真题剖析
【审题】记叙:一;一般过去
【润色与升格】
DAs a member of Animal Helpers,I volunteered to be respon-
sible for washing,feeding and playing with homeless dogs.
2I took some photos of them and made posters online to call on
more people to give a hand.
3When I saw the dogs be taken good care of by people and
bring people much fun,I got such a strong feeling of pride.
实战演练
【高分范文】
A Meaningful Birthday
Birthdays are always special,and this year,mine was truly
unforgettable.
On May 25,2025,with my parents and friends,I had a
meaningful birthday.At first,we gave away used books and
clothes to those in need.Then,we adopted a dog from an
animal shelter.After that,we made colorful greeting cards for
sick kids in the hospital.Later,we took part in a volunteer
activity at a nursing home,talking with the elderly.
This birthday made me spread warmth and love.I
discovered the true meaning of giving.I also learned that help-
ing others can bring more happiness to myself.What a
meaningful and unforgettable birthday I had!
话题3假期与旅行
真题剖析
【审题】说明;一;一般将来;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DWith the temperature rising,a colorful vacation is around the
corner
20n the top of the list is a self-improvement plan,which
includes reading books,watching movies and keeping diaries.
3In a word,I can't wait to enjoy the coming vacation.
实战演练
【高分范文一:推荐old street】
Dear Robert.
I'm glad to know that you are planning a visit to China this
summer holiday.
新疆英语参
to tell her that she will be in my heart forever.
3.She got a high score in the final exam because she made every
effort to study.
4.Though/Although my father is very busy,he always gives me
a hand when I am in trouble.
5.I'm going to do my best to get good grades so that I can go to
college to get a good education.
话题篇
I am sure you will fall in love with the old street here!It's
lined with ancient buildings that have a long history.It's a
good place to try different kinds of tasty local food like rice
cakes and dumplings.You can also enjoy traditional arts like
paper cutting here.People sell colorful hand-made things too.
Though the street isn't wide,it's quite busy.Walking along the
street makes you have a better understanding of Chinese cul-
ture.Don't forget to take photos to record them!
I'm sure you'll have a great time there.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【高分范文二:推荐city park】
Dear Robert,
I'm glad to know that you are planning a visit to China this
summer holiday.
If you're a fan of nature,the city park is a better choice!
It is so peaceful that you can even hear birds singing.The tow-
er in the centre of the park is the best place to enjoy the beauti-
ful views.Every morning,people play Tai Chi there,which is
a good way to exercise.They might invite you to join them.In
the afternoon,you can drink tea or play chess under the old tall
trees.It's a perfect place where you can relax and get a taste of
local life.
Hope you like it!
Best wishes.
Li Hua
话题4健康与安全
真题剖析
【审题】说明;一/二;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DIn my opinion,to get enough sleep,we should go to bed early
instead of staying up late at first.
(2And we had better exercise for an hour every day.
3Last but not least,we should care about our parents and help
them do some housework,such as sweeping the floor and wash-
ing clothes.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Our school did a survey about the methods of emotion mana-
gement among 1,000 students.Here are the results.45%of the
students prefer talking with others when they need to manage their
emotions.30%choose to listen to music,15%opt for doing
sports,and the remaining 10%use other methods.
I once had a tough experience with emotion manage-
ment.Before a crucial exam,I was extremely nervous.My
heart was pounding,and I felt like I had forgotten everything
I'd studied.Then,I decided to go for a run.As I was running,
话
the wind blew against my face,and I focused on my breathing.
Slowly,my mind cleared.
写
This experience taught me that when we're overwhelmed by
作
negative emotions,taking action is key.Physical activities like
running can help relieve stress hormones and calm us down.It's
进
important to find what works for us and use it to manage our
阶
emotions effectively.
册
话题5人物介绍
真题剖析
【审题】应用;一;三;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DI hope to find a girl partner because girls usually have soft
voices,which can express the warm feeling of this song.
2Also,to practice smoothly,it's better if she is familiar with
the song.
3Staying positive will be helpful for us to overcome any diffi-
culty in preparation.
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