内容正文:
第三部分
话题篇
话题1
自我提升与职业规划
[2024,2021]
⊙命题角度探究
编者按:本栏目分析新疆近6年和全国近3年中考真题书面表达,逐篇按照2022年版课标主题及所写要
点进行分类,概括出每个话题下的写作角度。
①介绍自己的基本信息(外貌特征、性格特点)
自我认识
[2024]
②介绍自己的兴趣爱好与特长
①成长与变化(克服性格弱点,变得自信等)
自我提升与
自我提升
职业规划
[2021]
②如何成为更好的自己
①选择的职业梦想以及原因(自身因素、身边人
的因素、名人的影响)
职业规划
②实现职业梦想的方法
⊙话题短语积累
角度1自我认识
17.have the ability to do sth..有能
16.take part in voluntary activities
(一)介绍自己的基本信息
力做某事
参加志愿服务活动
1.at the age of..在…岁时
18.apply for申请
17.learn some life skills学习一些
2.take after(外表、举止、性格)像
角度2自我提升
生活技能
3.be of medium height/build中等
(一)成长与变化
l8.be brave to face challenges勇于
身高/身材
l.in the past(three years)在过去
面对挑战
4.be patient with对…有耐心
(的三年里)
角度3职业规划
5.be friendly,/kind to对…友好
2.be poor at sth.=be weak in sth.
不擅长某事
(一)选择的职业梦想以及原因
6.be responsible for对.…负责
3.be afraid of doing sth.害怕做某事
1.dream of being a doctor梦想成为
7.get on/along well with others
4.with the help of sb./with one's
一名医生
他人相处融洽
help在某人的帮助下
2.achieve/realize one's dream make
8.be optimistic/positive about
5.make progress取得进步
one's dream come true实现某人的
对…乐观/积极
(二)如何成为更好的自己
梦想
(二)介绍自己的兴趣爱好与特长
6.keep a promise/keep promises
3.succeed in doing sth.manage to
9.like...a lot be crazy about =be a
守承诺
do sth.成功做/设法做成某事
big fan of=be fond of=be passion-
7.have courage to face sb./sth.
4.have an effect on/make a difference
ate about非常喜欢/热爱…
勇气面对某人/某事
to对…有影响
10.be interested in =have/take an
8.overcome the trouble/one's fear(二)实现职业梦想的方法
interest in对…感兴趣
克服困难/某人的恐惧
5.take acting lessons上表演课
11.take up a hobby开始一个爱好
9.keep away from远离
6.have to do with与…有关
12.be good at/do well in...=be skilled
10.get well prepared/ready for
7.work hard努力学习
in/at =have a good command of
…做好准备
8.stick to one's dream hold on to
11.listen carefully to认真听…
长/精通…/对…掌握熟练
one's dream坚持某人的梦想
12.make up one's mind to do sth.
l3.play the piano弹钢琴
be determined to do sth.下定决
9.give up放弃
14.collect stamps集邮
心做某事
10.fight for为…而奋斗
15.have rich experience in/be expe-
13.improve oneself提升自己
11.try one's best to do sth.尽某人
rienced in在…方面有丰富
14.enrich one's knowledge充实某
最大努力做某事
的经验
人的学识
12.spare no effort to do sth.不遗余
l6.be talented in在…方面有
15.open one's eyes/broaden one's
力做某事
天赋
horizon开阔某人的眼界
l3.be admitted into/to被…录取
新疆英语话题写作进阶册
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⑨话题佳句积累
@开头句
1.I'm kind and I'm always ready to help others.[WYt M2]
2.I'm quieter and more serious than most kids.That's why I like reading books and study harder in class.[RJ
八上U3]
3.I like talking to people and asking questions,so I want to be a journalist when I grow up.(so引导结果状语从句)
4.It's of great importance for us to make up our minds to achieve our dreams.
@中间句
L.I'm not the top student,but helping classmates makes me feel like a superhero.(动名词短语作主语,强调
“帮助同学”对“我”的影响)
2.She isn't shy anymore and dares to sing in front of crowds.[RJ U4]
3.To improve myself,I plan to spend one hour a day in reading the books I'm interested in.(s动词不定式前置
作目的状语)》
4.Huang Xuhua's spirit encourages me to pursue my dreams and contribute to our country.(高级词汇:pursue
u.追求,致力于)
5.I also learn from Odysseus that great men never give up,no matter what difficulties they face.[WY M3]
@结尾句
1.In fact,it is my positive attitude that brings out the best in me all the time.(Itis+被强调部分+that强调
句型)
2.I've learned that every challenge is a hidden gift,and the more I face difficulties,the stronger I become in-
side.
3.The spirit of these climbers shows us that we should never give up trying to achieve our dreams.[RJAU7]
4.I will make every effort to discover the value of traditional Chinese medicine and make it more popular in the
world..(make every effort to do sth.竭尽全力做某事)
5.I strongly believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into achieving your dreams.(if引导条件状
语从句,描写实现梦想的途径)
@俗语谚语
1.Hard work pays off.天道酬勤。
2.Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。
3.It's never too old to learn.活到老,学到老。
4.Actions speak louder than words..事实胜于雄辩。
5.Rome was not built in a day..罗马不是一日建成的。
6.Where there is a will,.there is a way..有志者,事竟成。
⊙真题剖析
[2024]假如你是李华,你校英语广播站正以“Bring Out the Best in Your-
【审题】
s(展现最好的自己)”为主题,面向广大学生开展征文活动。请你以“My
话题:自我介绍
s”为题目,结合以下提示,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
文体:
文
提示:…注意区分主题和题目,此处为短子题国
人称和时态:
1.What do you look like?
人称用第
人称;时态
2.What's your hobby?
用
时
3.What are you good at?
要点:
要求:
左侧这3个问题即3个要点
1.参考所给提示,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
4.词数80-120。
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新疆英语话题写作进阶册
【写作框架】
开头:进行简单
开头句示例:I'm Li Hua,a fifteen-year-old middle school student..
的自我介绍
①外s貌:tall and strong,.short hair,.wear a pair of glasses,be of medium
中间:具体描述
height
Myself
自己的外貌、爱
②爱好:reading,play basketball,,listen to music,play the piano,
好、特长
take photos
③特长:be good at math/drawing,be talened in playing the piano
结尾:总结并
结尾句示例:I hope to be a useful person for my people and my country
自我评价
Word bank:be full of confidence,give up
【润色与升格】
连句成篇
句子升格
Myself
①用连词词组“neither.nor..”改写,将两
I'm Li Hua,a fifteen-year-old middle school student.DI am
个句子合并为一个句子,介绍“我”的外
not too heavy and I am not too thin.I am of medium height.I
貌特征:
don't think appearance is so important.2I prefer people to think
②用连词词组“rather than”连接两个句子
I am kind,not just beautiful.My hobbies are reading and run-
升格,阐述“我”更看重人的品质,而不是
ning.Reading makes me knowledgeable and running makes me
外貌:
healthy.3My favorite subject is science.I am good at math.I
want to be a scientist when I grow up.I hope to be a useful person
to my people and my country.(要,点1、2、3:介绍自己的外貌、爱
③用连词“because”扩写原因升格,说明
好及特长)
“我”喜欢科学的原因:
That is me.I am great,aren't I?
温馨提示:升格完成后,请在练习本上完整誊写最终的升格范文!
心实战演练
作为一名中学生,你平时遇到问题时是如何解决的?你认为自己有解决问题的能力吗?学校英语俱乐部
正在开展以“Face Your Problems'”为题的征文活动,请你根据提示,写一篇英语短文投稿。
action(s)you
advice to the
one problem
cause(s)of
took to
younger
you had
the problem
solve it
students
注意:
1.短文须包含流程图中的内容,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数80-120(短文的标题已为你写好,不计入总词数)。
Face Your Problems
新疆英语话题写作进阶册
1310.I try hard to avoid using mobile phones or computers.I
think the light they give off is harmful to my eyes.
技巧四巧用衔接词
【学以致用】
1.Tea is not only good for our health,but also a key part of
Chinese culture
2.I'm not sure whether Mrs Liu still remembers me,but I want
第三部分
话题1
自我提升与职业规划
真题剖析
【审题】说明;
一;一般现在
【润色与升格】
(DI am neither too heavy nor too thin.
2I prefer people to think I am kind rather than beautiful.
3My favorite subject is science because it's full of wonders and
mysteries.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Face Your Problems
Everyone has problems in life.I once had a problem with
my math.I found it very difficult to understand the teacher in
class and my grades were poor.
The cause of the problem was that I didn't pay enough
attention in class and didn't do enough practice after class.To
solve it,I decided to change my study habits.I started to listen
carefully in class,take notes,and ask questions when I didn't
understand.After class,I did a lot of exercises and reviewed
the knowledge regularly.I also asked my teacher and
classmates for help when I needed it.
Remember,every problem is an opportunity to learn
and grow.With the right attitude and actions,we can over-
come any difficulties.
话题2经历与感受
真题剖析
【审题】记叙:一;一般过去
【润色与升格】
DAs a member of Animal Helpers,I volunteered to be respon-
sible for washing,feeding and playing with homeless dogs.
2I took some photos of them and made posters online to call on
more people to give a hand.
3When I saw the dogs be taken good care of by people and
bring people much fun,I got such a strong feeling of pride.
实战演练
【高分范文】
A Meaningful Birthday
Birthdays are always special,and this year,mine was truly
unforgettable.
On May 25,2025,with my parents and friends,I had a
meaningful birthday.At first,we gave away used books and
clothes to those in need.Then,we adopted a dog from an
animal shelter.After that,we made colorful greeting cards for
sick kids in the hospital.Later,we took part in a volunteer
activity at a nursing home,talking with the elderly.
This birthday made me spread warmth and love.I
discovered the true meaning of giving.I also learned that help-
ing others can bring more happiness to myself.What a
meaningful and unforgettable birthday I had!
话题3假期与旅行
真题剖析
【审题】说明;一;一般将来;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DWith the temperature rising,a colorful vacation is around the
corner
20n the top of the list is a self-improvement plan,which
includes reading books,watching movies and keeping diaries.
3In a word,I can't wait to enjoy the coming vacation.
实战演练
【高分范文一:推荐old street】
Dear Robert.
I'm glad to know that you are planning a visit to China this
summer holiday.
新疆英语参
to tell her that she will be in my heart forever.
3.She got a high score in the final exam because she made every
effort to study.
4.Though/Although my father is very busy,he always gives me
a hand when I am in trouble.
5.I'm going to do my best to get good grades so that I can go to
college to get a good education.
话题篇
I am sure you will fall in love with the old street here!It's
lined with ancient buildings that have a long history.It's a
good place to try different kinds of tasty local food like rice
cakes and dumplings.You can also enjoy traditional arts like
paper cutting here.People sell colorful hand-made things too.
Though the street isn't wide,it's quite busy.Walking along the
street makes you have a better understanding of Chinese cul-
ture.Don't forget to take photos to record them!
I'm sure you'll have a great time there.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【高分范文二:推荐city park】
Dear Robert,
I'm glad to know that you are planning a visit to China this
summer holiday.
If you're a fan of nature,the city park is a better choice!
It is so peaceful that you can even hear birds singing.The tow-
er in the centre of the park is the best place to enjoy the beauti-
ful views.Every morning,people play Tai Chi there,which is
a good way to exercise.They might invite you to join them.In
the afternoon,you can drink tea or play chess under the old tall
trees.It's a perfect place where you can relax and get a taste of
local life.
Hope you like it!
Best wishes.
Li Hua
话题4健康与安全
真题剖析
【审题】说明;一/二;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DIn my opinion,to get enough sleep,we should go to bed early
instead of staying up late at first.
(2And we had better exercise for an hour every day.
3Last but not least,we should care about our parents and help
them do some housework,such as sweeping the floor and wash-
ing clothes.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Our school did a survey about the methods of emotion mana-
gement among 1,000 students.Here are the results.45%of the
students prefer talking with others when they need to manage their
emotions.30%choose to listen to music,15%opt for doing
sports,and the remaining 10%use other methods.
I once had a tough experience with emotion manage-
ment.Before a crucial exam,I was extremely nervous.My
heart was pounding,and I felt like I had forgotten everything
I'd studied.Then,I decided to go for a run.As I was running,
话
the wind blew against my face,and I focused on my breathing.
Slowly,my mind cleared.
写
This experience taught me that when we're overwhelmed by
作
negative emotions,taking action is key.Physical activities like
running can help relieve stress hormones and calm us down.It's
进
important to find what works for us and use it to manage our
阶
emotions effectively.
册
话题5人物介绍
真题剖析
【审题】应用;一;三;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DI hope to find a girl partner because girls usually have soft
voices,which can express the warm feeling of this song.
2Also,to practice smoothly,it's better if she is familiar with
the song.
3Staying positive will be helpful for us to overcome any diffi-
culty in preparation.
考答案及解析
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