内容正文:
七下沪外版
【写作专版】
写作全流程精讲
写作专版
【写作全流程】介绍一位敬佩的人及其事迹
(基本信息/主要事迹/敬佩原因)
写作全流程精讲·沪外版七下
话题解读
本话题沪外版初一下册写作的重点。常以The Person I Admire””A Respectable Person'”等为题,考
察学生用英语介绍敬佩之人的基本信息、主要事迹及表达敬佩原因的能力,在单元测试、期中期末
书面表达中出现频率较高。
核心词汇和短语
一、核心难点词汇(12个)
admire
lad'mara(r∥
含义:敬佩
搭配:admire sb..for sth.因某事敬佩某人
inspire /in'spara(r)∥
含义:鼓舞
搭配:inspire sb.to do sth.鼓舞某人做某事
courageous
/ka rerd3as∥
含义:勇敢的
搭配:a courageous decision勇敢的决定
determined
d't3.mund∥
含义:坚定的
搭配:a determined person坚定的人
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responsible
rn'sppnsabl/∥
含义:负责任的
搭配:be responsible for对.负责
generous
∥d3 enaras,∥
含义:慷慨的
搭配:a generous donation慷慨的捐赠
selfless
∥'selflas,∥
含义:无私的
搭配:selfless devotion无私的奉献
devote
dr'vaut//∥
含义:致力于
搭配:devote oneself to致力于
overcome
∥.aa'kam/∥
含义:克服
搭配:overcome difficulties克服困难
achieve∥ati:v/
含义:实现
搭配:achieve success取得成功
contribution
∥kontri'bj:yn∥
含义:贡献
搭配:make a contribution做出贡献
role model
lraul mpdl//
含义:榜样
搭配:a good role model好榜样
二、常用短语(12个)
look up to∥
含义:尊敬
搭配:look up to one's parents尊敬父母
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set a good example
含义:树立好榜样
搭配:set a good example for others为他人树立好榜样
work hard at∥
含义:努力从事
搭配:work hard at studies努力学习
stick to∥
含义:坚持
搭配:stick to principles坚持原则
help others∥
含义:帮助他人
搭配:help others in trouble帮助困境中的他人
in need∥
含义:在困难中
搭配:people in need需要帮助的人
make a difference
含义:有影响
搭配:make a difference to the world改变世界
never give up∥
含义:永不放弃
搭配:never give up dreams永不放弃梦想
be willing to
含义:愿意
搭配:be willing to help乐于助人
devote oneself to
含义:致力于
搭配:devote oneself to science献身科学
3
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care about
含义:关心
搭配:care about others关心他人
learn from
含义:向.学习
搭配:learn from experience从经验中学习
高级句型
The person I admire most is my mother who always helps others in need.
中文意思:我最敬佩的人是我的母亲,她总是在别人需要帮助的时候伸出援手。
模板亮点:The person I admire most is..who.结构介绍敬佩对象
2.
Not only does she work hard at her job,but also she devotes herself to caring about the elderly
in the community.
中文意思:她不仅努力工作,还致力于关心社区里的老人。
模板亮点:Not only does he/she..but also he/she..结构强调双重品质
3
It is selfless of him to spend most of his free time volunteering in the hospital.
中文意思:他把大部分空闲时间都花在医院做志愿者,真是无私。
模板亮点:Itis+ad.+ofsb.+to do sth.结构评价行为品质
4
The reason why I look up to her is that she never gives up even when facing difficulties.
中文意思:我尊敬她的原因是即使面对困难她也从不放弃。
模板亮点:The reason why I look up to him/her is that..结构解释敬佩原因
Compared with other students,he is more determined to achieve his dreams.
中文意思:与其他学生相比,他更有决心实现梦想。
模板亮点:Compared with others,he/she is more..结构进行对比
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What impresses me most about him is his courage to overcome all kinds of challenges.
中文意思:他最让我印象深刻的是他克服各种挑战的勇气。
模板亮点:What impresses me most about him/her is.结构突出核心特质
Although she is very busy with her studies,she is still willing to help me with my homework
every day.
中文意思:尽管她学习很忙,仍然每天愿意帮我辅导作业。
模板亮点:Although he/she is..,he/she still..结构表达转折关系
The Person I Admire Most
The person I admire most is my English teacher,Ms.Li,who is not only knowledgeable but also kind-
hearted.She always sets a good example for us through her daily actions.
Not only does Ms.Li work hard at teaching,but also she devotes herself to helping students in need.Last
semester,one of my classmates fell ill and missed many lessons.Although Ms.Li was very busy with
her work,she still spent extra time after school to help him catch up.It is selfless of her to care about
each student so much.
What impresses me most about her is her determined spirit.Once,she had a bad cold but still came to
class with a smile.She said,"I can't let my students down."Compared with other teachers,she is more
willing to listen to our problems and give us advice.The reason why I look up to her is that she never
gives up on any student and always encourages us to overcome difficulties.
Ms.Li is a true role model.Her generous and responsible nature inspires me to be a better person.I hope
to learn from her and make a difference in the future.