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初一上册沪外版
【寒假专版】A版写作全流程精讲
寒假专版
【A版写作全流程】描述一处山川景色
写作全流程精讲·沪外版初一上册
话题解读
本话题沪外版七年级上册写作的重点。常以“An Unforgettable Mountain Trip”“The Beautiful Scenery
of Huangshan'”等为题,考察学生用英语描述山川自然景观、表达游览感受及运用方位和感官描写
的能力,在单元测试和期中期末书面表达中出现频率较高。
核心词汇和短语
一、核心难点词汇(12个)
magnificent
//mceg 'nifisnt//
含义:壮丽的
搭配:
towering
∥'taar∥
含义:高耸的
搭配:
serene
sari:n/∥
含义:宁静的
搭配:
picturesque
∥.piktfa 'resk∥
含义:如画的
搭配:
winding∥wamdn∥
含义:蜿蜒的
搭配:
初一上册沪外版
【寒假专版】A版写作全流程精讲
lush /af/
含义:茂密的
搭配:
glorious
∥'glo.rias∥
含义:辉煌的
搭配:
majestic
ma'd3 estik∥
含义:雄伟的
搭配:
tranquil //'trcenkwil//
含义:平静的
搭配:
spectacular
spek tcekjalar/∥
含义:壮观的
搭配:
craggy
∥'krcegi//
含义:多峭壁的
搭配:
misty
∥misti/∥
含义:多雾的
搭配:
二、常用短语(12个)
rise into the sky
∥
含义:拔地而起
搭配:
be covered with
含义:被…覆盖
搭配:
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初一上册沪外版
【寒假专版】A版写作全流程精讲
at the foot of∥
含义:在…脚下
搭配:
in the distance
含义:在远处
搭配:
a sea of clouds
含义:云海
搭配:
flow down∥
含义:流下
搭配:
look like
∥
含义:看起来像
搭配:
be surrounded by
含义:被…环绕
搭配:
from top to bottom
含义:从上到下
搭配:
stand tall∥
含义:屹立
搭配:
take one's breath away
含义:令人惊叹
搭配:
3
初一上册沪外版
【寒假专版】A版写作全流程精讲
a variety of∥
含义:各种各样的
搭配:
高级句型
With the sun rising slowly,the craggy mountains are covered with a misty veil in the early
morning.
中文意思:随着太阳慢慢升起,清晨嶙峋的山峰被一层薄雾笼罩。
模板亮点:With+n.+doing,结构
2.
Not only do the towering peaks rise into the sky,but also a winding river flows down from top
to bottom.
中文意思:高耸的山峰不仅拔地而起,蜿蜓蜒的河流也从山顶流到山脚。
模板亮点:Not only..but also..结构
3.
It is spectacular to stand at the foot of the mountain that we can see a sea of clouds in the distance.
中文意思:站在山脚下能看到远处的云海,这景象非常壮观。
模板亮点:Itis+adj.+to do sth.+that结构
4
The place where the lush forests meet the tranquil lakes is truly picturesque
中文意思:茂密森林与宁静湖泊相接的地方真是如诗如画。
模板亮点:The place where.is.结构
5
Compared with the city's noise,the mountain's serene atmosphere seems more attractive to
visitors.
中文意思:与城市的喧嚣相比,山中宁静的氛围对游客似乎更具吸引力。
模板亮点:Compared with.,.seems more.结构
6.
What makes it most charming is the magnificent sunset painting the majestic rocks golden.
中文意思:最迷人的是壮丽的夕阳将雄伟的岩石染成金色的景象。
模板亮点:What makes it most charming is.结构
初一上册沪外版
【寒假专版】
A版写作全流程精讲
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Although the path is steep,it still attracts many hikers who want to enjoy the glorious views.
中文意思:尽管山路陡峭,它仍然吸引着许多想欣赏壮丽景色的徒步者。
模板亮点:Although.,it still.结构
A Picturesque Mountain Scene
Last summer,I visited a magnificent mountain area which left me with unforgettable memories.The
towering peaks rise into the sky,looking like giants standing tall and guarding the land.
With the sun rising slowly,the craggy mountains are covered with a misty veil in the early morning.
Not only do the peaks look majestic,but also the winding paths lead us to explore the beauty of
nature.At the foot of the mountain,there are lush forests filled with a variety of plants and animals.The
place where the forests meet the tranquil lakes is truly picturesque.
It is spectacular to stand on the top of the mountain that we can see a sea of clouds in the distance.
What makes it most charming is the glorious sunset painting the sky golden.Compared with the
city's noise,the mountain's serene atmosphere seems more attractive to visitors.Although the
climb is tiring,it still takes our breath away with its spectacular views from top to bottom.
This mountain is surrounded by natural beauty,and I believe it will always be a special place in my heart
J