Unit 4 写作讲解：My favourite sport -2025-2026学年沪外教版英语七年级上册

沪外教七上Unit 4 写作讲解 My favourite sport 一、写作目标及话题分析 核心话题：撰写体育俱乐部入部自我介绍，介绍个人最喜爱的运动，包含运动经历、参与频率/地点及运动带来的收获 核心句型：并列连词（and/but/or/so）、一般现在时（常态）+一般过去时（起始经历）、宾语从句 时态：一般现在时（主导）+一般过去时（补充经历） 人称：第一人称（I） 字数要求：80–120词 二、写作思路 段落布局 核心功能 模板句式 开篇点题 问候+自报姓名+点明最爱运动 Hello, everyone. I’m [Name]. I like many sports, but I love [sport] best of all. 细节描述 运动起始时间+参与频率/地点+日常练习，用连词衔接 I started [sport] when I was [age]. I practise it [how often] in [place], and I often play with my friends. 收篇结尾 运动收获+入部愿望+总结 [Sport] makes me [benefit 1] and teaches me [benefit 2]. I’m happy to join the club and hope to play with you. 三、素材积累 词汇储备 类别 核心词汇 运动项目 volleyball, basketball, running, swimming, Taijiquan, mountain biking 频率/地点 three times a week, every weekend, school gym, playground, community court 收获益处 keep fit, stay healthy, work in a team, build confidence, make friends, feel energetic 并列连词 and（并列）, but（转折）, or（选择）, so（结果） 万能句式 句式类型 模板句子 开头句 Hello, everyone. I’m [Name]. My favourite sport is [sport] because it’s fun and meaningful. I like different sports, but [sport] is always my first choice. 中间句 I started playing [sport] when I was in Grade [X]. I practise it [how often] in [place], and I often have training with my classmates. 结尾句 [Sport] not only makes me strong but also teaches me teamwork. I’m eager to join the club and look forward to playing with all of you. 四、书面表达 （一）填空式模板 Hello, everyone. I’m ________. I like many sports, but I love ________ best of all. I started playing ________ when I was ________. I practise it ________ a week in the ________, and I often play with my friends after class. We enjoy the game so much, and we always encourage each other. ________ makes me ________ and teaches me to work in a team. I’m happy to become a member of the Sports Club, and I hope we will have a great time together. （二）范文 Hello, everyone. I’m Tom. I like many sports, but I love basketball best of all. I started playing basketball when I was ten years old. I practise it four times a week in the school playground, and I often play matches with my classmates after school. I learn new skills from my PE teacher, so I play better and better now. Basketball makes me strong and healthy, and it teaches me the importance of teamwork. It also helps me make more friends and relax after study. I’m happy to become a member of the Sports Club, and I hope we will have a great time together. （三）范文中文翻译 大家好，我是汤姆。我喜欢很多运动，但我最喜欢篮球。 我十岁的时候开始打篮球。我每周在学校操场练习四次，放学后还经常和同学们打比赛。我从体育老师那里学习新技巧，所以现在打得越来越好了。 篮球让我变得强壮又健康，还教会了我团队合作的重要性。它也帮我交到了更多朋友，让我在学习之余得到放松。我很高兴能加入体育俱乐部，希望我们能一起度过美好的时光。 五、自我检查&同伴互评清单 检查维度 核心问题 语法规范 1. 一般现在时与一般过去时的动词变形是否准确？ 2. 并列连词（and/but/or/so）是否逻辑正确、使用恰当？ 3. 人称和时态是否保持一致（第一人称+主现从过）？ 内容表达 1. 是否涵盖“最爱运动、起始时间、频率/地点、运动益处”4个核心要点？ 2. 是否至少提及2项运动带来的好处？ 3. 字数是否在80–120词之间，入部愿望是否明确？ 格式规范 1. 每句首字母大写、标点符号使用是否正确？ 2. 段落划分清晰，开篇问候、中间细节、结尾愿望逻辑连贯？ 3. 单词拼写（尤其是运动类词汇、连词）是否无误？ ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $