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初一下册沪外版
【寒假专版】A版写作全流程精讲
寒假专版
【A版写作全流程】分享一次难忘的旅行
写作全流程精讲·沪外版初一下册
话题解读
本话题沪外版初一下册写作的重点。常以“An Unforgettable Trip”“A Wonderful Jourey'”等为题,
考察学生用英语描述旅行经历、分享旅行感受及介绍旅行见闻的能力,在单元测试、期中期末书面
表达中出现频率较高。
核心词汇和短语
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核心难点词汇(12个)
unforgettable
/,anfa'getabl/
含义:难忘的
搭配:an unforgettable experience难,忘的经历
destination
destI'nerfn/
含义:目的地
搭配:tourist destination旅游目的地
scenery
/'si:nari/
含义:风景
搭配:beautiful scenery美丽的风景
journey /'d3s:ni/
含义:旅行
搭配:long jourey长途旅行
explore
lk'spl:(r)/
含义:探索
搭配:explore new places探索新地方
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experience
hk'sprarians/
含义:经历
搭配:experience different cultures体验不同文化
local
/laukl/
含义:当地的
搭配:local people当地人
culture /ktf(r)/
含义:文化
搭配:traditional culture传统文化
memorable
/'memarabl/
含义:值得纪念的
搭配:memorable moment值得纪念的时刻
adventure
lad ventfa(r)/
含义:冒险
搭配:exciting adventure刺激的冒险
impress
Im pres
含义:给…留下深刻印象
搭配:impress deeply留下深刻印象
souvenir
su:va nia(r)/
含义:纪念品
搭配:buy souvenirs购买纪念品
二、
常用短语(12个)
go on a trip∥
含义:去旅行
搭配:go on a trip abroad去国外旅行
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places of interest∥
含义:名胜古迹
搭配:visit places of interest参观名胜古迹
get close to nature
含义:亲近自然
搭配:get close to nature in the mountains在山中亲近自然
try local food∥
含义:品尝当地美食
搭配:try local food at the market在市场品尝当地美食
take photos∥
含义:拍照
搭配:take photos of the scenery拍风景照
make friends
含义:交朋友
搭配:make friends with locals与当地人交朋友
in my opinion∥
含义:在我看来
搭配:in my opinion,traveling is educational在我看来旅行很有教育意义
look forward to /
含义:期待
搭配:look forward to the next trip期待下一次旅行
have a good time∥
含义:玩得开心
搭配:have a good time with family与家人玩得开心
learn about
含义:了解
搭配:learn about history了解历史
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such as∥
含义:例如
搭配:visit famous cities,such as Beijing参观著名城市,例如北京
on the way∥
含义:在途中
搭配:see beautiful views on the way途中看到美丽景色
高级句型
I prefer to explore small villages rather than visit crowded cities during my trips.
中文意思:我宁愿在旅行中探索小村庄也不愿参观拥挤的城市。
模板亮点:Prefer to do sth.rather than do sth.结构表达偏好选择
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Not only did we take photos of the beautiful scenery,but also we learned about the local culture
from the villagers.
中文意思:我们不仅拍了美丽风景的照片,还从村民那里了解了当地文化。
模板亮点:Not only..but also.结构强调双重动作
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It is unforgettable for me to watch the sunrise over the mountains last summer.
中文意思:去年夏天在山顶看日出对我来说是难忘的。
模板亮点:Itis+adj.+for sb.+to do sth.结构评价经历
The reason why this journey impressed me a lot is that I made friends with people from different
countries
中文意思:这次旅行让我印象深刻的原因是我和来自不同国家的人交了朋友。
模板亮点:The reason why..is that,.结构解释原因
Compared with the journey by plane,traveling by train allows us to enjoy more scenery on the
way.
中文意思:与乘飞机旅行相比,乘火车旅行让我们能在途中欣赏更多风景。
模板亮点:Compared with.结构进行对比
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What I like most is the moment when we tried local food at the night market.
中文意思:我最喜欢的是我们在夜市品尝当地美食的时刻。
模板亮点:Vhat I like most is.结构表达最高偏好
Although the weather was hot,we still had a good time visiting the ancient temple.
中文意思:尽管天气很热,我们参观古寺时仍然玩得很开心。
模板亮点:Although/Though..结构表达让步关系
An Unforgettable Trip
Last summer,I went on a trip to Lijiang,a beautiful destination in Yunnan Province.It was an unforget-
table journey that left me with many precious memories.
Comparedwith traveling by plane,we chose to take a train.Thetrainride allowedus to enjoy the changing
scenery on the way,from green fields to high mountains.When we arrived,we first visited some famous
places of interest,such as the Old Town of Lijiang.Not only did we take photos of the ancient buildings,
but also we learned about the local Naxi culture from the guides.What I like most is the moment when
we tried local food at a small restaurant.The spicy rice noodles and sweet yogurt were so delicious that
I still miss them now.
I prefer to explore nature rather than stay in the hotel all day.So one morning,we decided to climb Jade
Dragon Snow Mountain.Although the air was thin and we felt a little tired,we still had a good time.
Getting close to nature and breathing the fresh air made us feel relaxed.On the top of the mountain,we
made friends with some travelers from other cities.We shared stories and took group photos together.
The reason why this trip impressed me a lot is that I experienced many new things and learned about
different cultures.Before leaving,I bought a beautiful souvenir-a hand-painted scarf,which reminds
me of this memorable adventure.In my opinion,traveling is not just about visiting places,but about
collecting moments that stay in our hearts forever.I look forward to my next trip and believe it will be
another unforgettable experience.
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