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专题07 英语书面表达考前必备篇【写作指导+满分范文】 【写作指导 典例剖析】 Write an English email with at least 60 words according to the instructions given below. 假设你是新星中学七年级学生Tom，最近你加入了一个学校的社团。请完成一封电子邮件，在邮件中须告诉你的朋友你参加的社团的名称，你选择这个社团的原因（2个），以及你在社团活动中学会了（也可以包括了解到）什么。 To: Cathy From: Tom Subject: School club Hi Cathy, I hope this message finds you well! I’d like to share something exciting with you. I’ve joined the _____________ club recently. I joined the club because ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best, Tom 题目解析 一.审主题 主题是"介绍自己参加的学校社团"。需要写明社团名称、选择原因（2个）以及在社团中的收获（学会/了解到什么）。重点突出"加入社团"这一校园生活经历。 二.审体裁 这是一封电子邮件（email），格式已给出开头模板。需注意： 1. 使用书信的友好语气 2. 包含To/From/Subject三要素 3. 正文分段表述不同要点 三.审人称 使用第一人称"I"（我）叙述自己的经历，第二人称"you"（你）称呼收件人Cathy。注意保持人称一致。 四.审时态 主要使用现在完成时（I have joined...）和一般现在时（I like.../We learn...）。描述已发生的加入行为用现在完成时，描述常态活动用一般现在时。 五.审要点 必须包含三个核心内容： 1. 社团名称（需学生自己补全横线处） 2. 两个选择原因（如：兴趣相符/提升技能/朋友推荐等） 3. 具体收获（如：学会剪纸/了解科学知识/交到新朋友等） 注意：总词数≥60词，原因和收获需用完整句子说明 框架分析 1.开头: 引出话题，点明写作目的及主题。 写作指导 1. 使用邮件模板已提供的开头格式（To/From/Subject） 2. 首段用1-2句话说明写信目的（回应Cathy的问题） 3. 直接点明主题"参加的社团"，用现在完成时（I have joined...）引出社团名称 示例 To: Cathy From: [Your Name] Subject: My School Club Dear Cathy, Thank you for asking about my school life. I'm happy to tell you that I have joined the Science Club. 2.中间：分两段说明选择原因和具体收获 写作指导 第一段（原因）: 1. 用"First,... Second,..."连接两个原因 2. 原因需具体（如兴趣/技能/朋友等） 3. 使用一般现在时（I like.../My friend recommends...） 第二段（收获）: 1. 用"Through the club, I..."或"We often..."引出活动 2. 描述具体学到的技能或知识（动词+名词：learn paper-cutting/knowledge about...） 3. 可补充感受（It's interesting/helpful...） 示例 Reasons: First, I love doing science experiments. Second, my best friend Lisa also joined this club. Benefits: Through the club, I have learned how to make volcano models. We also learn interesting facts about space. It's really exciting! 3.结尾：总结感受并友好结束 写作指导 1. 用1句话总结整体感受（enjoyful/meaningful） 2. 表达期待回复（Hope to hear from you soon） 3. 结束语用常见邮件套话（Best wishes/Your friend） 示例 I really enjoy being in this club. Hope to hear about your school activities too! Best wishes, [Your Name] 写作素材 【常见词汇】 1. club (n.) 社团 2. experiment (n.) 实验 3. skill (n.) 技能 4. knowledge (n.) 知识 5. activity (n.) 活动 6. interest (n.) 兴趣 7. member (n.) 成员 8. practice (v.) 练习 9. improve (v.) 提升 10. exciting (adj.) 令人兴奋的 【常用短语】 1. join a club 加入社团 2. be interested in 对……感兴趣 3. learn about 学习…… 4. make new friends 交新朋友 【固定句型】 1. I have joined... because...（我加入了……因为……） 例句：I have joined the Art Club because I love drawing. 2. Through the club, I have learned...（通过社团，我学会了……） 例句：Through the club, I have learned how to play the guitar. 3. It is... (adj.) to...（做……是……的） 例句：It is fun to work with other club members. 范文例句 范文示例 Joining the School Club To: Cathy From: Tom Subject: School club Hi Cathy, I hope this message finds you well! I'd like to share something exciting with you. I've joined the Science Club recently. I joined the club because I'm interested in1 science and want to improve my knowledge. Also, my friend Jack is a member of this club too. Through the club, I have learned about many interesting experiments. We practice making small volcanoes and study plants. It's really fun to4 work with other club members. I'm enjoying the club very much. Hope to hear from you soon! Best wishes, Tom 词句积累 重点单词 1. Science 科学（n.） 2. improve 提高（v.） 3. knowledge 知识（n.） 4. member 成员（n.） 5. experiments 实验（n.） 短语 1. I'm interested in 我对...感兴趣 2. learned about 学习了... 3. practice making 练习制作... 4. fun to 做...很有趣 5. members 成员们 美句 1. I've joined the Science Club recently. · 中文释义：我最近加入了科学社。 · 分析：使用现在完成时（have joined）表示近期发生的动作对现在的影响。 2. Through the club, I have learned about many interesting experiments. · 中文释义：通过社团活动，我学习了许多有趣的实验。 · 分析：使用现在完成时（have learned）表示从过去到现在持续的学习经历。 3. It's really fun to work with other club members. · 中文释义：和其他社团成员一起工作真的很有趣。 · 分析：使用it作形式主语，不定式to work作真正主语的句型结构。 语法点 1. 现在完成时 · 例句：I've joined the Science Club recently. · 分析：表示过去发生的动作对现在的影响或持续到现在。 2. 不定式作主语 · 例句：It's fun to work with other club members. · 分析：使用it作形式主语，不定式短语作真正主语。 3. 原因状语从句 · 例句：I joined the club because I'm interested in science. · 分析：使用because引导原因状语从句说明加入社团的原因。 范文翻译 加入学校社团 收件人：Cathy 发件人：Tom 主题：学校社团 嗨Cathy， 希望你一切安好！我想和你分享一件令人兴奋的事情。我最近加入了科学社。我加入这个社团是因为我对科学感兴趣，并且想提升我的知识。而且，我的朋友Jack也是这个社团的成员。 通过社团活动，我学习了许多有趣的实验。我们练习制作小火山和研究植物。和其他社团成员一起工作真的很有趣。 我非常享受社团活动。期待尽快收到你的回信！ 祝好， Tom 【名校好题，满分范文】 1．Write at least 60 words about the topic “My ideal job”. (以“我的理想职业”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文。) Suggested questions: 1. What would you like to be when you grow up? Why? 2. What will you do in your job? 3. What can you do to prepare yourself for your dream job? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My ideal job My ideal job is to be a doctor. I think it is a great and meaningful job. When people are sick, I can help them get better. I want to make sick people happy again and let their families feel relaxed. In my job, I will look after patients carefully. I will listen to their problems and talk to them gently. I will try my best to help everyone stay healthy. To make my dream come true, I need to study hard every day. I will learn well in all subjects, especially biology and science. I will also read simple books about health. I hope my dream can come true one day. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时； ③提示：写作要点提示已给出，考生应注意要求中的内容，充实细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，介绍自己的理想职业； 第二步，具体说明选择该职业的原因，描述未来工作内容，以及说明准备方式； 第三步，结尾表决心。 [亮点词汇] ①meaningful有意义的 ②look after照顾 ③try one’s best尽某人最大努力 [高分句型] ①When people are sick, I can help them get better. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②I hope my dream can come true one day. (省略that的宾语从句) 2．Write at least 60 words about the topic “Learning from a failure”. (以“从失败中学习”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的短文，要求语句正确通顺，内容连贯，标点符号不占格。) 成长道路上，我们遭遇过许多挫折和失败，但恰恰是这些经历成为了我们成长道路上的关键。请记叙自己某一次的失败经历以及从中学到的经验。 注意：短文中不得出现答题人姓名、班级及其它相关信息，不得抄袭阅读文章，否则不予评分。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文：     I still remember my first English speech contest. I thought I was well-prepared, but I was too nervous on the stage. I forgot my words and failed.     I felt very disappointed at that time. However, this failure taught me a lot. I learned that practice is the key to success. I also realized that it’s okay to make mistakes. The most important thing is to learn from them and never give up.     Now, I practice more and am not afraid of challenges anymore. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：围绕自己第一次英语演讲比赛的经历展开，讲述了比赛失利的过程、当时的感受，以及从失败中得到的收获和成长。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇回忆自己第一次英语演讲比赛的经历，说明自己虽准备充分但因紧张忘词而失利； 第二步，描述比赛失利后自己失望的心情，接着点明这次失败带来的启发，即练习是成功的关键，以及要从错误中学习、永不放弃； 第三步，说明现在的改变，自己会更多地练习，不再害怕挑战。 [亮点词汇] ①speech contest演讲比赛 ②well-prepared准备充分的 ③disappointed失望的 ④challenges挑战 [高分句型] ①I learned that practice is the key to success. (运用了that引导的宾语从句) ②I also realized that it’s okay to make mistakes. (that引导的宾语从句) 3．Write at least 60 words on the topic of “My Experience of ________”. 在日常的生活中，每个人都会有很多成长的经历，如尝试新的事物、解决生活中的问题、加入心仪的社团等等。请以“我的________经历”为题写一篇不少于60个单词的短文，通过描述一段具体经历，分享你的感受、收获与思考。要求把题目补充完整，内容连贯。 Use the following as a reference. (以下问题仅供参考) -What happened? -How did you feel? -What did you learn from it? 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： My Experience of Learning to Swim Last summer, I decided to learn how to swim. At first, I was nervous because the water was deep. But my teacher taught me patiently. I practiced every day and slowly improved. Finally, I could swim across the pool! I felt proud and happy. This experience taught me that practice makes perfect. When we face difficulties, we should never give up. Now I love swimming and often go to the pool with my friends. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇写个人经历的材料作文； ②时态：以一般过去时态为主来描述经历，辅以一般现在时态来表达感受和收获； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意写清楚事件经过、个人感受及学到的道理，字数不少于60词。 [写作步骤] 第一步，补充题目，明确主题； 第二步，写清楚事件经过和个人感受； 第三步，总结从事件中学到的道理。 [亮点词汇] ①nervous 紧张的 ②patiently 耐心地 ③give up 放弃 [高分句型] ① This experience taught me that practice makes perfect. (that引导宾语从句) ② When we face difficulties, we should never give up. (when引导时间状语从句) 4．Write at least 60 words about the topic “My Application for the School Job”. (以“我的校园工作申请”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 为了丰富同学们的校园生活，培养学生能力，阳光中学启动了“校园岗位实践计划”，为同学们提供4个实践岗位： 1)教师助理 (an assistant to a school teacher)  3)校报编辑 (a school newspaper editor) 2)电脑与网络辅导员 (a PC and internet tutor)  4)校园广播主持人 (a school radio host) 假设你有机会去申请其中一份工作，请根据以下提示，写一封简短的申请书，包含以下内容。 1.你想申请哪个岗位? (apply to be) 2.结合你自身的优势和兴趣说明你申请该岗位的理由。 My Application for the School Job __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 范文： My Application for the School Job   Dear Sir/Madam, I would like to apply to be a school newspaper editor.   I am very interested in writing and often help my classmates with their compositions. I also enjoy taking photos, which can make the newspaper more attractive. I am a careful person and good at working with others.   I believe I can do this job well. If I get the position, I will try my best to collect interesting stories and make our school newspaper wonderful. Yours sincerely, XXX 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要使用“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，需说明申请的岗位、申请理由及个人承诺。 [写作步骤] 第一步，明确申请岗位； 第二步，结合自身优势说明申请理由； 第三步，表达决心和承诺。 [亮点词汇] ①apply to be申请成为 ②be interested in对……感兴趣 ③be good at擅长 ④try my best尽力 [高分句型] ①I also enjoy taking photos, which can make the newspaper more attractive. (which引导非限制性定语从句) ②If I get the position, I will try my best to collect interesting stories and make our school newspaper wonderful. (if引导条件状语从句) 5．在困境中不屈不挠，勇往直前，才能收获更多的成长与进步。某英文网站正在开展以“Grow Through Difficulties”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下提示，写一篇不少于60词的短文投稿，谈谈你克服困难的一次经历。 1. Share an experience about how you deal with the difficulty. 2. What can you learn from it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： Grow Through Difficulties   Last month, I felt very nervous before the final English exam. I was not good at listening, my sister told me to spend more time on it. So I practiced every day by listening to tapes and doing exercises. I didn’t give up. Finally, I got a good grade.   I learned that hard work is the key to success. We should face difficulties bravely. 【详解】［总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写和标点符号。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步：具体描述遇到的困难以及努力过程； 第二步：总结文章升华主题。 ［亮点词汇］ ①be good at擅长 ②listen to听 ③key to success成功的关键 ［高分句型］ ①I learned that hard work is the key to success. (运用that引导的宾语从句) ②We should face difficulties bravely. (运用情态动词should提出建议) 6．Write at least 60 words according to the given topic “A New Experience”. (请以“一次新体验”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)。 有人说，生命的意义在于体验不同。每一次新的经历，如学习一项新技能、尝试一种新运动、感受一种新文化……，都是给生命增添的一抹独特色彩。请具体分享你曾有过的一次新体验 (经历)，简单谈谈你的感悟或收获。 注意：1.短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其他相关信息。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 A New Experience Last summer, I had a new experience. I learned to ride a horse. At first, I was a little scared. But with the help of the coach, I slowly got on the horse. It felt so exciting to sit on the horse and move forward. I also learned how to control the horse. This experience made me brave and confident. I realized that trying new things can bring us a lot of fun and growth. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：本文主要是分享你曾有过的一次新体验，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍这次新体验的过程； 第三步，总结收获。 [亮点词汇] ①at first起初 ②with the help of在……的帮助下 ③a lot of很多 [高分句型] I realized that trying new things can bring us a lot of fun and growth. (that引导的宾语从句) 7．在暑假期间，Lucy在父母的陪同下体验了一些新奇好玩的活动。假如你是Lucy，请给你的朋友Tom发一条消息分享，内容包括： 1. 你参加的活动是什么； 2. 你是如何开展这项活动的； 3. 你从这次活动中获得的收获或产生的感受； 4. 根据要求写一篇不少于60个词的短文 (标点符号不占格)。 你可以这样开始： During the summer holiday, I tried something new with my parents. (注意：短文中不得出现个人姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 During the summer holiday, I tried something new with my parents—surfing! We went to a beach where an instructor taught us the basics. At first, I kept falling, but with practice, I finally stood up on the board. It was exciting and a bit scary, but I learned that persistence pays off. The ocean waves felt powerful, and riding them made me feel brave. This experience taught me to face challenges with confidence. I’ll never forget this amazing adventure! 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，整体说明暑假的情况，引出尝试的新活动——冲浪； 第二步，详细描述冲浪的学习过程 (学基础、反复摔倒、最终成功)，并结合体验引出 “坚持有回报” 的感悟； 第三步，升华体验的意义 (学会自信面对挑战)，并总结难忘这次冒险 (收尾)。 [亮点词汇] ① fall摔倒 ② persistence pays off坚持就是胜利 ③ face challenges with confidence自信地面对挑战 [高分句型] At first, I kept falling, but with practice, I finally stood up on the board. (but连接的转折句，描述了练习过程中的困难和最终的成功) 8．Write at least 60 words with the given title.  (根据所给标题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) Write an article with the title “Dealing with the Challenge” (以“应对挑战”为题写一篇作文) Suggested questions: (以下提示必须包括在内) ● What was your challenge? ● How did you deal with the challenge? ● What can you learn from this experience? 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 Dealing with the Challenge My biggest challenge was learning to swim. At first, I was afraid of water. To deal with it, I took swimming lessons and practiced every weekend. I listened to the coach carefully and never gave up. Eventually, I could swim freely. From this experience, I learned that challenges seem difficult at first, but we can overcome them with courage and persistence. Now I feel proud of myself. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”； ③提示：根据提示问题进行写作，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，介绍自己的挑战是什么； 第二步，介绍自己是如何应对挑战的； 第三步，介绍自己从这次经历中学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①be afraid of害怕 ②give up放弃 ③at first起初 [高分句型] ①To deal with it, I took swimming lessons and practiced every weekend. (不定式作目的状语) ②From this experience, I learned that challenges seem difficult at first, but we can overcome them with courage and persistence. (that引导宾语从句) 9．Have you had a hurdle in your life? How did you get over it or break it down? Share your story by writing to Christine with at least 60 words.你生活中遇到过障碍吗？如何跨越或打破的？请写信给Christine，与她分享。 From: Lihua@abc.com To: Christine@Highlights.com Subject: A hurdle in my life Hi, Christine! __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 【答案】 例文 Hi, Christine! I once faced a big hurdle in math. I failed an exam and felt very sad. But I didn’t give up. I asked my teacher for help and practiced every day. Slowly, my grades improved. Even the tricky math problems that used to make me stare at the page for hours started to feel manageable. Finally, I passed the next exam with a good score! This experience taught me that hard work can overcome any difficulty. Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、开门见山说明障碍； 第二步、具体描述克服过程； 第三步、总结感悟并呼应主题。 [亮点词汇] ①give up放弃 ②stare at盯着 ③overcome any difficulty克服任何困难 [高分句型] Even the tricky math problems that used to make me stare at the page for hours started to feel manageable.(that引导的定语从句) 10．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My ideal school” (以“我理想中的校园生活”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个单词的短文，要求内容适切，意思连贯，标点符号不占格。) (注意：作文中不得出现考生的中文姓名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) Suggested questions： 1. What changes would you like to see in your school? 2. What do you think of these changes? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My ideal school In my ideal school, I would like to see some changes. First, there should be more fun activities like sports and art classes. Second, the classrooms could be bigger and brighter. I think these changes are great because they can make school life more enjoyable and help us learn better. For example, with more activities, students can develop their interests. Also, a better environment can improve our mood. Overall, my ideal school is a place where everyone is happy and excited to learn. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材： 本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开头直接点题，介绍理想中的学校； 第二步：描述希望发生的变化，并表达了对这些变化的看法； 第三步：结尾总结理想学校的愿景。 [亮点词汇] ①would like to想要做某事 ②develop their interests培养他们的兴趣 ③improve our mood改善心情 [高分句型] ①I think these changes are great because they can make school life more enjoyable and help us learn better. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②Overall, my ideal school is a place where everyone is happy and excited to learn. (where引导的定语从句) 11．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My English learning”（以“我的英语学习”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。） Suggested questions: (1) What do you think of English? (2) What benefits does English bring to you? (3) What are your tips for learning English? (注意：短文中不得出现考生姓名，校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分) _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My English Learning I think English is very useful and interesting. It helps me understand foreign cultures and talk with people from other countries. For example, I can watch English cartoons and read science articles. English brings me many benefits. It makes traveling easier and helps me get good grades. Also, I can make friends online with students abroad. Here are my tips: First, learn new words every day. Second, listen to English songs to practice. Third, don’t be afraid to speak in class. Keep trying and you’ll improve! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍对英语的看法以及英语带给你的好处； 第二步，介绍关于学习英语的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①benefits好处 ②make friends交朋友 ③be afraid害怕 [高分句型] Keep trying and you’ll improve!（祈使句） 12．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My home in 2035”.  (根据提示，以“2035年我的家”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） 科技的发展日新月异，各种各样的智能设备构成了智能家居系统。2035年你的家可能是怎么样的？请设计并介绍一下你智能家中的设备 (不少于2个)，以及你这样设计的原因。 Guiding questions: 1. What will your home be like in 2035? 2. What kind of smart devices would you like to have in your home in 2035? 3. Why would you like to have these devices? (注意：勿出现任何与你的学校、姓名等相关的信息。) _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Home in 2035 In 2035, my home will be a fully smart space focused on daily convenience and health. It can “understand” my needs and make life easier.​ I want a smart kitchen system most. It can learn my eating habits and prepare ingredient lists automatically. When I’m back, it will automatically start preheating the oven for my favorite cake. I also need a smart mattress. It can monitor my sleep quality and heart rate every night. If there’s something wrong, it will send alerts to my phone at once.​ These devices will save me time and keep me healthy. I’m really looking forward to my 2035 home. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包含所有提示要点，可适当补充细节，使文章内容充实；行文时多使用第一、三人称，适当运用短语和多样句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总述2035年的家是全智能空间，以便捷和健康为导向，能贴合需求、让生活更省心； 第二步，分述两种智能设备——智能厨房系统 (可学习饮食习惯、自动准备食材清单及预热烤箱) 与智能床垫 (可监测睡眠和心率、异常时发警报)； 第三步，总结智能设备的价值 (省时间、保健康)，表达对2035年家的期待。 [亮点词汇] ①look forward to 期待 ②monitor my sleep quality 监测我的睡眠质量 [高分句型] ①When I’m back, it will automatically start preheating the oven for my favorite cake. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②If there’s something wrong, it will send alerts to my phone at once. (if引导的条件状语从句) 13．生活中处处充满温暖，帮助他人不仅能带给别人快乐，也能让自己收获感动与成长。请以An Unforgettable Experience of Offering Help为题，根据以下要点，描述一次你帮助他人的难忘经历，字数不少于60词。 (1) Who was in need of help and what was his or her problem? (2) How did you help him or her and how did you feel about it? (3) What have you learned/gained from your experience? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： An Unforgettable Experience of Offering Help Last month, my new classmate Tom had difficulty with his math. He failed his first test and felt upset. I spent half an hour every day helping him with math problems. When he got a good grade in the next exam, he was happy and thanked me a lot. I felt really proud. This unforgettable experience made me realize that helping others can bring happiness. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，无语法和拼写错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍需要帮助的人和问题。 第二步，介绍主动提供帮助的过程； 第三步，表达感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①have difficulty有麻烦 ②feel really proud感到非常骄傲 [高分句型] ①When he got a good grade in the next exam, he was happy and thanked me a lot. (when引导时间状语从句) ②This unforgettable experience made me realize that helping others can bring happiness. (宾语从句) 14．假设你是王一鸣，某英语网站Teen-land forum(青少年园地论坛)正在举办以“感恩父母” 为题的征文活动。请根据提示中的内容用英文写一封感谢信，不少于60字，标点符号不记字数。提示： 1.Who is the person? 2.What has he or she done for you? (Give one or two examples) 3.What have you learned from him or her? ( 注意：1.文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) Dear ________, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ All the best, Wang Yiming 【答案】例文 Dear Mom/Ded,     My junior school life is coming to end. I want to show my thanks to you for the devotion to me these years. Since I was born, you having been taking care of  me. Every morning, you were the first to get up and prepare breakfast for me.When I failed and felt very disappointed, you encouraged me to stay calm and relax.You showed me how to do the experiment patiently. I learned the patience from you. For me, nothing is more valuable for me than the warmth you have given and I’ll spend more time staying and communicating with you.                                                                                                                                                                                                    【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条里清楚，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表达自己对父母的感激之情； 第二步，说明父母为自己的付出，如照顾，陪伴，鼓励等； 第三步，说明自己对父母的回报，如陪伴，沟通，理解等。 [亮点词汇] ①be born出生 ②take good care of仔细照顾 ③get up起床 ④on one’s way to在去……的路上 ⑤encourage sb. to do sth鼓励某人做某事 [高分句型] ①Since I was born, you having been taking care of me.(Since引导的时间状语从句) ②When I failed and felt very disappointed, you encouraged me to stay calm and relax.(when引导的时间状语从句) 15． Write at least 60 words on your “Thank-you letter” according to the given information.(根据以下情境写一封不少于60个词的“感谢信”） 请写一封感谢信给那位曾在你生命中留下深刻印记，给予你无私帮助的人。 The following aspects should be included: 1. Who would you like to thank? 2. What did he/she do for you? 3. How do you feel about the help? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Dear Miss Smith, I’m writing to thank you for your help when I was in trouble. When I lost my confidence in English learning because of a low score, you, who always encouraged me, spent your free time tutoring me. You taught me useful learning methods and helped me improve my skills. Thanks to you, I’ve made great progress. I’m really grateful for your kindness. Yours, Linda 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文。 ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”，穿插“一般现在时”、 “现在进行时”、 “现在完成时”。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意要点齐全，可适当补充。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。用“我写信是为了感谢您在我遇到困难时给予的帮助”引出下文。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体描述对方做了什么以及影响。 第三步，书写结语。表达“我真的很感激您的好意”，进行情感升华。 [亮点词汇] ①in trouble处于麻烦之中 ②confidence信心 ③because of因为 [高分句型] ①When I lost my confidence in English learning because of a low score, you, who always encouraged me, spent your free time tutoring me. (When引导的时间状语从句；who引导的定语从句) 16．Write an English email with at least 60 words according to the instructions given below. 假设你是新星中学七年级学生Tom，最近你加入了一个学校的社团。请完成一封电子邮件，在邮件中须告诉你的朋友你参加的社团的名称，你选择这个社团的原因（2个），以及你在社团活动中学会了（也可以包括了解到）什么。 To: Cathy From: Tom Subject: School club Hi Cathy, I hope this message finds you well! I’d like to share something exciting with you. I’ve joined the _____________ club recently. I joined the club because ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best, Tom 【答案】例文 To: Cathy From: Tom Subject: School club Hi Cathy, I hope this message finds you well! I’d like to share something exciting with you. I’ve joined the writing club recently. I joined the club because it is important to develop writing interest and improve writing skills. In addition, taking part in the club can broaden our horizons. We have many writing activities. All the students in it get to know the skills of writing. Besides, we write some plays for the other school clubs. It’s meaningful to take part in these activities, which are good for our study and make our school life more colorful. I hope I will be better at writing and become a great writer in the future.                                                  Best,                                                                                                                                                        Tom 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简要交代你参加的社团的名称； 第二步，具体交代选择这个社团的原因； 第三步，交代在社团活动中学会到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①in addition除此之外 ②broaden our horizons拓宽我们的视野 ③colorful丰富的 [高分句型] ①In addition, taking part in the club can broaden our horizons.（动名词作主语） ②It’s meaningful to take part in these activities, which are good for our study and make our school life more colorful.（which引导的定语从句） 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题07 英语书面表达考前必备篇【写作指导+满分范文】 【写作指导 典例剖析】 Write an English email with at least 60 words according to the instructions given below. 假设你是新星中学七年级学生Tom，最近你加入了一个学校的社团。请完成一封电子邮件，在邮件中须告诉你的朋友你参加的社团的名称，你选择这个社团的原因（2个），以及你在社团活动中学会了（也可以包括了解到）什么。 To: Cathy From: Tom Subject: School club Hi Cathy, I hope this message finds you well! I’d like to share something exciting with you. I’ve joined the _____________ club recently. I joined the club because ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best, Tom 题目解析 一.审主题 主题是"介绍自己参加的学校社团"。需要写明社团名称、选择原因（2个）以及在社团中的收获（学会/了解到什么）。重点突出"加入社团"这一校园生活经历。 二.审体裁 这是一封电子邮件（email），格式已给出开头模板。需注意： 1. 使用书信的友好语气 2. 包含To/From/Subject三要素 3. 正文分段表述不同要点 三.审人称 使用第一人称"I"（我）叙述自己的经历，第二人称"you"（你）称呼收件人Cathy。注意保持人称一致。 四.审时态 主要使用现在完成时（I have joined...）和一般现在时（I like.../We learn...）。描述已发生的加入行为用现在完成时，描述常态活动用一般现在时。 五.审要点 必须包含三个核心内容： 1. 社团名称（需学生自己补全横线处） 2. 两个选择原因（如：兴趣相符/提升技能/朋友推荐等） 3. 具体收获（如：学会剪纸/了解科学知识/交到新朋友等） 注意：总词数≥60词，原因和收获需用完整句子说明 框架分析 1.开头: 引出话题，点明写作目的及主题。 写作指导 1. 使用邮件模板已提供的开头格式（To/From/Subject） 2. 首段用1-2句话说明写信目的（回应Cathy的问题） 3. 直接点明主题"参加的社团"，用现在完成时（I have joined...）引出社团名称 示例 To: Cathy From: [Your Name] Subject: My School Club Dear Cathy, Thank you for asking about my school life. I'm happy to tell you that I have joined the Science Club. 2.中间：分两段说明选择原因和具体收获 写作指导 第一段（原因）: 1. 用"First,... Second,..."连接两个原因 2. 原因需具体（如兴趣/技能/朋友等） 3. 使用一般现在时（I like.../My friend recommends...） 第二段（收获）: 1. 用"Through the club, I..."或"We often..."引出活动 2. 描述具体学到的技能或知识（动词+名词：learn paper-cutting/knowledge about...） 3. 可补充感受（It's interesting/helpful...） 示例 Reasons: First, I love doing science experiments. Second, my best friend Lisa also joined this club. Benefits: Through the club, I have learned how to make volcano models. We also learn interesting facts about space. It's really exciting! 3.结尾：总结感受并友好结束 写作指导 1. 用1句话总结整体感受（enjoyful/meaningful） 2. 表达期待回复（Hope to hear from you soon） 3. 结束语用常见邮件套话（Best wishes/Your friend） 示例 I really enjoy being in this club. Hope to hear about your school activities too! Best wishes, [Your Name] 写作素材 【常见词汇】 1. club (n.) 社团 2. experiment (n.) 实验 3. skill (n.) 技能 4. knowledge (n.) 知识 5. activity (n.) 活动 6. interest (n.) 兴趣 7. member (n.) 成员 8. practice (v.) 练习 9. improve (v.) 提升 10. exciting (adj.) 令人兴奋的 【常用短语】 1. join a club 加入社团 2. be interested in 对……感兴趣 3. learn about 学习…… 4. make new friends 交新朋友 【固定句型】 1. I have joined... because...（我加入了……因为……） 例句：I have joined the Art Club because I love drawing. 2. Through the club, I have learned...（通过社团，我学会了……） 例句：Through the club, I have learned how to play the guitar. 3. It is... (adj.) to...（做……是……的） 例句：It is fun to work with other club members. 范文例句 范文示例 Joining the School Club To: Cathy From: Tom Subject: School club Hi Cathy, I hope this message finds you well! I'd like to share something exciting with you. I've joined the Science Club recently. I joined the club because I'm interested in1 science and want to improve my knowledge. Also, my friend Jack is a member of this club too. Through the club, I have learned about many interesting experiments. We practice making small volcanoes and study plants. It's really fun to4 work with other club members. I'm enjoying the club very much. Hope to hear from you soon! Best wishes, Tom 词句积累 重点单词 1. Science 科学（n.） 2. improve 提高（v.） 3. knowledge 知识（n.） 4. member 成员（n.） 5. experiments 实验（n.） 短语 1. I'm interested in 我对...感兴趣 2. learned about 学习了... 3. practice making 练习制作... 4. fun to 做...很有趣 5. members 成员们 美句 1. I've joined the Science Club recently. · 中文释义：我最近加入了科学社。 · 分析：使用现在完成时（have joined）表示近期发生的动作对现在的影响。 2. Through the club, I have learned about many interesting experiments. · 中文释义：通过社团活动，我学习了许多有趣的实验。 · 分析：使用现在完成时（have learned）表示从过去到现在持续的学习经历。 3. It's really fun to work with other club members. · 中文释义：和其他社团成员一起工作真的很有趣。 · 分析：使用it作形式主语，不定式to work作真正主语的句型结构。 语法点 1. 现在完成时 · 例句：I've joined the Science Club recently. · 分析：表示过去发生的动作对现在的影响或持续到现在。 2. 不定式作主语 · 例句：It's fun to work with other club members. · 分析：使用it作形式主语，不定式短语作真正主语。 3. 原因状语从句 · 例句：I joined the club because I'm interested in science. · 分析：使用because引导原因状语从句说明加入社团的原因。 范文翻译 加入学校社团 收件人：Cathy 发件人：Tom 主题：学校社团 嗨Cathy， 希望你一切安好！我想和你分享一件令人兴奋的事情。我最近加入了科学社。我加入这个社团是因为我对科学感兴趣，并且想提升我的知识。而且，我的朋友Jack也是这个社团的成员。 通过社团活动，我学习了许多有趣的实验。我们练习制作小火山和研究植物。和其他社团成员一起工作真的很有趣。 我非常享受社团活动。期待尽快收到你的回信！ 祝好， Tom 【名校好题，满分范文】 1．Write at least 60 words about the topic “My ideal job”. (以“我的理想职业”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文。) Suggested questions: 1. What would you like to be when you grow up? Why? 2. What will you do in your job? 3. What can you do to prepare yourself for your dream job? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．Write at least 60 words about the topic “Learning from a failure”. (以“从失败中学习”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的短文，要求语句正确通顺，内容连贯，标点符号不占格。) 成长道路上，我们遭遇过许多挫折和失败，但恰恰是这些经历成为了我们成长道路上的关键。请记叙自己某一次的失败经历以及从中学到的经验。 注意：短文中不得出现答题人姓名、班级及其它相关信息，不得抄袭阅读文章，否则不予评分。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．Write at least 60 words on the topic of “My Experience of ________”. 在日常的生活中，每个人都会有很多成长的经历，如尝试新的事物、解决生活中的问题、加入心仪的社团等等。请以“我的________经历”为题写一篇不少于60个单词的短文，通过描述一段具体经历，分享你的感受、收获与思考。要求把题目补充完整，内容连贯。 Use the following as a reference. (以下问题仅供参考) -What happened? -How did you feel? -What did you learn from it? 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．Write at least 60 words about the topic “My Application for the School Job”. (以“我的校园工作申请”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 为了丰富同学们的校园生活，培养学生能力，阳光中学启动了“校园岗位实践计划”，为同学们提供4个实践岗位： 1)教师助理 (an assistant to a school teacher)  3)校报编辑 (a school newspaper editor) 2)电脑与网络辅导员 (a PC and internet tutor)  4)校园广播主持人 (a school radio host) 假设你有机会去申请其中一份工作，请根据以下提示，写一封简短的申请书，包含以下内容。 1.你想申请哪个岗位? (apply to be) 2.结合你自身的优势和兴趣说明你申请该岗位的理由。 My Application for the School Job __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．在困境中不屈不挠，勇往直前，才能收获更多的成长与进步。某英文网站正在开展以“Grow Through Difficulties”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下提示，写一篇不少于60词的短文投稿，谈谈你克服困难的一次经历。 1. Share an experience about how you deal with the difficulty. 2. What can you learn from it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．Write at least 60 words according to the given topic “A New Experience”. (请以“一次新体验”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)。 有人说，生命的意义在于体验不同。每一次新的经历，如学习一项新技能、尝试一种新运动、感受一种新文化……，都是给生命增添的一抹独特色彩。请具体分享你曾有过的一次新体验 (经历)，简单谈谈你的感悟或收获。 注意：1.短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其他相关信息。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．在暑假期间，Lucy在父母的陪同下体验了一些新奇好玩的活动。假如你是Lucy，请给你的朋友Tom发一条消息分享，内容包括： 1. 你参加的活动是什么； 2. 你是如何开展这项活动的； 3. 你从这次活动中获得的收获或产生的感受； 4. 根据要求写一篇不少于60个词的短文 (标点符号不占格)。 你可以这样开始： During the summer holiday, I tried something new with my parents. (注意：短文中不得出现个人姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．Write at least 60 words with the given title.  (根据所给标题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) Write an article with the title “Dealing with the Challenge” (以“应对挑战”为题写一篇作文) Suggested questions: (以下提示必须包括在内) ● What was your challenge? ● How did you deal with the challenge? ● What can you learn from this experience? 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．Have you had a hurdle in your life? How did you get over it or break it down? Share your story by writing to Christine with at least 60 words.你生活中遇到过障碍吗？如何跨越或打破的？请写信给Christine，与她分享。 From: Lihua@abc.com To: Christine@Highlights.com Subject: A hurdle in my life Hi, Christine! __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 10．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My ideal school” (以“我理想中的校园生活”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个单词的短文，要求内容适切，意思连贯，标点符号不占格。) (注意：作文中不得出现考生的中文姓名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) Suggested questions： 1. What changes would you like to see in your school? 2. What do you think of these changes? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My English learning”（以“我的英语学习”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。） Suggested questions: (1) What do you think of English? (2) What benefits does English bring to you? (3) What are your tips for learning English? (注意：短文中不得出现考生姓名，校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分) _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My home in 2035”.  (根据提示，以“2035年我的家”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） 科技的发展日新月异，各种各样的智能设备构成了智能家居系统。2035年你的家可能是怎么样的？请设计并介绍一下你智能家中的设备 (不少于2个)，以及你这样设计的原因。 Guiding questions: 1. What will your home be like in 2035? 2. What kind of smart devices would you like to have in your home in 2035? 3. Why would you like to have these devices? (注意：勿出现任何与你的学校、姓名等相关的信息。) _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．生活中处处充满温暖，帮助他人不仅能带给别人快乐，也能让自己收获感动与成长。请以An Unforgettable Experience of Offering Help为题，根据以下要点，描述一次你帮助他人的难忘经历，字数不少于60词。 (1) Who was in need of help and what was his or her problem? (2) How did you help him or her and how did you feel about it? (3) What have you learned/gained from your experience? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．假设你是王一鸣，某英语网站Teen-land forum(青少年园地论坛)正在举办以“感恩父母” 为题的征文活动。请根据提示中的内容用英文写一封感谢信，不少于60字，标点符号不记字数。提示： 1.Who is the person? 2.What has he or she done for you? (Give one or two examples) 3.What have you learned from him or her? ( 注意：1.文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) Dear ________, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ All the best, Wang Yiming                                                                 15． Write at least 60 words on your “Thank-you letter” according to the given information.(根据以下情境写一封不少于60个词的“感谢信”） 请写一封感谢信给那位曾在你生命中留下深刻印记，给予你无私帮助的人。 The following aspects should be included: 1. Who would you like to thank? 2. What did he/she do for you? 3. How do you feel about the help? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 16．Write an English email with at least 60 words according to the instructions given below. 假设你是新星中学七年级学生Tom，最近你加入了一个学校的社团。请完成一封电子邮件，在邮件中须告诉你的朋友你参加的社团的名称，你选择这个社团的原因（2个），以及你在社团活动中学会了（也可以包括了解到）什么。 To: Cathy From: Tom Subject: School club Hi Cathy, I hope this message finds you well! I’d like to share something exciting with you. I’ve joined the _____________ club recently. I joined the club because ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best, Tom 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $