读后续写 个人蜕变成长和团队历险类 讲义-衡水金卷四省(四川,云南)2026届高三联考9月联考

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该高中英语高考复习讲义聚焦读后续写核心考点,围绕人物心理成长与团队协作主题,按“类型分析-构思布局-语言突破”逻辑架构知识体系,通过考点梳理(故事山模式、衔接点分析)、方法指导(心理/动作描写技巧)、真题训练(联考真题及多版本范文)等环节,帮助学生构建情节发展框架与语言表达策略。 资料突出思维品质与语言能力培养,创新采用“伏笔-冲突-解决”情节设计训练,如引导学生通过环境描写(暴雨、森林)烘托人物心理转变,结合高级词汇替换库提升表达精度。设置分层练习(范文对比、语言点仿写),配合即时反馈,确保学生高效突破难点,为教师提供系统性复习方案,助力精准把控备考节奏。

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标黑加粗斜体(环境描写)可积累文本,绿色衔接点!!黑色块 动词积累或动作串;蓝色(宾从)红色(定从)单下划线(状从);非谓语形式都会标注;其他重点,红色字体为重要单词B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释)! () 衡水金卷四省(四川,云南)高三联考9月联考 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Mary was an ordinary high school student, who tended to observe the world around her with a quiet and slightly thoughtful look.(注意人物属性) To be frank, she was a smart girl, yet always troubled by an invisible fear in her heart(过去分词短语做后置定语) -that is, indecision. Whether it was choosing what to eat for lunch or deciding which extracurricular activity to participate in. Mary always had difficulty making decisions , fearing(现在分词短语做伴随动作) that every choice might bring unpredictable consequences. This made Mary miss many precious opportunities, which made her seem a little out of place among her friends and classmates. She longed for a change(文章的主题), but didn't know where to start. Until that decisive summer, an accidental opportunity completely changed Mary's life. That summer , the school organized an outdoor adventure activity aimed at training students’ courage and teamwork skills(过去分词短语做后置定语). At first, Mary was full of resistance. She was afraid of the unknown natural environment, and she was even more afraid that the decision she made would put the team in trouble. But with the constant encouragement of her teachers and friends, Mary gathered courage and signed up for the event. On the first day of the activity, they faced a huge challenge - crossing a thick forest to reach a secret camp(动名词短语做同位语) hidden in a valley(过去分词做后置定语). Faced with complex environment and unpredictable weather(过去分词做原因状语), everyone in the team had to contribute their own strength and jointly decide the direction of their travel. Mary was still hesitant at first, but under the patient guidance of the captain, she learned to listen to everyone's opinions and tried to make judgments after comprehensive consideration. The most difficult moment occurred on the third day, when a sudden rainstorm made them lose their way. The atmosphere in the team became tense and anxious, and Mary also felt great pressure. But at that moment, she suddenly realized that escape and hesitation could not solve the problem and only by facing it bravely could they find a way out. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Mary tried her best to calm down and said, “Everyone. it's time to make a decision!” Paragraph 2: This experience was like sunshine that brightened the dark in Mary's heart. 衡水金卷四省(四川,云南)高三联考9月联考 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Mary was an ordinary high school student, who tended to observe the world around her with a quiet and slightly thoughtful look. To be frank, she was a smart girl, yet always troubled by an invisible fear in her heart -that is, indecision. Whether it was choosing what to eat for lunch or deciding which extracurricular activity to participate in. Mary always had difficulty making decisions , fearing that every choice might bring unpredictable consequences. This made Mary miss many precious opportunities, which made her seem a little out of place among her friends and classmates. She longed for a change, but didn't know where to start. Until that decisive summer, an accidental opportunity completely changed Mary's life. That summer , the school organized an outdoor adventure activity aimed at training students courage and teamwork skills. At first, Mary was full of resistance. She was afraid of the unknown natural environment, and she was even more afraid that the decision she made would put the team in trouble. But with the constant encouragement of her teachers and friends, Mary gathered courage and signed up for the event. On the first day of the activity, they faced a huge challenge - crossing a thick forest to reach a secret camp hidden in a valley. Faced with complex environment and unpredictable weather, everyone in the team had to contribute their own strength and jointly decide the direction of their travel. Mary was still hesitant at first, but under the patient guidance of the captain, she learned to listen to everyone's opinions and tried to make judgments after comprehensive consideration. The most difficult moment occurred on the third day, when a sudden rainstorm made them lose their way. The atmosphere in the team became tense and anxious, and Mary also felt great pressure. But at that moment, she suddenly realized that escape and hesitation could not solve the problem and only by facing it bravely could they find a way out 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Mary tried her best to calm down and said, “Everyone. it's time to make a decision!” Paragraph 2: This experience was like sunshine that brightened the dark in Mary's heart. 一、读后续写类型分析 该文章属于个人成长蜕变和团队合作类读后续写,成长蜕变类(主人公由“犹豫不决 → 勇敢决断”);团队合作类(集体活动,突出协作、沟通、责任);心理成长类(克服恐惧,获得自我突破)。聚焦主人公Mary从犹豫不决到勇敢决断的心理成长过程。这类续写需突出人物内在变化与外在事件的互动,强调情感转折和行动突破。 二、构思与布局 思路构思: 紧扣“决策勇气”主题,延续“户外冒险”情境。 第一段:描写Mary如何带领团队脱困(行动+心理); 第二段:回归日常生活,体现她的持久改变(升华主题)。 框架提炼: 冲突高潮:团队迷失方向,Mary主动决策; 解决过程:运用团队协作、环境线索找到出路; 主题升华:通过反思将经历转化为内在力量。 实施要点: 保持原文细腻的心理描写和动作细节; 使用原文关键词(如“decision”“courage”“teamwork”); 结尾呼应开头“invisible fear”,形成闭环。 三、续写注意事项 事项类型 具体内容 承接原文 保持Mary性格一致性(初始犹豫但逐渐坚定);延续“暴雨迷路”的紧张氛围;沿用队长、队友等角色。 整体注意 避免脱离团队协作主题;勿过度夸张解决过程;确保语言风格与原文一致(细腻描写+内心活动)。 巧妙设计 用环境变化(如雨停、出现阳光)象征心理转变;让队友的反应衬托Mary的成长;结尾用隐喻(如“阳光”)点题。 四、故事山模式分析 开端:Mary的性格缺陷(犹豫)→ 发展:参加冒险活动→ 高潮:暴雨迷路,她主动决策→ 回落:找到出路→ 结局:内心成长。 五、原文衔接点与关键元素分析 1. 可衔接的原文内容: “突然的暴雨使他们迷路”(续写开头直接承接); “队长耐心指导”(续写可提队长鼓励她); “团队共同决定方向”(续写强调集体决策)。 2. 原文反映句分类: 类型 原文句子/短语 作用 心情 “troubled by an invisible fear” “felt great pressure” 体现焦虑 动作 “gathered courage and signed up” “learned to listen” 显示渐进改变 转折点 “But at that moment, she suddenly realized...” 心理突破点 3. 伏笔与冲突: 伏笔:Mary的观察力(“observe the world”)、队长的指导(“patient guidance”); 冲突:暴雨迷路(外部环境)+ 团队焦虑(内部压力); 隐含线索:Mary的“全面考虑能力”(前文“tried to make judgments after comprehensive consideration”); 解决方案:团队协作+Mary的决策勇气(需在续写中具体化,如通过地图、自然标志找路)。 分析角度 内容 原文反应句 人物刻画 Mary从被动到主动的转变 “she suddenly realized that escape and hesitation could not solve the problem” 情感层次 恐惧→压力→冷静→自信 “invisible fear” → “great pressure” → “facing bravely” 关键情节点 暴雨迷路迫使决策 “a sudden rainstorm made them lose their way” 语言特色 细腻心理描写+环境烘托 “with a quiet and slightly thoughtful look” 关键词分析 decision, courage, teamwork 反复出现,构成主题核心 心理描写 内在挣扎与觉醒 “feeling that every choice might bring unpredictable consequences” 动作描写 由迟疑到主动行动 “gathered courage and signed up” 环境描写 森林、暴雨制造困境 “complex environment and unpredictable weather” 隐含主题 克服恐惧 through 行动 “only by facing it bravely could they find a way out” 情感转折 从焦虑到决心 “But at that moment, she suddenly realized...” 空间转换 森林→山谷营地(目标) “reach a secret camp hidden in a valley” 时间过渡 三天活动(第三天转折) “The most difficult moment occurred on the third day” 总结 续写需紧扣“决策”与“成长”主线,通过环境、动作、心理描写展现转变,并巧妙呼应原文伏笔(如团队协作、自然观察)。最终回归主题:勇气源于面对而非逃避。 六、动作环境心理描写与高级词汇 1. 动作描写 She clenched her fists, taking a deep breath to steady her nerves. (她握紧拳头,深吸一口气以稳定情绪。) With renewed determination, she led the way, pushing aside the low-hanging branches. (带着重新燃起的决心,她带头开路,拨开低垂的树枝。) He pointed towards a distant silhouette, suggesting it might be their destination. (他指向一个遥远的轮廓, suggesting 那可能是他们的目的地。) The team trudged through the muddy path, each step a struggle. (团队在泥泞的小路上艰难前行,每一步都很挣扎。) A faint smile flickered across her face as she saw the first signs of hope. (当她看到第一丝希望的迹象时,一丝微弱的笑容在她脸上闪过。) She scrambled up the rocky slope, offering a hand to those behind her. (她爬上了岩石斜坡,向后面的人伸出手。) They huddled together under a large tree, seeking shelter from the relentless rain. (他们在一棵大树下挤在一起,躲避无情的雨水。) His eyes scanned the horizon, searching for any familiar landmark. (他的眼睛扫视着地平线,寻找任何熟悉的地标。) She unfolded the crumpled map, carefully studying its faded lines. (她展开皱巴巴的地图,仔细研究上面褪色的线条。) A wave of relief washed over the group as they spotted the camp. (当看到营地时,一阵宽慰的感觉席卷了整个团队。) 2. 心理描写 A surge of adrenaline coursed through her veins, overpowering her initial fear. (一股肾上腺素涌上她的血管,压倒了她最初的恐惧。) Doubt gnawed at the edges of her mind, but she refused to succumb to it. (怀疑在她的脑海边缘啃噬,但她拒绝向它屈服。) An unexpected calm descended upon her amidst the chaos. (在混乱中,一种意想不到的平静降临在她身上。) She wrestled with the options, weighing the potential risks and rewards. (她与各种选项作斗争,权衡着潜在的风险和回报。) The weight of responsibility felt heavy on her shoulders, yet she stood taller. (责任的重量压在她肩上感觉很沉重,但她站得更直了。) A glimmer of hope ignited within her, pushing the darkness away. (一丝希望在她心中点燃,驱散了黑暗。) Memories of past failures flashed before her eyes, but this time was different. (过去失败的记忆在她眼前闪现,但这次不同了。) She silenced the inner critic that whispered of inevitable failure. (她让那个低声说着必然失败的内心的批评者安静下来。) A sense of clarity emerged from the fog of her indecision. (一种清晰感从她犹豫不决的迷雾中显现出来。) She felt a profound shift within herself, a door opening to a new way of being. (她感到内心发生了深刻的变化,一扇通往新存在方式的门打开了。) 3. 环境描写 The relentless rain lashed against their faces, reducing visibility to a few meters. (无情的雨水抽打着他们的脸,将能见度降低到几米。) Ancient trees towered above them, their canopy creating a dim, green-tinted world. (古树在他们上方高耸,树冠创造了一个昏暗的、绿意盎然的世界。) A narrow path wound its way through the thick undergrowth, barely visible. (一条狭窄的小路蜿蜒穿过茂密的灌木丛,几乎看不见。) The howling wind whistled through the branches, creating an eerie symphony. (呼啸的风吹过树枝,发出怪异的哨声,创造了一首诡异的交响乐。) The air was thick with humidity and the scent of damp earth and pine. (空气中弥漫着潮湿的气息以及泥土和松树的芬芳。) Sunlight struggled to filter through the dense foliage, casting dappled shadows on the ground. (阳光艰难地透过茂密的树叶,在地上投下斑驳的影子。) The distant rumble of thunder promised more trouble to come. (远处隆隆的雷声预示着更多的麻烦将要来临。) The forest seemed to close in around them, adding to their sense of entrapment. (森林似乎在他们周围收拢,增加了他们的被困感。) A sudden break in the trees revealed a sweeping view of the misty valley below. (树木间一个突然的缺口露出了下方薄雾笼罩的山谷的广阔景色。) The first rays of the morning sun broke through the clouds, painting the sky in hues of orange and pink. (清晨的第一缕阳光冲破云层,将天空染成橙色和粉色。) 4. 常见单词高级替换词 (Advanced Synonyms) 常见词 高级替换词 (场景分类) 释义 afraid apprehensive (心理, 更正式) 忧虑的,担心的 trepidatious (心理, 文学性强) 惊恐的,不安的 important crucial / critical (决策, 转折点) 至关重要的 pivotal (决策, 转变) 关键性的,枢轴的 change transformation (个人成长, 巨大变化) 转变,改革 metamorphosis (个人成长, 彻底蜕变) 变形,质变 brave courageous (品质描写) 勇敢的,有胆量的 valiant (行动描写, 文学性) 英勇的,勇敢的 difficult arduous (任务, 旅程) 艰巨的,费力的 perilous (环境, 处境) 危险的,冒险的 语言点解析与语料积累 1. 常见搭配与词法解析 (Collocations & Analysis) 动词+名词搭配 (Verb+Noun Collocations): Face a challenge: 面对挑战 (原文: faced a huge challenge) Make a decision/judgment: 做决定/判断 (原文: make judgments) Lose one's way: 迷路 (原文: lose their way) Solve a problem: 解决问题 (原文: solve the problem) Find a way out: 找到出路 (原文: find a way out) Gather courage: 鼓起勇气 (原文: gathered courage) Contribute one's strength: 贡献力量 (原文: contribute their own strength) Feel pressure: 感到压力 (原文: felt great pressure) 形容词+名词搭配 (Adjective+Noun Collocations): Invisible fear: 无形的恐惧 (原文) Precious opportunities: 宝贵的机会 (原文) Unpredictable consequences/weather: 不可预测的后果/天气 (原文) Outdoor adventure activity: 户外探险活动 (原文) Complex environment: 复杂的环境 (原文) Sudden rainstorm: 突如其来的暴雨 (原文) Great pressure: 巨大的压力 (原文) Patient guidance: 耐心的指导 (原文) 词法解析 (Lexical Analysis): Tended to: 倾向于,往往。表示一种习惯性或典型的行为模式。比 often 更正式。 To be frank: 坦白说。用作插入语,引出一个坦诚的评价。 That is: 即,那就是。用于解释或说明前面的内容。 Out of place: 格格不入,不自在。形象地描述不适感。 Longed for: 渴望。表达强烈的愿望,比 wanted 情感更丰富。 2. 可积累语料 Indecision (n.) /ˌɪndɪˈsɪʒn/词意: 犹豫不决,优柔寡断 近义词: hesitation, uncertainty, vacillation, doubt 反义词: decision, decisiveness, resolution, determination 例句: Her chronic indecision caused her to miss the deadline. (她长期的犹豫不决导致她错过了最后期限。) He was paralyzed by indecision at the critical moment. (在关键时刻,他因犹豫不决而不知所措。) Unpredictable (adj.) /ˌʌnprɪˈdɪktəbl/词意: 不可预测的,多变的 近义词: uncertain, erratic, volatile, capricious 反义词: predictable, certain, reliable, consistent 例句: The weather in the mountains is highly unpredictable. (山里的天气非常多变。) His unpredictable behavior makes him difficult to work with. (他难以预测的行为使他很难共事。) Resistance (n.) /rɪˈzɪstəns/词意: 抵抗,抵触,阻力 近义词: opposition, reluctance, defiance, unwillingness 反义词: acceptance, acquiescence, willingness, submission 例句: She felt a strong resistance to the idea of moving abroad. (她对移居国外的想法非常抵触。) The new policy met with fierce resistance from the employees. (新政策遭到了员工的强烈抵制。) Tense (adj.) /tens/词意: 紧张的,拉紧的 近义词: nervous, anxious, stressed, strained, tight 反义词: relaxed, calm, loose, lax 例句: The atmosphere in the room grew tense as they waited for the results. (等待结果时,房间里的气氛变得紧张起来。) She had a tense expression on her face during the entire interview. (在整个面试过程中,她脸上的表情都很紧张。) Consequence (n.) /ˈkɒnsɪkwəns/ 词意: 结果,后果,重要性 近义词: result, outcome, effect, repercussion, importance, significance 反义词: cause, origin, source (作为"结果"时); insignificance, unimportance (作为"重要性"时) 例句: He failed to consider the long-term consequences of his actions. (他未能考虑其行为的长期后果。) This decision is of great consequence to the future of our company. (这个决定对我们公司的未来至关重要。) Adventure (n.) /ədˈventʃə(r)/ 词意: 冒险,奇遇 近义词: expedition, exploration, escapade, venture 反义词: routine, predictability, safety 例句: The book recounts his adventures in the Amazon rainforest. (这本书讲述了他在亚马逊雨林的冒险经历。) Sometimes, trying a new food can be a real adventure. (有时,尝试一种新食物可能是一次真正的冒险。) Hesitant (adj.) /ˈhezɪtənt/词意: 犹豫的,迟疑的 近义词: indecisive, reluctant, unsure, wavering 反义词: decisive, resolute, certain, confident 例句: She gave a hesitant answer, unsure if it was correct. (她给出了一个犹豫的回答,不确定是否正确。) *He was hesitant to invest all his savings in the new business. (他对于把全部积蓄投资到新业务上犹豫不决。) 7、 Possible Versions(4) Version 1 Paragraph 1: Mary tried her best to calm down and said, “Everyone, it’s time to make a decision!” Her voice, though slightly trembling(现在分词做主语补语), carried a newfound determination(无灵主语句). Remembering the captain’s earlier advice about using natural signs(现在分词短语做伴宿动作), she suggested studying the tree moss growth—a clue to direction(同位语). As the rainstorm gradually eased, the team huddled together, debating options(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Mary listened intently, then pointed to a faint trail barely visible through the undergrowth(adj做补语). “This way,” she asserted, “I noticed earlier that it slopes downward toward the valley.” With shared nods, they moved forward, their renewed unity mirroring Mary’s inner shift from doubt to leadership(独立主格). Paragraph 2: This experience was like sunshine that brightened the dark in Mary’s heart. Returning to school(现在分词短语做伴随动作), she no longer hesitated over trivial choices. Instead, she recalled the forest—how action had triumphed over fear. She joined the debate club, volunteered as a project leader, and even helped friends navigate their own dilemmas(动词短语并列,刻画人物的变化). The invisible fear that once haunted her had melted into courage, forged in the rainstorm(过去分词短语做后置定语). Mary realized that every decision, big or small, was a step toward growth, and she now embraced them with calm confidence. Version 2 Paragraph 1: Mary tried her best to calm down and said, “Everyone, it’s time to make a decision!” Her voice was trembling at first, but the determination hidden beneath(过去分词短语做后置定语) soon steadied her tone. Seeing her effort(现在分词短语做伴随动作), the anxious teammates gradually quieted down, fixing their eyes on her(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Mary took a deep breath, analyzed the map carefully, and suggested moving along the stream(动词短语并列) which she reasoned would eventually lead them out of the forest. Though her heart was pounding violently, she forced herself to speak with clarity, and surprisingly, her words brought a sense of order to the group. Encouraged(过去分词短语做原因状语), her teammates nodded and followed her lead. Step by step, with raindrops still pouring(with复合结构), Mary held the belief that hesitation would no longer trap her. At that moment, she realized her choice mattered, not just to herself, but to the whole team. Paragraph 2: This experience was like sunshine that brightened the dark in Mary’s heart. From then on, she was no longer paralyzed by indecision. Back at school, she dared to raise her hand in class discussions and bravely volunteered for competitions she once avoided. It dawned on her that choices, whether right or wrong, were steps leading to growth. With every decision she made, confidence bloomed(无灵主语句), washing away the shadow of doubt(现在分词短语做伴随动作) that had haunted her for years. More importantly, she learned that true courage did not mean the absence of fear, but the strength to act despite it. Looking back(现在分词短语做伴随动作), Mary felt grateful for that rainstorm, for without it she might never have discovered the sunshine hidden within herself(过去分词短语做后置定语). Version 3 Paragraph 1: Mary tried her best to calm down and said, “Everyone, it’s time to make a decision!” She reminded herself that panic would only deepen the chaos. Summoning her courage(现在分词短语做伴随动作), she recalled the captain’s words about trusting both herself and the team. Pointing toward a distant ridge(现在分词短语做伴随动作)faintly visible through the mist(adj做后置定语或补语), she suggested climbing higher to gain a clearer view. At first, doubt flashed in her companions’ eyes, yet the firmness in Mary’s expression convinced them(无灵主语句). Leading the way(现在分词短语做伴随动作), she steadied those who stumbled and encouraged those on the verge of giving up. When they finally spotted smoke rising from the hidden camp(现在分词短语做后置定语), relief flooded over them(无灵主语句). Mary’s heart surged with pride—she had not only made a decision, but had guided others through the storm. Paragraph 2: This experience was like sunshine that brightened the dark in Mary’s heart. For the first time, she saw herself as someone dependable(adj做补语). In later days, whenever she hesitated over trivial matters, she recalled that moment on the ridge and reminded herself: decisions shape destiny. Slowly, hesitation gave way to decisiveness, and timidity turned into quiet confidence.(无灵主语句)She even surprised her classmates and friends by signing up for the debate team, where her clear reasoning shone. Though challenges still awaited her(无灵主语句), Mary had learned that facing uncertainty was far better than being paralyzed by fear. It was the storm that taught her(强调句): by deciding, she was already halfway to success. Version 4 Paragraph 1: Mary tried her best to calm down and said, “Everyone, it’s time to make a decision!” Even as fear twisted her stomach(无灵主语句), she stood firm. She knew that silence would only waste precious time. Mustering every ounce of courage(现在分词短语做伴随动作), she voiced her plan: “If we work together and head toward the valley, we will find the camp.” Her calm tone, though fragile, spread reassurance among the team. Step after step, she encouraged her partners, repeating(现在分词短语做伴随动作), “We can do this.” The forest was still dark, and the rain showed no sign of stopping, yet her steady words lit up the group’s spirit like a torch in the night(无灵主语句). For the first time in her life, Mary felt the thrill of being decisive, and it warmed her heart. Paragraph 2: This experience was like sunshine that brightened the dark in Mary’s heart. It melted away the invisible chains of hesitation. She discovered that being decisive was not about always being right, but about daring to take responsibility. Later, whenever she stood at a crossroads—whether academic choices or future paths—she no longer shrank back. Instead, she welcomed the challenge with open arms. The girl who once feared decisions now embraced them as opportunities. With each step forward, Mary carved out a brighter version of herself. And deep inside, she carried the memory of that stormy forest, where her courage first bloomed like a fragile but unyielding flower. 语言与语料整理 1. 地道搭配 & 近义替换 make a decision → reach a decision / come to a decision calm down → steady oneself / regain composure bring a sense of order → restore calm / settle the situation flood over sb. → wash over sb. / overwhelm sb. with relief paralyzed by indecision → trapped by hesitation / frozen by doubt 2. 情绪 & 动作描写亮点词汇 trembling voice → quivering tone heart pounding violently → heartbeat racing / chest thumping doubt flashed in her eyes → hesitation flickered across her face relief flooded over them → a wave of comfort swept through them fear twisted her stomach → nerves knotted inside her 3. 语料积累(升级替换+例句) “summon courage” = pluck up courage / muster bravery She summoned her courage and spoke her mind in front of the class. “take responsibility” = shoulder responsibility / accept accountability He was willing to shoulder responsibility for the failure. “light up one’s spirit” = lift spirits / boost morale The coach’s encouraging words lit up the team’s spirit. “be trapped by hesitation” = be caught in indecision / be frozen in fear She was trapped by hesitation, unable to move forward. 官方:One possible version: Mary tried her best to calm down and said , “ Everyone ,it's time to make a decision!" Hearing her words(现在分词短语做伴随动作), everyone turned and looked at her. Taking a deep breath(现在分词短语做伴随动作) , Mary proposed a plan to determine the direction based on the land-marks(过去分词短语做方式状语) observed before(过去分词做原因状语). Realizing(现在分词短语做伴随动作)making decisions means taking responsibilities, Mary gave others a firm stare. Although this decision was risky, the team chose to believe in her and decided in full agreement to move forward according to her guidance. After hours of exhausting hike, they finally walked out of the fog and found the legendary secret camp. This experience was like sunshine that brightened the dark in Mary's heart. Back at school, she volunteered to organize the autumn field trip- listing spots, asking classmates' ideas and checking forecasts and so on(现在分词短语做伴随动作). The botanical garden trip she planned impressed everyone. At lunch , she no longer hesitated. Instead, she suggested new dishes to friends, who now turned to her for ideas. Mary learned to listen to her inner voice and also learned to seek help and advice from others when necessary, which enabled her to make significant progress in both academies and inter-personal relationships. Every challenge and attempt is a precious opportunity to discover and improve yourself. 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $

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