内容正文:
冀教英语七年级上册Unit 4:A Birthday Card for My Family
写作目标
结合本单元“制作生日贺卡、向家人表达爱与感谢”的核心目标,用一般现在时和祝福语格式写一封生日贺卡内容,包含对家人的生日祝福、感谢的具体原因,贴合单元“表达亲情”的写作要求。
1. 能正确使用生日祝福的常用句型和本单元核心词汇(birthday, present, love, thank等);
2. 能具体写出感谢家人的理由,体现对亲情的理解;
3. 能模仿贺卡的写作格式,语言简洁、情感真挚,符合贺卡的文体特点。
题目解析
1. 体裁:应用文(生日贺卡),要求以贺卡形式给家人写生日祝福,符合本单元书面表达的体裁规范;
2. 人称:以第二人称(you)称呼对方,第一人称(I/we)表达情感,贴合贺卡的表达习惯;
3. 时态:以一般现在时为主,描述家人的日常付出,用祈使句和祝福语表达心愿;
4. 段落数:分三段,依次送上生日祝福、说明感谢的具体原因、再次表达美好祝愿,字数控制在60 - 100词,语言简洁且情感真挚;
5. 核心要求:内容需包含生日祝福、对家人付出的感谢,突出“亲情”主题,体现本单元“向家人表达爱与感恩”的目标。
写作模板(三段式)
第一段:开头祝福,点明对象(约20词)
· 写作目的:直接送上生日祝福,称呼对方并点明生日主题,呼应本单元“制作生日贺卡”的目标;
· 必写要素:称呼、生日祝福。
· 基础句式:Dear [家人称呼], Happy birthday to you! I hope you have a wonderful birthday day.
· 示例:Dear Grandma, Happy birthday to you! I hope you have a warm and happy birthday.
第二段:中间详述,表达感谢(约40词)
· 写作目的:用具体事例说明家人的付出,表达感谢,运用本单元“表达感恩”的表达;
· 必写要素:家人的具体付出、感谢的情感。
· 基础句式:Thank you for [家人的付出,如cooking for me every day]. You always [家人的行为,如take care of me when I am sick]. I love you so much.
· 示例:Thank you for cooking delicious food for our family every day. You also tell me interesting stories at night and take care of me when I am ill. I feel so lucky to have you as my grandma.
第三段:结尾祝愿,再次抒情(约20词)
· 写作目的:送上更美好的生日祝愿,再次表达爱,让贺卡内容更完整;
· 必写要素:具体的美好祝愿、爱与祝福。
· 基础句式:May you [祝愿,如be healthy and happy forever]. I love you! With lots of love, [你的名字].
· 示例:May you be healthy and happy forever! I will always love you. With lots of love, Li Ming.
中英对照范文
英文
A Birthday Card for Grandpa
Dear Grandpa,
Happy birthday to you! I hope you have a wonderful and special birthday today.
Thank you for taking me to the park every weekend and teaching me to play Chinese chess. You always listen to my stories patiently and give me great advice when I have problems. Your love makes my life warm and happy.
May you stay healthy and young forever! I made a small birthday card for you with all my love. I love you so much, Grandpa!
With lots of love,
Li Ming
中文翻译
给爷爷的生日贺卡
亲爱的爷爷:
祝您生日快乐!希望您今天度过一个美好又特别的生日。
感谢您每周带我去公园,还教我下中国象棋。您总是耐心地听我的故事,在我遇到困难时给我好的建议。您的爱让我的生活温暖又幸福。
愿您永远健康年轻!我用全部的爱为您做了一张小小的生日贺卡。我非常爱您,爷爷!
满怀爱意的,
李明
好词佳句
1. Happy birthday to you! I hope you have a wonderful day.(祝你生日快乐!希望你度过美好的一天。)
2. Thank you for taking care of our family all the time.(感谢你一直照顾我们的家。)
3. You always give me love and support when I need it.(在我需要的时候,你总是给我爱和支持。)
4. May you be healthy and happy every day.(愿你每天都健康快乐。)
5. This small birthday card is full of my love for you.(这张小小的生日贺卡里,装满了我对你的爱。)
谚语
1. Harmony in a family makes everything successful.(家和万事兴。)
2. Love makes a family warm and bright.(爱让家庭温暖又明亮。)
学生写作填空练习
A Birthday Card for My [家人称呼]
Dear ______ (家人称呼,如Mom),
Happy birthday to you! I hope you have a ______ (形容词,如happy) and ______ (形容词,如special) birthday.
Thank you for ______ (家人的付出,如cooking delicious food for me). You always ______ (家人的行为,如help me with my homework) when I need help. Your love makes me feel ______ (感受,如warm). I love you very much.
May you ______ (祝愿,如be healthy forever)! I made this birthday card for you with all my love.
With lots of love,
______ (你的名字)
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