2026届高考英语读后续写专项复习---万圣节服装比赛的故事 导学案
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Every October, my neighborhood has a Halloween costume contest. My neighbor Ollie and I would race to the announcement board to find out the theme. One year, the theme was “Dress up as your favorite book character”. Another year, it was “Be something scary”. But this year, the theme was kind of, well, themeless.
“Be creative?” I said, reading the announcement board. “That’s not really a theme, is it?”
Ollie agreed.
“Let’s just find some materials first,” I suggested, feeling confused.
“I've got it!” Ollie said, grabbing a bunch of fallen leaves. He explained, “They’re free! No one will dress up as a tree like we do!”
I loved the idea. Soon we had filled two bags with all sorts of leaves. Ollie pointed to some bunches of shiny leaves. “These look special,” he said, handing me a handful. I didn’t notice the oily shine on them as I put them in my bag. Little did we know what trouble they would bring. Afterwards, we worked for hours.
“I’m so tired of gluing leaves,” I complained.
“Beleaf me,” said Ollie. “You’re not the only one.”
I laughed. “I’ll be so releafed to be done!”
“There’s no leafing now,” he added lightly. “But it’ll be worth it. These will be the most tree-mendous costumes of all!”
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It took us hours to get ready the next morning, and we probably lost half our leaves walking slowly to the park. Around us, we saw witches in pointy hats and superheroes in capes, but many people turned to look at our leaf costumes with surprise and admiration. “I’ve never seen anything like that!” said a witch. “Yeah, they really stand out,” her ghost friend agreed. “The way the leaves move and fall makes them look exactly like real trees!” Hearing this, we were extremely happy.
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As we stood there, enjoying all the nice comments about our costumes, a terrible itch (痒) suddenly started everywhere.
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Just then, the host announced the winner list.
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一、文本分析
1.角色
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2.视角 第______人称视角(以______的口吻叙述)
3.时空线
时间线:每年十月(社区举办万圣节服装比赛,“我”和Ollie期待主题)→ 今年(主题为“创意不限”,两人感到困惑)→ 决定用落叶制作树造型服装→ 收集落叶(意外拿到带油亮的特殊落叶)→ 花费数小时粘制服装→ 比赛当天(穿着服装去公园,收获众人赞赏)→ 站在原地享受好评时(突发全身瘙痒)→ _______________________→ _______________________。
空间转换:社区公告栏(查看万圣节比赛主题)→ 户外(收集落叶制作服装)→ “我”或Ollie的家(花费数小时粘制服装)→ 公园(参加比赛,展示服装并收获赞赏)→ 公园内(站在原地时突发瘙痒)→ ____________________→ ____________________。
4.文章线索
(1)核心矛盾是什么?这一矛盾对情节发展有何作用?如何推动主要人物的行动与形象塑造?
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(2)主要人物的心理/状态变化有哪些?这些变化如何形成呼应,推动情节发展并深化主题?
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(3)文本中的关键细节有哪些?它们有何意义?为后续情节发展做了怎样的铺垫?
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