内容正文:
高中英语写作专项突破
(沪教牛津版选择性必修3)
写作话题精讲·词汇句型·范文示范
写作话题6:仿写文学片段并附创作思路说明
适用年级:
选择性必修3
对应版本:
沪教牛津版(上海教育)
常考题日:
仿写文学片段并附创作思路说明
一、话题解读
本话题是沪教牛津版(上海教育)高中英语选择性必修3的写作内容。常考题目围绕仿写文
学片段并附创作思路说明展开,核心考察学生对文学作品的模仿能力与创作思路的阐述能力。
该话题在高中英语写作中主要以仿写与说明形式出现,是提升文学表达与逻辑思维的重要训
练内容。
二、核心词汇与短语
1.核心词汇(18个)
1.evoke'VkN.唤起;引起
2.depict/dr'pIkt/v.描绘;描画
3.metaphor/'metefe(r)/n.隐喻;暗喻
4.symbolism/'sImbelIzem/n.象征主义;象征手法
5.atmosphere/etmesfra(r)/n.氛围;气氛
6.rhythm/rram/n.节奏;韵律
7.narrative/'naeretIv/adj..叙事的n.叙述;故事
8.vivid/'VIVId/.adj.生动的;鲜明的
9.subtle/'sAt/adj.微妙的;精细的
10.prose/pre5zln.散文;散文诗
11.poetic/pa心etIk/adj.诗的;诗意的
12.tone/teun/n.语气:语调;风格
13.imagery/'ImId3riln.意象;图像
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14.allusion /e'lu:3nln.典故;暗指
15.syntax/sIntaeks/n.句法;句子结构
16.portray/p:treI/.描绘;刻画
17.emotional/'meufenl/adj.情感的情绪的
18.distinctive/dr'stnktrv/adj.独特的;有特色的
2.核心短语(12个)
1.literary devices文学手法
2.create vivid imagery创造生动意象
3.metaphorical expression隐喻表达
4.narrative structure叙事结构
5.emotional resonance情感共鸣
6.symbolic meaning象征意义
7.prose style散文风格
8.poetic rhythm诗歌韵律
9.subtle description细腻描写
10.portray characters刻画人物
11.atmosphere building氛围营造
12.allusion to classics引用经典典故
三、高级句型模板
1.结构:“only+状语”倒装结构
Only by analyzing the original text's literary devices can we accurately
replicate its distinctive prose style.
2.结构:非限制性定语从句
例句:仿写文学片段需要融合隐喻表达与细腻描写,which enables us to evoke emo-
tional resonance in readers.
3.结构:形式主语t句型
It is crucial that we(should)maintain the original narrative structure while
adding personal creative elements.
4.结构:让步状语从句
例句:Although仿写需遵循原作的氛围营造,we still can infuse poetic rhythm to
highlight our unique perspective.
5.结构:现在分词作状语
例句:Creating vivid imagery through symbolic meaning,we can make the仿写
片段more engaging and thought-provoking.
6.结构:动名词作主语句型
Portraying characters with subtle description is an effective way to en-
hance the authenticity of the仿写work.
7.结构:not only.but also..并列结构
例句:Not only can仿写help us master literary techniques,but also it can deepen
our understanding of the original author's tone.
8.结构:“the+比较级,the+比较级..”句型
The more we study the original's syntax and metaphorical expressions,
the better we will grasp its poetic rhythm.
四、满分范文示范
【仿写文学片段】
The Old Bookstore
Dusk seeped through the dusty windows like honey,coating the shelves where time lingered
in dog-eared pages.A leather-bound volume,its spine cracked like a weathered map,rested
on the oak countera silent witness to a thousand whispered stories.The air smelled of
cinnamon and forgotten ink,each breath a dialogue with the past.Outside,a streetlamp
flickered on,casting gold streaks that danced across the floor,as if the bookstore itself were
humming an ancient lullaby.
【创作思路说明】
This仿写片段imitates the poetic prose style of classic literary descriptions,integrating mul
tiple核心词汇和短语.By using metaphorical expressions like"time lingered in dog-eared
pages"and"spine cracked like a weathered map,"the text creates vivid imagery to depict
the bookstore's nostalgic atmosphere.The subtle description of sensory details-dusty
windows,cinnamon scent,and dancing gold streaks-aims to evoke emotional resonance
in readers,which enables them to visualize the scene clearly.
It is crucial that the narrative structure follows a spatial sequence,moving from windows to
shelves and finally to the streetlamp,maintaining the original's calm and reflective tone.
Not only does the personification of the bookstore("humming an ancient lullaby")enhance its
distinctive charm,but also the symbolic meaning of the leather-bound book-representing
the continuity of human memory-deepens the theme.
Only by balancing literary devices such as symbolism and imagery can the achieve
both atmospheric building and emotional depth.The more we immerse ourselves in such
subtle descriptions,the better we will appreciate the beauty of prose style.