话题2创作记叙文记录一次志愿服务的经历与感悟-2025-2026学年高中英语期末写作复习选择性必修1(沪教牛津版)
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初中英语写作专项突破
(沪教牛津版选择性必修1)
写作话题精讲·词汇句型·范文示范
写作话题2:创作记叙文记录一次志愿服务的经历与感悟
适用年级:
选择性必修1
对应版本:
沪教牛津版
常考题目:
记录一次志愿服务的经历与感悟
一、话题解读
本话题是沪教牛津版高中英语选择性必修1的重点写作内容。常考题目有“记录一次志愿服
务的经历与感悟”等,核心考察学生叙述经历和表达感悟的能力。该话题在期中、期末及高
考英语写作中较为常见,多以记叙文形式出现。
二、核心词汇与短语
1.核心词汇(18个)
1.dedicate/dedrkert/v.致力于;奉献
2.contribute/kan'trIbju:t/v.贡献;捐献
3.compassion/kem'paeJn/n.同情;怜悯
4.collaboration/ka,laebe'reIJn/n.合作;协作
5.perseverance/,p3:se'vIerans/.n.毅力;坚持不懈
6.tolerance/'tplerens/n.宽容;容忍
7.gratitude/'graettju:d/n.感激;感谢
8.empathy/'empeei/n.同理心;共鸣
9.diverse/dar'v3:s/adj.多样的;不同的
1O.voluntary'vplentri/adj..自愿的;志愿的
11.mutual/mju:tfuel/adj.相互的;彼此的
12.significant/sIg'nIfIkent/adj.重要的;有意义的
13.practical /'praektkl/adj..实际的;实用的
14.enrich /In'ritN.丰富;充实
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15.strengthen/'strenen/.加强;巩固
16.devotion/dr'veu[n/n.奉献;忠诚
17.harmonious/ha:'ma5nies/adj.和谐的;和睦的
18.inspire/n'spaIe/.激励;鼓舞
2.核心短语(12个)
1.voluntary service志愿服务
2.make a difference产生影响
3.team up with与…合作
4.overcome difficulties克服困难
5.show compassion for对…表示同情
6.cultivate a sense of responsibility培养责任感
7.mutual help and support互助互励
8.enrich one's life experience丰富人生阅历
9.contribute to society为社会做贡献
1O.develop empathy and tolerance培养同理心与宽容
11.build harmonious relationships建立和谐关系
12.gain practical skills获得实用技能
三、高级句型模板
1.结构:“only+状语”倒装结构
Only by dedicating ourselves to voluntary service can we truly make a
difference in society.
2.结构:非限制性定语从句
We spent the whole day helping the elderly clean their rooms and chat
with them,which enabled us to develop empathy and tolerance.
3.结构:形式主语t句型
It is crucial that we should cultivate a sense of responsibility when par-
ticipating in voluntary service.
4.结构:让步状语从句
Although we encountered many difficulties during the voluntary service,
we still managed to overcome them with mutual help and support.
5.结构:现在分词作状语
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Showing compassion for those in need,we can build harmonious rela-
tionships with people from diverse backgrounds.
6.结构:动名词作主语句型
Participating in voluntary service is an effective way to enrich our life
experience and gain practical skills.
7.结构:not only..but also.并列结构
Not only can voluntary service contribute to society,but also it can strengthen
our sense of dedication and inspire us to help others.
8.结构:“the+比较级.,the+比较级”句型
The more we engage in voluntary service,the deeper we will understand
the significance of mutual help and support.
四、满分范文示范
A Memorable Voluntary Service Experience
Last summer vacation,I participated in a voluntary service program at a local senior citizens'
home,_which turned out to be a significant and enriching experience in my life
On the first day,I teamed up with five other volunteers to assist the elderly with their daily
needs.We helped them clean their rooms,read newspapers,and chat about their life stories
Although some elderly people had hearing difficulties and spoke with heavy accents,we still
managed to communicate by using gestures and simple words,__which enabled us to
develop empathy and tolerance.Showing compassion for an 85-year-old grandma who
rarely received visitors,I spent extra time listening to her talk about her youth,and her eyes
sparkled with joy when she shared old photos with me.
During the two-week service,we encountered various challenges,such as organizing a small
concert for the elderly.We had different opinions on the performance program,but through
mutual help and support,we finally put on a wonderful show.The elderly's applause and
grateful smiles made all our efforts worthwhile._It is crucial that we should cultivate a
sense of responsibility when participating in such activities,as every small action can make
a difference in others'lives.
Participating in voluntary service is an effective way to enrich our life experience and gain
practical skills._Not only did I learn how to communicate with people from diverse back-
grounds,but I also strengthened my sense of devotion to society.-The more we engage
in voluntary service,the deeper we will understand the significance of mutual help and sup-
port in building harmonious relationships.
Only by dedicating ourselves to helping those in need can we truly contribute to society
and inspire others to join us.This experience taught me that voluntary service is not just
about giving,but also about growing as a responsible and compassionate individual.I will
definitely continue to participate in such meaningful activities in the future.
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