Unit 2 Section Ⅳ Writing-(配套教参)【精讲精练】2025-2026学年高中英语必修第三册(外研版)

本讲义聚焦人物传记写作核心知识点，系统梳理“总—分—总”结构（首段总体介绍、中段具体事迹、尾段评价），提供各段落常用句型支架（如首段人物介绍句型、中段事迹描述句型、尾段评价句型），并通过审题构思、遣词造句、句式升级（合并句子、改写句型）到连句成篇的步骤，构建从基础句型积累到篇章写作的完整学习支架。 该资料以屠呦呦传记写作为任务载体，亮点在于融合句型模板、句式升级指导与范文示范，助力学生提升语言能力（如用过去分词作状语合并句子、倒装句型改写），培养思维品质（逻辑整合人物信息）。课中教师可按步骤引导写作，课后学生可参考模板与范文自查，有效弥补写作中的结构混乱、句式单一等问题。

Unit 2　Section Ⅳ　Writing [对应学生用书P46] 人物传记 人物传记是记载人物生平事迹的一种文体。此类文章以人物为中心组织材料，围绕这一人物写一件或几件事，一般按照时间顺序来写。写人物传记时要重点描述其出生年月、主要事迹以及人们的评价等。文章一般可按照“总—分—总”的结构来写作。 首段：总体介绍人物 ①He has made great contributions in the field of... ②Thomas Edison，born in America，was a great scientist and inventor. ③Helen Keller is one of my favourite writers.She is an ordinary but great woman. ④Born in 1930，Yuan Longping is recognized as one of China's greatest scientists，a pioneer for all people. 中段：具体介绍人物 ①He was highly thought of by Von Karman，a famous scientist at that time，because of his great achievements. ②She has been devoting all her time to researching into... ③Thanks to her creative work，China is playing a leading role in... ④He was devoted to this profession so much that he often worked until midnight. ⑤Whatever difficulty he came across，he never gave up. 尾段：总体评价人物 ①He was regarded as “the father of...”． ②He has set a good example to us. ③From her，I realise that as long as we keep on trying，we will achieve our dreams. ④Many of us regard him as our model，whose deeds encourage us to follow our passion and strive for our dreams. ⑤Not only did she make great contributions to science but she was also considered as the greatest woman scientist throughout the world. 请你根据教材P30的信息，写一篇关于中国首位获得诺贝尔生理学或医学奖的科学家屠呦呦的人物传记。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 [审题构思] 体裁：记叙文 人称：第三人称 时态：一般过去时 内容：首段：简要介绍人物以及主要成就； 中段：具体介绍人物经历过的主要事件； 尾段：进行评论和总结。 [遣词造句] 1．2015年，中国科学家首次获得诺贝尔生理学或医学奖。 In 2015，for the first time，a Chinese scientist won the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine. 2．她在1930年12月30日出生于浙江省宁波市。 She was born in Ningbo，Zhejiang Province on 30 December 1930. 3．1951年至1955年，屠呦呦就读于北京医学院。 Tu Youyou studied at Beijing Medical College from 1951 to 1955. 4．1955年起，她在中国中医科学院任终身兼首席研究员。 Since 1955，she has been working at China Academy of Chinese Medical Sciences as a tenured and chief researcher. 5．1969年，她担任一个研究小组的组长，该小组旨在发现疟疾的治疗方法。 In 1969，she worked as the leader of a research team that aimed to discover a treatment for malaria. 6．1972年，她成功从一种中草药中提取出了能有效对抗疟疾的青蒿素。 In 1972，she managed to extract qinghaosu from a Chinese herb，which is effective in fighting malaria. 7．由于她的巨大贡献，她在2019年被提名为“20世纪最伟大的人”。 Because of her great contribution，she was nominated for “The Greatest Person of the 20th Century” in 2019. 8．屠呦呦不仅拯救了许多疟疾患者，而且还证明了中草药的有效性。 Tu Youyou not only has saved many people from suffering from malaria，but also has proved the effectiveness of Chinese herbs. 9．她之所以受人钦佩，是因为她把大部分时间和精力都用于医学研究。 She is admired because she devotes most of her time and energy to medical research． [句式升级] 10．用过去分词短语作状语合并句2和句3。 Born in Ningbo，Zhejiang Province on 30 December 1930，Tu Youyou studied at Beijing Medical College from 1951 to 1955. 11．用现在分词短语作定语改写句5。 In 1969，she worked as the leader of a research team aiming to discover a treatment for malaria. 12．用倒装句型改写句8。 Not only has Tu Youyou saved many people from suffering from malaria，but also she has proved the effectiveness of Chinese herbs. [连句成篇] One possible version： In 2015，for the first time，a Chinese scientist won the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine.She is Tu Youyou. Born in Ningbo，Zhejiang Province on 30 December 1930，Tu Youyou studied at Beijing Medical College from 1951 to 1955.Since 1955，she has been working at China Academy of Chinese Medical Sciences as a tenured and chief researcher.In 1969，she worked as the leader of a research team aiming to discover a treatment for malaria.In 1972，she managed to extract qinghaosu from a Chinese herb，which is effective in fighting malaria.Because of her great contribution，she was nominated for “The Greatest Person of the 20th Century” in 2019. Not only has Tu Youyou saved many people from suffering from malaria，but also she has proved the effectiveness of Chinese herbs.Furthermore，she is admired because she devotes most of her time and energy to medical research. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $