专题10 材料命题类作文（复习讲义）（上海专用）2026年中考英语一轮复习讲练测

该初中英语讲义聚焦材料命题类作文，精准对接中考核心考点，涵盖应用文（书信类）格式规范、四大主题（校园生活、社会参与等）及观点论证逻辑。通过“考情剖析-题型破解-解题要点-真题训练”架构梳理考点联系，设计考点梳理、方法指导、真题讲解环节，帮助学生突破文体转换与功能表达难点，体现复习系统性与针对性。 亮点在于“三维靶向突破”策略，如通过2021-2025年书信真题解析训练语言能力，结合“申请信观点论证”案例培养思维品质，配套12道分层模拟题（校园建议、社会议题等）强化实战。特设“素材积累-结构搭建-亮点表达”三步法，助力学生高效提升写作综合素养，教师可依此把控复习节奏，实现精准提分。

专题10 材料命题类作文 目 录 01·考情剖析·命题前瞻 2 02·时空导航·网络构建 3 03·题型通关·靶向突破 3 考点一 题型破解 3 命题特点 围绕个人成长、生活经历、社会现象等展开，贴近学生生活，注重教育意义。 核心考查 描述经历、计划；分析原因、影响或意义。表达个人观点、感受或建议。 考点二 解题要点 4 题型 1. 校园热点 2. 个人经历 3. 社会热点 04·优题精选·练能提分 9 年份 题目 / 题型描述 文体类型 主题类别 2020 Everyone can be special (每个人都能与众不同) 议论文 人生哲理 2021 给教导处张老师写封信，推荐社团活动 应用文 (书信) 校园生活 2022 给校报张老师写封邮件，关于活动室用途建议 应用文 (邮件) 校园建设 2023 给社区负责人写邮件，对 "时间管理" 培训提建议 应用文 (邮件) 社会参与 2024 选送礼物及贺卡写话 说明文 自然与生活 2025 选择英语项目化小组 (A/B/C) 写申请信 应用文 (申请信) 学术探究 考点一 题型破解 一、题型演变趋势 2018-2020 年：以命题作文为主，侧重个人经历与感悟，如 "My progress" 和 "Everyone can be special"，文体多为记叙或夹叙夹议。 2021-2025 年：转向以应用文为主体裁，连续五年 (2021-2025) 考查书信类写作，包括推荐信、建议信、申请信等。题目设计更强调功能性与实用性，要求学生在真实情境中解决问题。 二、命题特点与趋势分析 1. 文体变化：从 "表达情感"到"完成任务" 早期 (2018-2020)：以命题作文为主，侧重个人情感表达 近期 (2021-2025)：应用文占主导，强调解决实际问题的能力 2025 年：进一步深化为 "应用型议论文"，要求在申请信中阐述观点并论证 2. 话题聚焦：四大主题领域 校园生活：如社团活动、校园设施建设 (占比最高) 社会参与：如社区服务、公共事务建议 个人成长：如自我提升、生活感悟 学术探究：如对特定话题 (健康、学习方法等) 的讨论 3. 能力考查：从 "语言技能"到"综合素养" 思维能力：强调批判性思考、观点论证和逻辑表达 交际能力：考查不同场合的得体表达和沟通技巧 上海市教育考试院 创新能力：鼓励提出独特见解和解决方案 三、备考策略建议 1. 文体准备重点 掌握书信类应用文的标准格式 (称呼、正文、结尾、署名) 练习观点表达类写作的论证结构 (论点→论据→结论) 熟悉夹叙夹议的写作模式 (先描述经历，再谈感悟) 2. 话题准备方向 关注校园热点：社团活动、学习方法、校园设施 了解社会议题：环保、社区服务、时间管理 积累个人经历素材：学习进步、克服困难、兴趣爱好 3. 高分技巧 内容：确保覆盖题目所有要点，观点明确且有深度 语言：使用多样化句型，避免简单重复，适当使用高级词汇 结构：开头点明主题，中间分点论述，结尾总结升华 格式：应用文严格遵循标准格式，尤其是 2025 年的申请信 四、总结与展望 上海中考英语作文已从传统的 "命题作文" 模式转向 "应用文 + 功能性写作"，更强调在真实情境中运用英语解决问题的能力。未来命题将继续保持这一趋势，进一步弱化模板化写作，强化思维深度和表达真实性。建议考生在备考中注重语言基本功与实际应用能力的双重提升，尤其是书信类应用文的写作规范和观点论证技巧。 考点二 解题要点 【写作进阶秘诀】 · 扩充词汇量：积累更多的词汇和短语，提高表达能力。可以根据不同的话题分类整理词汇，以便在写作时灵活运用。 · 学习语法：掌握英语基本语法规则，避免在写作中出现错误。可以通过做语法练习、参加英语角等形式提高语法水平。 · 背诵、模仿优秀范文和好句子：阅读历年中考英语作文优秀范文，学习其中的写作技巧、句型和表达方式，模仿其为我所用。最好能够熟练背诵若干篇优秀范文，或者适当背诵一些结构化的好句子，用以提升作文的逻辑性和结构化。 · 注重素材积累：关注生活中的热点话题，积累素材，以便在写作时能结合实际发表观点。有这种鲜活的素材很容易拉分。 · 结构清晰：使用总分或总分总的结构，避免结构散漫，想哪儿写哪儿。 · 使用复合句：多用状语从句、宾语从句、定语从句及一些重要的句型，也可以使用被动语态，避免全篇都是简单句。 · 合理使用连词：加入一些连词，如“To my surprise”、“What’s more”等，让上文与下文衔接更紧密，意思也能更流畅地表达。 【写作中常见问题】 · 内容空洞，没有清晰的思路，表达能力不强，表达生硬呆板，甚至中式英语翻译思维。 · 议论过多，描写不足。大多数情况下，把议论当成的作文的重点，常常跑题。 · 句式单一，都是简单句，缺少复合句。 · 结构散漫，思维跳跃，文章缺乏条理性。 · 连词的使用较少，并且使用单一，句子之间的连接很生硬。 · 文章平淡，无亮点短语和句型，连接词等。 【典例】 2024上海英语中考作文范文 假如你是李枫，就要送别学校国际交流节上认识的外国生Frank, 你给他送了一个有中国元素的礼物，请你为他写一张贺卡，并写上你对他说的话。 1. 礼物的名称、特色、功能等 2. 选择这份礼物的理由 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 思路分析 ①题材：本文是应用文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点,在每个要点下要适当增加细节，使表述内容更完整。 要点：礼物卡—中国元素，礼物的名称、特色、功能，选择这份礼物的理由。有中国元素的礼物可以是书画作品，诗集，剪纸等体现中国文化的艺术作品，也可以是蕴含中国文化的日常饮食。这里我们以茶文化为例，选择茶叶作为礼物进行写作。 列提纲 第一步，交代背景，表达对于Frank即将要回国的恋恋不舍。 第二步，介绍具体中国特色礼物的名称，特色，功能等。可以从礼物的材质、制作过程、用途等方面写。 第三步，送这份礼物的理由。可以从见证友谊、怀念美好时光等方面写。 参考范文01 Dear Frank,    Hearing that you are leaving China, I’m sorry to part company with you. As one of your good friends, I’ll present you with the Chinese knot which was made by myself. It is created with just one red string. When it is completed, its head is connected with its end, signifying the cycle of life and its endless vitality. The traditional gift in the shape of the fish symbolizes our valuable friendship and a good time that we have spent together. I hope you will hang it from the window to decorate your house. Whenever you see it, you will think of me and the unforgettable time in China. Take care and have a safe journey. 115 words Yours, Li Feng 参考范文02 Dear Frank, We have had a wonderful time since we met at the International Cultural Exchange Festival. Sadly, it’s time to say goodbye. Before you leave, I would like to send you Chinese tea as a gift. In China, tea has a very long history and has formed Chinese tea culture. Drinking tea is not only beneficial to our health, but it is also regarded as a way of relaxation. As I know that you are keen on Chinese tea culture and love drinking Chinese tea, I chose it as a gift. I hope you will enjoy Chinese tea with your family when you are back home and look forward to your next visit to China in the future. Yours, Li Feng 01 1．Write an email of at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一封不少于60个词的电子邮件，标点符号不占格） 假设你是李华，英国笔友Mike和你分享了法国著名文学家阿尔贝·加缪的一句话：“All great actions and thoughts have a trivial beginning（一切伟大的行动和思想, 都有一个微不足道的开始）。”一次帮助、一次尝试、一次坚持……这些看似微小的开端都能促成动人的成长故事。请给Mike回一封电子邮件，讲讲自己的成长故事和对于这句话的感触。 注意： 1. 文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2. 标题和开头已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数。 3. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。 Dear Mike, Thank you for sharing the saying. I have come to understand that small things can make a big difference. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Talk soon, Li Hua 02 2．Write a passage in at least 60 words according to the following situation. (以“Golden Ideas for the School Science Fair”为题，根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)   科技点燃梦想，创新引领未来！你们学校第10届科技节即将开幕，现向全体同学征集活动“金点子”——无论是邀请大咖做科技讲座、举行趣味实验比拼、还是……只要你的活动创意新颖、可行性强，就有机会被采纳并亮相科技节！快来用你的智慧，为校园科技盛宴添彩！ (注意：1. 写作中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。) ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 03 3．Write at least 60 words on the topic “________ influenced me most”. (在你成长过程中可能有很多的人、事、物在潜移默化地影响着你，那么对你影响最深的是谁？是什么？请以《 ________ 深深地影响了我》为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 注意：1. 在答题纸上将题目补充完整。 2. 短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 04 4．Write at least 60 words on the topic “It’s worth doing.” 请以“It’s worth doing”为题，写一篇不少于60词的英语短文。 所谓：“心之所向，素履以往。但凡值得，万山无阻。”值得的，从来不是那个辉煌的结果，而是那个在此过程中变得愈发坚韧、豁达和成熟的自己。生命的丰厚，正是由这些“值得”的瞬间堆砌而成。请阐述你认为“值得”的一件事，并解释其原因。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 05 5．Write at least 60 words about the topic “Is AI a good helper?” (请以“AI是一个好帮手吗?”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 随着科技的飞速发展，人工智能(AI)已逐渐融入我们的日常生活。像ChatGPT、Kimi、DeepSeek等AI工具的出现，让学习、工作和交流变得更加高效。你认为AI是一个好帮手吗? 请结合具体例子谈谈你的看法和感受。 注意： 1) 文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 照抄试卷中内容不得分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 05 Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 假设你是初三学生李枫，你校初三年级即将举办一个主题为“校园记忆”的展览活动。学校邀请每位初三学生提供一张与校园生活相关的照片，并为该照片撰写一段介绍文字供参观者阅读。 介绍文字内容包括： ●照片的题目 ●照片的简要描述 ●照片对你个人和校园生活的意义 (注意：1. 短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 07 Write at least 60 words on the topic “Connecting the Past and Present” according to the given situation（根据以下情境，以“连接过去与现在”为题写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 1)你家是否有一件物品或技能可以承载着你们家庭的某些记忆？ 2)它是如何将过去与现在建立起来的？ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 08 Write at least 60 words on the topic “My view on going to the tutorial center” (以“补习班上课之我见”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 由于升学的压力，现在越来越多的学生选择在课余去上补习班 (tutorial center)。有的人认为补习班上课可以弥补课堂学习的不足，帮助提升成绩和能力。而有的人认为补习班学习纯粹是浪费时间。你怎么看？请以“My view on going to the tutorial center”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。 The following is for reference only. (以下问题仅供参考) *Are you for or against going to the tutorial center for extra classes? *What are your reasons? *What do you think is the best way to improve your academic performance (提升学业成绩)? 注意：短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 09 Write at least 60 words on the topic “My favourite story”. ( 以“我最喜欢的一个故事”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) Suggested questions: 1. What is the story mainly about? 2. Why do you like the story? 3. What can you learn from the story? (注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10 Write at least 60 words on the topic “My home in 2035”.  (根据提示，以“2035年我的家”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） 科技的发展日新月异，各种各样的智能设备构成了智能家居系统。2035年你的家可能是怎么样的？请设计并介绍一下你智能家中的设备 (不少于2个)，以及你这样设计的原因。 Guiding questions: 1. What will your home be like in 2035? 2. What kind of smart devices would you like to have in your home in 2035? 3. Why would you like to have these devices? (注意：勿出现任何与你的学校、姓名等相关的信息。) _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11 Write at least 60 words according to the given information (根据以下材料。写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 请从中选择你比较有感触的一条，可结合自己的经历，谈谈你的体会。 Friendship doesn’t just happen. It takes time and patience. As long as you keep smiling, life will smile to you. I can accept failure, but I cannot accept not trying (注意：短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12 Write at least 60 words on the topic “Good communication plays an important role in our life”. 良好的沟通在我们的生活中起着非常重要的作用，学校正在开展以“沟通”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请写一篇不少于60词的短文，分享你的一段经历，并谈谈你的想法和感受。The following questions are for reference: 1. What problem/trouble did you meet? 2. How did you solve the problem through communication? 3. What have you learn from the experience? The following words are just for reference:（以下单词仅供参考） misunderstand, communicate, realize, relationship, helpful （注意：短文中不得出现真实姓名和校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分） _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 / 18 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题10 材料命题类作文 目 录 01·考情剖析·命题前瞻 2 02·时空导航·网络构建 3 03·题型通关·靶向突破 3 考点一 题型破解 3 命题特点 围绕个人成长、生活经历、社会现象等展开，贴近学生生活，注重教育意义。 核心考查 描述经历、计划；分析原因、影响或意义。表达个人观点、感受或建议。 考点二 解题要点 4 题型 1. 校园热点 2. 个人经历 3. 社会热点 04·优题精选·练能提分 9 年份 题目 / 题型描述 文体类型 主题类别 2020 Everyone can be special (每个人都能与众不同) 议论文 人生哲理 2021 给教导处张老师写封信，推荐社团活动 应用文 (书信) 校园生活 2022 给校报张老师写封邮件，关于活动室用途建议 应用文 (邮件) 校园建设 2023 给社区负责人写邮件，对 "时间管理" 培训提建议 应用文 (邮件) 社会参与 2024 选送礼物及贺卡写话 说明文 自然与生活 2025 选择英语项目化小组 (A/B/C) 写申请信 应用文 (申请信) 学术探究 考点一 题型破解 一、题型演变趋势 2018-2020 年：以命题作文为主，侧重个人经历与感悟，如 "My progress" 和 "Everyone can be special"，文体多为记叙或夹叙夹议。 2021-2025 年：转向以应用文为主体裁，连续五年 (2021-2025) 考查书信类写作，包括推荐信、建议信、申请信等。题目设计更强调功能性与实用性，要求学生在真实情境中解决问题。 二、命题特点与趋势分析 1. 文体变化：从 "表达情感"到"完成任务" 早期 (2018-2020)：以命题作文为主，侧重个人情感表达 近期 (2021-2025)：应用文占主导，强调解决实际问题的能力 2025 年：进一步深化为 "应用型议论文"，要求在申请信中阐述观点并论证 2. 话题聚焦：四大主题领域 校园生活：如社团活动、校园设施建设 (占比最高) 社会参与：如社区服务、公共事务建议 个人成长：如自我提升、生活感悟 学术探究：如对特定话题 (健康、学习方法等) 的讨论 3. 能力考查：从 "语言技能"到"综合素养" 思维能力：强调批判性思考、观点论证和逻辑表达 交际能力：考查不同场合的得体表达和沟通技巧 上海市教育考试院 创新能力：鼓励提出独特见解和解决方案 三、备考策略建议 1. 文体准备重点 掌握书信类应用文的标准格式 (称呼、正文、结尾、署名) 练习观点表达类写作的论证结构 (论点→论据→结论) 熟悉夹叙夹议的写作模式 (先描述经历，再谈感悟) 2. 话题准备方向 关注校园热点：社团活动、学习方法、校园设施 了解社会议题：环保、社区服务、时间管理 积累个人经历素材：学习进步、克服困难、兴趣爱好 3. 高分技巧 内容：确保覆盖题目所有要点，观点明确且有深度 语言：使用多样化句型，避免简单重复，适当使用高级词汇 结构：开头点明主题，中间分点论述，结尾总结升华 格式：应用文严格遵循标准格式，尤其是 2025 年的申请信 四、总结与展望 上海中考英语作文已从传统的 "命题作文" 模式转向 "应用文 + 功能性写作"，更强调在真实情境中运用英语解决问题的能力。未来命题将继续保持这一趋势，进一步弱化模板化写作，强化思维深度和表达真实性。建议考生在备考中注重语言基本功与实际应用能力的双重提升，尤其是书信类应用文的写作规范和观点论证技巧。 考点二 解题要点 【写作进阶秘诀】 · 扩充词汇量：积累更多的词汇和短语，提高表达能力。可以根据不同的话题分类整理词汇，以便在写作时灵活运用。 · 学习语法：掌握英语基本语法规则，避免在写作中出现错误。可以通过做语法练习、参加英语角等形式提高语法水平。 · 背诵、模仿优秀范文和好句子：阅读历年中考英语作文优秀范文，学习其中的写作技巧、句型和表达方式，模仿其为我所用。最好能够熟练背诵若干篇优秀范文，或者适当背诵一些结构化的好句子，用以提升作文的逻辑性和结构化。 · 注重素材积累：关注生活中的热点话题，积累素材，以便在写作时能结合实际发表观点。有这种鲜活的素材很容易拉分。 · 结构清晰：使用总分或总分总的结构，避免结构散漫，想哪儿写哪儿。 · 使用复合句：多用状语从句、宾语从句、定语从句及一些重要的句型，也可以使用被动语态，避免全篇都是简单句。 · 合理使用连词：加入一些连词，如“To my surprise”、“What’s more”等，让上文与下文衔接更紧密，意思也能更流畅地表达。 【写作中常见问题】 · 内容空洞，没有清晰的思路，表达能力不强，表达生硬呆板，甚至中式英语翻译思维。 · 议论过多，描写不足。大多数情况下，把议论当成的作文的重点，常常跑题。 · 句式单一，都是简单句，缺少复合句。 · 结构散漫，思维跳跃，文章缺乏条理性。 · 连词的使用较少，并且使用单一，句子之间的连接很生硬。 · 文章平淡，无亮点短语和句型，连接词等。 【典例】 2024上海英语中考作文范文 假如你是李枫，就要送别学校国际交流节上认识的外国生Frank, 你给他送了一个有中国元素的礼物，请你为他写一张贺卡，并写上你对他说的话。 1. 礼物的名称、特色、功能等 2. 选择这份礼物的理由 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 思路分析 ①题材：本文是应用文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点,在每个要点下要适当增加细节，使表述内容更完整。 要点：礼物卡—中国元素，礼物的名称、特色、功能，选择这份礼物的理由。有中国元素的礼物可以是书画作品，诗集，剪纸等体现中国文化的艺术作品，也可以是蕴含中国文化的日常饮食。这里我们以茶文化为例，选择茶叶作为礼物进行写作。 列提纲 第一步，交代背景，表达对于Frank即将要回国的恋恋不舍。 第二步，介绍具体中国特色礼物的名称，特色，功能等。可以从礼物的材质、制作过程、用途等方面写。 第三步，送这份礼物的理由。可以从见证友谊、怀念美好时光等方面写。 参考范文01 Dear Frank,    Hearing that you are leaving China, I’m sorry to part company with you. As one of your good friends, I’ll present you with the Chinese knot which was made by myself. It is created with just one red string. When it is completed, its head is connected with its end, signifying the cycle of life and its endless vitality. The traditional gift in the shape of the fish symbolizes our valuable friendship and a good time that we have spent together. I hope you will hang it from the window to decorate your house. Whenever you see it, you will think of me and the unforgettable time in China. Take care and have a safe journey. 115 words Yours, Li Feng 参考范文02 Dear Frank, We have had a wonderful time since we met at the International Cultural Exchange Festival. Sadly, it’s time to say goodbye. Before you leave, I would like to send you Chinese tea as a gift. In China, tea has a very long history and has formed Chinese tea culture. Drinking tea is not only beneficial to our health, but it is also regarded as a way of relaxation. As I know that you are keen on Chinese tea culture and love drinking Chinese tea, I chose it as a gift. I hope you will enjoy Chinese tea with your family when you are back home and look forward to your next visit to China in the future. Yours, Li Feng 01 1．Write an email of at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一封不少于60个词的电子邮件，标点符号不占格） 假设你是李华，英国笔友Mike和你分享了法国著名文学家阿尔贝·加缪的一句话：“All great actions and thoughts have a trivial beginning（一切伟大的行动和思想, 都有一个微不足道的开始）。”一次帮助、一次尝试、一次坚持……这些看似微小的开端都能促成动人的成长故事。请给Mike回一封电子邮件，讲讲自己的成长故事和对于这句话的感触。 注意： 1. 文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2. 标题和开头已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数。 3. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。 Dear Mike, Thank you for sharing the saying. I have come to understand that small things can make a big difference. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Talk soon, Li Hua 【答案】 例文 Dear Mike, Thank you for sharing the saying. I have come to understand that small things can make a big difference. Last summer, I tried to learn swimming. At first, I was afraid of water and failed many times. But I practiced every weekend. After two months, I finally swam across the pool. This small beginning taught me perseverance. It made me realize that all great actions start from tiny efforts. Now, I believe even small steps can lead to big success. I feel more confident in facing challenges. Talk soon, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：主要使用一般过去时和一般现在时； ③提示：需结合个人成长故事，围绕“微小的开端可以成就伟大”展开，体现对名言的理解与感悟，语言真诚，内容连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，点明对名言的初步理解，自然过渡到个人成长故事； 第二步，具体讲述学游泳的经历：从害怕水、多次失败，到坚持每周练习，最终成功横渡泳池，呈现“微不足道的开始”到成长的过程； 第三步，书写感悟，点明这段经历教会自己坚持，呼应加缪的名言，表达对挑战的信心，收束全文。 [亮点词汇] ①make a big difference产生重大影响 ②be afraid of害怕 ③taught me perseverance教会我坚持 ④lead to big success带来巨大成功 [高分句型] ①I have come to understand that small things can make a big difference.（宾语从句） ②It made me realize that all great actions start from tiny efforts.（宾语从句） ③Now, I believe even small steps can lead to big success.（宾语从句） 02 2．Write a passage in at least 60 words according to the following situation. (以“Golden Ideas for the School Science Fair”为题，根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)   科技点燃梦想，创新引领未来！你们学校第10届科技节即将开幕，现向全体同学征集活动“金点子”——无论是邀请大咖做科技讲座、举行趣味实验比拼、还是……只要你的活动创意新颖、可行性强，就有机会被采纳并亮相科技节！快来用你的智慧，为校园科技盛宴添彩！ (注意：1. 写作中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。) ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Golden Ideas for the School Science Fair The 10th School Science Fair is coming, and I have a great idea, which is called “Mystery Science Quiz”. Students solve real-world problems through fun experiments. We can also set up an “Eco-Invention Zone” to show projects that promote sustainability, like waste-reducing designs. These activities will make learning engaging. With these activities, the Science Fair will not only be educational but also full of excitement and creativity. Let’s make this year’s event the best one yet! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：以一般现在时为主； ③提示：根据题干进行写作，并适当添加内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明活动名称； 第二步，阐述核心活动形式及作用； 第三步，强调活动的意义。 [亮点词汇] ①set up 建立 ②promote sustainability 促进可持续发展 ③engaging 吸引人的 [高分句型] ①The 10th School Science Fair is coming, and I have a great idea, which is called “Mystery Science Quiz”. (which引导定语从句) ②We can also set up an “Eco-Invention Zone” to show projects that promote sustainability, like waste-reducing designs. (that引导定语从句) 03 3．Write at least 60 words on the topic “________ influenced me most”. (在你成长过程中可能有很多的人、事、物在潜移默化地影响着你，那么对你影响最深的是谁？是什么？请以《 ________ 深深地影响了我》为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 注意：1. 在答题纸上将题目补充完整。 2. 短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文: My Primary School Teacher Influenced Me Most When I was in Grade 7, I was too shy to talk in class. I even hid behind books when the teacher asked questions. My primary school teacher noticed this. She often picked easy questions for me and praised my answers loudly in front of the class. Her small acts boosted my confidence. Now, I’m active in group discussions and dare to share ideas. It was her patience that made me brave. I’ll keep her warmth in my heart forever. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：以一般过去时和一般现在时为主； ③提示：需补充标题，围绕“影响最深的人/事/物”展开，避免出现真实信息。 [写作步骤] 第一步：补充标题，确定核心对象，明确其影响自己的具体方面； 第二步：选取1—2个具体事例，描述事件过程与自身的变化； 第三步：总结影响的结果，升华主题。 [亮点词汇] ① boost my confidence增强我的自信 ② patience耐心 ③ active积极的 [高分句型] It was her patience that made me brave.（运用了强调句型） 04 4．Write at least 60 words on the topic “It’s worth doing.” 请以“It’s worth doing”为题，写一篇不少于60词的英语短文。 所谓：“心之所向，素履以往。但凡值得，万山无阻。”值得的，从来不是那个辉煌的结果，而是那个在此过程中变得愈发坚韧、豁达和成熟的自己。生命的丰厚，正是由这些“值得”的瞬间堆砌而成。请阐述你认为“值得”的一件事，并解释其原因。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 It’s worth doing Last semester, I participated in the school English speech contest, which was a tough task at first. I felt extremely nervous when practicing, and my pronunciation was not accurate at all. Though I almost gave up several times, I persevered: I practiced speaking in front of the mirror every evening and turned to my teacher for guidance. Eventually, I didn’t get the top award, but I became much more confident when communicating publicly. This experience is truly worth doing. It’s not the result but the process that made me more resilient—those efforts have enriched my courage to face challenges bravely later. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”； ③提示：需围绕一件“值得做”的事展开，重点描述过程困难及个人成长收获，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍值得做的一件事是什么并描述过程； 第二步，介绍结果及从中获得的收获。 [亮点词汇] ①give up放弃 ②extremely非常 ③turn to sb.求助于某人 [高分句型] ①Last semester, I participated in the school English speech contest, which was a tough task at first. (which引导定语从句) ②Eventually, I didn’t get the top award, but I became much more confident when communicating publicly. (but连接的并列句) 05 5．Write at least 60 words about the topic “Is AI a good helper?” (请以“AI是一个好帮手吗?”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 随着科技的飞速发展，人工智能(AI)已逐渐融入我们的日常生活。像ChatGPT、Kimi、DeepSeek等AI工具的出现，让学习、工作和交流变得更加高效。你认为AI是一个好帮手吗? 请结合具体例子谈谈你的看法和感受。 注意： 1) 文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 照抄试卷中内容不得分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】       I think AI is a great helper. For example, when I do homework, AI tools like DeepSeek can quickly provide useful information. They help me learn faster and solve difficult problems. Also, AI makes our lives more convenient, such as by giving weather reports or translating languages. However, we should not depend on AI too much. We still need to think by ourselves. In short, AI is a good helper if we use it wisely. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：一般现在时（讨论普遍事实和个人观点） ③提示：需结合具体例子说明AI是否是好帮手，避免个人信息。 [写作步骤] 第一步：明确观点——开头直接表明立场； 第二步：举例论证——用学习、生活等具体例子支持观点（如“help with homework”“weather reports”）。 第三步：总结建议——强调合理使用AI的重要性，并简要总结。 [亮点词汇] ①provide提供 ②convenient 方便的 ③wisely 明智地 [高分句型] ①For example, when I do homework, AI tools like DeepSeek can quickly provide useful information.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句） ②They help me learn faster and solve difficult problems.（运用了and连接的并列动词结构） ③AI is a good helper if we use it wisely.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句） 05 Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 假设你是初三学生李枫，你校初三年级即将举办一个主题为“校园记忆”的展览活动。学校邀请每位初三学生提供一张与校园生活相关的照片，并为该照片撰写一段介绍文字供参观者阅读。 介绍文字内容包括： ●照片的题目 ●照片的简要描述 ●照片对你个人和校园生活的意义 (注意：1. 短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The Moment of School It was taken during last year’s autumn sports day, and captured our class relay team crossing the finish line. In the image, four students are passing the baton with determined expressions, while classmates cheer wildly in the background. The golden sunlight highlights our unity and energy. This moment symbolizes not only our teamwork but also the spirit of overcoming challenges together. Whenever I look at it, I’m reminded of how we practiced tirelessly, supporting one another despite setbacks. It represents growth, friendship, and the joy of collective effort. For me, this photo is a treasure of my junior high life. It reflects the warmth of our campus community and the unforgettable memories we’ve created. It teaches me that success lies not just in winning but in the journey we share. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，不要忽略要点提示，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述清晰，语句通顺。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍照片的标题，并简要描述； 第二步，介绍这张照片体现的精神和意义； 第三步，总结这张照片对自己的意义和校园生活的意义。 [亮点词汇] ①determined expressions坚定的表情 ②not only...but also不仅……而且 ③the spirit of……的精神 [高分句型] ①Whenever I look at it, I’m reminded of how we practiced tirelessly, supporting one another despite setbacks.（whenever引导的时间状语从句） ②It teaches me that success lies not just in winning but in the journey we share.（that引导的宾语从句） 07 Write at least 60 words on the topic “Connecting the Past and Present” according to the given situation（根据以下情境，以“连接过去与现在”为题写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 1)你家是否有一件物品或技能可以承载着你们家庭的某些记忆？ 2)它是如何将过去与现在建立起来的？ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Connecting the Past and Present In my family, an old wooden clock has been passed down through generations. It once belonged to my great-grandfather and now stands in our living room. Every time I hear its chimes, I feel connected to the past. My father often tells stories about how it marked important family moments—like weddings and reunions. Today, we still wind it every week, keeping the tradition alive. This clock not only tells time but also reminds us of our family’s history and values. It helps me understand where I come from and inspires me to cherish our memories. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，选定物品，直接点题； 第二步，具体通过周日家庭活动建立时间连接； 第三步，升华情感价值。 [亮点词汇] ①pass down传承 ②belong to属于 ③reminds sb of sth使某人想起某事 [高分句型] ①Every time I hear its chimes, I feel connected to the past. My father often tells stories about how it marked important family moments—like weddings and reunions. (时间状语从句) ②It helps me understand where I come from and inspires me to cherish our memories. (宾语从句) 08 Write at least 60 words on the topic “My view on going to the tutorial center” (以“补习班上课之我见”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 由于升学的压力，现在越来越多的学生选择在课余去上补习班 (tutorial center)。有的人认为补习班上课可以弥补课堂学习的不足，帮助提升成绩和能力。而有的人认为补习班学习纯粹是浪费时间。你怎么看？请以“My view on going to the tutorial center”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。 The following is for reference only. (以下问题仅供参考) *Are you for or against going to the tutorial center for extra classes? *What are your reasons? *What do you think is the best way to improve your academic performance (提升学业成绩)? 注意：短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 My View on Going to the Tutorial Center    I believe going to the tutorial center is helpful. If we are weak in a subject, it can help us understand better. The teachers there can give us more practice.      In order to improve our academic performance, we should develop good habits. It is important for us to finish homework on time and review regularly. Besides, we can ask teachers for help after class.     In a word, going to the tutorial center is useful, but we shouldn’t depend on it too much. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：材料所给的提示内容需完整表达，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步：明确观点，并说明理由； 第二步：给出提高学习成绩的建议； 第三步：总结，首尾呼应。 [亮点词汇] ①helpful有帮助的 ②improve提升 ③depend on依靠，依赖 [高分句型] ①I believe going to the tutorial center is helpful. (宾语从句) ②If we are weak in a subject, it can help us understand better. (条件状语从句) ③It is important for us to finish homework on time and review regularly. (it作形式主语) 09 Write at least 60 words on the topic “My favourite story”. ( 以“我最喜欢的一个故事”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) Suggested questions: 1. What is the story mainly about? 2. Why do you like the story? 3. What can you learn from the story? (注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version My favourite story is The Little Prince. It’s a famous tale about a young prince who travels to different planets, meets strange people like a king and a businessman, and finally lands on Earth to befriend a fox and learn about love and friendship. I love it for its simple words with deep meanings, making me think about life’s true values. It teaches me genuine connections matter more than money or power, and to keep a childlike heart to see life’s beauty. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，点明最喜欢的故事； 第二步，详细介绍故事核心内容； 第三步，阐述喜爱原因与故事启示。 [亮点词汇] ①famous tale著名的故事 ②travel to different planets前往不同的星球 ③meet strange people结识奇特的人 [高分句型] ①It’s a famous tale about a young prince who travels to different planets, meets strange people like a king and a businessman, and finally lands on Earth to befriend a fox and learn about love and friendship.（who引导的定语从句） ②It teaches me genuine connections matter more than money or power, and to keep a childlike heart to see life’s beauty. （省略that的宾语从句） 10 Write at least 60 words on the topic “My home in 2035”.  (根据提示，以“2035年我的家”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） 科技的发展日新月异，各种各样的智能设备构成了智能家居系统。2035年你的家可能是怎么样的？请设计并介绍一下你智能家中的设备 (不少于2个)，以及你这样设计的原因。 Guiding questions: 1. What will your home be like in 2035? 2. What kind of smart devices would you like to have in your home in 2035? 3. Why would you like to have these devices? (注意：勿出现任何与你的学校、姓名等相关的信息。) _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Home in 2035 In 2035, my home will be a fully smart space focused on daily convenience and health. It can “understand” my needs and make life easier.​ I want a smart kitchen system most. It can learn my eating habits and prepare ingredient lists automatically. When I’m back, it will automatically start preheating the oven for my favorite cake. I also need a smart mattress. It can monitor my sleep quality and heart rate every night. If there’s something wrong, it will send alerts to my phone at once.​ These devices will save me time and keep me healthy. I’m really looking forward to my 2035 home. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包含所有提示要点，可适当补充细节，使文章内容充实；行文时多使用第一、三人称，适当运用短语和多样句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总述2035年的家是全智能空间，以便捷和健康为导向，能贴合需求、让生活更省心； 第二步，分述两种智能设备——智能厨房系统 (可学习饮食习惯、自动准备食材清单及预热烤箱) 与智能床垫 (可监测睡眠和心率、异常时发警报)； 第三步，总结智能设备的价值 (省时间、保健康)，表达对2035年家的期待。 [亮点词汇] ①look forward to 期待 ②monitor my sleep quality 监测我的睡眠质量 [高分句型] ①When I’m back, it will automatically start preheating the oven for my favorite cake. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②If there’s something wrong, it will send alerts to my phone at once. (if引导的条件状语从句) 11 Write at least 60 words according to the given information (根据以下材料。写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 请从中选择你比较有感触的一条，可结合自己的经历，谈谈你的体会。 Friendship doesn’t just happen. It takes time and patience. As long as you keep smiling, life will smile to you. I can accept failure, but I cannot accept not trying (注意：短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文一 Friendship doesn’t just happen. It takes time and patience Friendship is a precious bond that doesn’t just happen overnight. It takes time and patience to build a strong and meaningful relationship with someone. Just like planting a seed and waiting for it to grow into a beautiful tree, friendships need nurturing and care. We have to invest our time, show patience, and understand that every friendship grows at its own pace. Through shared experiences, mutual understanding, and continuous effort, we can create friendships that stand the test of time. Remember, true friendships are worth waiting for and working on. 范文二 As long as you keep smiling, life will smile to you As long as you keep smiling, life will smile to you. Smiling is not just a facial expression; it’s a powerful tool that can change your mood, attract people, and even improve your health. It’s a universal language that connects us all, transcending language barriers and cultural differences.When someone smiles, it lightens up the room, changes the mood of others, and makes things happier. A smiling person brings positivity and joy to those around them. Smiling also makes us more attractive to others. People are naturally drawn to those who smile, as it exudes a sense of warmth and friendliness. A smile can open doors and make people more approachable. So let’s smile more often and embrace the positive changes it brings. 范文三 I can accept failure, but I cannot accept not trying Life is a journey full of up and down, but by trying over and over again we can improve our abilities continuously. When I was a little girl, I began learning to play the piano. I practised hard every day to pass the test. Unfortunately, I was too nervous to remember the tune. I felt as if darkness was around me when I knew I didn’t pass. My mother asked me to decide whether I would give up. I said “No” without any hesitation. Playing the piano had given me countless happiness and I improved a lot during the preparation. Failure is the mother of success. If I can face failure bravely and keep on working hard, success must be waiting for me around the corner. 【详解】[总体分析]   ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；   ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；   ③ 提示：选择有感触的一条，结合自己的经历完成写作，注意语法准确，语意连贯。 [写作步骤]   第一步，开门见山，表明自己对友谊的观点；   第二步，结合自己的经历，谈谈体会； 第三步，总结全文，重申自己的观点。   [亮点词汇]   ①precious bond 珍贵的纽带 ②overnight 一整夜 ③build a strong and meaningful relationship with sb 与某人建立牢固且有意义的关系 ④grow into 成长为 ⑤mutual understanding 相互理解 [高分句型]   ①We have to invest our time, show patience, and understand that every friendship grows at its own pace. (that引导宾语从句) ②Through shared experiences, mutual understanding, and continuous effort, we can create friendships that stand the test of time. (that引导定语从句) 12 Write at least 60 words on the topic “Good communication plays an important role in our life”. 良好的沟通在我们的生活中起着非常重要的作用，学校正在开展以“沟通”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请写一篇不少于60词的短文，分享你的一段经历，并谈谈你的想法和感受。The following questions are for reference: 1. What problem/trouble did you meet? 2. How did you solve the problem through communication? 3. What have you learn from the experience? The following words are just for reference:（以下单词仅供参考） misunderstand, communicate, realize, relationship, helpful （注意：短文中不得出现真实姓名和校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分） _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Good communication plays an important role in our life. Last month, I had a misunderstanding with my best friend over a small issue. We stopped talking to each other, and our relationship became tense. Feeling upset, I decided to communicate openly with her. I explained my feelings and listened to her side of the story. Through this conversation, we both realized that the problem was caused by a lack of communication. After clearing the misunderstanding, our friendship became even stronger. This experience taught me that communication is essential to solving problems and maintaining healthy relationships. It helps us understand each other better and avoid unnecessary conflicts. I now believe that good communication is the key to building trust and harmony in life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时与一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你的一段经历； 第二步，分享你的想法和感受。 [亮点词汇] ①each other彼此 ②communicate…with与……交流 ③a lack of缺乏 [高分句型] ①Through this conversation, we both realized that the problem was caused by a lack of communication.（宾语从句） ②It helps us understand each other better and avoid unnecessary conflicts.（并列结构） 1 / 18 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $