内容正文:
2024-2025学年上学期山东省聊城市高二年级期末试题
应用文二次学案学生版
【真题再现】
假定你是李华,上周你参加了学校外文社组织的趣配音比赛(Funny Voice Acting)并获得一等奖。赛前你的交换生朋友Alex给了你很多鼓励和帮助。请你给他写一封电子邮件表示感谢,内容包括:
1. 告知好消息;
2. 表达感谢;
3. 邀请来家做客。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Alex,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【框架搭建】
首段
告知好消息:
关联对方:
正文
表达感谢:
强化语气:
末段
发出邀请:
传递期待:
【邮件核心表达】
1. 告知好消息
I’m thrilled to share exciting news with you—I won the first prize in the Funny Voice Acting competition! 我很兴奋地和你分享一个好消息 —— 我在趣配音比赛中获得了一等奖!
Last week, I took part in the competition organized by the Foreign Languages Club and got the first prize. 上周,我参加了外文社组织的比赛,拿到了一等奖。
The moment my name was announced as the winner, I couldn’t wait to tell you. 听到我的名字被宣布为获胜者时,我迫不及待想告诉你。
2. 表达感谢
I truly appreciate your encouragement and help before the competition. 我由衷感谢你在赛前给予我的鼓励和帮助。
Your support meant a lot to me and gave me the confidence to perform well. 你的支持对我意义重大,给了我好好表现的信心。
I couldn’t have won the prize without your valuable help. 没有你的宝贵帮助,我不可能获奖。
3. 邀请做客
To show my gratitude, I sincerely invite you to my home for a visit. 为了表达我的谢意,我诚挚邀请你到我家做客。
Let’s spend a great time together—we can chat and enjoy some snacks. 我们一起共度美好时光吧,聊聊天、尝尝小吃。
I hope you can come and let me repay your kindness in a small way. 希望你能来,让我用小小的方式回报你的善意。
【话题词汇】
趣配音比赛
意义重大
一等奖
想到
比赛
立刻
外文社
欣喜若狂
组织
宣布
获胜者
瞬间
好消息
回报
分享
善意
鼓励
宝贵的
帮助
取得成绩
感激
表现出色
谢意
信心
真挚的
支持
邀请
美好时光
做客
家
【高频表达式 + 话题词汇整合】
1. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________! (亲爱的亚历克斯,我写信是想和你分享一个好消息 —— 上周我在趣配音比赛中获得了一等奖!)
2. _______________________________________________________________________________. (比赛由我校外文社组织,我完全没想到能拿到一等奖。)
3. _______________________________________________________________________________. (当我的名字被宣布为获胜者时,我欣喜若狂,立刻就想到了你。)
4. _______________________________________________________________________________. (我由衷感谢你在赛前给予我的所有鼓励和实际帮助。)
5. _______________________________________________________________________________. (你的支持极大地增强了我的信心,让我在表演时更放松。)
6. _______________________________________________________________________________. (没有你善意的帮助和持续的鼓励,我不可能取得这么好的成绩。)
7. _______________________________________________________________________________. (为了表达我深深的谢意,我诚挚邀请你这周末来我家做客。)
8. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. (我们可以聊聊比赛,看些有趣的视频,还能尝尝我妈妈做的家常菜。)
9. _______________________________________________________________________________. (希望你能抽出时间前来,我真的很想和你共度一段愉快的时光。)
10. ________________________________________________________________________________! (再次感谢你为我所做的一切,期待你的回复和到来!)
【参考范文】
Dear Alex,
I’m writing to ______________________ with you. I ________________in the Funny Voice Acting competition organized by the Foreign Languages Club last week! The moment _________________________ as the winner, I was ___________________ and immediately thought of you.
I truly ___________ your __________________________ before the competition. Without you, I couldn’t have _______________ this.
_____________________, I sincerely invite you to my home. We can have a great time together.
Yours,
Li Hua
中文翻译
亲爱的亚历克斯:
我写信是想和你分享一个令人兴奋的好消息。上周,我参加了学校外文社组织的趣配音比赛,获得了一等奖!听到我的名字被宣布为获胜者的那一刻,我欣喜若狂,立刻就想到了你。
我由衷感谢你在赛前给予我的鼓励和帮助。没有你,我不可能取得这样的成绩。
为了表达我的谢意,我诚挚邀请你到我家做客。我们可以一起度过一段美好的时光。
此致,
李华
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2024-2025学年上学期山东省聊城市高二年级期末试题
应用文二次学案教师版
【真题再现】
假定你是李华,上周你参加了学校外文社组织的趣配音比赛(Funny Voice Acting)并获得一等奖。赛前你的交换生朋友Alex给了你很多鼓励和帮助。请你给他写一封电子邮件表示感谢,内容包括:
1. 告知好消息;
2. 表达感谢;
3. 邀请来家做客。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Alex,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【框架搭建】
首段:告知好消息 + 关联对方(约 25 词)
首句:开门见山分享喜讯(参加趣配音比赛获一等奖),语气兴奋;
第二句:描述获奖瞬间的感受(欣喜若狂),并立刻关联 Alex,突出他的重要性,为下文感谢做铺垫。
正文:真挚表达感谢(约 30 词)
核心内容:明确感谢 Alex 赛前的鼓励与帮助,直接点题;
强化语气:用 “Without you, I couldn’t have achieved this” 这样的虚拟语气,凸显对方帮助的不可或缺,让感谢更有分量。
尾段:发出邀请 + 传递期待(约 15 词)
首句:说明邀请目的(表达谢意),逻辑合理;
收尾句:简单提及相处愿景(共度美好时光),语气亲切,符合朋友间沟通氛围,自然收尾。
【邮件核心表达】
1. 告知好消息
I’m thrilled to share exciting news with you—I won the first prize in the Funny Voice Acting competition! 我很兴奋地和你分享一个好消息 —— 我在趣配音比赛中获得了一等奖!
Last week, I took part in the competition organized by the Foreign Languages Club and got the first prize. 上周,我参加了外文社组织的比赛,拿到了一等奖。
The moment my name was announced as the winner, I couldn’t wait to tell you. 听到我的名字被宣布为获胜者时,我迫不及待想告诉你。
2. 表达感谢
I truly appreciate your encouragement and help before the competition. 我由衷感谢你在赛前给予我的鼓励和帮助。
Your support meant a lot to me and gave me the confidence to perform well. 你的支持对我意义重大,给了我好好表现的信心。
I couldn’t have won the prize without your valuable help. 没有你的宝贵帮助,我不可能获奖。
3. 邀请做客
To show my gratitude, I sincerely invite you to my home for a visit. 为了表达我的谢意,我诚挚邀请你到我家做客。
Let’s spend a great time together—we can chat and enjoy some snacks. 我们一起共度美好时光吧,聊聊天、尝尝小吃。
I hope you can come and let me repay your kindness in a small way. 希望你能来,让我用小小的方式回报你的善意。
【话题词汇】
Funny Voice Acting - 趣配音比赛
first prize - 一等奖
competition - 比赛
Foreign Languages Club - 外文社
organize - 组织
winner - 获胜者
exciting news - 好消息
share - 分享
encouragement - 鼓励
help - 帮助
appreciate - 感激
gratitude - 谢意
sincere - 真挚的
invite - 邀请
visit - 做客
home - 家
great time - 美好时光
support - 支持
confidence - 信心
perform well - 表现出色
achieve - 取得(成绩)
valuable - 宝贵的
kindness - 善意
repay - 回报
moment - 瞬间
announce - 宣布
over the moon - 欣喜若狂
immediately - 立刻
think of - 想到
mean a lot - 意义重大
【高频表达式 + 话题词汇整合】
1. Dear Alex, I’m writing to share some exciting news with you—I won the first prize in the Funny Voice Acting competition last week! (亲爱的亚历克斯,我写信是想和你分享一个好消息 —— 上周我在趣配音比赛中获得了一等奖!)
2. The competition was organized by our school’s Foreign Languages Club, and I never expected to take the first prize. (比赛由我校外文社组织,我完全没想到能拿到一等奖。)
3. When my name was announced as the winner, I was over the moon and immediately thought of you. (当我的名字被宣布为获胜者时,我欣喜若狂,立刻就想到了你。)
4. I truly appreciate all the encouragement and practical help you gave me before the competition. (我由衷感谢你在赛前给予我的所有鼓励和实际帮助。)
5. Your support boosted my confidence a lot, making me feel more relaxed during the performance. (你的支持极大地增强了我的信心,让我在表演时更放松。)
6. Without your kind help and constant encouragement, I couldn’t have achieved such a good result. (没有你善意的帮助和持续的鼓励,我不可能取得这么好的成绩。)
7. To express my deep gratitude, I sincerely invite you to my home for a visit this weekend. (为了表达我深深的谢意,我诚挚邀请你这周末来我家做客。)
8. We can chat about the competition, watch some interesting videos, and enjoy my mom’s homemade snacks. (我们可以聊聊比赛,看些有趣的视频,还能尝尝我妈妈做的家常菜。)
9. I hope you can spare some time to come—I really want to spend a happy time with you. (希望你能抽出时间前来,我真的很想和你共度一段愉快的时光。)
10. Thank you again for everything you did for me. Looking forward to your reply and your visit! (再次感谢你为我所做的一切,期待你的回复和到来!)
【参考范文】
Dear Alex,
I’m writing to share some exciting news with you. I won the first prize in the Funny Voice Acting competition organized by the Foreign Languages Club last week! The moment I heard my name announced as the winner, I was over the moon and immediately thought of you.
I truly appreciate your encouragement and help before the competition. Without you, I couldn’t have achieved this.
To show my gratitude, I sincerely invite you to my home. We can have a great time together.
Yours,
Li Hua
中文翻译
亲爱的亚历克斯:
我写信是想和你分享一个令人兴奋的好消息。上周,我参加了学校外文社组织的趣配音比赛,获得了一等奖!听到我的名字被宣布为获胜者的那一刻,我欣喜若狂,立刻就想到了你。
我由衷感谢你在赛前给予我的鼓励和帮助。没有你,我不可能取得这样的成绩。
为了表达我的谢意,我诚挚邀请你到我家做客。我们可以一起度过一段美好的时光。
此致,
李华
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