读后续写-人际温情善良传递类 讲义-2026届高三英语二轮复习专项

该高中英语讲义聚焦高考读后续写核心考点，涵盖情节逻辑发展、语言运用规范、情感升华技巧等关键要求，按文章分类、思路框架、技巧提炼的逻辑层次组织知识点，通过考点梳理、范文解析、真题训练三个教学环节，帮助学生构建续写思维模型，突破情节衔接与语言表达难点。 讲义特色在于融合故事山模式与核心素养培养，如通过原文衔接点分析提升思维品质，范文对比训练强化语言能力，设置基础巩固与高分突破分层练习保障效果。具体活动如“续写思路四步法”指导、高级词汇替换训练，助力学生在有限时间内高效掌握技巧，为教师精准把控复习节奏提供实用教学方案。

标黑加粗斜体（环境描写）可积累文本，绿色衔接点！！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单下划线（状从）；非谓语形式都会标注；其他重点，红色字体为重要单词B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释)! () 山西省山西大学附属中学校2025-2026学年高三上学期8月模块诊断（总第二次）英语试题 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was really starving when I stepped out of the city library after an entire afternoon buried in books(过去分词做后置定语). Then I smelt something delicious—the hot dog stand at the street corner. “One hot dog, please!” I nearly rushed to the stand. “OK, ready soon!” The vendor replied cheerfully. As he handed me the hot dog, he grinned, “You deserve the best hot dog in the world!” I guessed that was the slogan for his little business, for the words were painted in cheerful yellow letters on his cart. I couldn’t wait to take a bite. The warm bread, the chilli sauce and the juice in the sausage(名词并列) — it was the best thing in the world! Definitely at that time! “Five dollars, young lady,” the vendor said, wiping his hands on his apron(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Hot dog in one hand(独立主格), I reached for my wallet with the other. Just then, “Ouch!” a cry came from behind me. I turned back and found a woman in her 50’s struggling to pick herself up from the ground(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Her grocery bag split open with oranges rolling in every direction(with复合结构). Seeing this(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I stuffed the rest of the hot dog into my mouth, picked up the oranges and put them back into her bag(动作串). “Are you okay?” I asked with concern. “Thank you. I didn’t see the pole on the ground,” she breathed. Noticing(现在分词短语做伴随动作)her hand was wounded, I remembered the Band-Aid in my bag and dug it out. “Thank you so much for your kindness,” the woman said as I carefully applied it to her wound. Across the street, the bus I was about to take was pulling in. Waving a goodbye to the woman(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I dashed to the bus stop and barely got aboard before the door closed. As the bus pulled away, I saw the woman bought a hot dog from the same vendor. On the way, I was always wondering if she would be greeted with the same words, “You deserve the best hot dog in the world!” I was lost in it... 注意: 1.续写词数应为每段150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: But wait — had I forgotten something? Paragraph 2: “Someone has paid for it,” the vendor smiled. 山西省山西大学附属中学校2025-2026学年高三上学期8月模块诊断（总第二次）英语试题 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was really starving when I stepped out of the city library after an entire afternoon buried in books. Then I smelt something delicious—the hot dog stand at the street corner. “One hot dog, please!” I nearly rushed to the stand. “OK, ready soon!” The vendor (摊主) replied cheerfully. As he handed me the hot dog, he grinned, “You deserve the best hot dog in the world!” I guessed that was the slogan for his little business, for the words were painted in cheerful yellow letters on his cart. I couldn’t wait to take a bite. The warm bread, the chilli sauce and the juice in the sausage — it was the best thing in the world! Definitely at that time! “Five dollars, young lady,” the vendor said, wiping his hands on his apron. Hot dog in one hand, I reached for my wallet with the other. Just then, “Ouch!” a cry came from behind me. I turned back and found a woman in her 50’s struggling to pick herself up from the ground. Her grocery bag split open with oranges rolling in every direction. Seeing this, I stuffed the rest of the hot dog into my mouth, picked up the oranges and put them back into her bag. “Are you okay?” I asked with concern. “Thank you. I didn’t see the pole on the ground,” she breathed. Noticing her hand was wounded, I remembered the Band-Aid (创可贴) in my bag and dug it out. “Thank you so much for your kindness,” the woman said as I carefully applied it to her wound. Across the street, the bus I was about to take was pulling in. Waving a goodbye to the woman, I dashed to the bus stop and barely got aboard before the door closed. As the bus pulled away, I saw the woman bought a hot dog from the same vendor. On the way, I was always wondering if she would be greeted with the same words, “You deserve the best hot dog in the world!” I was lost in it... 注意: 1.续写词数应为每段150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: But wait — had I forgotten something? Paragraph 2: “Someone has paid for it,” the vendor smiled. 一、文章分类与续写思路分析 文章类型：人际温情/善良帮扶/道德冲突类（日常生活事件+道德小考验） 这类读后续写通常关注人物成长、道德选择或情感升华，需要保持原文风格并合理发展情节。 构思思路： 核心冲突：主角可能未付热狗钱（道德困境） 主题升华：善良与诚信的回报 情感走向：由焦虑→释然→温暖 框架提炼： 段落1（承接开头语）: 意识到未付款 → 心理描写（愧疚/焦虑）→ 决定返回 段落2: 返回摊位的场景 → vendor的反应 → 真相揭示（妇人已代付）→ 主题升华 实施要点： 保持第一人称视角和口语化风格 延续原文的细节描写（如黄色标语、食物味道等） 使用原文中的关键短语（如"You deserve..."） 故事山模式分析 开端：饥饿买热狗 → 发展：帮助跌倒妇人 → 高潮：匆忙上车未付款 → 转折：意识到问题 → 结局：善意回报（妇人代付） 原文衔接点与关键元素分析表 分析角度 内容 原文反应句/例证 人物刻画 热心善良、略显匆忙的主人公 "I stuffed the rest...put them back into her bag" 情感层次 从饥饿→满足→关心→焦虑 "I was really starving" → "with concern" → "always wondering" 关键情节点 妇人跌倒→帮助→未付款 "Her grocery bag split open..." → "dashed to the bus" 语言特色 口语化、感官描写 "the juice in the sausage — it was the best thing" 关键词分析 "deserve"（重复出现） "You deserve the best hot dog in the world!" 心理描写 内心的纠结与反思 "I was always wondering..."（续写需加强） 动作描写 匆忙的动作序列 "stuffed", "picked up", "dashed", "barely got aboard" 环境描写 街角摊位的温馨感 "cheerful yellow letters on his cart" 隐含主题 善有善报、诚信的价值 帮助妇人→获得回报（隐含） 情感转折 满足→关心→焦虑→释然 通过热狗味道→帮助→未付款→解决 空间转换 图书馆→摊位→街道→公交车 "stepped out of the city library" → "across the street" 时间过渡 下午→傍晚（通过事件暗示） "after an entire afternoon" → "bus pulled away" 伏笔：vendor的标语"You deserve..."（暗示主题）、妇人买热狗 冲突：道德与现实的冲突（想诚信付款但已上车） 隐含线索：妇人出现在摊位（可能代付） 解决方案：妇人代为付款完成善意循环 承接原文事项： 保持人称一致性（第一人称） 延续"热狗"符号意义（温暖/奖励） 使用原文特色表达（"grinned", "cheerful yellow letters"） 避免添加超现实元素（保持生活故事真实性） 巧妙设计技巧： 让vendor的标语再次出现（首尾呼应） 通过环境描写烘托心情（如傍晚灯光象征温暖） 续写方向 Paragraph 1: 通过身体反应（如胃沉）意识到未付款 → 回忆vendor善意 → 决定返回（尽管路途遥远） Paragraph 2: vendor微笑告知妇人已代付 → 揭示妇人话语"她也deserve kindness" → 主题升华 三、心理、环境、动作描写与高级词汇 动作描写推荐例句 My fingers fumbled frantically through the empty compartment. 我的手指疯狂地在空荡荡的夹层里摸索。 I spun around on my heels, my eyes searching for the distant hot dog stand. 我猛地转过身，目光搜寻着远处那个热狗摊。 Without a second thought, I dashed back the way I had come. 我毫不犹豫地沿着原路冲了回去。 My heart hammered against my ribs as I ran. 我奔跑时，心脏砰砰地撞击着我的肋骨。 I skidded to a halt in front of the vendor, gasping for breath. 我在摊主面前猛地停下脚步，气喘吁吁。 She rummaged in her purse and pulled out a few crumpled bills. 她在钱包里翻找，掏出几张皱巴巴的钞票。 He waved away my apology with a warm smile. 他用一个温暖的微笑拒绝了我的道歉。 A warm glow spread through my chest, easing my anxiety. 一股暖流涌上我的胸膛，缓解了我的焦虑。 I handed the money to him with a slightly trembling hand. 我用微微颤抖的手把钱递给他。 The woman gave my hand a gentle, reassuring squeeze. 那位妇人轻轻地、令人安心地握了握我的手。 心理描写 A cold dread washed over me as realization dawned. 当我意识到问题时，一阵冰冷的恐惧席卷了我。 Guilt gnawed at my conscience like a persistent worm. 愧疚像一条 persistent（持久）的虫子一样啃噬着我的良心。 My mind raced, weighing the options before me. 我的大脑飞速运转，权衡着我面前的选项。 A wave of relief so profound it left me weak in the knees. 一阵如此深刻的宽慰感袭来，让我瞬间腿软。 I was torn between my urgency to catch the bus and my sense of honesty. 我在赶公交的紧迫感和诚实感之间备受煎熬。 The vendor's cheerful slogan now seemed to mock my carelessness. 摊主那欢快的标语现在仿佛在嘲弄我的粗心。 An inner turmoil threatened to overwhelm me. 内心的动荡快要将我淹没。 The kindness of a stranger restored my faith in humanity. 一个陌生人的善意恢复了我对人性的信心。 A sense of peace settled in my heart, replacing the earlier panic. 一种平静感在我心中安定下来，取代了之前的恐慌。 I felt a blush of shame creep up my cheeks. 我感到一阵羞愧的红晕爬上了我的脸颊。 环境描写 The evening breeze felt cool against my flushed skin. 傍晚的微风吹在我发烫的皮肤上，感觉很凉爽。 The cheerful yellow letters on the cart seemed to glow in the twilight. 手推车上那欢快的黄色字母在暮色中仿佛发着光。 The streetlights flickered to life, casting long shadows on the pavement. 路灯闪烁着亮起，在人行道上投下长长的影子。 The distant rumble of the city faded into a gentle hum. 远处城市的喧嚣逐渐减弱成轻柔的嗡嗡声。 The savory aroma of hot dogs still lingered in the air around the stand. 热狗诱人的香气仍然萦绕在摊位周围的空气中。 The bus tail lights disappeared into the stream of traffic, a reminder of my mistake. 公交车的尾灯消失在车流中，提醒着我犯下的错误。 The setting sun painted the sky in hues of orange and purple. 落日将天空染成了橙色和紫色。 The once-bustling street was now quiet and serene. 曾经熙熙攘攘的街道现在安静而祥和。 A few early stars twinkled faintly in the darkening blue sky. 几颗早早出现的星星在渐暗的蓝色天幕中微弱地闪烁。 The warm light from the vendor's stand looked like a beacon of hope. 摊主摊位发出的温暖灯光，看起来像是希望的灯塔。 常见词 高级替换词 (场景分类) 简要释义 happy delighted (情感) 非常高兴的 good superb / excellent (品质) 极好的，卓越的 pay settle the bill (动作) 结账 run dash / rush (动作) 猛冲，快跑 thank appreciate / be grateful (情感) 感激，欣赏 常见搭配与词法解析 buried in books: 固定搭配，形象表达“埋头读书”、“沉醉于书海”。 词法解析：buried (v. 被埋葬) 这里用作比喻义，是一种非常地道的表达。 grinned: 比 said with a smile 或 smiled 更生动，表示“露齿而笑”、“咧嘴笑”。 搭配：grinned widely (笑得很开)，grinned at sb (对某人咧嘴笑)。 You deserve...: 关键句型。deserve (v. 应得，值得) 后接名词或动词不定式。 搭配：deserve a rest (值得休息)，deserve to win (配赢)。 wiping his hands on his apron: 细节动作描写。wipe A on B (把A擦在B上)。 词法解析：现在分词短语作伴随状语，使描写更连续丰富。 picked herself up: 固定短语，意为“(跌倒后)自己站起来”。 对比：pick up (捡起)，pick her up (接她，扶起她)。 grocery bag split open: split open (v. 裂开) 比 broke 更准确生动。 dashed to the bus stop: dash (v. 猛冲) 比 run quickly 更高级。 搭配：make a dash for (冲向...)。 barely got aboard: barely (adv. 几乎不) 表示“刚好赶上”，强调紧迫性。aboard (adv./prep. 上车/船/飞机)。 pulling in: (车) 到站、进站。反义词 pull out (离站)。 was lost in it: be lost in thought (陷入沉思) 的变体，省略了thought，显得更简洁地道。 可积累语料与生词短语 (Useful Phrases & Vocabulary) vendor /ˈven.dər/ (n.) 词意：小贩，卖主 近义词：seller, merchant, stallholder 反义词：customer, buyer, purchaser 例句1：The vendor at the farmers' market sold fresh organic vegetables. 例句2：I bought a beautiful necklace from a street vendor in Paris. grin /ɡrɪn/ (v. & n.) 词意：露齿而笑，咧嘴笑 近义词：smile broadly, beam 反义词：frown, scowl, grimace 例句1：He grinned from ear to ear when he heard the good news. 例句2："I knew you could do it!" she said with a wide grin. deserve /dɪˈzɜːrv/ (v.) 词意：应受，应得，值得 近义词：merit, be worthy of, earn 反义词：undeserve (较少使用)，常用 not deserve 例句1：After all your hard work, you deserve a long vacation. 例句2：He didn't deserve to be treated so badly. split open /splɪt ˈoʊ.pən/ (v. phrase) 词意：裂开，撕开 近义词：burst open, break open, rip open 反义词：seal, close up, mend 例句1：The overripe melon split open when it fell on the ground. 例句2：She carefully split open the envelope to read the letter inside. apply (to) /əˈplaɪ/ (v.) 词意：(此处) 敷涂，涂抹；应用；申请 近义词：put on, administer, use 反义词：remove, take off 例句1：Remember to apply sunscreen to your skin before going out. 例句2：She is planning to apply to several universities abroad. dash /dæʃ/ (v. & n.) 词意：猛冲，急奔；破折号 近义词：rush, sprint, bolt 反义词：dawdle, stroll, amble 例句1：I had to dash to the store before it closed. 例句2：We made a mad dash for the train as it was about to leave. barely /ˈber.li/ (adv.) 词意：几乎不，勉强才能 近义词：hardly, scarcely, just 反义词：easily, fully, abundantly 例句1：She barely had enough time to finish the exam. 例句2：I could barely see the road through the heavy fog. aboard /əˈbɔːrd/ (adv. & prep.) 词意：上车（船、飞机等）；在车（船、飞机等）上 近义词：on board 反义词：ashore, off 例句1：Welcome aboard Flight 519 to Tokyo. 例句2：All passengers must be aboard the ship before departure. 5. Possible Versions(4) Version 1 Paragraph 1 But wait — had I forgotten something? My heart skipped a beat as I realized the wallet in my pocket was untouched. The bus had barely gone one block when panic set in—I hadn’t paid for the hot dog! Without hesitation, I pressed the stop button and dashed off the bus, the taste of guilt far stronger than the sausage(独立主格刻画心理) I had just devoured. My steps quickened as the yellow letters on the cart came back into view. Breathless(adj做主语补语), I stammered, “Sir, I—I forgot to pay you just now…” My hand fumbled for a five-dollar bill, determined to set things right(过去分词做adj主语补语). Paragraph 2 “Someone has paid for it,” the vendor smiled. His apron still bore the stains of the day(无灵主语句，衔接原文), but his eyes twinkled warmly. “The lady you helped just now insisted,” he added, nodding toward the street(现在分词做伴随动作) where the woman’s figure was fading away. I froze, speechless(adj做主语补语), as warmth rose in my chest(无灵主语句). The hot dog was no longer just bread and sausage—it had become the medium of kindness passed from one stranger to another(过去分词短语做后置定语). The cheerful slogan painted on the cart(过去分词做后置定语), “You deserve the best hot dog in the world,” now sounded like a promise: goodness given(过去分词短语做后置定语) is never lost, but always returned in ways you least expect. Version 2 Paragraph 1 But wait — had I forgotten something? The unopened wallet in my pocket gave me the answer(无灵主语句). My cheeks burned as I recalled the vendor’s cheerful grin and my hurried escape to catch the bus(衔接原文). Jumping off at the next stop(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I ran back, every step echoing my uneasiness(独立主格刻画人物心理). The fragrance of grilled sausage drifted toward me again(无灵主语句), but this time it only deepened my shame. Reaching the stand(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I caught my breath and blurted, “I’m so sorry! I was in such a rush that I didn’t pay you just now. Please take the money.” Paragraph 2 “Someone has paid for it,” the vendor smiled. His words stunned me into silence(无灵主语句). Following his gaze(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I spotted the woman with the wounded hand, holding her grocery bag more carefully this time(现在分词短语做伴随动作). My throat tightened. The same hot dog that had satisfied my hunger had now become a token of gratitude. The vendor’s slogan suddenly gained depth—“You deserve the best hot dog in the world” was no longer a business line but a reflection of how kindness travels in circles. With moist eyes, I whispered to myself, “Indeed, it always finds its way back.” Version 3 Paragraph 1 But wait — had I forgotten something? Cold realization struck me hard(无灵主语句) as I reached for my wallet—it was still there, unopened(过去分词adj补语). The vendor’s face flashed in my mind, and shame twisted in my stomach. Determined not to let a careless mistake stain such kindness(过去分词adj做主语补语), I hurried off the bus and ran back, the evening air sharp against my lungs(独立主格). The bright yellow slogan on the cart seemed to mock me as I arrived. With trembling hands, I pulled out the money. “I think I forgot to pay,” I admitted, my voice trembling and apologetic(独立主格). Paragraph 2 “Someone has paid for it,” the vendor smiled. His voice was calm, almost amused. “The lady with the oranges—she insisted,” he explained. My eyes followed where he pointed, and there she was, her steps slow but steady(独立主格刻画人物). Relief washed over me, mingled with a deep sense of gratitude(过去分词短语做adj补语). The hot dog, once just a quick meal, had become a bridge between strangers, a witness to silent kindness. For the first time, the vendor’s slogan didn’t feel like advertising—it felt like truth: “You deserve the best hot dog in the world.” And in that moment, I knew it was kindness itself that we all deserved. 伏笔衔接： 老妇人买热狗 → 第二段揭晓她替我付款。 vendor 的口头禅 → 第二段升华为主题“善良终有回报”。 动作细节： pressed the stop button, dashed off the bus, fumbled for the bill → 心理慌乱。 cheeks burned, throat tightened, moist eyes → 情绪层层递进。 加分语法： 倒装：Never had a hot dog carried so much meaning. 强调句：It was the woman’s kindness that saved me from guilt. 非谓语：Determined not to let a careless mistake stain such kindness, I hurried off the bus… 高分表达与替换表 分类 原文亮点表达 同义/替换/升级选项 例句（示范写作） 动作描写 dashed off the bus（冲下车） hurried off / rushed off / sprang off She hurried off the bus, fearing she had left something behind. fumbled for the bill（笨拙地掏钱） searched for / groped for / dug out He groped for his wallet in embarrassment. pressed the stop button（按下停车键） hit / slammed / tapped the button She slammed the stop button and rushed out. caught my breath（喘息） gasped / struggled for breath He gasped after the long run. 心理描写 heart skipped a beat（心猛地一跳） panic seized me / shock ran through me Panic seized me when I realized my wallet was still in my pocket. shame twisted in my stomach（羞愧涌上心头） guilt flooded me / embarrassment overwhelmed me Embarrassment overwhelmed me as I stood before the vendor. relief washed over me（如释重负） a wave of relief / tension melted away A wave of relief swept over me when he smiled. warmth rose in my chest（心中涌起温暖） heart swelled with warmth / a glow spread inside me Her kindness made my heart swell with warmth. 情绪递进 cheeks burned（脸颊发烫） face flushed / heat rushed to my face My face flushed when I realized my mistake. throat tightened（喉咙哽住） voice choked / lump in my throat A lump in my throat stopped me from speaking. moist eyes（眼眶湿润） eyes brimmed with tears / eyes glistened Her eyes glistened as gratitude filled her. speechless, stunned（无语，震惊） at a loss for words / rooted to the spot She was at a loss for words when he thanked her. 句式升级 Determined not to let a careless mistake stain such kindness, I hurried off the bus.（非谓语） 不定式：To set things right, I returned at once. To save time, she rushed directly into the store. Never had a hot dog carried so much meaning.（倒装） Not until… did… / Seldom had… Not until that day did I realize how powerful kindness could be. It was the woman’s kindness that saved me from guilt.（强调句） It was… that… / What… was… What touched me most was the vendor’s smile. Goodness given is never lost, but always returned.（对仗/哲理句） Kindness is like a boomerang—it always comes back. Trust is like glass—once broken, it’s hard to fix. 官方： But wait — had I forgotten something? The bus had gone three stops when a shock hit me: I’d stuffed the hot dog in my mouth and dashed off without paying! My face burned(无灵主语句) as I imagined the vendor’s angry face. At the next stop, I raced back to the corner. “I’m so sorry! I forgot to pay for the hot dog,” I gasped for air, reaching out for my wallet(现在分词短语做伴随动作). The vendor just smiled, wiping his cart(现在分词做伴随动作). “Don’t worry about it, young lady.” Confused(过去分词做adj补语), I stared at him. “But—” “Wait a second,” he cut in, still grinning(现在分词短语做伴随动作). “Someone has paid for it,” the vendor smiled. “The lady you helped with the oranges. She bought a hot dog and said, ‘Please give this to the kind girl who helped me — she deserves the best hot dog in the world!’” My eyes widened. I remembered seeing her at the stand from the bus. The vendor handed me a napkin: “She left this for you.” On it, a note read: “Kindness is the best sauce.” I bit into an imaginary hot dog, tasting(现在分词短语做伴随动作) not just bread and chilli, but the warmth of a circle completed(过去分词做adj补语)— and realized I’d gotten the best hot dog indeed. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $